Pranbir TS: Talli Prachi aur Bechara Ranbir (part 1) (on hold)

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Pranbir Talli Prachi aur Bechara Ranbir

ranbir and prachi were trying to make maya drink bhaang so that they can make her confess the truth,,prachi had asked ranbir to bring the bhaang glass,, ranbir had bought it kept it in the kitchen as his friend had called him but when he returned he was shocked to see the empty glass,, he immediately left from there and saw aryan talking with sahana,, these day he talk with sahana too much,, he decided to called him,,

aryan:- (smiling) haa bro kya hua,,

ranbir:- (teasing) mera chor tu bata kya hua,,

aryan:- matlab,,

ranbir:- matlab ye ki mai dekh raha hoon tum sahana ke kuch zyada close ja rahe hoon,, kya chal raha hai,, tu pasand karta hai usse haina (aryan blushes) oh my god kitni acchi kabar hai ye (he hugs him) aryan sahana aryana,, aree mai kya sochta hoon jab meri aur prachi ki shaadi hogi toh tu bhi ussi mandap par kar lio,,

aryan:- bass kar yaar,, aur uske liye prachi ko mana toh sahi,, fir karna shaadi,,

ranbir:- are mana loga,, accha ye bata kitchen mein jo ek glass mein lassi thi voh kisne pi,,

aryan:- (thinks) haa sayad prachi (ranbir got shocked) maine usse jaate hue dekha tha kitchen mein,,

ranbir:- (worried) kaha gayi voh

aryan:- waha par gayi thi,, par hua kya,,

ranbir:- yaar usme bhaang mili thi,, mai jaake dekhta hoon,,

aryan:- mai sahana ko le ke aata hoon,,

he ran from there to find prachi,, while on the other side,, prachi strumbling and singing in the corridor,,

prachi:- (singing) Idhar chali main udhar chali (giggling) Jaane kaha main kidhar chali (she was stumbling but managed to walk) Idhar chali main udhar chali (she laughs) Jaane kaha main kidhar chali (she was about to fall but someone grabbed her)

ranbir:- prachi sambal ke (she held his hand and stood close to him to maintain balance while he was very affected with this closeness,,)

as soon as she saw him,, her face glow up,, she immediately hugs him tight,,

prachi:- (happily) ranbir tum yaha chalo ab hum saath mein naachege,,, chalo chalo (she forcefully dragged him and starts singing again) Idhar chale hum udhar chale (she was stuggling and making ranbir lose balance too) Jaane kaha hum kidhar chale (making sure she doesn't fall ,ranbir fall on the floor and she started jumping happily) ranbir gir gaya ranbir gir gaya ranbir gir gaya,,

ranbir:- prachi (he got up while she ran from there)

prachi:- (she stopped and turned around and showed her tongue) ho sake toh pakad lo mujhe,,

she was challenging him,, he is a footballer, he runs a lot,, he ran after her,, she ran everywhere in the house and kept on teasing him saying he is slow,, surprising she ran faster than he taught,, she suddenly stopped in her tracks and ranbir taught she was now tired and so he finally took a breath of relief when,,

prachi:- (shouted) gaaana,,

she ran there and started dancing while ranbir slapped his forehead,, he taught she was tired but here she was dancing with full enthusiasm,, she was looking like a child,, his attention turned to a guy who was staring at her and immediately he got jealous and wanted to beat the shit out of him for staring his love,, no way he will let any guy near her,, he too got on the dance floor and joined her,,


(guys i only find their one holi dance video on youtube,, as i can't post it here so you can search on youtube prachi ranbir holi dance (3:31 minutes video) play the video from 1:53 for the dance part)

as soon as ths song finished, she again ran from there leaving ranbir tired from her childish behavior,, ranbir tired but still had to take care of her so he ran after her,, finally after a while she ended up in a room and he followed her there and immidiately locked the door so she can't escape,,

ranbir:- (smirk) ab kaha jao gi chikchiki,, ab toh koi raasta bhi nahi bacha,, (she bites her lips in nervousness and looks here and there for a way to escape) chalo ab bhaagna band karo,,

he moves forward while she starts running in room,, he runs after her,, and at last caught her,, she tries to escape but he is not letting her go,,

ranbir:- (smirks) pakad lia na ab,,

an idea poped in her mind and she looks at him with innocent eyes,,

prachi:- (innocently) ranbir plzzz jaane do na plzzzzz,,

ranbir:- (he gets affected by her but still not letting her go) nahi kahi nahi jaogi tum ab,,

