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Thanks a lot friends



Saaya(Shadow) Part 10

Veer was driving the car.On the opposite side unexpectedly he saw Shivanya on her bike.He was shocked.

Veer:Shivanya is here?

Veer rushed to Maya's room.

Veer:Maya...Maya...I saw Shivanya.She is here.

Maya was shocked:Shivanya is here?Was she hiding in Ooty?

Veer:Never expected her to be in Ooty.She took a clever step by hiding here.

Maya:She thinks that she took a clever decision by hiding here.But her bad luck that we are also here.

We have to do what we could'nt do to her that day.

Veer smirked:Should we finish her?

Maya:Is there any need to ask me about that?Yes...her chapter should be over as soon as possible.

Find out where she stays.

Veer:I already found out where she stays.I had followed her without her knowledge.

Maya smirked:Good.Shivanya...count your moments.

Abhi over heard it with a shock.Tears rolled down from his eyes.

He walked to his room. and wept:That means Pragya was right.The real culprits are the ones I trusted the most.Veer and Maya.How could they betray me?How could they be so cruel?Poor Pragya suffered the most.Pragya..where are you?I want to see you.

Pragya who was in another area heard Abhi crying and flew to Abhi's house.

Pragya appeared before Abhi:Abhi!

Abhi looked at her tearfully.All of a sudden Abhi embraced her crying.

Abhi:Please forgive me Pragya.

Pragya:Abhi...what happened?Why are you apologizing to me?

Abhi:I failed to see your love..I failed to identify you.I failed to understand that you are my beloved.Instead I saw your killer Maya as my beloved.I even mistook you for an evil spirit and called a Priest to erase you from my life.I became very cruel to you.I am sorry Pragya.

Pragya's tears flowed down.

Pragya:It's ok Abhi.It's not your fault.It's your circumstance which made you misunderstand me.It's Maya and Veer who misled you.That's why you mistook Maya for your beloved.Now you recognized me.That is enough for me.

Abhi looked at her emotionally:Why did'nt you even give me a hint that you were the one I loved?

Pragya:How can I Abhi?I am just a soul.How will you believe me over Maya if I had told you that the letters were written by me?

Abhi felt guilty.

They shared an intense emotional eye lock.

Pragya:Leave it Abhi.Now you know the truth.That's enough.But how did you believe the truth?

Abhi:I over heard Veer and Maya's conversation.

Pragya:Oh!

Abhi:Pragya..they have realized that Shivanya is here.They are planning to kill her.She is in danger.

Pragya was shocked:Oh no...my fear has happened.Veer and Maya realized that Shivanya is here.I have to go to Shivanya's house and save her.

Abhi:I will also come with you.

Pragya:No Abhi.Don't come with me.It's dangerous.

Abhi:No..I will come with you.

Pragya:Abhi...please try to understand.They are very dangerous.Veer and Maya should not understand that you know their true colour.It's not safe.

Abhi:But I also want to punish them.

Pragya:If you want to punish them you should pretend as if you don't know anything about them.

Pragya cupped his face emotionally:Try to understand Abhi.I cannot see you in danger.I can't bear it.

I will go there with Rocky and Nirmala aunty.We are souls.They cannot do anything to us.Please try to understand.

Abhi:Ok..as you say.But I will be there with you to take revenge on them.

Abhi held her hand.They shared a sweet eye lock.

Itni mohabbat karo na

Main doob na jaun kahi

Vaapas kinare pe aana

Main bhool na jaun kahi

Dekha jabse chehra tera


Main toh hafton se soya nahi

Bol do na zara

Dil mein jo hai chipa

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

They embraced each other emotionally.

Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akele

Khwabon mein aaya karo

Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina main

Mera tum sahaara bano

Ik tumhein chahne ke alaawa

Aur kuch humse hoga nahi

Bol do na zara

Dil mein jo hai chipa

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Main kisi se kahunga nahi(Azhar).

Nirmala came there.She smiled emotionally.

Abhi saw her and broke the embrace.

Nirmala:I feel happy to see you both together like this.

Abhi-Pragya smiled.

Abhi:Nirmalaji...I am sorry.I behaved badly to you.

Nirmala:No beta..no.Anyone in your position will behave the same way.

