FF Pyar to hona hi tha...Last Part Page125 Upt - Page 83

Originally posted by: NazNgs

Sahar meri jaan...

Finally i was able to read ur fanfic...

pichle dino se har waqt to aankhon mein ansoo tah

to read karna utna clearly nahi thi..

today is better..im still and crying..but socha ff read karke khush hone ki koshish kari hoon..

Yaara the Fanfic parts is

Seriously,,....i love Rajiv jiju...kitna khoobi se usne situation ko sambhala..

Bada sona munda hain...luv the little comedy btw Rajiv and Sahar

par yaar i hated that Su called Preeti her name..ufff 😡

and omg all those beautiful memories

yaar bas ek hi ghaana sunai dhee rahi thi jab main wo part read karrahi thi

Lamho ki Meethi Guzarish hain Kuch Tumse Kuch Humse

Paas awo innki khwaish hain Kuch Tumse Kuch Humse..

Very nice part i could really visualize SuKk standing and

recalling all those beautiful memories..

Thank god Simmie, Noorya aur Pavitra ne dono ko hall mein leegaye..

uff the dialogues of SuKk..mere khaan mein jaise ghoonch rahe hain

specially when Sumit says

'Hum itni baar mile phir bhi humne kabhie nahin socha tha ke ye hone wala hai'

ufff yaar mere to ronte khade hogaye dono ki dialogues se..

amazing...

yaar ye Sumit kyon baar baar us churail ka naam leta hain😕

i thought he was in love with Kk

i mean kya wo uss kiss ko bhool gaya hain...

ufff..ye Sumit bhi na...patta nahi kab baat ko samdjega

Yaar Sahar loved the ring rasm in ur part much more

then in the final epi of Kk...

😆 very funny the nokjhok of the friends....

kaun kispe raj karega..

hai mujhe SuKk ki actual scene yaad aagayi

wo terrace pe when kk is drying her hair 😍

HAILA...the kiss part..uffff kitna khoobsurat part soch rahi thi Kk

ek baar phirse uss part ko imagine karne ka mauka milgaya

uffff butterflies hi butterflies in my stomach...

par yaar im gettin very sad coz of Su behaviour..

😭

boehoehoeeeee yaar ye bidaai kyon hoti hain

Kk aur uske dad kitna emotional yaar mujhe apni dad ki yaad aagayi

jab meri bidaai huwi thi...😭

Uff totally could imagine the Kk theme song during the Grah Pravesh

Fantastic yaar..aise jaise mujhe saamne sab dikhai rahi hain..

ufff i could even see the beautiful room with roses and candles

yaar i just love rajiv and sahar..kitna mastiful jodi hain dono..

😆😆😆 love it how all tease Su..bechara...

😆😆😆 apna Sadi to badi don nikli yaar

paisa vasool karne mein ladko ki aisi ki taisi hogayi 😆😆

OMG im sooooo happpyyyy ke thank god Kk ko to realize hua

ab bas Su ko realize hojaaye

hee bhagwaan, ya Allah, hee Matarani,

Hee Sahar..(aakhir kahani to tuhi likhti hain na 😆) Hee Sahar

ab jald hi SU ke dil mein kk ke liyee pyaar jagade yaar

ab ye kambaqt intezaar bahut bedardi horahi hain

yaar 30 parts mat karna Su ke pyaar jaga ne mein...

But hatts of to u writer ji 34 parts jaake tab Kk ko realize hua

yaar mujhse to nahi hopati..mere FF mein to beginning mein hi hogaya..😆

Uff ab to intezaar hain Su ke pyaar ka jagne ka..

yaar tu kisi tarha ye preeti ko khatam nahi karsakti..?

accidently wo mere gadi ke neeche nahi aasakti kya..

jab tak ye churail rahegi tab tak...patta nahi kya kya karegi...

anways lookin forward for next part...

and khabardaar jo tune dobaara kahaa FF end karne ko..

ofcourse we will read it yaar...tum likhti hi jao..

