~*Pyaar-ii*~ Updtd pg8 ~ Kumkum's miseries~

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@simrin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

congz 4 ur new thred

love da part

plzz cont soon

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

first congrats for opening new thread

the part was amazing........excellent.......and sooooooo sweet
i hope now kk will be fine.......
can't wait to read the next part
plz post new part soon

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sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: preethi
sonu acha huva u started ff in new thread
yaa kk ka dream haa naa

Thanks didi..!!Well..dekho..😉

Originally posted by: Shafoo
veryy niceeeeeeeeee ff plzz contuied soon

Thanks a lott..itne din se kahaan gayab they aap?..

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi
hey sonu....nice part........im sure its a dream..hai na?

hi di..thanks a lott..dekhte rahoo..😉

Originally posted by: coorg.japan
Sonali, Its good as always.

Why dont you copy the previous link in this thread so that the readers can follow if they haven't read your previous parts😊

Thanks di..!!u were missing all these days too na?..yes..i will just post the title..so stupid of me..😆

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: *Resham*
Ohh good good...

Congrats fr ur new thread sonu....

Thankyou..!!😳

Originally posted by: tsaian
congratulation sonu. for your new ff
and all the very best

its not new aimen..ots the previous one being continued..😳

Originally posted by: mirza_ajju
hey sonali thats a fantastic start to the new ff

Thanks dear...but it was an old one..😆

Originally posted by: panjwani
hi sonu
congrats for new thread

tht last part is kks dream

continue soon

Thanks didi..

Well..i m riting now..hope u like this part too.😳

Originally posted by: shreya baldwa
too good sonu di continue soon

Thanks shreya..!!😳

Originally posted by: simrin
congz 4 ur new thred
love da part

plzz cont soon

Thanks simrin..hope u remain around like this..😉

Originally posted by: juhuti
first congrats for opening new thread

the part was amazing........excellent.......and sooooooo sweet
i hope now kk will be fine.......
can't wait to read the next part
plz post new part soon

Hey..!!How r u?..gld that u liked it..how was ur exam dear?.

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

"Relax..kumkum?.."Sumit kisses her forehead again to convince her..

"accha dekho?..main..main hun na tumhaare paas?..kumkum?..kyun pareshaan ho rahi ho?.."sumit hugs her..😳

She sobs bitterly, hiding her face in his chest..😭

Ultimately, after a long struggle, he puts her to sleep..He's worried about her mental stature..

"Riddhima?.."He speaks softly, turning around to check if she's asleep..

"Sumit..!!!What a pleasant surpise..!! Kaisa hai tu?..Kumkum kaisi hai?.."She's happy to hear from her..

"Haan..theek hain..tu kaisi hai?..uncle kaise hain?.."Sumit smiles..

"Sab mast..!!Tu bata?..kya chal raha hai?.."She asks..😳

"Riddhima..tujhse kuch baat karni thi kumkum ke baarey mein.."Sumit closes his eyes..😕

"Haan haan..bol.."Sumit moves firther away from the place , so as not to disrupt Kumkum's sleep..😳

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"Tana na na..tana na na..tana nana tana na na.."

Kumkum opens her eyes next morning by the sound..It was really loud..

Wearily, she picks up her spects from the side table, due to blurred vision.."sumit?.."😕

As she views the room clearly, she gets the biggest shock of her life..

The entire room is filled with ballons-pink and red.Streamers and running from everywhere to everywhere..

She gets confused.."Sumit ye sab?.."😳

Wearing her sandles, she walks around and finds a bouquet of red roses.."I love you.."😳😳😳

She smiles.."Ye sumit bhi na.."

"Sumit?..kahan ho saamne aao na.."The same music is being repeated again and again..

"Tana nana..tana na na na na..tana na na tana na na na na na tana na na..."

She calls sumit, but he doesn't answer.Instead, he SMSes her "Neeche aao.."

She replies.."just a minute.." and takes a quick shower..

As she emerges out of her room, clad in a pale yellow chudidaar and kurta, she looks no less than a Godess..

Moving out of their cottage, she looks around to search for him, but in vain..

"Beach par.."He SMSes her again and she says.."ye ladka pagal ho gaya hai aaj.."

She moves out and jumps in shock..!!!!!!!😲

"SUMITTTTT...!!! 😲

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