Abhi was silent due to guilt.

Abhi:Nirmalaji,why are you still walking around like an old woman?You look younger and beautiful in your modern look.

Nirmala smiled:Thank you beta.But I have to look like a traditional old woman as Veer and Maya think that I am an old maid.

Abhi:Ya..you are right.

Pragya:Nirmala aunty...Shivanya is in danger.Veer and Maya know where she is now.

Nirmala was shocked:What?

Pragya:We have to go there and save her.

Nirmala:Yes...now itself.

Pragya:But be invisible.They should not know that you are also not a human being now.Since they had not seen you when you were alive luckily they don't know that you are also a soul.

Nirmala:Yes,I will not be visible to them.

Veer and Maya barged into Shivanya's house shocking her.

Veer and Maya smirked.

Veer held Shivanya's hand tight:You thought that we won't be able to find you?

Maya:You cannot escape from us Shivanya.

Shivanya got scared.She requested them:Please don't kill me.I will not tell your secret to anyone.

Veer:Why should we take the risk to leave you?We are not fools.

Shivanya:Please...I won't tell anything to anyone.

Maya:Sorry Shivanya.We don't trust you.You have to leave this earth.

Maya took a knife and moved towards Shivanya.Shivanya tried to run away leaving Veer's hand forcefully.Maya and Veer chased her.Shivanya slipped and fell down while Maya and Veer reached near her with a smirk.

Shivanya was in tears due to fear.Maya tried to stab Shivanya.But Pragya caught her hand stopping her from stabbing Shivanya.The shocked Maya looked at her hand.To her shock she did not see anyone as Pragya was invisible.Again Maya tried to stab her.But she could not move as Pragya and Nirmala were holding her from both the sides.Maya was shocked.

Maya:Bhai!

Veer:What happened Maya?

Maya:I am not able to move as if somebody is catching me.

Veer:What rubbish!Then I will kill Shivanya.

He took the knife from her and tried to stab Shivanya.Suddenly Rocky came running barking and bit his leg which made him scream in pain:Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

The knife fell down.

Maya looked at Rocky who was visible.Rocky's eyes were sparkling like a bright green light.

Maya shivered:Pragya's pet dog...

Veer:This ghost dog bit me again.

Maya:I will not leave it.

Maya tried to beat Rocky with her hand.But her hand touched the floor harshly and got hurt.

Maya:Ahhhh!

She realized that being a ghost Rocky is transparent without any solid body for her to touch.

Maya:How is this possible?

Nirmala smiled at Pragya.

Nirmala:Maya does'nt know that we ghosts are in solid form only when we want it for ourselves.

Pragya smiled.

Veer:Leave it Maya.This dog is a ghost.We can't do anything to it.You focus on your work.

Maya:Yes.

Shivanya thought:Dog?Why did they say that it's Pragya's pet dog?But I can't see any dog.

Rocky could be seen only by Veer and Maya as they did'nt want Shivanya to know that the souls of Rocky,Pragya and Nirmala are here.

Shivanya thought:Guess the guilt of killing Rocky is making them hallucinate him.

Maya took the knife from the floor and tried to stab Shivanya.Suddenly Pragya pushed her down.Maya had a great fall and screamed.

Pragya and Nirmala laughed loudly which was not heard by anyone.

Veer:What is happening?

Maya:I don't know bhai.

Shivanya thought:What is happening to Veer and Maya?

Suddenly Nirmala and Pragya started blowing air.

Shivanya got drowsy due to that and fell asleep.Veer and Maya got flown upward due to that and they started screaming.Nirmala and Maya were enjoying it.They both fell down suddenly.Both screamed out of pain.Suddenly they realized that both are in Veer's room in Abhi's house.

They were shocked.

Maya:How did we reach here?We were in Shivanya's house.

Veer:This is done by Pragya.She only troubled us in an invisible form in Shivanya's house.

Maya:She only put us back home and saved Shivanya.

Veer:When she is here we cannot touch Shivanya.So she should leave this world.

Maya:But how?Even that powerful priest failed to trap her soul.

Veer:This time we have to find the most powerful tantrik to defeat her.She should be trapped forever.She should not be able to escape at all.

