FF Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai part47 pg68 VALENTINE

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Hi everyone im Noorya😊


I know there are lots of FF but i want to write one and i really dont know if u guys will like or not😕
Im not new here but i dont do comments on ff's or VM but i'll try to participate more😳
here are the characters
In Wadhwa House : the same dada-dadi,Kul, Veena, buajee (she's not villain lol)
SUMIT
PREETY su's sister
Sharma House : Raj (kk's dad), Madhu (kk's mom)
JIYA kk's sister
KUMKUM
and Khanna's
ADITYA su's best friend
RUHAN adi's brother and su's best friend
so that was the characters and before i start if u guys dont want a new FF then its ok i wont continue
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coorg.japan thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good introduction!!! Please continue and update it regularly :)
Good luck
Pearl29 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just love ff''s..............great 2 have another one but please update regularly.........................look forward 2 ur ff.........soon...............
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh wow// m looking forward to it plz continue soon. brilliant intro
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks everyone and i hope u will enjoy my ff😊
so here is the intro
Sharma House : Delhi mein rehne wali ek pyaari pariwaar jismein humari lovely KUMKUM rehti hai😛. KK kuch waqt pehle api padhai khatam ki hai aur voh kaam karna chahti hai. She always helps everyone kk ek sanskari ladki hai she believes in god and true love.
Jiya kk ki choti behen hai, she's also a good girl, uski padhai ka last year hai. Jiya kk ko bohut tang karti hai but she loves her sister a lot
And Mr and Mrs Sharma (Raj and Madhu) their parents. They love their daughters a lot and always want tjeir hapiness
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Wadhwa House :
We are still in Delhi, iss pariwaar mein bohut log rehte hai Dada-Dadi, their son Kul, his wife Veena, Bua (she's not in Delhi yet) , Preety and of course our love our dreamboy the HOT the hundsome SUMIT😍. Sumit bhi kuch waqt pehle apni studies khatam ki hai aur abh apne dad ke saath unka buisness samhalta hai. He's a modern boy of course (like su Raichand), he doesn't believe in god. Sumit kabhi pyaar ke bare mein socha nahin and doesn't even know what love is. Sumit apni family se bohut pyaar karta hai aur apne behen se bohut ziada😳
Ok so that was my intro hope ke ziada bura nahin tha😆
If its bad u guys can openly tell me mujhe bura bilkul nahin lagega.
I will post another part today
Noorya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey, new ff, well done. intro is good.
hmm now keep it up
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok guys so here is the part 2
It's morning we are in Sharma House ek ladki pooja krti hai we cant see her face. Raj and Madhu pooja mein shamil hote hai. After few mins the pooja is over and the girl turns its.............................KUMKUM😛 She's wearing a yellow sawaar kameez she's looking very cute. Apne parent ki dhek kar kk kush ho jati hai aur ashirwaad leti hai
KK : good morning maa, morning papa
Madhu : morning beta
KK : prashad lijiye (dono prashad lete hai)
KK : Jiya kahan hai?
Raj : yeh bh koi poochne ki sawaal hai........ aaj sunday hai
KK : are haan main tho bhool gayi voh tho so rahi hai😆.............main abhi usse uthati hoon
(she goes in Jiya's room an sits on her bed, Jiya is still sleeping
KK : Jiya utho
Jiya :..................................................
KK : c'mon baba 9 baje hai get up now
Jiya : sone do naa di!🥱
KK : sone do?! Jiya 12 baje gaye utho abh!😆
Jiya : haan haan ek hi sec mein se 12 ho gaye
KK smiling : acha theek hai par utho naa plzz
Jiya : 2-3 gante mein
KK : what!! (she thinks for a while and) ok as u wish par tab tak bohut der ho jayega
Jiya : kisliye?😕
KK : shopping!!😛
Jiya gets up immediatly with a big smile : shopping!!??