prachi:- (cute puppy eyes) plzzz,, mujhe khelna hai,,

ranbir:- (having hard time,, he knows if he looks at that for one more second,, he will be completely lost, so he turns his face) nahi prachi,,

prachi pouts knowing her puppy eyes are not working on him,, she wants to go and play but ranbir is not letting her go,, she will now definitly have her revenge,, a naughty idea cames in her mind and she smirks,, prachi suddenly kisses him on the cheek making him freeze on his spot,, his grip immediately lossens and she rans away like a bullet while ranbir still stands there lost in his dreamworld holding his cheeks smiling,, prachi rans to the corridor and saw ranbir's dida,, her naughty mind immediately lits up,, she will defenitely have her revenge she immediately rans to her and hugs her and fakely cries,, dida is shocked to see prachi crying and immediately consoles her,,

dida:- (concerned) kya hua prachi tum ro kyu rahi hoon,,

prachi:- (fake cries) dida aapka pota mujhe bahut pareshaan kar raha hai,,

dida:- (she will give him a good class for making prachi cry) kya kia ranbir ne bata mujhe,, mai abhi uski class leti hoon,,

prachi:- voh mujhe holi mein khelne nahi de raha (she agains cries)

dida:- (hugs her) are bas mera bacha bas,, tu tension na le, mai hoon na,, dekh mere hote hue kaun rokta hai tujhe,, chalo abhi uski class leti hoon

they both went to his room and find him standing smiling like an idiot holding his cheek,, prachi giggled seeing him like this,, dida stand in front of him but he is lost,,

dida:- ranbir (he still didn't listen so she shouts) RANBIR (he got shocked hearing dida voice and saw dida and prachi crossing their arms)

ranbir:- dida kya hua aap yaha,,

dida:- ye mai kya sun rahi hoon,, tu kyu prachi ko pareshan kar rahe ho,,

he gets shocked listening this and immediately looks at prachi who shows her tongue,,

ranbir:- dida maine kuch nahi kia,, mai isse pareshaan nahi kar raha tha,,

dida:- mujhe kuch nahi sunna,,

dida started scolding him while prachi was enjoying this,, whenever he look at her, she shows her tongue and when he points it to dida, and dida looks at her, she immediately makes a crying face and dida scolds him more,, Bechara

dida:- dekh ranbir,, agar tune prachi ko khelne se roka ya tune usse rolaya toh aaj se hamara break up ho jayega,, thik ke

ranbir:- (scared) thik dida,, mai nahi karoga isse pareshaan,, (mumuring) iss chikchiki ne meri dida ko mere against kar dia,,

prachi:- (accusing) dida ye badbada raha hai ki ye mujhe aur pareshaaan karega,,

dida:- (holds his ears) ranbir

ranbir:- (whining) nahi dida mai aisa kuch nahi karoga,, plzz kaan cho do dida dard ho raha hai,,

dida:- (leaves him) thik hai,, (turns to prachi) prachi tum aaram se khelo aur agar isne tumhe pareshaan kia toh mujhe batana,,

dida leaves from there leaving a happy prachi and bechara ranbir,, prachi starts doing her victory dance and gives him a thumps down teasing him a lot,,

ranbir:- (irritated) chikchiki

prachi:- (loudly) dida

ranbir:- (immediately changes and extra sweetly) chalo prachi,, khelte hai,,

prachi:- (happily hugs him) yayyyyyyyy,, chalo (breaks the hug and takes him with her)

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they are hiding behind a pillar and prachi kept on peeking from there,,

ranbir:- (he has been waiting for 15 minutes but still she is not telling anything) prachi hum yaha kya kar rahe hai,,

prachi:- (finger on her lips) ssshhhhh,, voh dekho (they both peek and saw rhea's friends) voh rahi uss chudail ki chipkalis,,

ranbir:- (confused) chadail,,

prachi:- are voh kaan paadne vaali,, chobi so ghante vaali annoying radio,, attitude ki mount everest rhea, chudail, aur voh iski pooch chipkalis,, (she smiles)

ranbir laughs hearings, it was truth,, rhea was annoying as hell,, thank god rhea had gone out,, there would have been a world war 3 if she listened this,, but still it was damm funny,, he was really liking the drunk prachi,,

