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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: preethi
yuup norrya loved tht part cont soon

thank u soo much dear😛...will cont very soon😉

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#232

great part sweets....cont soon......😊 i cant wait more for their romance😆[

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thank u soo much sweets😆😳.............are abhi kk didnt cofess to su her love and u already waiting for their romance😆😆..............but one more thing...dont expect too much from me for their romantic scenes coz im not soo good in that😆......i'll try my best but kuch vaada nahin kar sakti😳

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Nazmien aka Naz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#233

Woooowwww awesome part meri pyaari scriptwriter

👏

OMG Noorya im speechless yaar...

I was expecting something sooo different and u wrote totally the opposite of my expectations..

i have to admit while reading the part...i was waiting for the SuKk hug..

kyonke mindblowing garden part from previous part ke baat

maine socha Kk will tell Su that she also loves him...

Par koi baat nahi..this is just gettin the story more exciting..

woooooowwww happy SuKK mom dad maangaye...

Ab bas Kk maanjaaye...

OMG kab aayegi wo part jab SuKk milan hogi

i was reading this part so anxiously and when Kk was walking in the park

and when she turned and saw Su i thought..woooww this is it ab aayega hug wala part

par main na main to bhoolgayi thi ek second ke liyee ke

Noorya meri jaan tu to ek professional scripwriter se kam thodi na ho..

Tu bhi ek professional talented writer ki tarha hi likhti hoon

to bhala SuKk ki milan itni aasani se kaise hojaayega...

U also have that talent in u to keep us at the edge of our seats...

and the dialogues hai rabba i totally love it yaar..

bahut kamaal ke story hain..

main to kehti hoon Ekta should watch out for u...

bas ab intezaaar hain next part ka yaar..

i think im going to read the fanfic from the 1st parts...

main bhi to jaan loon Kk ke vishwaas pyaar parse kyon aur kehse uth gayi..

kya hua tha ke wo pyaar mein vishwaas nahi karti..

i will read all the parts soon..

Anyways..

post the next part soon yaar...

waiting impatiently..😆

Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan

Woooowwww awesome part meri pyaari scriptwriter

👏

OMG Noorya im speechless yaar...

I was expecting something sooo different and u wrote totally the opposite of my expectations..

i have to admit while reading the part...i was waiting for the SuKk hug..

kyonke mindblowing garden part from previous part ke baat

maine socha Kk will tell Su that she also loves him...

Par koi baat nahi..this is just gettin the story more exciting..

woooooowwww happy SuKK mom dad maangaye...

Ab bas Kk maanjaaye...

OMG kab aayegi wo part jab SuKk milan hogi

i was reading this part so anxiously and when Kk was walking in the park

and when she turned and saw Su i thought..woooww this is it ab aayega hug wala part

par main na main to bhoolgayi thi ek second ke liyee ke

Noorya meri jaan tu to ek professional scripwriter se kam thodi na ho..

Tu bhi ek professional talented writer ki tarha hi likhti hoon

to bhala SuKk ki milan itni aasani se kaise hojaayega...

U also have that talent in u to keep us at the edge of our seats...

and the dialogues hai rabba i totally love it yaar..

bahut kamaal ke story hain..

main to kehti hoon Ekta should watch out for u...

bas ab intezaaar hain next part ka yaar..

i think im going to read the fanfic from the 1st parts...

main bhi to jaan loon Kk ke vishwaas pyaar parse kyon aur kehse uth gayi..

kya hua tha ke wo pyaar mein vishwaas nahi karti..

i will read all the parts soon..

