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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: mala06

I am not so sure. Maybe by next week

ok... please update soon

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ok... please update soon

Ok👍🏼

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Hi friends. I am back again. Sorry for being late. I hope you guys like it.

Part III

Prachi was unconscious and the river discharge was high. Ranbir was still in his sense. He didn't leave Prachi's hand during the entire fall. He knew he needs to do something and soon. Both of them were now flowing along with the river. Ranbir was able to grab one of the tree branches that was floating by. Some of its parts were still on the ground and the river had not been able to completely wipe it off. Ranbir tightly hold one of its branch from one hand and pulled Prachi along with him from the other with enormous strength and both of them were out of the river.

Afterward, he tried to bring Prachi back to consciousness. Prachi was trembling because of the cold. It was very important for them to stay somewhere. Ranbir was very worried. It was a miracle that they survived the river. But, the problem was not over. He carried her in his arms and started to look for a place where they can stay against the rainfall and do something about Prachi's condition.

After a long walk in the forest, he found an opening in the mountain. It was big enough that they could stay for a while. After careful inspection, he took Prachi inside. He needed to make the place warm. He started making fire. he loved going camps with his friends. He hadn't realized it would be so handy one day.

He placed Prachi near the fire and started to rub Prachis's hand and legs in turn. He continued it for the whole night.

Next day

Sahana woke up but Prachi was not there and she kept on sleeping. The rain hadn't stopped and there was a high chance today's trip might be postponed.

"Prachi must be enjoying the rain" Sahana thought and then slept again until there was a whisper in her ear.

"Sahana! Wake up" it was a boy's voice. She ignored the voice and turned other side

"Sahana! Sahana! " These voice kept on echoing in her ears.

Irritated by the voice she opened her eyes only to see Aryan.

"Ar...." before she could speak further Aryan tightly closed her mouth with his hands.

"Keep quiet Sahana the other girls are sleeping and come outside with me. " he said.

Sahana followed him.

In the forest

Prachi was still unconscious. She finally showed some movement which Ranbir noticed and went close towards her. He curiously stared at Prachi when suddenly Prachi opened her eyes.

For an instant, they were lost in each other but Prachi got her sense back and threw Ranbir away.

"Flirt! Pervert! Idiot! Fool! What were you trying to do?"

"Wai..."

"Wait what?" Prachi didn't let Ranbir speak and start blasting him until she again felt weak, dizzy and nearly fainted again.

"Prachi!"

Ranbir went towards her and grabbed her.

"You don't have the energy to even stand but have all the energy to lecture me. Now be quiet!"

Ranbir carefully placed her in one of the corner of the cave. Prachi kept quiet for some time and carefully inspected her surrounding. she started remembering yesterday's incident. For a split second, she had believed she was going to die. It's only because or Ranbir she was alive .

All his branded shirt, trouser, his shoes, and even his face was filled with mud. Coming from a rich family, he must never have to face such problems in his life she thought. It again made her feel guilty.

"Why did you save me? " Prachi asked in a strict tone.

"Why? Does there need to be a reason to save anyone?"

"I don't like it when someone suffers because of me. " Prachi said to him.

"I am not suffering, on the contrast, I am enjoying the time here. We are here alone and no one to disturb us. I was waiting for an alone moment like this! " Ranbir said in a funny tone.

"Don't joke Ranbir. I am serious. You always have to suffer because of me"

"Oh! so I am the only one who suffers? What about you? Didn't you risk your life to protect me from Maya?"

"That scenario was different! "

"How is it different and lately what has happened to you? You were so different before but since coming this trip you don't want to talk to me. I have noticed You are trying to distance me from you. What is going on in your mind?"

"Its nothing like that"

"It's like that! Is there any problem Prachi? is something bothering you? Tell me Prachi. We can solve the problem together but if you don't tell me I can't do anything. Please tell me." Ranbir asked with concern while Prachi stayed silent.

In the camp

Aryan took Sahana outside the camp.

"What happened Aryan? Why did you bring me here?" Sahana asked.

"Where is Prachi?"

"She must be enjoying the rain"

"But I don't see her anywhere. "

"What! Sahana then looked at the surrounding only to realize Prachi was not there."

"Then where is Prachi?"

"Even Ranbir is not here since last night."

"What?" Sahana asked surprised

"Yeah. Yesterday he was sleeping with me. In the night I felt thirsty so I woke up in the middle of the night only to not find him. I didn't care yesterday but even today I can't find him."

"Are you guys playing a prank with me?"

"No no. Why would we? today I searched for him everywhere but he is nowhere to be found. Then while coming to search him, I found the fence broken. Out of curiosity, I went there to check what had happened and then found a ring there. It looked like Prachi's. But I was not so sure. I had to ask Prachi about Ranbir anyway so I came to the camp to ask about Ranbir to realize even Prachi is missing."

"Can you show me the ring?"

"Yes. Look here"

"It is Prachi's!" Now Sahana was Panicking.

Edited by mala06 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome update Mala. You have described everything so beautifully. Just loved it. 3 cheers for Ranbir.The way he saved them both and took care of Prachi is really amazing. Yes, Prachi please open up to him and share your doubts and insecurities with him. Only then can they both come together. Oh no! Please don’t find them so soon Arhana. Please leave them alone for some more time. Thanks so much for making it a ff Mala. Update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Awesome update Mala. You have described everything so beautifully. Just loved it. 3 cheers for Ranbir.The way he saved them both and took care of Prachi is really amazing. Yes, Prachi please open up to him and share your doubts and insecurities with him. Only then can they both come together. Oh no! Please don’t find them so soon Arhana. Please leave them alone for some more time. Thanks so much for making it a ff Mala. Update soon.