ranbir:- par hum kya kar rahe hai,,

prachi:- (looks here and there) dheere bolna aur kisi ko mat batana,, (he nods) hum unpe ek prank karne vaale hai,, (she smiles brightly)

ranbir:- (shocked) kyaaa (his prachi was not like this,, she was simple and sweet but in front of him was a naughty and daring prachi,, but now when he taught about this,, he too wanted to do that,, they always humilate prachi a lot,, so now they can have that taste too) thik hai lekin hum ye karege kaise,,

prachi:- (she smiles) tum voh sab mujhpe chor do,, iss chikchiki ko sab pata hai (she proudly lifts her imaginary collor)

ranbir:- (smirks) lagta hai tumhe ye naam bahut pasand hai,, (he moves closer to her and looks in her eyes)

prachi:- (completely lost in his eyes) tumse juri har ek cheez pasand hai ab,, jab tum stupidity bhi karte hoon tab bhi

ranbir gets lost in her,, he was falling for her more,, today she was a cute kid,, she was finally opening up and no words could explain how much he was loving this naughty prachi,,

prachi:- (snaps at him) kaha ko gaye,,

ranbir:- (shooks his head) kahi nahi (he smiles) ye sab choro aur ye batao hume karna kya hai,,

prachi:- (smirks evily) ok suno (the plan was muted)

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rhea's chipkali (i don't even know there name so i will call them moni and koni) were walking through the corridor,,

moni:- yaar ye holi party kitti boring hai,,

koni:- haa i wish rhea yaha hoti,,

moni:- chal usse call karte hai,,

they were walking past the store room when they heard a sound,, out of curiosity they open the door,, and what they saw was money kept on an old box,, so you know what happens,, they run towards it and as soon as they enter the store room they,, got slipped as there was oil on the way,, when they fall on the floor, black colour got poured all over them making them completely black,, as they got up and saw each other, they screamed seeing each other's condition but that was not enough when feathers were dropped on them,, as everyone heard their scream, they come running to see them,, and what they saw,, no one could hold back their laughter,,

abhi:- (stilll laughing) kaun ho tum dono,,

moni:- (feeling bad) are sir hum, rhea ke friends,,

pulkit (ranbir's friend):- (dying from laughing) are kisne tum dono ke asli chera dikha dia,,

kartik (ranbir's friend):- (laughing) haa yaar kaali murgi lagg rahi hai dono,,

some even clicked their pictures,, even elders couldn't stop laughing,, they were just laughing at them,, moni and koni cryingly ran away from there,,

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in a corridor,, ranbir and prachi were still laughing,,

prachi:- (laughing) tumne unka chera dekha,,

ranbir:- (laughing) haa itne funny the ki i still can't stop laughing,, aisa lagg raha tha ki zoo se dooo zaanwar bhaag aaye hai,, (suddenly his mobile beeped and as he looked in his phone,, he burst into laughter) prachi ye dekho (prachi sees his phone and saw someone had moni and koni picture captioned #kaali_lomadi she too burst out into laughter)

prachi:- (suddenly stopped,, a naughty idea came in her mind and so she looked at him) ranbir (extra sweetly with puppy eyes)

ranbir:- (felt weird) haa

prachi:- (she smiled sheepishly) mujhe naa kisi aur par bhi prank karna hai,,

ranbir:- kispe,,

prachi:- nahi pehle tum vaada karo ki tum mera saath doge aur meri help karoge,,

ranbir:- (sensed something naughty but agreed) thik hai,,

prachi:- nahi pehle tum pinky promise karo ki meri help karoge,, (she forwarded her pinky finger)

ranbir:- (he taught and said) ok mai pinky promise karta hoon ki mai tumari help karoga (he too forwarded his pinky finger)

prachi:- ok so mai agla prank jispe karna chahti hoon voh hai rhea ki buji,,

ranbir choked on air,,

prachi:- kya hua,,

he almost had an heart attack and she asked what happened,, he barely imagine what will happen if they were caught,, aaliya will surely eat them alive,, he gupled at his taught,, no way he is doing this,,

ranbir:- nahi prachi,, plzzz unpe nahi,, mai nahi karne vala tumari help,,

prachi:- ranbir dekho tum mana nahi kar sakte,, tumne pinky promise kiya hai,, tumhe help karni paregi,,

ranbir:- nahi prachi agar hum pakre gaye toh bahut bura haal hoga hamara,,

prachi pouts angrily but again a naughty idea came in her mind,, she comes close to him and spoke in his ear,,

prachi:- (blackmailing) agar tumne meri help nahi ki toh mai dida ko bata dongi ki tumne mujhe kiss kia tha,,

all colour was drained from his face,, he could not imagine that and now making a crying face on his luck, he agreed to her,,




i hope you all like the part,,


i wanted a drunk prachi in the show too but they give us the drunk ranbir,, so i wrote it,,


what are your taughts on our talli prachi??

