~*Pyaar-ii*~ Updtd pg8 ~ Kumkum's miseries~ - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
hi sonu
lovely update
i love these songs nowadays
specially tht female version of tujme rab dikta hai
3 yrs leap
hmm
ok lets see hwo it goes
but very well written
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
tht ws a short sweet part Sonu..buttttttt haila!!3 saal leap???
chalo m sure it will be fun to read..chalo keep gng...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
hey sonu😳..........................well i have to tell u that im one of your big fan😳...just love your ff but i've never coment on it before today.....ab tum sochti hogi ke what kind of fan i am ke ek comment bhi nahin karti hoon😕.......im really sorry for that dear....but from now will always comment promise😛...................and about the part....it was a very sweet one as usual...love the songs........and 3years leap😲!!..........im sure it will be great😉....now desparatly waiting for it😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i love it plzzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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3 years have passed without any change in their life..

SCENE 1:

"sumit..subah ho gayi..sumit jaldi karo..humein shopping par jaana hai..Riddhima 3 baar call kar chuki hai..sumiIIIIIIIIIIITTT.."Kumkum yells as he pulls her down on bed..😆😆😆

She falls on him and sumit wraps her in his arms...."Meri morning kissie do pehle.."Sumit pouts..😉

"din-b-din badmaash hote jaa rahe ho tum.."Kumkum its his chest softly.."saari crease kharab kar di tumne..phir sari change karoon main ab..!!"Kumkum complains..😳

"Main kar doon..??"He nuzzles all over her neck when she pushes him.."Badtameez.."😳

"OOUUU"He fells down the bed by her push..😆

Kumkum laughs uncontrollably..😆

"Accha bacchoo??.."He pulls her down by her leg and both fall down on the carpet, unable to control their giggles..😉

Sumit hugs her tightly.."mera baby..!!" and she clings on to him, enjoying the loving pamperings.😳

SCENE 2:


"Haan meri ma..hum..hum hain na mall mein..tu aur dulhe raaja kahaan hain..???"Kumkum teases Riddhima..😉

"Kumkum.!!"Riddhima is almost blushing..😳

"Hello madame.."Armaan keeps his hands on Kumkum's shoulders, surprising her all of a sudden.😉.

"Armaan??.."Kumkum smiles.."Kahaan they tum?..Naadhte ki table se bhi achaanak gayab ?..Huh?..kuch khaaya subah se ki nahin?.."😳

"Relax..relax.."He puts his arm casually around her.."Itni tension kyun lete ho??.."😛

Kumkum smiles.."Accha..Riddhima??..use bhi le aana chahiye tha..aur.."😛

"Main bhi hun kumkum..peeche toh dekh.."Kumkum turns around..😳

"Oh..!!toh Mr.To-be-Huseband apni Mrs.To-Be ke saath ghoom rahe they?.."Kumkum teases them..😉

"Tu toh pagal hai..SUMIT..!!!"Riddhima runs to Sumit..😆

Kumkum laughs.."Chalo Armaan..fatafat sumit se shirts le lo..aur dono tie dekhne jao..chalo..jaldi.."😃

She pushes Armaan to Sumit, meanwhile Riddhima is teasing Sumit..😉

"Oye hoye..!!Kumkum wali pink shirt..ooooohhh.."She leans on his shoulder..😆

"Tu badmaashi band nahin karegi na..tu toh ruk."Sumit runs after her as she quickly hides behind Kumkum..😆

"accha..main aur Riddhima abhi zara bangles match karvaate hain..ok???.."Kumkum announces..😊

"Ok.."Sumit smiles..😳

"Aye hayye..kya smile di Sumit..main mar jaawaan.."Riddhima winks..😉

"Riddhima ki bacchi..!!"Sumit is almost running when Kumkum stops him.."Bas bas..main sambhalti hun use..tum jaldi jao.."😆

SCENE 3:

As Armaan and Riddhima are busy fighting over an ice-cream flavour Sumit and Kumkum capture some moments of togetherness..😳

Watching them, Sumit holds her hand.."Tumhe dooctor ke paas jaana tha naa abhi?.."😳

She looks down.."Hmm.."😕

"Abhi main chod doonga..kitni der lagegi??.."He asks..😳

"Sumit..ab main test nahin karvaana chahti.."Kumkum speaks softly..

