FF Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai part47 pg68 VALENTINE

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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#251

Noorya...finally tune meri sun li.........fabulous part sweetu,great ,mindblowing👏👏........chal tune ham sab ki jaan bakhs hi di unka milan kara ke😆

its for u -🤗🤗

cont soon sweeets..u know na im waitin for romance😉😳

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noorya

@...Noorya...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: KumkumisGR8
OMG NOORYA😃 I am screaming right now AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW She FINALLY CONFESSED HER LOVE FOR HIM I AM SO HAPPY😃...It was so CUTE how Abhi recognized Sumit's love for Kumkum and then THE HUG🤗 you finally made them HUG I LOVED IT how she wouldn't leave him...THANK YOU so much for getting them together👏...Now for your writing you are an AMAZING writer yaar and I already told you that...I have to say you were absolutely wrong when you said that you can't write romantic parts...you wrote this part without any flaw SUPERB👏 Hun...I could picture Sumit and Kumkum actually saying these dialogues GREAT JOB👍🏼...I have to agree with Naz when she said that you should seriously look into the profession of creative writer...I am sure YOU WILL BE AWESOME and become famous...OH ALSO THANKS SO MUCH because you will be posting two PARTS what more can we ask for😃 I can't wait yeh shaam kab hogi😆 I want to read more about their milan please post the next part soooooon and keep writing because you are amazingly talented👏😃BTW sorry for the long comment but I had a lot to say about this AMAZING PART👏

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thank u sooooo much yaara😃...............im sooo happy u liked the part and kk's cofession😳...............thank u soo much for liking the "romantic" scene....yaara u are sooo sweet............gosh never thought koi mujhse itne sweet baatein kahega...thanks to all of u😳........ab will post the next part😉...............and for your laaaammmbaaa comment...................dont be sorry i loooooooveeeeeeeee lamba comments😆......i already said it to Naz di aur tumhe bhi kehti hoon soo keep writing lamba comments just love reading them😉..........aur aaj kal tho main bhi lamba comments deti hoon😆..........Naz di ki adat jo pad gaayi😆😆....love u sweety and thanks once again for your lovely comment

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noorya

@...Noorya...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi
Noorya...finally tune meri sun li.........fabulous part sweetu,great ,mindblowing👏👏........chal tune ham sab ki jaan bakhs hi di unka milan kara ke😆

its for u -🤗🤗

cont soon sweeets..u know na im waitin for romance😉😳

thank u soooooo much yaara😳............are aise kaise nahin sun leti tumhari baat......pehli baar kuch maang rahi ho tho maana kaise karti😉..............thank u sweetu for your hugs..........le yeh meri taraf se tumhare liye🤗🤗............will cont right now par romance ka kya hoga yeh tho sirf rab hi jaane😆....hope u wont be desapointed😳

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noorya

@...Noorya...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#254

okk guys im back!!!😛...............as promise here is the next part...........but uske baad i think im gonna take a break..........................are dont worry mera break humare sumitji ki tarah ek mahine ka nahin hoga😆 sirf next parts sochne ke liye😉......tho maybe 2 or 3 days....ziada nahin hai naa??....ab jo finaly maine sukk ka milan karvaya tho itna mil hi sakta hai😃.......ok ab about the part.........some of u are waiting for their romantic scenes....but haan jaise maine already kaha hai im not sooo good in romantic moments....i know sahar yaara u said that im wrong and thank u soo much but phir bhi....😳................so here it is...

Part 35

It was time for kajol's vidai...she cried a lot and her parents also...they gave her blessings and they leave...............kk sits in su's car and they also leave. Su noticed that kk was lost in her thoughts

su : kya hua kk? kya soch rahi ho?

kk : yahin ke kitna dukh hota hai jab ek ladki shaadi kar ke apni pariwaar se door hoti hai😔

su : is mein dukh milne ki kya baat hai......................are jahan voh jaati hai vahan bhi tho usse ek pariwaar milne vali hai jo uss se bohut pyaar denge

kk : haan lekin su phir bhi..................bohut dard hota hai unse door alag hona jinonne itne saalon se pala hai.....khud se ziada pyaar kiya hai.........tum nahin samjhoge kyunki tum tho alag nahin ho jaayoge naa shaadi ke baad😒

su trying to cheer her up: okk okk.................vaise jab meri shaadi hogi naa tho main apni patni ko jab bhi uska maan kare uske maayka le jaaounga😉

kk smiles : are wah!..............voh ladki tho bohut lucky hai😳

su : aur nahin tho kya......are mujh jaise handsome ladka jisko milne vali hai voh lucky nahin tho aur kya hai😆

kk forgot her pain : oh really...................tho Mr handsome...uss lucky girl ka naam tho bataaye...