Anyways..

post the next part soon yaar...

waiting impatiently..😆

OMG Di!! thank u soooooooooooo much!!!!!!!..........yaar im always===>😃 while reading your comments😛......u are sooo sweet🤗..........................aur haan yaar aise kaise hug karvaduun dono ka....toda tho torture karun unko😆😉.........aur ab jo tumne itniiiiiii achi comment di hai sochti hoon ke unki hug ko aur bhi der se karvadun😆😆..................no im kidding....they are going to hug each other very very soon😉.....and going to post next part today😊......aur haan ab yeh jaan ne ke liye ke why kk doesnt believe in love anymore...story shuru se padna hi hoga....and im sure vahan kuch parts hoge which u gonna really appriciate😉.....aur taki tumhara maan ho jaaye padne ke liye im gonna tell that ek part hai jahan sukk hug each other😳😃.....so jaldi padooooooo😆...thank u once again meri jaan!!!😛

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#235

Hi all😛..................thank u soooooooooo much for all your lovely comments i was sooo happy that u guys liked the part😃...................and here is the next one................and sukk milan is very very very close now😉

Part 33

Another few days past, su is at home and his mobile rings

su : hello

.... : sumit?

su : haan?

.... : Hi!!😛...kaise ho?

su : main theek hoon.....lekin aap kaun?😕

..... : acha..........itni jaldi bhool gaaye mujhe?!...........main abhi bol raha hoon😊

su : abhi!!!😛............OMG yaar!! kaisa hai tu??

abhi : im fine

su : bhoola main nahin balke tu mujhe bhool gaaya hai

abhi : nahin yaar aisi baat nahin hai................actually i lost your number bohut mushkil se mila hai🤢

su : haan haan sab yahin bahana banate hain..........anyways....meri yaad kaise aayi?

abhi : ek good news deni hai!!

su : really?.....kya?

abhi : 5 din baad meri shaadi hone vali hai😃

su : WHAT?!!!😛.........yeh tum kya keh rahe ho!!

abhi : haan aur tumhe aana hai

su : of course yaar!...yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai............................vaise who's the lucky one?..kya main usse janta hoon?

abhi : haan jante ho......aur voh bhi bohut achi tarah se................main kajol ke saath shaadi kar raha hoon

su : what are u saying man!!😛......................im just soo happy for u guys!

abhi : tho phir hum tumhara wait kar rahe hain...aur haan shaadi ke ek din pehle aana okk

su : theek hai

abhi : bye buddy

su : bye (su disconects the phone and leave for office)

kk was already there..su enters the cabin and sees her

su : hi😊

kk turns : hi

su : main late aaya hoon ya phir tum jaldi aayi ho?

kk smiles : nahin tum bilkul time pe aaye ho aur main bhi 5 mins pehle hi aayi hoon😳 (su sits on his chair)..........su tumse kuch poochna hai😕

su : haan bolo kya baat hai...

kk : voh........kya mujhe 3din baad 2 din ki chutti mil sakti hai?😕

su surprised : 3 din baad???😲

kk : haan................kyun koi problem hai?...agar nahin mil sakti hai tho its okk...

su : nahin......voh kya hai ke mujhe bhi 3 din baad kahin jaana hai aur voh bhi 2 din ke liye......................but haan tumhe mil sakti hai😊

kk smiles : thanks...................vaise....tumhe koi important kam hai 3 din baad?

su smiles : haan....5 din baad mere ek dost ki shaadi hai😳 (kk is shocked to hear that and su noticed)....kya hua?...itna shoked kyun ho?😕......................ab yeh mat kehna ke tum bhi ek shaadi mein jaa rahi ho😆😆

kk still shocked : haan...........main bhi....😲 (su also gets surprised)

su : ek min ek min...............tumhare dost ka naam kya hai?

kk : abhishekh...(su is shocked to hear that name and he completed with kk)

sukk together : jaisvaal🤣...........(and both are shocked....then su smiles)

su : tum bhi abhi ki shaadi mein jaa rahi ho?

kk : haan.........vahi tho mera best friend hai😛.........par tum usse kaise jante ho?

su : main sirf abhi ko nahin balki kajol ko bhi janta hoon..........voh dono buisness partners the aur kuch saal pehle mere saath ek deal sign kya tha................phir hum teeno bohut ache dost baan gaaye....aur voh dono buisness partner se life partner baan ne jaa rahe hain😳......(kk smiles)...........btw kyun naa hum saath chalein?😛

kk : saath?