Love u

Naz

Originally posted by: coorg.japan

It was really a nice part.

And please continue Sahar. Kumkum has ended that doesn't mean that our memories also would come to an end. Infact would love to read more FF's and updates on Sumit and kumkum which would keep the moments alive.

Arya.

Originally posted by: Irika

hey sahar please dont end your ff i love your ff so much..........

please do continue.........

Originally posted by: robbiekasturi

Sahar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃

How r u hunz. Finally I am here to leave my comments I read your FF long tym back but it was so good that it took me ages to think what to say 😆😆 where shall I begin from. Hmm your ff fabulous, simply awesome. I just loved reading every bit of it. I got no other words to say beside giving you a standing ovation reading your ff has left me speechless the way you write is simply awesome. ok enough of my bakwas and I will tell you in a short what i thought of each of the parts if i comment seperatly you will go mad reading them 😆😆

all the parts were amazing wow Sumit and Kumkum live far from each other it was really 😲😲 to find out they both love different people 😕😕. but i am sure you will make them fall for each other later on. oh no they are not going to the goa trip but they have to otherwise how are kumkum and sumit going to meet 😭😭. Yeah Kumkum mum allowed her to go and sumit agreed aswell all 4 of them are going to goa intresting wonder what will happen there. Hope they split up with preeti and rahul. hmm i have a feeling i am not going to like their characters very much 😡😡 just made my mind up for some unknown reason sorry bout that. Kumkum and sumit become friends and clicked on like they knew each other from ages yipee they won all the competions go team. 😆😆 Rahul and preeti dont get along going to be tough for them. 😡😡 stupid rahul and preeti want them to loose they are just jeleous. I liked the way you included everyone in your ff thats so sweet 😃😃 😲😲the mariage also happened and you ended it at such a dramatic part. 😳Sumit kissed kumkum thinking it was preeti well thats good. aww kumkum is so sweet the way she told Sumit that she loves him and will continue loving him and filfull her duties as a wife thats so write when kumkum said "hum dunno eik dujhe kay liye hi bane hain😕😕😕". Hope sumit falls for kumkum soon.

Ok cant wait to see what happens next continue soon plz 😃

Sorry bout the long comment, I am not good at writing long comments but i had to for your ff as it was so good so forgive me 😭😭 for any mistakes i make

Love Henna 😛

Hey guys

Part 37: Pagh Phere Rasam

Kumkum slept in her bridal clothes and Sumit did not change either...Both were not able to sleep the whole night...Sumit falls asleep near 2:30am...Now it's 5:30am and Kumkum wakes up...She takes a shower and wears a red sari...She looks SO PRETTY...She comes out of the shower and Sumit has woken up

Kumkum: Tum uth gaye...I am sorry maine tumhe disturb toh nahin kardiya

Sumit: Nahin mujhe toh neend hi nahin arahi thi saari raat

Kumkum: Haan mujhe bhi...woh (Sumit comes closer to her)

Sumit: Tum kuch bhool rahi ho

Kumkum: Kya

Sumit puts sindhoor on Kumkum (Again imagine the Kumkum theme song playing in the background)😃😃😃

Kumkum: Sumit tum

Sumit: Kya eik pati apni patni ko sindhoor nahin laaga saakhta😉😉😉

Kumkum feels a little shy...Sumit's cellphone rings and Kumkum comes out of the dream...Sumit wakes up and checks his cellphone and he texts the person back(you will find out later who this person is😕😕😕)

Kumkum: Good morning

Sumit: Hi...(he goes to the bathroom)

Kumkum (repeats to herself): Sapne unke pure hote hain jo sapne dekhte hain aur duwayein aur pratana unhi ki kabool hoti hai jo sache dil se mangte hain (Then she smiles to herself)😃😃😃

Sumit comes out of the bathroom and Kumkum goes up to him

Kumkum: Yeh lo maine tumhare liye kapre pick kiye hain

Sumit: No thanks main yehi pehno ga...