su : tumhe tho pata hai...................voh hai naa........Gauri...😈 (to tease kk)

kk surprised : gauri?😲

su : haan.........dad ne chose kya hai😛..................ab main bhi soch raha hoon ke haan bol hi doun...

kk : tumne usse dekha hai?

su : nahin.....i mean haan!....dekha hai naa....voh photo mein...(kk smiles and understood that su is teasing her)

kk : tho voh tumhe pasand aayi?

su : haan....bohut😃

kk : tho phir soch kya rahe ho....haan keh do naa!😆

su gets shocked : haan keh doun??!!😲

kk hides her smile : haan............agar tumne usse dekha hai aur pasand bhi kiya hai tho maan jao...😈

su disapointed : u're right..main ghar jaa ke hi sab se keh dounga

kk : kya?

su : yahin ke main kum..........i mean gauri se shaadi karunga

kk trying her best to control her laugher : congrats

su thanks..........🤢

For the next 10 mins su drove the car without saying a word and kk was controling her laugher......su looks at her and stops the car...kk looks at him confused

kk : kya hua?...gadi kyun rokh diya?😕

su : tumhe sach mein fark nahin padta?

kk : kis cheez ke liye?

su : ke main gauri se shaadi karlun...

kk : mujhe kya fark pad sakta hai............aur tumhi ne tho kaha ke tum uss se shaadi karoge kyunki voh tumhe pasand aayi hai

su : are main mazak kar raha tha...tumhe tang karne ke liye............usse pasand karna tho door ki baat hai maine abhi tak uska photo dekha hi nahin

kk : haan tho main bhi mazak kar rahi thi naa😉

su surprised : kya?......tum.........matlab tumhe pata tha ke main mazak kar raha hoon?😕

kk smiles : haan😳

su : lekin tumhe kaise pata chal gaaya?

kk puts her amrs aroud his neck : kyunki main janti hoon ke mera su sirf apni kk se pyaar karta hai (su smiles and slowly wanted to kiss her but kk stops him)

kk : su kya kar rahe ho?😳

su : apni kk se pyaar😈 (he comes closer and kk pushes him away again)

kk : su chalo varna hume der ho jaayegi😳

su : jinhe time pe poonchna hai voh poonch jaayenge

he was very close to kk now☺️...kk was not able to control herself so she just closed her eyes.....by seeing this su smiles and kiss her on her forehead....kk opened her eyes and hug him very tightly😳

kk : i love u su

su smiles : i love u too... (and he drove away)

They reach abhi's house exactly on time...abhi and ka were about to go inside. Abhi's momwas doing the rasaam and they enter. After some time kk nandani and some other girls take ka to her room....and after few mins abhi and su go upstair....abhi opened the door of his room but kk and the other girls stop him

kk : kahan jaa rahe ho?

abhi : are....mera kamra hai tho andaar jaana chahta hoon

kk : haan haan zaroor jaaoge..........lekin andaar jaane se pehle kuch dena hoga (she shows her hand)...right girls?

girls : RIGHT!!!😛

su : abhi inhe 500rs do kafi hai😆

kk : kya? 500rs?!!..........bheeg de rahe ho kya?!!

su : tho?

kk : hume kam se kam 5000rs chahiye!😃

su and abhi together : 5000rs!!??

abhi : pagal ho gaayi ho kya?!

kk : theek hai tumhari marzi...............lekin hum bhi tumhe andaar jaane nahin denge

abhi : kk ab bohut ho gaaya hun!...ab mujhe andaar jaane do!

kk : are maine kya kiya...........tum khud problem create kar rahe ho........paisa do aur andaar jao.....yahin samajh lo ke kajol bhabhi se milne ki kimat hai yeh....are andaar jaane ka ticket😉😛

su to abhi : yaar tu janta nahin hai yeh bohut ziddi hai............dedo paisa varna poori raat yahin guzarni padegi😆😆

Finaly abhi agrees and give them money. He enters the room and lock it. kajol was on the bed...he goes and sits beside her...they keep looking at each other and ka get shy so look down...abhi make her face him and...............................................lights off!!😉
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Here kk gave the money to the girls and they share it between them and go down...only su and kk left there

su : itni ziddi ladki maine aaj tak nahin dekha😆

kk : main? aur ziddi?😲

su : aur nahin tho kya..............bechare abhi ko andaar jaane hi nahin diya jab tak apna paisa nahin liya

kk : yeh rasaam hai............aur tum dekhna jab humari shaadi ho jaayegi naa aur ji tumse paisa maang legi tab meri yeh zid kuch bhi nahin hogi uske samne

su : kyun?..kya voh bhi 5000rs maang legi?

kk : are nahin........voh tho iss se bhi ziada maang legi😆

su : kya keh rahi ho!!