Its all thanks to you and ican for motivating me😊. You don't want Arhana to come soon🤣🤣? Lets see what happens😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: mala06

Its all thanks to you and ican for motivating me😊. You don't want Arhana to come soon🤣🤣? Lets see what happens😆


Please..

The scenes and dialogues written in the forum have much more sense drama and romance than what Itvs are writing.


Come on writers read our stories, you will get good ideas

Edited by ican - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ican


Please..

The scenes and dialogues written in the forum have much more sense drama and romance than what Itvs are writing.


Some on writers read our stories you will get good ideas

Hopefully the writers will read our stories😆

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Originally posted by: mala06

Its all thanks to you and ican for motivating me😊. You don't want Arhana to come soon🤣🤣? Lets see what happens😆


And we got such a beautiful story in return. 😃 So if we are getting return gifts like this we are always ready to keep motivating you. 😃

Nooooo! Not only Arhana I don't want anyone to find Pranbir till they resolve the issues. Yeah, waiting to see what happens. 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandini25


And we got such a beautiful story in return. 😃 So if we are getting return gifts like this we are always ready to keep motivating you. 😃

Nooooo! Not only Arhana I don't want anyone to find Pranbir till they resolve the issues. Yeah, waiting to see what happens. 😉

Thanks ❤️. Lol i hope what you said happens and they don't meet soon😆.

Btwn i am updating my story soon this time. Everyone is asking me so I have decided to update it faster than normal time😁😁

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part IV

Aryan and Sahana reached the teacher and explained everything. Aryan also called both families and told what had happened Both families were worried. The teacher called police to search for Ranbir and Prachi while sahana was crying.

"If they fell from this height. They are as good as dead" the teacher was pessimistic.

"How can you be so sure without properly searching them? " Aryan was angry at the teacher.

"I, too, think the same Aryan" one of Ranbir's friend said from behind

"But we should at least try to search for them before reaching conclusion!"

"The police will do it. Don't worry"

"But it will take time for police to reach here. If Ranbir and Prachi are hurt and need us right now?" Aryan was concerned for both of them.

"But we can't risk life other students. The forest is dense and there might be wild animals"

"Fine then!! I am going to look for them myself. Is anyone willing to come with me?" Aryan asked his fellow friends but unfortunately no one was interested.

"So this is your friendship! Ranbir helped you guys when in need but when he needs our help no one is interested! I am disappointed with you guys. All of you are selfish! "

Everyone was silent.

"Ok but whatever happens I will not be responsible for you. Go at your own risk. " Similar to other students, teacher was not much concerned about Ranbir or Prachi

"Ok. I am going on my own"

"Wait Aryan I am also coming" Sahana was now hopeful that they could do something about Prachi and Ranbir.

"No sahana. The forest is dense and not good for girls. So I will go my self"

Sahana tried to make Aryan understand but it was in vain. Sahana had to agree with what Aryan said and Aryan headed towards the forest.

In the forest

Prachi and Ranbir were silent since their last conversation. Finally Prachi started speaking

"You know Ranbir, My father left my mother when I was young"

"Yeah. I know. You told me once. "

"But you still don't know many things."

"If you tell me only then I will know. "

"He is very rich and popular. But I don't know who he is. I even don't know his name."

Prachi then started to pour her heart to Ranbir

When I was young, I always wanted a father. My mother although struggled, was able to fulfil my needs. But I always felt something missing in my life. I could see my friends coming to school with their father, even Shana's father was very nice. He used to care about her every small wish which made me envy even her.

I was curious about my father so I asked my mother many times. But, she never gave details about him. Most of the things I know are from the neighbors or through my mother's gossips.

"One day I found out that he left my mother. I know she loves him a lot. She also tells me he too loves us but I still don't believe her. If he love her he wouldn't leave us . I mean can someone leave the person who love them so blindly? "

"No never" Ranbir said.

"Ranbir if you love someone, don't you want to see them ?"

"Obviously! I wouldn't have been able to stay one second without looking or thinking about my loved ones. "

"But my father never came to look at us even once. If he is rich he must have resources to know about us. But he just doesn't care. Only my mom is foolish enough to think that he loves her

After knowing the truth I got very angry with him. I bashed him infront of my mother and guess what my mother did?"

"What?"

"She slapped me. But even that didn't stop me from insulting my father. I told my mother I hate him, and don't want to see him ever again. My mother started crying and since my insult was unbearable, she fainted. Although I hate my father, even to this day, I can't see my mother in such a sorry state. So afterward I didn't talk about him in front of my mother"

Ranbir silently continued to listen to her.

"My mother cries thinking about him even now which annoys me. After knowing the truth, I started hating boys. I know not boys are the same but still, every boy reminded me of my father and his betrayal. I had difficulty talking with them or making friends with them. I started being rude to them. My friends used to talk about boys, their crush, which never interested me. They wanted to look good so that someone could notice them. But, these things never came in mind. I was only interested in studies. I wanted to have a good career so that I could fulfill my mother's wish and have an independent life. Even after coming here, I kept maintaining distance with the boys and then you came in my life"

Edited by mala06 - 5 years ago

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