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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tsaian

first of all cmgraulation seher 4 became senior member in just 15 days

and seconly i relly impressed by you ff
serious i dont have any word to say how much amaizng this ff is

Awww thanks Aimen😃...I am SO HAPPY that you like my ff😃...BTW I LOVE YOUR FF please do continue soon; today's part was FABULOUS👏👏...I will update ASAP😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hee Sehar

First sorry yaar..ab main teri ff read ki hain
kal meri mood kuch off thi to maine kuch bhi nahi ki..
was very frustrated yesterday...aaj kuch achha hoon to aaj read ki maine
so sorry for the late comment...😃

Really love this part also yaar ufffffff
First the photo wala part yaar
ufff so cute and what a Kodak Moment
SuKk lookin at each other..
so well written..seemed like i took the pic...welldone yaar👏👏
loovvveeee the games that they do in the college
Mere college mein ye sab kyon nahi hota tha ..
and haila Afreen has special appearance in ur FF...lucky girl😳
and haila even Gaurav 😲...kahin Gaurav meri jaan to nahi..😛

really love the blindfolding game..sach mein 1000 epi ki bash yaaad aagayi
when Juhi recognize hussain blindfolded..
what a scene yaar fabulous dialogues there
uff the lines that Su thinks when Kk touches him
uffff awesome yaar u described so welll
Phirse mere ko Kuch Kuch Hone Laga😆
i could really see in my mind Su ki expressions and all
and also Kk ki expressions..MINDBLOWING writing yaar
and the hesitation both have in understanding what is happenin is Fabulous..

kaise soch leti ho tum ye saare lines yaar Amazing...
and loved it that the kabaab mein haddi RaPr looses 😆
just hate them so much..really want to beat them..😡

But wow yaar love it when SuKk go on a walk and
Kk asks him several questions
yaar Su ke jawaab omg..i could imagine Kk dissappointed face😕
i was also feeling so bad for Kk poor girl
itna dard hua hoga usko when Su said that Pr is his pyaar😭
But the whole part there was also Very good writtten..👏👏
And then they go for the next competition...
there Kk ki jawaab was so painful when Su wanted to ask her and she says forget about it
aawwww i almost cried yaar 😭
could feel Kk ki pain there

But wow a dancing competition wow awesome can't wait for it
i lovvvveee dancing yaar and SuKk ki dancing its out of this world
and which song they will choose..
mmmm it can be any song..there are like millions of song for this situation,,
mmm let me think..it could be
Haule Haule from Rab Ne banadi jodi ..or
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara...or
Bolo Na Tum Zara Pyaar Ye Hota Hain Kya..or
Zara sa Dil Mein de Jagaah Tu Zara sa apna lee bana...

par kaun jaane Sehar ki Intelligent dhimaag kya ghaana sochi hogi..
kahin romantic song hain ya dance waali
uff can't wait to see which song it wil be
ufff wait karna parega which song ur gonne use...

ek baat aur yaar tujhe india mein hona chahiye..
yaar koi serial tumbhi banana
Juhi aur Hussain ko sign karlena..
ufff that will be a mindblowing one yaar...

keep it up girl
ur fanfic really rocks

-Naz-
Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan


Hee Sehar

First sorry yaar..ab main teri ff read ki hain
kal meri mood kuch off thi to maine kuch bhi nahi ki..
was very frustrated yesterday...aaj kuch achha hoon to aaj read ki maine
so sorry for the late comment...😃