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oh God! I still can't stop laughing. You have described everything so beautifully that I can easily picturize them. Talli Prachi is dangerous for her foes and the height of naughtiness. I just loved talli Prachi. Poor Ranbir. It gave me DDLJ feel when Kajol was drunk and Shahrukh was busy handling her. Jara sa jhoom loon mein. 🤣Kan phadne wali, attitude ki Mt. Everest! 🤣Those two morons’ names are Dimpy and Saina. Perfect tit for tat for them. I can so imagine their appearance. Wish Rhea was there and Prachi played a prank on her too. Uh oh! Aliya! No wonder Ranbir is so reluctant. But I have full faith in Prachi (And you) that she will complete this challenged successfully. I love this Prachi more than the sober Prachi. Go ahead Prachi,we are with you. Pleaaaaaase update soon. Can’t wait for the next part.

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That was lit.

I always wanted that on the show.

Drunk Prachi to have some fun enjoy her life with no troubles.

Ranbir bechare ko mature aur sensible behave karna pade.

Very well written.

The pranks are amazing.

Make this story a three shot and let Prachi trouble the hell out of Ranbir.


You also have kept the accordance of their characters.

Ranbir lost in love.

Prachi likes him but does not know it.

Do continue

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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Oh God! I still can't stop laughing. You have described everything so beautifully that I can easily picturize them. Talli Prachi is dangerous for her foes and the height of naughtiness. I just loved talli Prachi. Poor Ranbir. It gave me DDLJ feel when Kajol was drunk and Shahrukh was busy handling her. Jara sa jhoom loon mein. 🤣Kan phadne wali, attitude ki Mt. Everest! 🤣Those two morons’ names are Dimpy and Saina. Perfect tit for tat for them. I can so imagine their appearance. Wish Rhea was there and Prachi played a prank on her too. Uh oh! Aliya! No wonder Ranbir is so reluctant. But I have full faith in Prachi (And you) that she will complete this challenged successfully. I love this Prachi more than the sober Prachi. Go ahead Prachi,we are with you. Pleaaaaaase update soon. Can’t wait for the next part.

thanks for the beautifull comment,, and yeah i will try to update it soon but now i am working on nafrati ishq,, next part might take 2-3 days to come,, i am glad that my readers are enjoying my story,, 😊
Edited by Aman120 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ican

That was lit.

I always wanted that on the show.

Drunk Prachi to have some fun enjoy her life with no troubles.

Ranbir bechare ko mature aur sensible behave karna pade.

Very well written.

The pranks are amazing.

Making this story a three shot and let Prachi trouble the hell out of Ranbir.


You also have kept the accordance of their character

Ranbir lost in love.

Prachi likes his but does not know it

Do continue

even i wanted it in the show but they didn't show us,, btw thanks for the beautifull comment,, and about three shot,, i don't know,, i just write my taughts,, if it will be too long,,, i will divide it into more parts,,
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Anandhi007 was really excited about a story of talli Prachi.

I had tried to write one but couldn't find the scenes.


So can you dedicate the next part to her????

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Originally posted by: ican

Anandhi007 was really excited about a story of talli Prachi.

I had tried to write one but couldn't find the scenes.


So can you dedicate the next part to her????

of course,, i will😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Absolutely loved it!! Thank you so much for writing this!! It was hilarious ans romantic 🥰🥰

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Update soon.

Hope Prachi gets crazier and more naughty as the bhaang ka nasha increases.


Ranbir more worried and lost in feelings.

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Originally posted by: ican

Update soon.

Hope Prachi gets crazier and more naughty as the bhaang ka nasha increases.


Ranbir more worried and lost in feelings.

i will try,, right now i am writing nafrati ishq and it is taking a lot of time so it will take some days,, i will try my best to upload the next part in a few days,,

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