Maya:Yes..you are right Bhai.First we should destroy Pragya's soul completely.

Veer:Ya.

Maya and Veer got bandaged in the hospital.

Abhi:Why you both are having bruises on the body?

Maya:We had a small fall on the way as the road was bad.

Abhi:Oh..that's sad.Be careful.

Veer:Sure.

Abhi thought in his mind with a smirk:I know how you both fell down.I am sad that I could'nt watch that comedy scene and laugh.

Pragya appeared before Maya with a smirk.

Pragya:You thought that you can achieve Abhi by killing me?Never.

Maya:I already got him Pragya.

Pragya:No.You will get him only if you get married to him.You will never be able to marry him.

Maya was irritated.

Maya:I will marry him.

Pragya:When I am here I will not let that happen.

Maya:Don't be over confident.I will bring a powerful person and destroy you.After that we both will get married.

Pragya:You had brought a powerful priest.But he could'nt touch me.I am so powerful that it's difficult to destroy me.

Maya was irritated.

Pragya:Hope you and your evil brother had fun at Shivanya's house.

Maya stared at her:So it's you who flopped our plan there.We knew it.

Pragya:Don't even dream to harm Shivanya.I will kill you if you touch her.

Pragya caught her by her neck scaring her.Then she pushed her down.Pragya just vanished giving her an angry glare.Maya got up from the floor.

Maya was very upset:Will Pragya snatch Abhi from me?

Maya started breaking things in anger.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Read part 1 and started to fall for it...OMG Pragya as a ghost...Wowww...Veer- Maya and Abhi- Maya scene was good...I think PRagya has got some past related to abhi- veer and maya....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Read all the parts in a go... wow that was good....superb yaar.....Hope Veer and Maya taught a good lesson...OMG planning to get a powerful tantrik....No... want some more romantic scenes of Abhigya...plzz....also want some scenes of veer and maya getting beaten up.....Love it do continue soon and pm me as well....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

thank you very much


Originally posted by: malathinia

Read all the parts in a go... wow that was good....superb yaar.....Hope Veer and Maya taught a good lesson...OMG planning to get a powerful tantrik....No... want some more romantic scenes of Abhigya...plzz....also want some scenes of veer and maya getting beaten up.....Love it do continue soon and pm me as well....

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nice update. well written! thanks

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Thank u very much friends


Saaya(Shadow) Part 11

Maya and Veer met an evil Priest named Vidyuth.

Veer:Panditji...only you can help us.Please get rid of this evil spirit from our life.

Vidyuth:Catching spirits and torturing them is a my passion.It gives me pleasure.I will do that for you.

Maya:How will you catch her Panditji?Even the most promising Priest could not catch her.

Vidyuth:Don't underestimate my power.All spirits are just ants for me.Just get me her photograph.That's enough for me.

Maya smiled:Sure Panditji.

Veer:Thank you so much.

Vidyuth smiled.

Vidyuth sat with Pragya's photograph.

He smirked at the photograph:You look innocent.But you did the sin of coming to this world while you are supposed to be in your world of spirits.So I have to trap you.

He started chanting some mantras and Pragya appeared before him.

Pragya asked him angrily:Why have you called me?

Vidyuth:Finally you came before me.I knew that you will come however you try to hide from me.No soul can escape from me.

Pragya:Instead of boasting tell me... what do you want from me?

Vidyuth:I just want you to leave this world.Go away from this world.This world is not for the souls like you.Go to the world of souls.

Pragya:Ok I will go.

Vidyuth smirked:I knew that you are like any other spirit who will obey me blindly.

Pragya:Let me complete.I will go.But I want Abhi.Otherwise i will not go.

Vidyuth was shocked:How dare you?

Pragya:I am not a spirit who will blindly follow your order.

Vidyuth got angry:How can you talk to me like this?I will not leave you.

He chanted some mantras.But shockingly it had no affect on Pragya.Pragya was laughing.

Suddenly her eye balls turned bright red.Her red eyes glittered scaring him.

Pragya:Do you know why you are not able to control me and why your mantras are not working out?Because only a pure hearted Priest can catch me.But you are an insult to the community of priests.An impure evil priest cannot touch a soul like me as I am not an evil spirit.

