~*Pyaar-ii*~ Updtd pg8 ~ Kumkum's miseries~

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*Resham*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Thts really a sweet part sonu...loved it..continue...😆

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poorvi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

very nice & sweet part sonu...sukk romance dekh ke maza aa gaya👏

cont soon

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nitya

@preethi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

sonu yupp really lep worked haa i amm happy to see sukk smiling

cont soon

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vernika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Very gud write up bachchaaaaaaaaa carry on soon...👍🏼

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Priya

@Pearl29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Hi,

i'm back after a long time............if u remember me...............i wasn't coming on IF since Mid nov..............so nice 2 read ur ff..............loved the parts.........especially Sukk scenes...........continue soon................

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dua

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

nice part

plz plz cont soon

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Guests were gradually flooding the Wadhwa house.Kumkum and Sumit hadn't ever been happier.Totally engrossed in the ceremonies, they cherished some of the most beautiful moments of their lives.😳😳

Finally, the "haldi" day came.While Riddhima and Shashank entertained their own guests at their home, Kumkum and Sumit attented to Armaan's after all they were on his side..!!😳

The haldi celemony, instead of being a peaceful, traditional occassion, turned out to be a "Tom and Jerry episode.."😆 as Armaan wasn't at all ready to be applied haldi..😉

"Armaan..accha sun toh sahi..accha thodi si lagayenge..dekh.."but, he ran from one room to another, covering himself with Kumkum's saree which he had snatched from the wardrobe and sumit's towel..😆

"Yahan toh pareshaani bahut badh gayi hai Papa.."Sumit called Shashank.😉

"Sumit..beta ye ladka kar kya raha hai?.."Shashank was worried as well as amused at the same time..😆

"Ab kya karun papa..abhi maine bahar se guards bulaye hain..aur main bhi bas jaa hi raha hun chor..I mean dulhe ko pakadne.."Sumit informs..😆

"Chalo..best of luck beta..hope you succeed before the muhurat.."Shashank laughs..😆

The door bell rang and madhav kaka opened the door..

"Bitiya..tumhaare liye ye aaya hai.."Madhav Kaka goes to bathroom, where Kumkum is alone, single-handed strggling with Armaan..😆

"Armaan..accha..dekh main promise karti hun na..tu bahar toh aa..accha keval haathon mein lagaoongi..aur ek tika ok?..aur koi nahin chidhayega tujhe.."Armaan trusts her..😛

"Pakka na di?..aap promise bhool kar un..un moti aunties ki party mein toh nahin jaoge na?.."Armaan gets thoughtful..😆

"Nahin baba..ab jaldi se chal..agar ab ek bhi minute late kiya na..toh Bi tere saath saath mera bhi bhurta bana dengi..woh bhi baingan ka.."she pulls him..

"kya joker bana hua hai ye.."Sumit removes Kumkum's saree which Armaan had wrapped to protect himself..😆

"Bitiya ye letter aaya tha tumhaare liye.."Madhav Kaka repeats..

"Jee kaka .ek minute..Sumit..tum zara Armaan ko acchi tarah se pakad kar le jao..main letter dekhti hun.."Kumkum tells Sumit.😊

Sumit clutches Armaan by his arms very tightly.."ab bhag kar dikha tu.."😆

Armaan kisses his cheeks.."bhaiyya..!! mujhe bacha loge na.."

Sumit frowns.."door reh mujhe ..varna tujhe main haldi se nehela doonga samjha?.."

Kumkum laughs aloud.."Tum dono na bilkul item ho.."😆

"ek toh tumne mujhe iss pagal ke sath chod diya ..aur upar se hans rahi ho..abhi dekhna bacchu..tumhari khabar toh baad mein loonga.."Sumit says angrily..😆

"aur haan..Kumkum..haldi ke baad isko peela dhaga pehenana hai na..wo pooja se le aana please.."Sumit says..😳

"Haan..pehle ise haldi toh lagvao..main bhi aati hun bas ye rakh ke.."She says..😳

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"Ye Kumkum kahaan reh gayi?..madhav kaka use jaldi se le aayiye..varna armaan ka naatak phir shuru ho jayega.."Sumit exclaims..😆

"Sumit..kumkum?.."Bi asks holding armaan's hands tight..