"Kumkum..!..kal raat humne kya decide kiya tha?.."He puts his arm around her..😳

"Theek hai..par iske baad nahin sumit.."She tells him..😊

"Ok.."He nods..😊

"Main abhi chali jaaoongi khud..kehna..mandir jaa rahi hun..phir 3 baje tak ghar aa jaoongi.."She gestures him about Armaan-Riddhima's arrival..😳

"Di..ye dekho..apne liye 2 flavour le aayi..aur mere liye chocolate..wo bhi moti khud khaa jayegi.."Armaan complains..😆

"Moti..!!"Sumit gives Armaan a hi-5..😉

"Shut up.."Riddhima moans..😆

"Chal..pehle meri ice cream de de.."Kumkum teases her..😉

Scene 4:

Its nearly 4 now..Kumkum comes out of Dr.Vandana's clinic, looking quite weary..

"AUTO!!.."She yells when she hears a familiar.."Yes ma'am..!!"😉

"Sumit!!.."she smiles.."Tum???..yahaan kaise???.."😃

"Andar toh baitho pehle.."Sumit opens the door of the car for her..😳

"Ho gaye tests?.."Sumit kisses her forehead as she sits down..😕

"Hmm.."She closes her eyes.."Hum kyun bekaar mein ye tests karvate hain sumit.."

He doesn't say anything.."aaj der ho gayi na zyada?..bhookh lagi hai??..Mc Donalds?.."Sumit switches on the stereos..😳

"I am in my thirties sumit..ab toh main bhi jaanti hun..koi ummeed nahin hai..phir bhi tests?.."Kumkum looks at him..😕

"Abhi pata hai..Riddhima aur Armaan mein ladai hui aur Armaan ko usne bed se gira diya..God knows shaadi ke baad ye dono kya karenge..!!"Sumit laughs..😆

"Mere questions avoid kar rahe ho?.."Kumkum holds his arm..😳

"Kumkum..!!"He sighs and stops the car at one side of the road.."Kyun itna soch rahi ho?..huh?..jo hoga dekha jayega na.."Sumit hugs her..😳😳

"Sumit..i feel weak..jab baar baar ek hi report dekhti hun..main nahin karvaana chahti ab tests..I don't care about a baby now..I don't want a baby now.."She closes her eyes..

"Toh bas..humne last time karva diya test.ab nahin karvayenga?..done?.."sumit caresses her shoulders..😳

"Hmm.."She smiles..😊

"Upset toh nahin ho na?.."sumit touches her face..😳

"chehre se lag rahi hun?.."She pouts..😛

"Well..kiss here and prove yourself.."sumit points to his cheek..😆

"Nautanki.."She sways her head..😆

"alley mela munna upset.."As he teases he gets astonished..😉

"Muuuaah.."she kisses his cheek and pulls it as if he's a baby.."Bas?..ab chupchaap gaadi chalao..sharm nahin aati kone mein gaadi khadi karke romance karte ho?.."She places his hands on the steering..😳😳😳

"Nahin..sharm toh khair nahin aati.."He gets hit by her as he utters another word..😉😃😆

Hi guys..!!

Sorry, for not replying to ur replies individually but believe me, I am really bound.😳
I hope, u'll like this part as well..😳

Luv,
Sonali😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Tht ws a sweet part Sonu 😳
loved reading..cont soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hi sonu
great part
so kk and su yet didnt have a child
😭
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Amazing I love their relationship❤️...but I am sad that they didn't have a kid yet😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
wow sonali this was a very very sweet part really enjoyed it😛......love the way riddhima teases su...so funny🤣........and i also love sukk realtionship....so sweet😳
hope to see the next part soon😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
wowwwwww lovely part sonu
I really love the way u have putted sukk relationship
their relationship is really nice and unique
can't get enough of their cute relationship
but am little sad that sukk still haven't got a kid yet
i hope is test ke baad sab kuch theek ho jayega

continue soon
love afreen

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