KK : haan..................... but tumhe sona hai naa....... koi baat nahin hum nahin jayenge
Jiya : nahin nahin main kahan sona chahti hoon............... main bas ek gante mein ready hoti hoon
KK smiles : theek hai but jaldi (and she leaves)
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Wadhwa House,
Dadi : Veena tera beta kabhi nahn sudrega
Veena : kyun kya hua maajee?😕
Dadi : are dheko naa abhi tak so raha hai!
Veena smiles : aaj tak voh itni jaldi uth gaya hai??
Dadi : nahin
Veena : to aaj aisa kyun hoga?😆 (dadi smiles) main abhi usse uthati hoon ( and she goes to wake up su! she enters his room and sits on his bed)
Veena : Su beta
Su :..............................................................
Veena starts caressing his hair : beta utho
Su : mmmm....
Veena : chalo utho jaldi se fresh hoja main tumhare liye nashta tayar karti hoon
Su : theek hai maa 5mins mein ready hota hoon
Veena : theek hai 5mins ziada nahin (and she leaves)
Su moves away the blnket from his face aur bed pe baith kar time dhekta hai and is 😲
Su : oh god! 10 baje gaye! c'mon su jaldi se fresh hoja aaj shopping mall bhi jaana hai (and runs to the bathroom to get ready)
After some time su gets ready and goes down. Everyone's having breakfast
Su : goodmorning everybody
Dadi : aa gaya tu! chalo baitho nashta karo
Su : jee dadi
Kul : Su ktne baar kahan hai tumse ke time par utho lekin tu ek nahinsunta mera
Su : sorry dad voh kal raat bohut der tak kaam kya tho....
Dada : acha koi baat nahin abh nashta karo
After breakfast everyone is busy with their work. Su is looking for Preety and goes to the kitchen
Su : maa Preety kahan hai?
Veena : apne kamre mein hogi
Su : ok ( and he goes to her room)
Su : are Preety kabse tumhe dound raha hoon
Preety turns : Kyun kya hua bhaya?
Su : main janta tha tum bhool jaogi! kal kaun sa din hai?
Preety : Monday😃
Su with a fake smile : thank u very much mujhe pata nahin tha..... Stupid! kal kuch khas hai!
Preety thinks : khas.........khas........(and remembers) KHAS! of course maa ka birthday
Su : right! to aaj humme shopping maal jaana hai gift ke liye
Preety : god! main tho bhool hi gayi thi............ bhaya main ada gante mein tayar hoti hoon
Su : ada ganta my foot! saaf saaf kaho ke 3 gante lag jayenge😆
Preety : dont worry bhaya ada gante hi lagega
Su : better! main keh raha hoon agar ada gate mein tu tayar nahin hui tho main akela i jaounga
Preety : haan haan theek abh jao!
hope u will enjoy it and im sorry i post it late😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice part...............ab Sukk will c each other in shopping mall
& please don't make them fight ......................continue soon...............
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Oh God awesome part really awesome part and i hope there will be eye scene of Sumit and Kumkum in the mall really fabulous
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Hi everyone and thank u very much for your lovely coments😊
So here is the next part
Su is waiting for Preety and after 20mins she was ready
Preety : im ready😛!
Su suprised : kya baat hai! abhi tho 10mins baki hai and you are ready!?............ you sure tumek ladki ho?😆
Preety : shut up bhaya!...abh hum dono yahin baatein arenge ya chalenge bhi?
Su smiles : chalo
At the same time Veena comes and stops them
Veena : are tum dono kahan jaa rahe ho? (Su and Preety are shocked)
Veena : are aise kyun dhek rhe ho?..... kahan jaa rahe ho tum dono?
Preety : voh......maa voh hum.....hum...
Su : cinema! cinema jaa rahe hain
Preety : haan maa hum cinema jaa rahe hai
Veena : cinema? tum dono? aur bhi ek saath?😕
Su : haan kyun?