Really love this part also yaar ufffffff
First the photo wala part yaar
ufff so cute and what a Kodak Moment
SuKk lookin at each other..
so well written..seemed like i took the pic...welldone yaar👏👏
loovvveeee the games that they do in the college
Mere college mein ye sab kyon nahi hota tha ..
and haila Afreen has special appearance in ur FF...lucky girl😳
and haila even Gaurav 😲...kahin Gaurav meri jaan to nahi..😛

really love the blindfolding game..sach mein 1000 epi ki bash yaaad aagayi
when Juhi recognize hussain blindfolded..
what a scene yaar fabulous dialogues there
uff the lines that Su thinks when Kk touches him
uffff awesome yaar u described so welll
Phirse mere ko Kuch Kuch Hone Laga😆
i could really see in my mind Su ki expressions and all
and also Kk ki expressions..MINDBLOWING writing yaar
and the hesitation both have in understanding what is happenin is Fabulous..

kaise soch leti ho tum ye saare lines yaar Amazing...
and loved it that the kabaab mein haddi RaPr looses 😆
just hate them so much..really want to beat them..😡

But wow yaar love it when SuKk go on a walk and
Kk asks him several questions
yaar Su ke jawaab omg..i could imagine Kk dissappointed face😕
i was also feeling so bad for Kk poor girl
itna dard hua hoga usko when Su said that Pr is his pyaar😭
But the whole part there was also Very good writtten..👏👏
And then they go for the next competition...
there Kk ki jawaab was so painful when Su wanted to ask her and she says forget about it
aawwww i almost cried yaar 😭
could feel Kk ki pain there

But wow a dancing competition wow awesome can't wait for it
i lovvvveee dancing yaar and SuKk ki dancing its out of this world
and which song they will choose..
mmmm it can be any song..there are like millions of song for this situation,,

mmm let me think..it could be
Haule Haule from Rab Ne banadi jodi ..or
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara...or
Bolo Na Tum Zara Pyaar Ye Hota Hain Kya..or
Zara sa Dil Mein de Jagaah Tu Zara sa apna lee bana...

par kaun jaane Sehar ki Intelligent dhimaag kya ghaana sochi hogi..
kahin romantic song hain ya dance waali
uff can't wait to see which song it wil be
ufff wait karna parega which song ur gonne use...

ek baat aur yaar tujhe india mein hona chahiye..
yaar koi serial tumbhi banana
Juhi aur Hussain ko sign karlena..
ufff that will be a mindblowing one yaar...

keep it up girl
ur fanfic really rocks

-Naz-

Hey Naz don't worry about it yaar😉...I just hope everything is good now😃...I am so HAPPY that you liked the photo scene😃...I know I wish something like this happens in my college when I graduate😆...BTW I will have special appearance by all of you guys by the end (For you I will have Gaurav there too when I bring you in my ff😉)...Well thanks for liking the game I thought it was a GOOD idea (thanks Afreen)😃...I was really nervous about the walk😕 but I am happy that you guys liked it😃...Aww I am sorry I made you cry😭...As for the song you will find out soon😃 BTW going to India and signing Hussain and Juhi will be a dream come true...I will update ASAP
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
woowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
saharrrrrrrrrrrr
ur ff is super duper hit
excellent
amazing
oustanding
loved it
hatssssssssss offfffff
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi

woowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

saharrrrrrrrrrrr
ur ff is super duper hit
excellent
amazing
oustanding
loved it
hatssssssssss offfffff

Oh wow you are a FAST READER😃 anyways I am glad you liked it😃...you are such a sweetheart🤗...I hope you will stay tuned because I will update ASAP😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Guys I hope everyone is HAVING A GREAT WEEKEND😃 I decided to post today👏 because well my next two weeks are going to be VERY BUSY😭(Exams and Projects EWWWWWWWW😡🤢) so I am not sure when I will get the time to update next😕...but I hope you guys will like this part and I will update ASAP and pm you all when I do so😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 15: ❤️Tujh Mein Rab Diktha Hai...I think?!😕

Sumit: So hum kya karein gay is challenge mein😕

Kumkum: Mujhe kuch paata nahin hai lagta hai yeh toh hum harein gay😭

Sumit: Way to go Ms. Negativity😆

Kumkum: Sumit😡

Sumit: Let's pick a song at least😊

Kumkum: I don't know😕

Sumit: How about one of your Shahid ji's songs??😆

Kumkum: Main Shahid ko achi memories kay saath yaad rakhna chahiti hoon aur yeh performance to DISASTER hone wali hai so let's not pick his song😡

