FF Pyar to hona hi tha...Last Part Page125 Upt - Page 24

lovly part zabardast likh rahe ho .Congratulations to become senior member.

Originally posted by: surakshita

an awesome ff dear

just loved the way you write it is so free flowing with continuity as you pen down

first of all cmgraulation seher 4 became senior member in just 15 days

Originally posted by: mdtafan

Sahar meri jaan!!!!!.................i love u sweety!!!!!...........this part was AWESOME!!!!!!!😛😛😛

omg!!!!.......first tho just loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeed the photo scene!!!!......uffff the way sukk look at each other..omg sooo real!!😉.....

and the game was fantastic!!....great idea afreen👍🏼...............and omg!!!.........whats happening to kk😃........she's falling in love with su😃......infact both falling in love with each other.....but kk realized it first............yaar love it..coz always su is realizing first his love..even in my ff😆........but yahan tho kk first!!!..........just love that👍🏼👏...

yaara just loved all sukk scenes and their dialogues.............sab kuch mind mein dekh rahi thi....it was awesome😆😉.....

uffff ab cant wait for the next part........and picturized their dance😆..........and wich song they gonna use??!!................maybe the theme of rab ne banadi jodi😳...or dance pe chance.....yaar ab pata nahin kitne gaanon ke bare mein sochoungi😆...................well lets see..great job once again

Originally posted by: .x. Simran .x.

OMG Sahar....
Today's part was amazing meri jaan....
First the Photo Scene.... And the way SuKk looked at each other....
ufff sooo cute....OMG and the game....
Afreen great idea and Sahar I love the way you wrote that bit it was
like I was standing there watching it all....
(Reminded me of the special 1000 (6 year) episode and how Kk recongised Su... eventhough he was wearing a fake beard....hehe....)
And omg the Walk scene.... Kk is falling for Su....omg.....I totally loved the dialogue.... uff yaara...mindblowing....

I dunno why but whilst I was reading this part I had the song this song stuck in my head
Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko
Sataye Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Omg and the next competition.... A dance competition....mmmh i wonder if the song could a song from RNBDJ because I know how much you love that film....
Can't wait for the next Part!! mwah x

Originally posted by: juhuti

OMG Sahar........
ab main kia boloon???????????????? i am totally speechless.............i am grateful to u for including my name in ur ff as KAY friend....................this is really meant a lot to me..................🤗🤗🤗
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ok now back to ur ff.............the part was SUPERB.........MINDBLOWING...........EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the part was really jhakaas meri jaan............................i really loved it.........my favorite part was that photo scene😳😳😳..............it was really an amazing scene😉..............i could imagine the photo take...................it was really nice.....good job👍🏼

i only gave u the game idea....................but u have explained and wrote it very well............i really loved it.........and it was really romantic...........thanks for this

wow i really like the part during the game..........when kk touch su he has a different feeling......it was really nice..........and when kk say ye hai mera sum....i mean mera partner....it was really nice........kk to abhi se he su ko apna su kehne lagi hai😳...WOW...........the game part was really well written and really amazing

and what is this RaPr😡 is up to..................i hate them............

wow sukk ko apne pyar ka ehsaas ho gaya
that really amazing.......................

NOW DANCE COMPETITION hmmmmmmmmmmmmm IT WILL BE REALLY NICE....can't wait

thanks once again sahar for including my name
do cont soon........can't wait for the next part

love afreen

Originally posted by: Roza123

congratulations sahar u become a senior member

Originally posted by: preethi

yupp loving itt cont soon

Originally posted by: marrukhkhan

lovly part zabardast likh rahe ho .Congratulations to become senior member.

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow tht was amazingggggg