Veena : are tum dono 1min bhina jagarte re nahin sakte aur aaj ek saath film dhekne jaa rahe ho.........maar khaoge vahan!😆
Preety : c'mon maa...akhir yeh tho mera bhai hai (and she looks at Su with a fake smile)
Su : exactly! main tho apni behen se bohut pyaar karta hoon naa (and he returns back the smile. Veena is very surprised by hearing all this😳)
Su : acha maa hum chalte hai varna film miss ho jayega (and to his sis) chalo stupid!......i mean Preety (and they leave)
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Jiya : di main ready hoon chalo
KK : kahan?
Jiya : kahan ka kya matlab shopping!
KK : are haan main tho bhool gayi... Jiya hum kisi aur din nahin jaa sakte?
Jiya : NO WAY! mere pass time nahin hoga....c'mon di tumne mujhe uthaya abh hum shopping jaa rahe hai and thats final!
KK : ok baba gussa hone ki zaroorat nahin hai. Main bas change karke aati hoon
Jiya : jaldi karna di (after few mins KK comes down, she's wearing a dark blue salwaar kameez same chidyan and a bindi. She's looking beautiul and they leave)
In shopping mall Su and Preety are looking for their mom's gift and are fighting
Preety : Su main keh rahi hoon naa hum ek khubsurat si sari lete hai
Su : shut up stupid! maa ke pass bohut sare saryan hai..... hum maa ke liye ek khubsurat neckless lete hai😛
Preety : tumhe pata hai naa maa ko jawellery ziada pasand nahin hai!
Su : u know what main tumhare saath phirse kabhi shopping karne nahin aounga! this is the last time! (Preety is laughing)
Su confused : ismein hasne wali kya baat hai?
Preety sill laughing : voh kya hai naa last time bhi tumne yahin kahan tha tho....
Su a little embarrased : haan tho iss baar last time hi hai!
Preety : ok😆
(samne se KK aur Jiya aa rahe hai baatein kar ke, dono ne bohut shopping ki hai doosri taraf se Su aur Preety bhi jagharte chal rahe hai and....................all of a sudden.........BUMP! Su and KK bumped into each other
KK : aouch!
Su : dhek ke chal.....(when he looks up he just stares a KK😳, she notices that and feels embarrased but she's not saying anything. after few secs)
Jiya to Su : hello! kya hua?!
Su comes back o his sense : voh im....im Sumit..... i mean sorry😆...sorry galti meri thi
KK : its ok koi baat nahin
Su : no im really sorry actually voh kiya hai hum dono jaghar rahe the kyunki kal meri maa ka birthday hai aur humme pata nahin ki kya kharid le aur mujhe yeh bhi pata nahin ke main yeh sab apse kyun keh raha hoon😕(he is very confused and so are Preety and Jiya! KK is just 😳)
Su : im sorry
KK smiles its ok maine kahan naa apse. Vaise galti humari bhi thi so it ok. And by the way agar meri maa ki janaam din hoti tho main usse ek aisi gift deti jisse dhekte ji unki aankhon mein khushi ki aanson aa jaye jo uski dil ko chuhe......anyways best of luck goodbye (she smiles and leave with Jiya. Su is still looking at her and Preety noticed that)
Preety : bhaya!
Su comes back :hun......haan?
Preety: tho hum maa ke liye kya lenge?
Su thinks for few mins and : tumhe voh sari pasand aayi naa?
Preety : haan bohut khubsurat hai😛
Su : tho ek kaam karo tu jaa ke voh sari kharid le mujhe jaana hai
Preety : but tum jaa kahan rahe ho?
Su : tu sawaal bohut poochti hai🤢! jakar voh sari kharid le aur ghar jaa main tumhe sabh baad mein batata hoon......aur haan maa se kehna ke mujhe film ke baad ek kaam yaad aaya ok...bye (Preety was about to say something but Su leaves).
hope it was enough and u will like it😊 and see pearl29 they dont fight😉

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