kk : kyun?...agar voh itna maang legi tho tum maana karoge?

su : are apne kk ki pass jaane ke liye main 5000rs tho kya apni poori dolat dene ke liye tayaar hoon😳 (kk smiles then wants to go in her room but su holds her hand and she turns back)

su : kaha jaa rahi ho?

kk : su time dekha hai....4 bajne vale hain.........bohut neend aa rahi hai

su pulls her a lil and hold her by her waist : main bhi saath chalun?...........company dene ke liye😈 (kk hits him on his arm)

kk : shut up!...aur vaise bhi mujhe company ki nahin need ki zaroorat hai

su : haan tho tum so jao aur main tumhe dekhta rahunga😃

kk : su tum mujhe ziddi kehte ho lekin khud ko dekh lo..........yeh humara ghar nahin hai...aunty hume dekh legi tho kya sochegi..chodo plz😳

su : okk (and leave her)

kk : good night

su : good night😒....(kk sees that su is sad....she kiss him on his cheek and runs into her room..........su was pleantly surprised...he smiles and goes to sleep also)

uff ho gaaya..................okk so now chutti😆....will be back very soon dont worry shayad 2 3 din se pehle aoun.....agar apne fingers ko control nahin kar paayi🤣🤣...........but till then enjoy the both parts and leave you lamba or chota comments😳

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#255

Hey Noorya I am back with my lamba comment😆 First of all I will miss your ff because I don't think I can go without your updates for WHOLE TWO OR THREE DAYS but since you wrote such AMAZING PARTS👍🏼 I think you deserve chotti but please come back asap...until then I will re re re re and re-read parts 34 and 35...I loved this part gosh I was getting goosebumps after reading it especially when he held her hand and wanted to "ACCOMPANY" her to her room HAHA and you say you can't write romance I think everyone will agree with me when I say you are a romance GENIUS 😃 Oh I loved their car conversation it was so innocent and CUTE when he said he was going to marry Gauri and then my favorite part HE KISSED HER ON HER FOREHEAD AWWWWWWWWWWW😃👏 My favorite lines were by Kumkum when she said "kyunki main janti hoon ke mera su sirf apni kk se pyaar karta hai" And when Sumit said "are apne kk ki pass jaane ke liye main 5000rs tho kya apni poori dolat dene ke liye tayaar hoon😳" I pictured them in my head saying these ADORABLE lines to each other👏 OMG You are AMAZING ok please do update soon otherwise our forum will be soona soona without your great ff posts...I am so excited to find out what happens next?????😃

This is for your GREAT ff:👏 And this is for you: 🤗

Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#256

heyy i love 34 &35 part i love it

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#257

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Noooorrryaaaa Meri Jaan....i love u yaar

Im soooooooo happppyyyy...im celebrating this khushi ke moment yaar

OMG kahin main khushi se paagal na hojawoon

🤪

OMG yaar both parts are

MINDBLOWING, AWESOME, FANTASTIC, EXCELLENT, INCREDIBLE, FENOMANAL,

FANTABULOUS,UFFFF, BEAUTIFUL, EMOTIONAL, LOVABLE, CUTE, SWEET

aur main kya kahoon meri to bholti band hogayi yaar

Ufff reading the lines my heart started beating faster and when they hugged ufffffff

Mere dil ko chhain jaa ke mili yaar...😳

Loved the part yaar amzing writing and the dialogues

OMG its so well written har ek dialogue..so perfect..

yaar tu meri baat maan le...you should really make a serial yaar...

ufff each scene that u wrote for the parts is so well and goes so perfectly with the story..

narration of the story...is incredible yaar..reallly loved it..

Love the before the shaadi when Su and Abhi talk about nervousness and all so cute..

and then when the shaadi is happenin kk lookin at Su and then Su lookin at Kk..

awwww bechara gets sad and omg when he walked to the terrace..

i had a feeling i just knew it somethin magical will happen there...

when abhi and Su were talkin on the terrace and when Kk hears it

uff Yaar so much like a real serial...ur very talented yaar...

And then the big moment comes when Kk goes and talks to Su..

uff..i was just smiling all the way and was soooo happy when they hugged..

omg so beautiful yaar..so magical 😲😍

i read it like 3 to 4 times that part and their hug soooo sweet..😍

awwwwww i was imaging the scene in my head and omg its so beautiful yaar....

amazing part...waaki mein tune meri hosh ura di yaar...