su : haan...............dekho mujhe akele travel karna bilkul acha nahin lagta..bohut bore hota hoon.....tho saath chalenge company milegi😳

kk smiles : theek hai...........lekin su hum dono 2 din ke liye nahin honge tho kam....

su : kam dad samhal lenge u dont worry😊

kk smiles : theek hai😳 (then they get to work and the day past)
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3 days later sukk had to leave...su goes to pick kk...ji opened the door

ji : hi su😛

su : hi

ji : andaar ao kk bas aa rahi hai (he enters)

su : tum aa nahin rahi ho?..tum bhi tho abhi ko janti ho

ji : haan par mere exams shuru hone vale hain tho main classes miss nahin kar sakti...........................vaise acha hai ke tum aur kk saath jaa rahe ho😳 (su understood what she means).......su main janti hoon ke kk tumhare pyaar ko abhi tak apnaya nahin...lekin tum himaat mat harna kyunki main apni Di ko achi tarah se janti hoon......aur yeh bhi janti hoon ke voh tumse bohut pyaar karti hai😊

su : ji main tho nahin janta ke kk mijhse pyaar karti hai ya nahin.................lekin u dont worry...main himaat harne vala nahin hoon.....aur ek din mein kk ke dil mein apne liye pyaar paida karunga😳

ji : kk ke dil mein tumhare liye pyaar paida ho chuka hai...lekin usse iss baat ka ehsaas dilana zaroori hai ab..........aur yeh shaadi bhi ek bohut acha mauka hai usse ehsaas dilane ke liye ke voh tumse kitna pyaar karti hai......(su noods his head and kk comes)

kk : kya baatein ho rahi hai yahan?

ji : kuch nahin Di............main bas su se keh rahi thi ke main aa nahin sakti...

su to kk : ready?

kk : haan chalo (she hugs ji and they leave)
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After few hours they reach abhi's house. Su rings the door bell and abhi's mom Nandani opened it and she recognize kk

nand : are kk beta!😛

kk : namaste aunty (and she hugs her)

nand : kaisi hai beti?

kk : main bilkul theek hoon...aap kaisi hai?

nand : main theek hoon lekin tumhe bohut miss karti thi...........acha hua abhi ki shaadi ho rahi hai...varna tum aati hi nahin...(then she sees su)

nand : tum su ho?😳

su smiles : jee haan lekin apko........??

nand smiles : abhi ne bataya tha tumhare bare mein😊.......tum log andaar ao main abhi ko bulati hoon

sukk enter the house and nand goes to call him. After few mins abhi comes down very happy to see sukk...he huged them and they talk for a long time

abhi : vaise tum dono ek doosre ko kaise jante ho?

su : hum dono saath kam karte hain

abhi : acha...

su : haan...............lekin ab hum ache dost hai (he looks at kk by saying this😒..........then su and abhi talk for a long time and kk get bored)

kk : excuz me......agar tum dono ki baatein khatam ho gaayi hai tho kya tum mujhe kajol ki ghar chod sakte ho? (she asked abhi)

abhi : haan haan kyun nahin...........chalo su isse drop karte hain

su : theek hai............2 3 gante baad tumhe wapis lene aaoun theek hai naa?

abhi : wapis kyun?............yeh tho shaadi hone tak vahan rahegi

su shocked : kya??😲.............i mean......acha?😆.....lekin kk tho tumhari dost hai...

abhi : haan par tum ho naa mere saath😉

su gets very sad : haan😔.........chalo

all 3 leave and after some time reach kajol's house. Abhi and su leave and kk rings the door bell and kalo'l mom opened the door

mom : jee?

kk : namaste aunty mera naal kk hai main abhi ki dost hoon😊

mom : andaar ao beta........tum kajol se milne aayi ho?

kk : jee

mom : voh apne kamre mein hai...ao mere saath (they go upstair and enter kajol's room)

mom : ka beta dekho tumse milne kaun aaya hai

ka turns and sees kk : kk!!😛 (she goes and hug her...kk was pleasantly surprised)

kk : tumhe kaise pata ke main....