Sumit: Yaar toh phir toh hum TROUBLE mein hain...how about we dance to Zinda Hoon Main😆

Kumkum: Pagal ho gaye ho kya😡

Sumit(whispers): Nahin tumne kardiya hai😊

Kumkum: Kya😕

Sumit: Oh Kuch nahin😊

Kumkum: Acha hum itna DEPRESSING song nahin karyein gay😡

Sumit: Ok how about Beedi😉

Kumkum(Slaps him on his head in a friendly manner😆): Yeh mazaak ka waqt bilkul nahin hai😡

Sumit: Toh iska metlaab Zara Zara Touch Me is out😛

Kumkum: DEFINITELY😡...Kya hum Labon Ko ka gana kar saakhtey hain😊

Sumit: Itna romantic nahin main toh khush hoon😆 lekin performance kay baad Rahul aur Preeti humein zaroor maar dayein gay😉

Kumkum: You are right main unko bhol hi gayi thi😕

Sumit: Oh really acha main ab SERIOUS ho gaya hoon😊 I promise toh how about an english song😊

Kumkum: Nahin😡

Sumit: Tum bossy hogayi ho😛

Kumkum: Agaya😊

Sumit: Kya?😕

Kumkum: Idea aur kya...Sumit Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai😊

Sumit(He starts to stair at her eyes as if he wanted to say me too): Ahhh kya metlaab??😕

Kumkum: Sumit main gane kay barey mein baat kar rahi hoon😆

Sumit: I know main bus sooch raha tha kay...I mean it's PERFECT😊

Kumkum: I know so let's practice....😊

While they are practicing RaPr are in trouble because they can't agree upon a song either

Rahul: Berang Zindagi hai😡

Preeti: Nahin Sexy Lady😡

Rahul: Arre yaar na tu sexy hai aur na hi hum sexy lage gayein is gane par perform karke😆

Preeti: Humein SuKk ko jealous karna hai toh my song is better😡

Rahul: Nahin mine is better, sun tu agar mere plan ko follow karegi toh faiyday mein rahe gi😊

Preeti: Fine let's practice😊

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Kay: Ok guys let's start this first up are Rahul and Preeti...

They dance to Berang Zindagi Hai:

Berang zindagi hai

Yaar chahiye

Dheemi si zindagi hai

raftar chahiye

As Rahul and Preeti are dancing, Preeti's heal breaks and Rahul tries to help but he slips on the stage and that was the end of their performance😆

Preeti: Kar liya jealous unko hus rahe hain sub😡🤢

Guy: Tum dunno ko yaar aur raftar nahin dancing class chahiye😆

Sumit and Kumkum can't help themselves and laugh at them too😆😆

Before SuKk go on stage, Preeti puts oil on certain spots of the stage so that Kumkum will slip🤢.

Preeti: Ab dekhti hoon kaise naachti hai tu berang zindagi toh ab teri hogi😡 hahaha

Then it is SuKk's turn:

Tu Hi To Jannat Meri, Tu Hi Mera Junnon

Tu Hi To Mannat Meri, Tu Hi Rooh Ka Sukun

Tu Hi Ankhiyon Ki Thandak, Tu Hi Dil Ki Hai Dastak

Aur Kuch Na Janu Mein, Bas Itna Hi Jaanu..

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..

Sumit bows in front of Kumkum while holding her hands😃 and then they play the girl version

. During this song she picks his head up and sings the song😳...