And the 35 part yaar omg so romantic and cute...wow

yaar who says u cant write romantic parts...

ufff the part of SuKk in the car were sooooooooooo

cuttteee and sooo romantic and sooo funny

omg so cute that when Su is close to Kk and she closes her eyes

then Su being a total gentleman kiss her on her forehead..

i was like awwwwwwwwwwww he is so sweet...😍

itna cute yaar i got butterflies in my stomach..

aur tu kehti hi tujhe romantic parts likhna nahi aati..

bhola na maine...tujhe aati hain to aati hain..

Main badi hoon tujhse to tumhe maan ni paregi

u can write any emotion yaar..aur wo bhi itna amazingly

even funny parts yaar..love the comedy in the story

when Kk and the girls ask money to abhi before he can enter his room

when Kk says bheeg de rahe ho kya🤣🤣🤣

that was so funny....the whole part was funny..i was laughing the whole time..

loved the dialogues there so funny🤣

and the suhaagraat part omg LIGHTS OFF🤣

yaar totally filmystyle so original🤣awesome yaar

and the ending omg soooooooooooo cute yaar..ufff mujhe waaki mein

kuch kuch hone laga...ufff all butterflies in my stomach

Su is so cute when he says main bhi aata hoon tumhe company dene ke liyee...😍

ufff MARVELOUS yaar...itna cute parts unbelievable

its beyond my expectations yaar..ufff

and ya ab tum 2, 3, din chutti lee sakti ho...😆

inn do parts ke nasha jo huwi hai na abhi utre ga nahi...

waaki mein yaara tu na hamri hiwde ko ek dam khuss kardi

itna mast ishtory tune likha na ke main ka boloon

itna bola manne ke hamri saari lafz hi khatam hogai

apni bhejah mein na khaali SuKk ghoom rahe hain

Tune itna kamaal ishtory likha na isiliye

wo ka kehte hain angrazi mein

sasuri lafz hi nahi aarahi zubaan pe

haa yaad aagayi manne..

MINDBLOWING..haa teri ishtory na ek dam Mindblowing hain ...

😆

dont mind my tapodi language..

ufff i have to stop myself apne ungliyon pe lagaam lagati hoon warna

moderators will bann

my account for writing itna lammmbaaaa comments😆

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nitya

@preethi

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#258

noorya yaa soo happy ki finally kk agreed fr this and 2 parts r superb.

do cont soon

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#259

sorry for my late comment

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
do parts ek sath........hmmmmmmmmm bahut maza
aya do part ek sath padh kar

ab main kia boloon tum ne to hamari iccha puri kardi
thanks for letting kk confess her love for su
really loved that parts
kk was right k Arjun😡 ke galtiyoon ki saza su ko kyun mile
i am so happy that kk ne apne pyar ka izhaar kar dia
really love the hugging🤗 scene
and the little and sweet convo btween sukk
now its going be really nice

I really love that rasam where Abhi had to pay some
money to go to his own room
that was really nice
and su apni puri daulat de sakta hai kk ke pass jane ke liye
sacchi he is the true and a unique lover i have ever seen or heard

thanks once again for writing two parts
plzzzzzzzzz do cont soon

love afreen

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: KumkumisGR8
Hey Noorya I am back with my lamba comment😆 First of all I will miss your ff because I don't think I can go without your updates for WHOLE TWO OR THREE DAYS but since you wrote such AMAZING PARTS👍🏼 I think you deserve chotti but please come back asap...until then I will re re re re and re-read parts 34 and 35...I loved this part gosh I was getting goosebumps after reading it especially when he held her hand and wanted to "ACCOMPANY" her to her room HAHA and you say you can't write romance I think everyone will agree with me when I say you are a romance GENIUS 😃 Oh I loved their car conversation it was so innocent and CUTE when he said he was going to marry Gauri and then my favorite part HE KISSED HER ON HER FOREHEAD AWWWWWWWWWWW😃👏 My favorite lines were by Kumkum when she said "kyunki main janti hoon ke mera su sirf apni kk se pyaar karta hai" And when Sumit said "are apne kk ki pass jaane ke liye main 5000rs tho kya apni poori dolat dene ke liye tayaar hoon😳" I pictured them in my head saying these ADORABLE lines to each other👏 OMG You are AMAZING ok please do update soon otherwise our forum will be soona soona without your great ff posts...I am so excited to find out what happens next?????😃
This is for your GREAT ff:👏 And this is for you: 🤗

awwwwww thank u sooo much sahar for your loveeeelyyy and lammmbbaaa comment😆😳......................thank u mujhe chutti dene ke liye😆.............im glad u liked my parts sweety even the "romantic" once😳.........................u know mujhe and Naz Di ko laga tha that only hum dono mind mein scenes picturized karte hain......................but thank god yahan ek teesri bhi hai🤣...................dont worry yaara mujhe lagta hai main chutti khatam hone se pehle hi laut kar aoungi😆😆.........thank u for your hugs sweety and these ones for u🤗

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