Saaya(Shadow) AbhiGya Horror SS - Page 3

Part 5

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Saaya(Shadow) Part 6

Abhi explained everything to Veer and Maya right from the first meeting of Pragya till now.

Maya was in tears:Abhi..I am scared whether that ghost Pragya will snatch you from me.Will she separate us?

Abhi caressed Maya:No Maya.Pragya won't be able to do anything.She cannot separate us.

Veer:But Abhi...She is not a normal human being.She is a powerful ghost.How can we defeat her?

Suddenly they heard a voice from behind:I will tell you how to defeat her.

They looked at that person.Abhi and Nirmala were stunned.

It was Tanu.

Abhi:Tanu!

Tanu:Sir..I came here to give some documents and ended up hearing your conversation.That day itself I felt that Pragya is a ghost.I think she came in disguise of of your maid Nirmala and scared me.

Nirmala was shocked:What?She entered my body?

Tanu:Yes and you looked so scary.

Veer:Even I had seen you in a scary look.

Nirmala:Oh my God!I can't believe it.

Abhi:I can't understand what to do.

Tanu:I have a solution.Father Rosario can catch her easily.He is not an ordinary Priest.He is known for sending away ghosts to their world.

Maya and Veer were relieved.

Veer:Then call him.

Maya:Yes.He should come and end Pragya's chapter forever.What do you say Abhi?

Abhi was silent for a moment.Then he said:Yes,call him.

Tanu:Sure Sir.I will inform him.He is very down to earth and helpful.

Abhi was feeling upset.

He thought:Why I feel an unknown pain thinking about Pragya's soul leaving this world forever?

Father Rosario arrives there with Tanu.

Abhi,Veer and Maya welcomed him.

Maya:Thank you so much for coming Father.Only you can save us.Otherwise that ghost will kill us.

Father Rosario:Don't worry my child.I will solve this issue easily.

Abhi:I will show you your room.

He smiled.Abhi led him to his room and left.

Tanu went near Abhi with a seductive smile.

Tanu:Father Rosario won't help everyone.Only because I requested him he agreed to come here.That is because you are very special for me Abhi Sir.

Abhi who knew her intention said:Tanu...please don't waste your time.I am going to marry Maya.Hope you understood what I meant.

Tanu was embarrassed.

Abhi:If Pragya sees this,the next moment itself you will become her target and I will not even try to save you.You decide if you want your life or me.

Abhi walked away.

Tanu:Oh no...first Pragya..now Maya.So many obstacles in my love story.Pragya will be deleted from our life soon.But how will I get rid of that vamp Maya?

Tanu turned back.She was shocked to see Maya staring at her.

Tanu started sweating.

Tanu:Maya....I did'nt mean what I said.

Maya:You are right.I am a vamp in your life.You know what a vamp can do.Right?A vamp can kill anyone.So being a vamp I can kill you.

Suddenly Maya caught her by her neck shocking Tanu.

Tanu:Maya...what are you doing?

Maya:If anyone tries to distance my Abhi from me I will kill that person.I you try to do that I will kill you also.Understand?

Maya pushed her and Tanu fell down.

Maya:Just get out.You should not come to this house anymore.Understand?

Tanu nodded in fear.Maya walked away.

Tanu:Pragya is a dead ghost,but Maya is a living ghost.

Father Rosario was resting in his room.

Suddenly the wind started blowing heavily.

Father Rosario:Oh Jesus!

Suddenly he saw a scary ghost in front of him.

He was shocked.

The next day....

Abhi,Maya and Veer were there with Father Rosario.

Father Rosario:My prayers are very powerful.As I recite those prayers in the name of Lord Jesus that evil spirit will come in front of me.Then she cannot escape.She will be trapped here very badly.She will be sent to where she has to go.

Maya and Veer smiled.Abhi was in a dilemma.

Abhi thought:Why I feel restless?

Father Rosario was holding a Holy Cross.and delivering prayers.

But Pragya did not appear.

Veer:Why that evil spirit is not coming?

Father Rosario recited the prayers again.Still Pragya did not appear.

Maya:Father...why she is not coming?

Father Rosario:I am sorry.I have failed to bring her here.She is so powerful that I cannot catch her.

They were shocked.

Veer lost his control:Then why did you give us false hopes?If you are not able to do it you could have told us directly.

Maya could not control her temper:I think whatever we heard about you was just a hype.You are a normal person like you.A big zero.In other words a fake tantrik.

Father Rosario was silent.

Abhi could not control himself anymore.

Abhi:Veer...Maya...this is how you should talk to him?So much of disrespect...

Veer:Because he is a fraud.

Maya:He does'nt deserve any respect.

Abhi:Stop it.Say sorry to him.

Veer and Maya were silent.

Father Rosario:It's ok Abhi.It's my fault that I failed to keep up the promise.