Kumkum: Ok 😭😭😭

They both go outside for breakfast

Prena: GOOD MORNING BHAIYA and BHABHI

Kumkum: Good Morning

Prena: So kaisi guzarri raat bhaiya

Sumit: Prena please😡😡😡

Prena looks at Kumkum and asks what happened and Kumkum just makes a cute confused face

Mr. W: Sumit aaj Pagh Phere ki rasam hai toh tum ghar hi rehna acha

Sumit: Dad mujhe thodi der kayliye bhair jaana hoga but main jaldi ajao ga

Mrs. W: Lekin kyon aisa kya kaam agaya

Sumit looks confused and doesn't have an answer

Kumkum: Woh mujhe...allergy medication chahiye thi isliye woh maine hi kaha kay woh mujhe ladein isliye😉😉😉

Mrs. W: Haan yeh toh important hai

Sumit looks at Kumkum and she smiles back

Naz comes to take Kumkum to her house

Naz: Haan haan main janti hoon usually bhai ata hai leney lekin Kumkum ka toh bhai nahin hai aur maine keh diya keh Kumkum koh koi aur nahin balke main leney jaoon gyi😆😆😆

Everyone laughs except for Sumit off course...Then she takes Kumkum to the house...There they doo all the rasams...Kumkum gets amazing gifts

10:30pm

Sumit is still not here to take Kumkum home but everyone is so busy celebrating that they don't notice but Kumkum starts to feel sad...Everyone is celebrating and Kumkum goes outside to look if he is here or not

It is raining but Kumkum doesn't care and she keeps on standing in the garden waiting for Sumit...After about 10 minutes he comes😭😭😭

Sumit: Arre Kumkum tum yahan kyon kadhi ho dekho puri tarah bheeg gayi ho

Kumkum: Main tumhara intezaar karahi thi mujhe laaga kay😭😭😭

Sumit: Kay main nahin aao ga...Kumkum main aisa kabhi nahin karsaakhta😳😳😳

Kumkum: Toh chalein

Sumit: Kahan

Kumkum: Ghar

Sumit: Oh haan

They both take everyone ashrwaad after changing hehe...They go back to the Wadwa house

Veena: Kahan they tum haan itni der bhi koi lagata hai kya😡😡😡

Sumit: Woh ma

Kumkum: Mommy Ji woh mom and dad nay humain rookh liya tha isliye

Veena: Oh aur main samjhi kay yeh budhoo wahan late puhancha😆😆😆

Everyone laugh; Sumit and Kumkum in their room

Sumit: Kyon karahi ho yeh😕😕😕

Kumkum: Kya

Sumit: Haar baat pay mere liye cover up karahi ho, meri koi baat bhi tumhe bori nahin lagti...😕😕😕

Kumkum: Main tumse pyar karti hoon Sumit😃😃😃

Sumit: Lekin yeh kaise ho

Kumkum: Sumit...

Prena comes in

Prena: Hello sister entering the room😆😆😆 (covering up her eyes)

Sumit: Prena...

Prena: Acha eik baat batane ayi hoon

Kumkum: Kya

Prena: Mom and Dad nay decide kiya hai that tuesday ko hum ap dunno ki reception karein gaye

Sumit: Lekin

Prena: Lekin wekin kuch nahin hum party karein gaye and that's final...ok ab main chalti you two ENJOY hehe ok good night😆😆😆

Ok guys this is it for today I know today's update was short and boring but I promise next one will be longer...Stay tuned some cute scenes are coming up at the reception😉😉😉

Hey Sahar,
Good one!!! You made my day😊
Please give more updates. As Kumkum has ended i really need something to keep me rolling.

Thanks a lot 4 updateing...............

lovely dream sequence