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Posted: 16 years ago
fabulous aimen thats really cute
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Posted: 16 years ago
HIii Aimen.first of all congratulation sweets...im so happy for u.....😳😊
great parts dear......hope su jaldi kk ko bata de he is her childhood frnd.....
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

finally suspen is open

nice part dear....gr8 paty.......and su ne gana gaya ....thats really cool

keep it up dear

waiting 4 next part

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow .....how romantic is Sumit & his song is Awesome , Extraordinary . Fabulous writing Aimen . Keep it up , waiting for ur next epi .
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi,

i'm back after a long time............if u remember me...............i wasn't coming on IF since Mid nov..............so nice 2 read ur ff..............loved the parts.........

The best part of ur story till now is KK giving a dall 2 Su who turns out 2 be her childhood friend.................the emotions that u've described r just sooooooooooo touching.................simple but sweet
The other thing is Su makeing KK's Birthday sooooooo special by decorateing the whole college.....................just beautiful.........can't get over it..................now want 2 c KK's reaction of knowing who Su is..........
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Posted: 16 years ago

Arrey my jaanu Amy this is awesome😃😃 So does Sumit go to the party? we're waiting😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

Haila..welcome back Aimen
really missed u yaar
and once again Congratulations sweetie with ur engagement..
Hope it was an awesome day for u..😊

And now ur fanfic
The parts where fabulous yaar..
was wating for ur updates..
awwww really loved Su singing for KK...
that is so cute..and sooo sweet
And ya ufff hate Avinash...kaisa dost hain Kk ki
Chale aaya bday party barbaad karne..

Anyways..loved the cute discussion of Sukk for the competition..
and very funny when Su says somethin in his heart then
Kk saying tumne kuch kaha...😆😆😆 so funny

cant wait to read the part..
i wonder what is gonne happen at Kk bday party at her home
ye avinash zaroor kuch karne wala hain😡
isiliye to kaha Kk ko ke apne friend ko bhi invite karna..

Keep it up girl..
post the other parts soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
yupp nice too see u writting after a long time cont itt
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Posted: 16 years ago

summit get ready to go 4 kumkum birthday part sumit pack a guddha 4 kumkum which he keep safe 4 her since childhood and he wrote a letter 4 kumkum in which he wrote but he didnt mentoned his name in letter.

jiska kerraho tum intezar .

ajj aya hai woo teray darbar per

keraha hai woo tumhara bi intezaar

and he siad jab tum apna birthday cake cut karo gi tab mai tumharay samnay honga. aur tum jan lo gi k mai kom ho

he wear a black suit and then he go to kumkum home . jasmine karan , seema and all his collage gang reached kumkum home . they all enter in kumkum sara welcome them .jasmine asked sara that where is kumkum . sara said he is upstair and she will come soon.

sumit go in search 4 kumkum. he reached to kumkum room but kumkum was not there . he keep his gift and letter in kumkum bed.

and then he come out from kumkum room and he join karan and other friend . kumkum come to his room . see a parcel when she open a pack and saw guddha she surprised and she get happy them hse poen a letter and he read a letter . first she get very happy .but suddenly she get upset . she is very upset . sara come and said that kumkum come uncle and avinas bhaiya is calling u . kumkum said ok . she come to a party with sara

summit see kumkum . and he just stunned to see kumkum. kumkum is white dress . her hair was open . she look very gorgeous . sumit said in his heart . ajj tum waqai pari lag rahi ho . bilkul waisi jaisay mainay tumhain bachpan mai dekha tha.

sad kumkum eyes searching 4 one . yeah she is searching 4 her childhood friend . . the person 4 whom she wait throughout her life. she is afraid that if he come infront of her , how will she reach . she dont want to meet . with her childhood ,

jasmine , karan , sumit and all gang come and wish kumkum

summit: happy birthday

kumkum: wo to tum subah hi ker cukhay thay

summit: hmm ajj koi bohot kobsurat lag raha hai

kumkum: hmm kia baat hai kahin kisi per dil to nahin agya

summit : yehi samaj lo

kumkum: acha yeh batoo k tareef kiski ker rahat thay

sumit : pari ki

kumkum: ab yeh pari kon ho:

sumit: pari hai kumkum . tumhain nahin dekhay gi

kumkum: kyun jee

sumit : aisay hi . us pari ko meray ilawa koi nahin dekh sakta

kumkum: haan mujhay koi shook bi nahin kisi pari wari ko dekhnay ka

sumit: tumhain koi dekha bi nahin raha . ajj yeh choro tum bataoo tumhari anazrainkisay dhun rahi hai

kumkum: nahin kisi ko nahin: tumhaib kis nay kaha

sumit: tumhari ankhain nay

kumkum: oohh tumhain apni pari ko dekhnay say itna time mil gaya k tum meri ankhain dekh sako

sumit: haan bus dekh hi lia

kumkum: to kia kah rahi hai meri ankhain

sumit: aik ajeeb si kushi per sath hi thora sa dar

kumkum: hahahaha mai kumkum ho tumhari pari nahin yeh flirt kisi aur say kerna

sumit: tumhain itni bari ghalat fehmi k mai tumsay flirt karoon ga then in his heart mai to sirf tum say mohabbat karoon ga

kumkum : kia

sumit : kia kia

kumkum : tumnay kia kaha

sumit: tumnay kia suna. mainay to yehi kah ak mai tum say flirt nahin karoon ga

kumkum: wo to tum waisay bi nahin kersakthay

sumit: acha yeh bataoo k tum udas q lag rahi ho . aisa lag raha hai k tum yahan ho ker bi yahan nahin ho . tumhari dil kahin aur hai uar dimag koi aur . ankhoon mai kushi bi hai . aur darr bi

kumkum: itni achi tarha jantay ho mujahy

sumit: nahin kosish ker raha ho . mujhay nahin bataoo gi kia baat hai

kumkum keep silence

kumkum father (mr-: mihir virani ) make announced that its time to cut the cake . summit was very happy that i time to revealed kumkum that he is his childhood friend . and kumkum was worried that she dont want to faced the person 4 whom she wait since her childhood

precap: why kumkum is worried to face her childhood friend . what is going to happened on her birthday party

. next part is on pg 32

Edited by tsaian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Aimen sorry for editing so late...Anyways AMAZING part hun👏👏 I LOVED IT as always fantastic dialogues between Sumit and Kumkum😉 but I am so sad that Kumkum is not ready to face her childhood friend😭...I am beyond excited for the next part so please do CONTINUE😃

Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago

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