He was shocked.

Pragya:If you try to be over smart you will die in my hands.

Vidyuth got scared while Pragya flew away laughing.

Vidyuth met Maya and Veer.

Vidyuth:Pragya is not an ordinary spirit like I thought.She is very dangerous.It is not that easy to defeat her.

Veer and Maya were shocked.

Maya:No...she has to be defeated.

Veer:Are you also a useless priest?

Vidyuth:Don't insult me if you want me to help you.

Veer:You are not able to defeat her.Then how can you expect u to show our gratitude?

Vidyuth:Wait...Pragya thinks that she is smart.But I am smarter than her.I have a solution to destroy her.

Maya asked eagerly:What is that?

Vidyuth:It's her hope to get Abhi that makes her stay back on earth.Her hope should die.For that you and Abhi should get married.If you both get married Pragya will realize that she will never get Abhi.Her hope to get Abhi will shatter and thus she will become weak.Thus she will be destroyed completely.

Maya's face blossomed and Veer smiled.

Maya smiled victoriously:Our wedding will take place as Abhi is only mine.

Pragya who over heard it with gritted her teeth in anger.Her eye balls burnt with fire.

The whole floor was decorated with rose petals.Abhi walked there with a smile on his face.

Maya stood before him.

Maya:Abhi..We know that we are deeply in love with each other.I think now it's the right time to take our relationship to the next level.

She knelt down before him holding a red rose:Will you marry me?

Abhi smiled taking the red rose from her:Yes Maya.

Maya was so happy she embraced Abhi happily.

She said in her mind:I knew that you will accept my proposal Abhi.Because you love me and trust me blindly.

She smirked.

Vidyuth came to their house and looked at the horoscopes.

Vidyuth:According to the horoscope Abhi and Maya should get married the day after tomorrow.

Abhi was shocked:So fast.

Vidyuth:It's essential to conduct the wedding the day after tomorrow.Otherwise there will be problems according to the horoscope.

Abhi:But how can we do arrangements for the wedding so fast?

Veer:Don't worry about that Abhi.I am there to do the wedding preparations.

Maya:We need just a simple wedding Abhi.More important is our union,not the grandeur of the wedding functions.

Abhi:You are right Maya.

Maya and Veer showed thumbs up to Vidyuth without Abhi's knowledge.Vidyuth had an evil smile on his face.

Maya looked at the mirror with a smile.

Maya:Finally you are going to be Mrs.Abhishek Mehra.

Suddenly Maya noticed that her reflection on the mirror was not moving though she was moving.She sweated due to fear.Suddenly instead of her face she saw Pragya's face there on the mirror.

Maya got scared.Pragya's face became scary.

She put her hand out of the mirror and caught Maya's neck.

She started squeezing Maya's neck.

Maya:Ah...Ah...

Pragya:Don't do the mistake of dreaming to be Abhi's wife.Your wedding with Abhi will not take place.Abhi will marry me instead of marrying you.

Maya was shocked.

Pragya:And guess what?I will wear your blood as my vermilion.

Maya got scared.

Pragya:No no...I cannot wear your blood for a pure ceremony like wedding as your blood is impure.

She shoved Maya and Maya fell down.

Maya turned back in fear.Pragya was not there.

Maya screamed out of fear.Veer and Abhi came running.

Veer pulled Maya up from the floor.

Veer:What happened Maya?

Maya:Pragya's ghost attacked me and threatened that our wedding will not take place.

Veer and Abhi were shocked.

Maya:I am scared.

Abhi:You don't need to be scared Maya.Our wedding will take place.

Maya smiled with relief and embraced Abhi.

Flash back...

Pragya told Abhi:That evil Priest Vidyuth has suggested you and Maya to get married to destroy me.Veer and Maya are making plans for the wedding.

Abhi was shocked:How dare they?Let them make wedding plans.But I will never agree to marry Maya.She is fraud who fooled me along with Veer.I will reject her marriage proposal straight on her face.

Pragya:Never do that Abhi.Say yes to Maya when she presents the wedding matter.

Abhi:What are you saying Pragya?You know that I I love you and not Maya.

Pragya looked at Abhi emotionally.