ka : ke tum kk ho right?

kk : haan...

ka smiles : abhi ne bataya ke tum yahan aa rahi ho.............lekin agar voh bata bhi nahin deta tho bhi main tumhe pehchan leti😊...............abhi hamesha tumhare bare mein baat karta hai...............kk aisi hai....kk vaisi hai...voh meri choti behen hai😳.............bohut pyaar karta hai voh tumse😳

kk smiles : abhi hai hi aisa................agar zindagi mein bhai ki pyaar ki kami thi tho voh kami abhi ne poori ki.....................vaise apne iss bhai ki choice maan ni padegi😛 he's very lucky

ka : lucky tho main hoon jo mujhe abhi jaisa humsafar mila hai....(ka mom's come)

mom : are kk beti tum abhi tak yahin ho.........maine tumhara saman kamre mein rakha hai.....tum jao araam karo thag gaayi hogi naa😳

kk : jee (to ka) tum so jao...kal tumhari ek bohut bada din hai............vaise so nahin paogi lekin phir bhi koshish karo😆 (kk was about to leave but ka stops her)

ka : kk kya main tumse kuch pooch sakti hoon?

kk : zaroor poocho....kya baat hai?

ka : main chahti hoon ke kal mujhe ek dulhan ki tarah tum sajhao.........sajhaogi naa😳

kk smiles and noods : kal tumhe iss tarah sajhaoungi ke dunya mein kabhi kisi ne itni pyaari dulhan dekhi naa ho😊 (they smile and kk goes to sleep)

hope u guys will like this one also😊.............i know i said that before but sukk ki milan is VERY VERY CLOSE NOW😛................will try to post a part tomorow😉...till then enjoy this one😃

Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago

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Simran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#236

Awwwww Noorya Di ....very cute part....
Bless Su... Himmat mat haar yaara.... Cute and Innocent Kk.... She still hasn't got the point.....
And Omg is it me or will Kajol and Abhi have something to do with
SuKk ka milan....mmmh very interesting.... oh and i would if are cheeky Su going to take full advantage of being a "Ladka wala" like at Mini and Guaravs wedding...hehe.....Hope soo.....
Noorya I can't wait to read what happens next..... Update soon....

Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 16 years ago

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soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#237

OMG Noorya Amazing part...I loved how Kumkum and Sumit ended up going to the same Wedding 😉(GREAT COINCIDENCE) But I felt sad for Sumit when he found out the Kumkum won't be living at Abhi's House😭...You did make me feel better when you said that Kumkum and Sumit MILAN is SOON...Please get them together!!!!!!!! Impatiently WAITING for the next part please UPDATE SOON

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: .x. Simran .x.
Awwwww Noorya Di ....very cute part....
Bless Su... Himmat mat haar yaara.... Cute and Innocent Kk.... She still hasn't got the point.....
And Omg is it me or will Kajol and Abhi have something to do with
SuKk ka milan....mmmh very interesting.... oh and i would if are cheeky Su going to take full advantage of being a "Ladka wala" like at Mini and Guaravs wedding...hehe.....Hope soo.....
Noorya I can't wait to read what happens next..... Update soon....

awwww thanks yaara😛.......................well i can tell u that abhi and ka wont do anything about sukk milan..sorry😳........well lets see what su will do😉...will post next part tomorow maybe😃

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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: KumkumisGR8
OMG Noorya Amazing part...I loved how Kumkum and Sumit ended up going to the same Wedding 😉(GREAT COINCIDENCE) But I felt sad for Sumit when he found out the Kumkum won't be living at Abhi's House😭...You did make me feel better when you said that Kumkum and Sumit MILAN is SOON...Please get them together!!!!!!!! Impatiently WAITING for the next part please UPDATE SOON

awwwwwwwww thank u sooo much sweety...................are yaara dont worry ek baat ki judai hai naa kal tho dono shaadi mein milenge😛...............and for the milan..................its very close!!!😃😉.....kal will write a part😳