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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey u all😛..................yaar i told u naa main apne aap ko rokh nahin paoungi😆😆...............so here i am with another part😳...............actually voh kya hai naa kal school shuru ho raha hai😭.............so thought uss se pehle ek last part post kardun kyunki i dont know phir kab time milega.............going to be very busy next week coz have a traning period for a month🤢.............................but u guys dont worry ek mahine ka break lene vali nahin hoon😊....will post some parts regulary..........................okk here is the part

Part 36

Next morning kk was packing her samaan and after a while she goes to su's room to check if he's still sleeping. She knocks at the door but no reply...she knocks again then enter the room and find su sleeping😳...she goes and sits near him and runs her fingers throughs his hair

kk softly . sumit...😳..(but he doesn reply)....su utho naa (he slowly opened his eyes)..good morning😊

su with a cute smile : good morning😊

kk : chalo utho ab aur jaldi se fresh ho jao................hume ghar jaana hai (she stands to leave but su holds her hand and she sits back)

kk : kya hua? (su kisses her hand)

su : aaj tumne itni pyaar se mujhe uthaya..bohut acha laga😳 (kk smiles).......ab tum roz mujhe issi tarah uthaogi😃

kk : kya keh rahe ho tum!...........ab main roz todi naa tumhare ghar aa kar tumhe utha sakti hoon.............lekin haan shaadi ke baad main yeh kar sakti hoon😊 (su smiles and come closer to her)

su : tho phir shaadi karein?😈(he comes more closer to kiss her but kk pushed him and runs toward the door)

kk : su yeh humara ghar nahin hai kuch tho sharam kar😳......ab jaldi se fresh ho jao (and she leaves)

After some time everyone's having their breakfast...after that kk was in her room with kajol

ka : 2 din pehle aayi ho aur aaj wapis jaa rahi ho...hum dono ne theek se baat bhi nahin kiya😔

kk : tho kya hua wapis jaa rahi hoon..........iska matlab yeh tho nahin ke main phir nahin aaoungi😳

ka smiles : haan........ya phir shayad hume aana padega.......tumhari shaadi mein😛 (kk blushes)...vaise..........su tumhe kaise lagta hai??? (kk is surprised by her question)

kk : ma...matlab??

ka : dekho kk.......main janti hoon ke hum dono ek doosre ko ziada nahin jante lekin tum abhi ke behen ho aur uss se main tumhari bhabhi ho gaayi..........tho tumhare bhabhi hone ke naate jo mere dil mein hai voh main tumse kehna chahti hoon (kk gets a lil confused)

kk : bhabhi aap kehna kya chahti hai?😕...saaf saaf boliye naa

ka : tum....tum su se pyaar karti ho naa? (at that same time su wants to enter kk's room but stops hearing ka...here kk doent kno what to say)

ka smiles : koi baat nahin mat batao😳.........main samajh sakti hoon....shayad abhi humara rishta uthna gehra nahin hai jo tum mujhse yeh sab baatein kaho😳......tum packing karo main abhi aati hoon (she wants to leave but holds her hand..ka turns surprised)

kk : aap thek keh rahi hai......hum ek doosre ko ziada dino se nahin jante.....lekin jitna waqt humne saath guzara hai uthna mere liye kafi hai apse yeh kehne ke liye ke.......haan main aur su ek doosre se bohut pyaar karte hain 😳 (ka smiles and hug kk..su get very happy)

ka : su bohut acha ladka hai😊...bohut pyaari jodi hai tum dono ki...(su leaves from there with a cute smile on his face)

After some time kk n ka came down coz it was time for sukk to leave. su and kk take nandani's blessing then kk huged ka

ka : i will miss u kk (tears roll down her cheeks)

kk : i'll miss u too bhabhi (su says bye to abhi)

su : chalte hain buddy (and he hugs him...then kk huged abhi and su ka)

kk : bhabhi ka khial rakhna

abhi smiles : theek hai

su : bye kajol

ka : su tum bhi kk ka khial rakhna

su smiles : apni jaan se bhi ziada uska khial rakh lunga😳

Finaly the leave. In the car su noticed that kk was sad

su : kya hua kk itni udass kyun ho?

kk wipes her tears : nahin kuch nahin...

