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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tsaian

sorry guys that i didnt able to update a new episod as i was very busy but soon i m going to post a new chapter

Can't WAIT 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

kumkum is about to cut the cake then suddenly some one sto kumkum and said what are u doing here . i had arrange a big party 4 u

wht the hell u celeberate your bday here in a canteen this didnt suit u

come on kumkum i m here to take u with me . and i had already take a pemision from ayour principle . and he hold kumkum hand and forced her to come with him . su get upset to see this . the peson was taking her with him but kk said stopeed avinass

stop this childish act

i m not going with u anywhere . i m here to spend my happiness with all of them . i will not leave this party . if u want to enjoy just stay other wise the door was right there . u may go

avinaas: kumkum why are u so angry . we will celeberate your birth na as uncle had planned a big party 4 u. so why the hell u r waisting uour time here

kumkum: avinaas . i know that papa had arrange a birthday party at home . but the party is on night na . so i will be there . and one more thind papa every year arrange a party butr this time my friend hadarrange this . and this is biggest party 4 me

the way this part had organised make me much happier . this smal celeberation are more valuable 4 me

avinass: ok kumkum i m sorry . dont spoil your mood . just carry on . i m leaving . u enjoyed with your friend i will meet u at night . and haan dont forget to invite your friend and then avinaas leave

then kumkum go to sumit and say soory on behave of avinass

jasmine come there and asked sumit that who is he

first kumkum prefered to keep quote but after forcing of jasmine kumkum said avinaas is a bro of sara

karan come there kia hoa yar birthday celebrate nahin kerna .

then kumkum cut a cake and then she go to sumit and said i will never forget this day as u made this day more special to meshe said thanks is a small word . aur mai thanks ker k apni dosti to shermina nahin karoon gi .

sumit : thanks kehna bi nahin qk tum abi thori dher mai mujhay ghallia do gi
kumkum wo q
sumit: wo tumhain thori dher mai maloom chakl jahay
kumkum: bataoo na kia hoa acha batata hoon he pick his guitar and start to sing a song . kumkum shoked to hera a song
next part is on pg 30
Edited by tsaian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Edited...

Awwwww Aimen first of all congrats again!! sooo happy for you 🤗

And second omg how romantic is Su.... Thats soooo cute that he made Kk's day memorable... and the song he sings is just uff sooooo cute!! awwww bless him.... totally enjoyed this bit... can't wait to find out what happens next!! hehe

Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

sumit pick up the guitar and start to sing a song

khoi khoi si dheemi dheemi si

thori ankhai thori si muskarati

do dillon ki hai izzzat

do dillon ki hai izzzat

do dillon ki hai izzzat

do dillon ki hai izzzat

beeghay sapnay kachen ankhain

chooti chooti dil ki batain

kaheti hai yeh zindagi

kaisi hai yeh dewangi

koi rehta hai ahatoon kay saharay

chooron to sansanahat

mera naam hai mohabbat

chooron to sansanahat

mera naam hai mohabbat

kuch tahreerain likthay rehna

apnay ghar mai chaltay rehna

anjaani batoon mai bi

hoti hai dil ki lagi

sukhay lamhoon mai

barisoon k kinaray

honatoon pay hai shararat

mera naam hai mohobbat

honatoon pay hai shararat

mera naam hai mohobbat

khoi khoi si dheemi dheemi si

thori ankhai thori si muskarati

do dillon ki hai izzzat

mera naam hai mahabbat

kumkum surprsised to hear the song and she get very happy as summt give a life to her campose and then she realize that compition date is comming near and they havent made any practice. then she go to sumit and she said

kumkum : tum nay kuch bola hai ya nahin

kumkum: mainay to sirf yeh ghanay kay bhool likhay thay . lakin ish ganay mai jaan tum nay daal di

sumit: ohh really mai to samjha tha k tum mujhay maroo gi k mainay tumhari shari ki aisi tassi kerli

kumkum : nahin sumit tumnay ajj meri ish gheet ko aik nahin zindagi day di
sumit:ish ghanay ki shairi hai hi iti achi k koi bi ishay gungunana cahay . yeh ghana apni zindagi say bohot kareeblagta . and then he said on his heart : shayat ishi ka naam hai mohabbat:

kumkum: kia kaha tum nay

sumit: tumnay kia suna

sumit : tum nay kuch suna hai ya nahin. agar suna hai to jawab do

kumkum: sumit apni sethani banad kero aur yeh soocho k compition mai kia kerna

sumit ohh hello mujhay sirf ghana ghanay ka mood tha ish liyay gha lia . compition mai kia kerna hai yrh tum hi soocho

kumkum: to tum mera sath nahin do gay

sumit in his heart: tum kaho to zindagi bhar sath day doon

kumkum: tum nay phir kuch kaha

sumit : tum nay phir kuch suna
kumkum: lagta hai ajj mera deemak zara zyada chal raha hai sumit: ohh ish cootya say deemak pay itna zoor mat dalo . kumkum : to tum mera saath nahin do gay ish compition mai sumit aray nahin baba . zaroor doon ga.bataoo kia kerna hai jasmine come and said filhala kuch nahin kerna abhi ghar chalna . waisya bi kumkum k ghar mai part hai wahan jo avinaas je aur kk k papa nay kumkum k liyay bday part arange ki hai wahan bi to jana hai kal ish baray mai discuss karaiin gay k kia kerna hai kumkum: sumit tum arahay ho na sumit: hmm nahin kumkum mujhay kuch kam hai kumkum: koi bahana nahin chalay ga tumhain ana hi hoga sumit ok i will be ther kumkum: bye sumit: bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice parts loved it continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
fabulous parts dear!!😛................loved both of them😳............but i dont like that avinaass...he's soo bad😡........but su is soooooooooooo cute...he sang a song for kk..how cute😳....but why didnt he told kk that he's her bachpaan ka dost??😕......just hope ke voh usse jaldi kahe..........keep up the great work dear....its amazing😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
GREAT JOB HUN😃👏 I loved both parts...I was waiting for them for a long time and when I got your pm I was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo EXCITED that you updated your ff...anyways the parts were so SWEET I don't like avinaash though...SUMIT was great as usual...He sang a song for Kumkum AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW CUTE...I loved the dialogues where Sumit said tumne kuch suna LOL😆 I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART I want to see what happens at Kumkum's party at home...please KEEP UP YOUR SUPERB WORK and UPDATE SOON😃
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
tht was soo cooll part 17 &18
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi

thanks for this

nice to see you post your parts after so long. was missing the story alot

cute parts

su singing, awww

yeah he should have told kkk

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Posted: 16 years ago
first of all..................
CONGRATULATIONS once again

finally u are back with ur ff....................... i was really missing this ff................................now finally its here

loved both parts..........it was really nice....................sacchi friends ke sath bday manane ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai....................................family ke sath to hum hamesha bday celebrate karte hai.................................par friends are sooooooooooo special

loved that thinking parts.............................su apne dil mein kuch kehta hai😳............ aur....................kk ko pata chal jata hai😳.......................this is what call a true lovers❤️.........................and SEDHE DIL SE DIL KA CONNECTION❤️

ye avinaas kuch zeyadah he irritating hai...............don't like him at all😡😡

do cont soon

love afreen


Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago

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