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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

we willl waite

even if its impossible to end the day without your part's

Thanks Sonia I am SO HAPPY that you love my ff that much I REALLY APPRECIATE IT 🤗 I will update soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Guys guess what I am FINALLY A SENIOR MEMBER👏...I was just REALLY EXCITED about that 😆 Anyways I do have another GOOD NEWS since it is FRIDAY I can update😃 and I will be doing it momentarily😃

😃TGIF😃

Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sahar finally u have
also became senior member

CONGRATULATION!!!

i am really happy for u
keep rocking sahar
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
👏

love afreen


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Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 13: Tumko naa bhol payain gay😭

Rahul: Arre the most FORGIVING and KIND people in the world are coming😆

Sumit: Subhe hi chalana shurroo😛

Rahul: Haan tum dunno ne humain maaf kar diya toh khushi se chalana hi toh hai😆

Preeti: Ok guys chalein meeting ka time ho raha😊

Kumkum: Let's go😊

Kay: Ok guys today hum pehle eik group photo layna chatay hain takay yeh memories aapke saath hamesha reh payein😊

Sumit stands next to Kumkum😉

Rahul: Excuse me yaar photo mein toh apni girlfriend kay saath kara hone day😡

Sumit: Oh sorry😔

Preeti: Arre Sumit toh mere saath kara hoga😡

Sumit and Kumkum look at each other and that's when the picture is taken.😉

Kya: Wah kya picture thi😃...ok aaj mere phaas aapke liye bohut INTERESTING😉 challenge hai yeh idea mujhe meri bohut achi dost Afreen(aka juhuti)👏 ne diya and I will let her explain it to you

Afreen: Hi guys ok aaj ka challenge hai kay aapke partner ko 3 or 4 aur boys kay saath karha kiya jaaye ga aur aap ko blindfold kiya jaaye ga and then you have to tell us who is your partner😃...Sounds easy well it's not kyon ki hum bohut similar boys ko eik line mein kara karyein gay😉 so let's get started😃

First RaPr's turn...she feels everyone's faces😊

Preeti: Yeh hi Rahul hai...it is DEFINITELY him I am sure of it😃

Afreen: I am SO SORRY lekin yeh hai Gaurav not Rahul you lose😆

Rahul: Tu mujhe pehchaan nahin payi hmmmmmmm😡

SuKk's turn😃

Kumkum touches Sumit's face and his heartbeat starts to race😉 and he feels tickle in his stomach😉...Kumkum gets really close to Sumit's face😃 and they both can feel each other's breath and hear their heartbeats❤️.

Sumit(to himself): Tumhara ahsaas mujhe itna bechain kyon karta hai kya hai tum mein😃

Kumkum(to herself): Yeh ankhein, yeh ahsaas,😃 yeh hi hai Sumit mera Sum😕...Kyon mujhe tumhare paas rehna acha lagta kya mujhe tumse pya😕... nahin nahin yeh nahin ho saakta main toh Rahul se aur tum toh Preeti se pyar karte ho😕

Preeti: Yeh itni close kyon ho rahi hai kuch karo Rahul😡

Rahul: Calm down kaal shaam tak yeh eik doosre kay kareeb toh kya eik doosre ka naam bhi nahin sunana chahein gay haha😡🤢

Kumkum: Yeh hi Sumit hai mera Sum😕...I mean mera partner😃

Afreen: You are absolutely right...Once again you are the winning jodi there is no stopping this jodi SUPERB JOB👏👏👏

Sumit: Kaise pehchana mujhe😃

Kumkum(whispers😕): Tumhari saansayain aur tumhara ahsaas kaise bhol saakti hoon main

Sumit: Kya kaha tumne😕

Kumkum: Woh arre yaar chodho naa hum jeete yeh hi enough hai😆

Sumit: Yeah acha main chalta hoon Preeti dhonde rahi hogi mujhe😊

Kumkum(disappointed😒): Haan theek hai

Sumit: Theek lag toh nahi raha😕

Kumkum: Arre Preeti is more important than me na so jao😡

Sumit: Bilkul nahin tum meri important...I mean bohut important dost ho😃 aur Preeti mera pyar😃...tum dunno mere liye important ho😃

Kumkum: Acha jao late ho rahe ho😒

Sumit: Nahin main tumhare saath hi rahoon ga😊

Kumkum: Thanks acha walk par chalein😊

Sumit: Haan chalo😊

Kumkum: Sumit kya tumhein lagta hai kay Preeti is your true love😒

Sumit: Yeh kaisa question hai of course woh meri true love hai😡

Kumkum: Tumhe kaise paata chala kay she is the one for you😒

Sumit: Kumkum kya hogaya hai let's talk about something else😡

Kumkum: Lekin agar tumhe koi aur kehay kay woh tumse pyar karti hai toh kya tum😕...

Sumit: BILKUL NAHIN are you mad???😡 Main SIRF Preeti se pyar karta hoon🤢

Kumkum and Sumit walk silently for 15 minutes they both feel awkward😡 because Kumkum is starting to realize that their friendship might be turning into something that she never thought of😕.