su : mujhe bhi nahin bataogi?

kk smiles : su....sach mein main theek hoon....voh bas abhi aur bhabhi ke saath jo waqt bitaya hai ussi ki yaad aa rahi hai (ehr eyes again get moist....su stops the car makes kk face him then wipes her tears and holds her face with his both hands)😳

su : kk agar tum chaho tho hum kuch aur din bhi rukh sakte a hain😊

kk smiles : nahin su.......ghar mein sab log humara wait kar rahe hain..........aur vaise bhi abhi ki abhi shaadi hui hai tho unhe ek saath waqt bitana chahiye😳

su : sure?

kk : haan

su : okk (then he sits properly to drive)

kk : sumit

su looks at her : haan? (then kk kissed his cheek and su was surprised)

kk: thank u😳 (then su smiles and starts the car)
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After few hours they reach kk's house kk gets out of the car

kk : chalti hoon...bye (she turns to leave but calls her)

su : kk....(she turns)

kk : haan? (su gets out of the car also and starts walking toward her)

su : tum kuch bhool rahi ho

kk : kya?😕 (su comes close to her)

su : kuch zaroori cheez (still coming close her and kk stops him)

kk : su...koi dekh lega

su : dekhne do............voh bhi dekhe ke tumne kya bhoola hai😈

kk : su plzz....(now su was too close to her and she wasnt able to stop him anymore...su smiles and whisperer in her ear)

su softly : tum apna saman gadi mein bhool gaayi😆😆

kk confused : hun?😕

su : tumhara samaan (and he burst into laugher)🤣🤣🤣 (kk angrily took and wants to go inside but su holds her hand)

kk angrily : su chodo mera haath!😡(but he doesnt listen and pulls her close to him....they were lost into each other's eyes and su tries to get more closer)😳

kk : su plzz.....koi sach mein aa jaayega

su still lost in her eyes : aane do...😍

kk : plzz su...maa papa dekh lenge☺️

su : dekhne do...(kk doesnt know what to say anymore to stop him and he noticed)

su : acha ek shart par

kk : kya?

su naughtily : tum.......mujhe.....ek.....(and he puts his finger on his lips)😈

kk : kya?!😲...pagal ho gaaye ho kiya?!.......main aisa kuch nahin karne vali

su : okk tumhari marzi.............tho phir agar koi hume iss tarah dekh le...yeh mat kehne ke meri waje se hai😈(he starts getting more n more closer and kk agrees)

kk : acha theek hai!...............lekin gal pe

su thinks and... : haan theek hai chalega😛 (he turns his face..kk come closer and was about to kiss him on his cheek but su quikely re turns his face and kissed her on her lips softly)😈☺️😍

kk shocked : su!!...yeh kya!............yeh cheating hai!! this is not fair!😡

su happy : everything is fair in love😃(kk hits him on his arm)

kk : jao main tumse baat nahin karti😡 (and she leaves)

su : are kk.............sorry......kk! (but she left...
su smiles and go home)





well hope u gonna like it😳...........ab pata nahin kab next part will be posted but promise i'll do my best jaldi post karne ke liye😉...agar todi der ho gayi tho sorry guys😊..



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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG.. Noorya.AWESOME yaar..main to almost faint hogayi
Itna cuuuteee omg i was imaging all the parts in my head
God sooooo romantic yaar
all butterflies in my stomach..
wah wah mazaa aagayi yaar
👏
Itna romantic..uffff

Loved the morning part when Kk wakes up Su..
Tune to mujhe SuKk Wadhwa ki yaad diladi yaar
So sweet how Su is so shararti
loved the dialogues awesome wrting
Every part is so original
when SuKk leaving and all
loved it how Su consoles Kk...so sweet

But OMG yaar the ending....
its just MINDBLOWING
i was imaging the clipping of that part in my head
i even blushed yaar seriously
the kiss part when su drops Kk home
and him gettin close and then whispering in her ear
that she forgot her stuff..🤣
i almost fall from my couch laughing
OMG that is sooooo funny....
🤣
mere to haste haste ankhon mein aansoo aagayi

And then the kiss part
omg awesome dialogues there
exactly what Su and Kk would have said
if this part was actually made and filmed
ufff loved the shararti Su how he turned his face..
and they kissed awwwww 😍
I was blushing yaar..☺️so sweet
OMG hug bhi hogayi aur kiss bhi
Awesome yaar...