Chhuteya na chhute mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

He cupped her face in his hands.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Tere liye aaya main toh
Tere sang jaana
Dholna ve tere naal
Jindri bitavaan

Pragya:I know that you love me and you also know that I love you like crazy.

Kadi naiyo chhodna
Ishq di dor na
Sare chhad jaayen maahi
Tu na chhodna
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

Abhi:Yes.Then why are you asking you to accept Maya's marriage proposal after knowing her ugly truth?

Pragya:If you refuse to marry Maya they will doubt you.They are very dangerous Abhi.To avoid suspicion you should pretend as if you are happy to marry Maya.

Abhi:But how long should I do this drama?

Pragya:Till you reach the wedding venue.

Abhi was shocked:What?

Pragya:Yes.Don't worry.You trust me.Right?

Abhi:I trust you Pragya.You are the only person I trust in this world.

Tere sang hasna main
Tere sang rona
Tujhme hi rehna main
Tujhme hi khona

Abhi and Pragya looked at each other emotionally.

Dil mein chhupa ke tujhe
Dil naiyo kholna
Marke bhi maahi tosey
Munh na modna
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

Pragya:Then relax.I will not let the wedding take place.I came to this earth to spend time with you,to take revenge on the culprits and to protect you.My first priority is to protect you from those evils.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Chhuteya na chhoote mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna maahi bol na (bol na)
Bolna maahi bol na (mahi bol na)(Kapoors and sons).

Present...

Abhi caressed Maya who was in his arms.

Maya:I feel so relieved to be in your arms Abhi.Your words..consolation..gives me strength.

Abhi gives her a fake smile.

Abhi said in his mind:Be happy Maya.Have relief.But it will not last long.Because it's not Pragya's destruction which is going to happen on the wedding day,but yours.You and Veer will face the worst soon.Count on...

Abhi smirked.

Pragya went to the dream world while sleeping.

Abhi held Pragya hand and they both flew to the sky.

Abhi-Pragya walked along the clouds and romanced there while the moon shone witnessing their romance.

Re yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere..
Yahin marna aur jeena..
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena..

Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere..
Yahin marna aur jeena..
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena..

Teri Galiyan, galiyan teri galliyan

Mujhko bhaavein galliyan teri galiyan

Teri galiyan, galiyan teri galiyan

Yun hi tadpaavein galiyan teri galiyan



.
..

Tu meri, neendon mein sota hai

Tu mere ashkon mein rota hai

Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein

Tu na ho phir bhi tu hota hai

Hai silaa..

Tu mere..

Dard ka..

Mere dil ki duaayein hain

Teri galiyan, galliyan teri galiyan




Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galiyan

Teri galiyan galiyan teri galiyan

Yun hi tadpaavein galliyan teri galiyan

Yun hi tadpaavein galiyan teri galiyan


Pragya blushed while dreaming.


Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galiyan

Teri galiyan galiyan teri galiyan

Yun hi tadpaavein galliyan teri galiyan

Yun hi tadpaavein galiyan teri galiyan(Ek villain).




Soon the reality hit and she opened her eyes.

Her eyes became wet.

Pragya:How can Abhi be with me on the clouds?He is not just a soul like me.A soul like me can never be with a human being like him.

I can be with him only when my task gets completed.

Her tears fell down.

Abhi smiled thinking of his moments with Pragya.

Abhi:Let Pragya erase the evils from our life.Then we will live together happily.I will be the first human being who will marry a ghost and live happily.I can't wait for that.

While Abhi was happy Pragya was depressed.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Part 10


Fabulous and so Curious Update

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Part 9


Making Maya a killer in your FF is a bold one. Finally, Abhi got to know the truth! Abhigya's scenes were emotional. Veer & Maya attacked Shivanya. Pragya & Rocky coming in the invisible form and beating the two were hilarious. Abhi's pretense was cute.

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Part 10

Veer and Maya went to Vidyuth for help. However, Vidyuth could not help but suggested Maya marry Abhi within 2 days. The Abhigya FB was sensational. Pragya's dream of Abhi is romantic. I wonder how Abhi will be with the ghostlike Pragya.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow I Really Love Reading This Story. Can't Wait For More Chapters.

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