"Aa rahi hai bi.."Sumit says..😊

"Ammy tune toh meri naak kata di..tu ladka hai?.."Bi seems impatient now..😆

"Bi..main ek chota sa..nanha a baccha aur poori duniya mere peeche padi hai.."Armaan hugs her..😆

"almaan bhaiyya happy holi.."Little Tani advances towards him with a pinch of haldi when Armaan shouts.."CHALL HATT..!!Tani ki bacchi..Haapy holi.."

Tani laughs at him..Sumit nods in disbelief..😆

"Kumkum..sambhalo ise.."Sumit says as he sees Kumkum approaching them..😳

"Hmm.."she smiles faintly..😊

"Kya hua Armaan.."She sat near him..😳

"Pehle bi aur aap lagao..phir main bhagoon.."Armaan says..😆

"Hum bhi toh lagayengi.."His bua, mami and mausies protest..😆

Armaan looks at Kumkum , very timidly..😆

"Ok..baba..baitho theek se.."She takes some haldi in her fingers and so does Bi..😳

"Om..mangalam bhagwaan vishnu mangalam garudadhvaja..mangalam pundarikaksha mangalay tanohari.."Panditjee recites..😳

After applying a small teeka Kumkum gets up..😊 and of course, her place is taken by "moti aunties" which drench Armaan in haldi..😆

"Kumkum dhaga laayi?.."sumit goes to her..😛

"huhn?..dhaga?..haan woh rakha tha yahin kahin.."She looks lost..

"Kumkum..yaar ye kaam toh tumhe theek se karna chahiye tha kam se kam.."sumit's irritated.😭

Well, he is irrirated as he wants everything to be perfect.Plus, he's tired after organising and collecting everything..😳

A lone tear escapes her eyes which she wipes very conveniently after he goes to search for the thread..But, armaan's sharp eyes notice it..😳

He gets up from his place and runs to her, takes her with him and rushes to his room, closing the door behind him..😆 "Bas bahut ho gaya aap logon ka..main nahake hi nikaloonga ab.."😆

"Armaan..!!abhi dhaga bhi toh bandhna hai na?.."Kumkum laughs..😆

"Mujhse nahin chupa paoge didi..kya hua?..aap kyun pareshaan ho?.."He holds his hand.😳

"Pareshaan?..nahin toh?..tu paagal hai..jaa naha ke aa..main wait.."but armaan interrupts her..

"Kya hua didi?..aap bhaiyya ki baat aise dil par nahin lete..kuch baat toh hai..aansoon kyun aaye?.."Kumkum's eyes get moist again..😭

"Kuch nahin hua hai..hoga toh bataoongi..aur agar tu bahar sabko aise hi tang karega na..toh main ab sach mein ro doongi..jaldi kar abhi poori pooja baaki hai..aur 15 minute aur hain..chal jaldi kar.."Kumkum literally pushes him into the bathroom..😆

Laughing, she goes out..😆

"Kahaan gaya wo?.."sumit asks as she comes out..😕

"andar.."she says and goes away..😆

sumit holds his head.."Bhagwaan kahaan phansa diya aapne.."😆

Edited by sumitwadhwa - 16 years ago

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Annie

@Annie4Juhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Woow😳 Sonu New Fanfic i didnt knew that m sorry 4 late reply😳😳 Awesomeeeeeeee and Fabulous story Charaters rm mind blowing

Loved it simply loved it

You Rock

Hats off to u

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Outstanding Work

M Simply Speechless

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi
Woow😳 Sonu New Fanfic i didnt knew that m sorry 4 late reply😳😳 Awesomeeeeeeee and Fabulous story Charaters rm mind blowing
Loved it simply loved it

You Rock

Hats off to u

Fantabulous

Marvelous

Superb

Outstanding Work

M Simply Speechless

Out of the world

Love

Annie