Sumit: Arre kuch toh bolo hum walk par kyon aye agar😒

Kumkum: Kya tum mujhe akela chod saakthey ho please😡

Sumit: Kya hua😕

Kumkum: Please main bus just leave please😡

Sumit: Ok😒

Sumit(To himself): Kya Kumkum mujhe kuch batana chaah rahi thi😕 mujhe us sey baat karni chahiye thi kahin woh mujhse😒...nahin nahin woh Rahul se pyar karti hai😃

(He has a flashback: Sumit: Toh aap yahan dostoon kay saath ayien hain

Kumkum: Nahin dushman kay saath haha just kidding haan main Rahul kay saath ayi hoon

Sumit: aap bohut pyar karti hain naa us seh

Kumkum (surprised): Tumhe kaise paatha)

Kumkum(to herself): Maine kya keh diya Sumit ko main yeh toh nahin kehna chahiti thi main😒 OMG woh paatha nahin kya soch raha hoga ahhhh YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI?😕

After an awkward and quiet night😒, Sumit and Kumkum get ready to go to today's meeting

Sumit: Kumkum woh kal...😒

Kumkum: Sumit forget about it main bus thodi upset thi isliye but I am ok now😊

Sumit: Ok then agar mera buddy😃 ab theek hai toh chalein meeting par😃

Kumkum(To herself): Main toh pagal hoon of course yeh pyar nahin hai hum sirf dost hain sirf dost😃...(to Sumit) Haan chalo buddy😊 (smiling)

Sumit(to himself): Main bhi pagal hoon kya soochnay laga tha Kumkum toh SIRF😃 meri dost hai SIRF dost😃

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Kay: For today's challenge we have something special in store for you😲...Aap sab koh 30 minutes milayein gay aur us waqt mein aap ko eik dance performance tayaar karni hogi and we will judge you on your performance😃

Everyone goes back to their room and starts to prepare for their presentation...Stay tuned to find out what songs SuKk pick (Any guesses? the next title gives it away😆) and how the performances go😃.

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Posted: 16 years ago

an awesome ff dear

just loved the way you write it is so free flowing with continuity as you pen down

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: juhuti

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sahar finally u have
also became senior member

CONGRATULATION!!!

i am really happy for u
keep rocking sahar
👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
👏

love afreen


👏

😃😃THANKS SO MUCH😃😃
Afreen you are such a SWEETHEART
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sahar meri jaan!!!!!.................i love u sweety!!!!!...........this part was AWESOME!!!!!!!😛😛😛

omg!!!!.......first tho just loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeed the photo scene!!!!......uffff the way sukk look at each other..omg sooo real!!😉.....

and the game was fantastic!!....great idea afreen👍🏼...............and omg!!!.........whats happening to kk😃........she's falling in love with su😃......infact both falling in love with each other.....but kk realized it first............yaar love it..coz always su is realizing first his love..even in my ff😆........but yahan tho kk first!!!..........just love that👍🏼👏...

yaara just loved all sukk scenes and their dialogues.............sab kuch mind mein dekh rahi thi....it was awesome😆😉.....

uffff ab cant wait for the next part........and picturized their dance😆..........and wich song they gonna use??!!................maybe the theme of rab ne banadi jodi😳...or dance pe chance.....yaar ab pata nahin kitne gaanon ke bare mein sochoungi😆...................well lets see..great job once again

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG Sahar....
Today's part was amazing meri jaan....
First the Photo Scene.... And the way SuKk looked at each other....
ufff sooo cute....
OMG and the game....
Afreen great idea and Sahar I love the way you wrote that bit it was
like I was standing there watching it all....
(Reminded me of the special 1000 (6 year) episode and how Kk recongised Su... eventhough he was wearing a fake beard....hehe....)

And omg the Walk scene.... Kk is falling for Su....omg.....I totally loved the dialogue.... uff yaara...mindblowing....

I dunno why but whilst I was reading this part I had the song this song stuck in my head
Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko
Sataye Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai


Omg and the next competition.... A dance competition....mmmh i wonder if the song could a song from RNBDJ because I know how much you love that film....
Can't wait for the next Part!! mwah x
Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG Sahar........
ab main kia boloon???????????????? i am totally speechless.............i am grateful to u for including my name in ur ff as KAY friend....................this is really meant a lot to me..................🤗🤗🤗
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ok now back to ur ff.............the part was SUPERB.........MINDBLOWING...........EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the part was really jhakaas meri jaan............................i really loved it.........my favorite part was that photo scene😳😳😳..............it was really an amazing scene😉..............i could imagine the photo take...................it was really nice.....good job👍🏼

i only gave u the game idea....................but u have explained and wrote it very well............i really loved it.........and it was really romantic...........thanks for this

wow i really like the part during the game..........when kk touch su he has a different feeling......it was really nice..........and when kk say ye hai mera sum....i mean mera partner....it was really nice........kk to abhi se he su ko apna su kehne lagi hai😳...WOW...........the game part was really well written and really amazing

and what is this RaPr😡 is up to..................i hate them............

wow sukk ko apne pyar ka ehsaas ho gaya
that really amazing.......................

NOW DANCE COMPETITION hmmmmmmmmmmmmm IT WILL BE REALLY NICE....can't wait

thanks once again sahar for including my name
do cont soon........can't wait for the next part

love afreen

Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
congratulations sahar u become a senior member

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