Na Kuch Poocha, Na Kuch Manga

Tune Dil Se Diya Jo Diya

Na Kuch Bola, Na Kuch Tola

Here Kumkum slips when she is spinning but HANDSOME Sumit catches her in his arms and she smiles😃...Preeti leaves after seeing this

Kumkum(to herself): Tum kab kab bachao gay mujhe😳

Sumit(tohimself): Jab bhi tumhe bachnay ki zaroorat hogi😊

The song continues...(Well you guys are very CREATIVE so you can make up rest of dance in your imaginations😆😆)

Muskura Ke Diya Jo Diya

Tu Hi Dhoop, Tu Hi Chau

Tu Hi Apna Paraya

Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..

At the end they are in each others arms🤗 and keep staring in each others eyes even though the song had ended for 2 minutes now😍...then suddenly 😊

Kumkum(whispers while looking into his eyes): Haan dikhta hai tujhe mein rab diktha hai Sumit😃 I think I love you❤️

Sumit is shocked and speechless😲!!!

Stay tuned to find out what happens next??? IS THIS THE ❤️MILAN❤️ YOU ALL HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR???😳😕

***BTW guys the idea about messing up RaPr's performance was given by Afreen👏👏 and the song Tujh Mein Rab Diktha Hai was used because Dr. Simmie🤗 once mentioned that she loved this song and wanted it to be SuKk's song in the show but since I can't do that I made it their song in the ff***
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!!!
Totally loved it.... This part was absolutely Amazing.....and
Dr .Sahar I think my heart skipped a beat when i read the sentence.....
'Haan dikhta hai tujhe mein rab diktha hai Sumit I think I love you'
What a way to end...Hats Off 👏

Well I loved the begin...hehe
SuKk cute little fight... omg sooo cute....
Hehe Su suggestions were sooo funny.... hehe
I love the sentence about shahid... mmmmh Shahid 😍
Main Shahid ko achi memories kay saath yaad rakhna chahiti hoon aur yeh performance to DISASTER hone wali hai so let's not pick his song
Beedi and Zara Zara Touch Me... hehe Sahar Tum bhi na...😆

Uff RaPr ....hehe and there song choice...
And I totally loved the way Preeti's heal broke... hehe.....🤣
and Rahul slipping was the icing on the cake...shame that fall didn't
knock some sense into him....
and omg How evil is preeti??😡

And SuKk ka dance....OMG!!!
I love the way you used both the male and female version...
wow sahar....hehe and the way they dance....
you took me to dream land and back.... 😍
and hehe... the Handsome Sumit...😳

And the Firework at the end.....
I'm speechless...
I can't believe Kk spoke those words to Su.....
I wonder what Su will do now....
OMG Sahar I love you.........🤗
Thank you for writing such an amazing part.... and for using the song and Afreen....
Yaara love the idea for RaPr song...hehe

And Sahar Thank you again for liking the siggie and
dear take your time updating... School is more important....
Plus you need to become a Doctor sooo
we can rule the world togther... hehe
Love you always Simmie x x x

Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Sahar!!!.....................sweety AWESOME part!!!....just LOVED IT😛!!

omg sooo funny sukk scene at the beggining for chosing a song🤣🤣.....and su with "zaara zaara touch me"😆😆🤣...ufff i laugh soo much😆...too good yaara👍🏼...

and omg the song u chose for rahul and preety!!......u know yesterday i saw a performance of HuTi on it in nach baliye😛...Naz di send it to me...so it reminds me of them😳..

and omg!!!....sukk ki song!!!!!!!!!!!!................ufff love that song...and now love it even more😳😍........and a the ending............................................OMG!!!!!...kk's diaogue😃.....'tujh mein rab dikhta hai sumit"!!😃....uffff i was sooooooooooooooo happy!!!!....and had butterflies in stomack😆.....ufff soooo romantic!!....yaara was imaging all the scene and really enjoyed it😛😉...

yaara ab plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make kk confess her love to su.....cant wait anymore!!!..............😳
Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! akar tumne aaj shaam tak update nahikiya tomain tuje rab ke paas pohcha dunga :P

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