Cant wait to read next part...
dekhna hain how long Kk stays angry
But i think she wont stay angry for long
i knw i wouldnt...arre yaar main to ek aur kiss dedeta Hussain ko
mera matlab Sumit ko 😆😆

Anyways will be waiting for ur next part...
good luck at school (writing the ff 😆)

Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Sorry I am editing so LATE but ahhh so much homework EEWWWW anyways I LOVED YOUR UPDATE AMAZING JOB....Hun from now on please don't even try to say that you are not a romantic or can't write romance because you can do it like the experts...Throughout the part I was just dreaming about all this coming true...I loved the confession scene between Kajol and Kumkum...BUT MY FAVORITE PARTS WERE BETWEEN SuKk...Rubbing her fingers through his hair to wake him up VERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYY ROMANTIC😃...KISS ON THE CHEEK... KISS ON THE LIPS I mean you took my breath away with this part as Naz would say kuch kuch hota hai😆 All I can say please keep writing romantic parts it's your natural GIFT👏I just have no more words to explain how much I loved this part TRULY THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUCH A SUPERB PART...GREAT JOB😃

This is for you for being a GREAT WRITER🤗 I hope you will be able to update soon😃
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! aaj aisa lagata hai ki aaj sirf romance and hasne ka din hai
jaise ki kal sirf rone ka din tha................kisi ke ff ne rulaya.........kisi ke vm ne rulaya
but finally aaj tumne and sahar ne hansaya😃😃
by writing this romantics😳😳 parts of ur ffs

truely Noorya it was really nice part............totally loved it
MINDBLOWINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG...........SUPERB...........

loved this part soo much.........
i really like the relationship u make between kajol and kk
it was really nice................

really loved that kissing part..............and the part where
su say coming really closer to kk "KK TUM APNA SAMAAN BHOOL GAYE"🤣🤣🤣
it was really funny........kk ne su ko apne kreeb ate dekh kar
na jane kia-kia soonch lia hoga
😍😍😍..........aur baat kia nikli..........
kk tum apna saaman bhool gaye🤣🤣🤣

i know k ab sab ka school khulne wala hai
and everybody going to be really busy
but still do try to post

thanks a lotttttttt for this WONDERFUL PART
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

love afreen
Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
fab part Noorya.......why u said u r not gud in writing romance.....u r gud in romance yaar....lovely part... cont soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi,

i'm back after a long time............if u remember me...............i wasn't coming on IF since Mid nov..............so nice 2 be back & 2 read ur ff & that 2 soooooooooo many................loved the parts.........

I'm sooooooooo happy 2 read soooooooo many parts 2gether..............can't tell u...............loved each & every part of it............especially the confession scene of kk 2 Su & KK not leaveing Su..................OMG it was just fantastic, mindblowing, loved each & every scene of Sukk................now don't finish it like this i'm looking forward 2 c Sukk's wedding............
...Noorya... thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan

OMG.. Noorya.AWESOME yaar..main to almost faint hogayi
Itna cuuuteee omg i was imaging all the parts in my head
God sooooo romantic yaar
all butterflies in my stomach..
wah wah mazaa aagayi yaar
👏
Itna romantic..uffff
Loved the morning part when Kk wakes up Su..
Tune to mujhe SuKk Wadhwa ki yaad diladi yaar
So sweet how Su is so shararti
loved the dialogues awesome wrting
Every part is so original
when SuKk leaving and all
loved it how Su consoles Kk...so sweet
But OMG yaar the ending....
its just MINDBLOWING
i was imaging the clipping of that part in my head
i even blushed yaar seriously
the kiss part when su drops Kk home
and him gettin close and then whispering in her ear
that she forgot her stuff..🤣
i almost fall from my couch laughing
OMG that is sooooo funny....
🤣
mere to haste haste ankhon mein aansoo aagayi
And then the kiss part
omg awesome dialogues there
exactly what Su and Kk would have said
if this part was actually made and filmed
ufff loved the shararti Su how he turned his face..
and they kissed awwwww 😍
I was blushing yaar..☺️so sweet
OMG hug bhi hogayi aur kiss bhi
Awesome yaar...
Cant wait to read next part...
dekhna hain how long Kk stays angry
But i think she wont stay angry for long
i knw i wouldnt...arre yaar main to ek aur kiss dedeta Hussain ko
mera matlab Sumit ko 😆😆
Anyways will be waiting for ur next part...
good luck at school (writing the ff 😆)


thank u soooo much for this awesome comment Di😛...............im very happy that u liked the romantic moments😃..and even had butterflies😆😆!!!..............yaar u almost fall from your couch coz of my funny part.......but i almost fall coz of your comment🤣....uffffffff....kitna hasa maine😆
are pata nahin kk kyun angry hai kiss ke liye.............yaar main hoti tho aur ek do kiss dedi😆😆😆...i wont mind it😆😆😉.............will try to post very soon the next part.......(after writing it at school😆😉)

...Noorya... thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KumkumisGR8

Sorry I am editing so LATE but ahhh so much homework EEWWWW anyways I LOVED YOUR UPDATE AMAZING JOB....Hun from now on please don't even try to say that you are not a romantic or can't write romance because you can do it like the experts...Throughout the part I was just dreaming about all this coming true...I loved the confession scene between Kajol and Kumkum...BUT MY FAVORITE PARTS WERE BETWEEN SuKk...Rubbing her fingers through his hair to wake him up VERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYY ROMANTIC😃...KISS ON THE CHEEK... KISS ON THE LIPS I mean you took my breath away with this part as Naz would say kuch kuch hota hai😆 All I can say please keep writing romantic parts it's your natural GIFT👏I just have no more words to explain how much I loved this part TRULY THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUCH A SUPERB PART...GREAT JOB😃

This is for you for being a GREAT WRITER🤗 I hope you will be able to update soon😃


awwwwwwwww thank u soooo much for your lovely comment my sweet sahar😛🤗........................okk from now i will say that im good in romantic parts😉😳..........im glad u like the scene between kajol ans kk and all sukk scenes😃...............................and sach kahun tho while writing romantic parts mujhe bhi kuch kuch ho raha tha😆😆😉.....................THANK U SOOOOOOO MUCH for liking the parts....and doont say thank u sweets infact i should say THANK U to all of u for your sweet comments😳😊......ans will try to update soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awwwww noorya Di fabulous part meri jaan....
I really enjoyed it... uff sooo cute....
You took me to dream land and back....
And omg how cheecky is Su......Hehe 😆 tooo cute....
I could just imagine all that happen infront of me... Di your such an amazing writer..... 👏 And omg how romantic yet sooo sweet and innoccent....Just perfect...Can't wait for you to update...

...Noorya... thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: juhuti

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! aaj aisa lagata hai ki aaj sirf romance and hasne ka din hai
jaise ki kal sirf rone ka din tha................kisi ke ff ne rulaya.........kisi ke vm ne rulaya
but finally aaj tumne and sahar ne hansaya😃😃
by writing this romantics😳😳 parts of ur ffs

truely Noorya it was really nice part............totally loved it
MINDBLOWINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG...........SUPERB...........

loved this part soo much.........
i really like the relationship u make between kajol and kk
it was really nice................

really loved that kissing part..............and the part where
su say coming really closer to kk "KK TUM APNA SAMAAN BHOOL GAYE"🤣🤣🤣
it was really funny........kk ne su ko apne kreeb ate dekh kar
na jane kia-kia soonch lia hoga
😍😍😍..........aur baat kia nikli..........
kk tum apna saaman bhool gaye🤣🤣🤣

i know k ab sab ka school khulne wala hai
and everybody going to be really busy
but still do try to post

thanks a lotttttttt for this WONDERFUL PART
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

love afreen


awwwwwwwwww thanks sooo much sweety😳.............im glad u liked the part.......and all sukk moments😃.....and aslo kajol kk relationship..............................yaar im glad ke maine tumhe hasaya coz u are right kal tho rone ka hi din tha with the fantastic ff and Naz mindblowing vm😭😭....................will try to post as soon as possible the next part😊.......thanks once again for your comment sweety😳

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