Abhi:You tried your level best Father.But...I also feel that Pragya is a special ghost.I don't know why.But I feel so.But I apologize to you on their behalf.

Father Rosario:No need Abhi.I am leaving.

Abhi:Ok.

Father Rosario stepped out of their house with his luggage.

Abhi blasted at Veer and Maya:Very bad behaviour.I never expected this from you both.

Maya:Then what to do Abhi?You won't understand our mental state.Our life is in danger.You are safe.Pragya won't touch you.But she can kill us at any time.

Veer:I was desperate to see her soul suffering in front of me as she troubled me a lot.I am sad that my wish did'nt get fulfilled.

Abhi was silent.

Father Rosario remembered what happened to him after he reached Abhi's room.

Flash back....

Father Rosario was resting in his room.Suddenly the wind started blowing heavily.

Father Rosario:Oh Jesus!

Suddenly he saw a scary ghost in front of him.

He was shocked.He took the Holy Cross and extended it towards the ghost.

Suddenly the scary ghost turned into Pragya.Her one eye was swollen and had a dark circle around it giving her ghost look.He could not believe his eyes.

Father Rosario:Pragya!

Pragya became emotional:So you remember me?

Father Rosario:How can I forget you?You were the best student in our school.You were the most innocent child in our school.How did you change like this Pragya?How did you become so cruel?After you became a soul,you became an evil ghost.I never expected this from you.

Pragya's eyes became teary.

Pragya:Don't you trust me Father?Do you think that your Pragya can become like this without any reason?

Father Rosario looked at her with anxiety:Pragya...what are you going to say?

Pragya told him something.Father Rosario was shocked.

Father Rosario:Oh Jesus..unbelievable!

Pragya wept:I request you Father..please don't send me back.Please help me.Before I leave this earth I need to do certain things.

Father Rosario was silent.

Pragya pleaded tearfully:I beg of you.

Father Rosario thought for a moment and said:Ok.

Pragya smiled tearfully:Thank you father.

Present....

Father Rosario:Sorry Jesus..in order to help Pragya I recited fake prayers,so that Pragya's soul won't gt trapped.Jesus taught us peace.But by helping Pragya I deviated from it.Sorry My Lord.But for justice I am doing it.My God will forgive me.If not,I am willing to accept any punishment.

Pragya is talking to that mysterious person.

Pragya:Thankfully this time I escaped as it was Father Rosario.But how long can I escape?I don't know.

Mysterious person:Before that you should do whatever you have planned.

Pragya:Sure.

Abhi went to a bank.There accidentally he bumped into a girl.Abhi:Sorry,

Suddenly he saw her face.He and she were surprised to see each other.

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Saaya (Shadow)Part 7

Abhi went to a bank.There accidentally he bumped into a girl.Abhi:Sorry,

Suddenly he saw her face.He and she were surprised to see each other.

Abhi:Shivanya!

Shivanya:You still remember me...

Abhi:Of course yes.I remember you.

Shivanya asked him painfully:Do you remember my friend?

Abhi said painfully:Yes.

Abhi thought:How can I forget your friend when she is around me always like a curse?

Shivanya said tearfully:Sorry Abhi.You may be thinking that my friend fooled you by not coming to meet you.But actually she loved you sincerely.But she could'nt meet you as she passed away.Her name was Pragya.

Abhi felt upset:I know Shivanya.

Shivanya:You knew it?How?

Abhi thought:I can't tell her about Pragya's soul.

Abhi:Leave it Shivanya.

Shivanya:Though you did'nt meet her directly you were connected to Pragya in another way.

Abhi:How?

Shivanya:Through letters.

Abhi:Letters?

Shivanya:She used to send you letters anonymously.

Abhi was shocked.

Flash back....

Abhi was amused to get anonymous letters.

Abhi:This girl is unique.Who writes letters these days?But she chose letters over emails and whatsapp messages.She is special.

Abhi wrote her letter back.

Present....

Shivanya:When you replied to her through a letter she was so happy.You both had become so close through letters.But she never revealed her name though you asked her many times to reveal her name.

You did not know that the girl who wrote letters to you was my friend who loved you madly.

Abhi was shocked.He was so numb that he was not able to react.

Shivanya was in tears: The day you both planned to meet. Pragya had decided to reveal to you that she is the same girl.But fate did not allow it.Very cruelly her life was snatched by the cruel destiny.

Abhi:Are you saying the truth?

Shivanya:Yes.

Abhi's tears rolled down his cheeks.

Abhi reached home.

He remembered his past.How he got closer to the girl who used to write anonymous letters....how she revealed in every letter that she loves him without his knowledge...how he fell in love with her gradually....

He remembered replying to her once:I don't know how you became an important part of my life.But now you are my inspiration to compose music.Though I have not seen you I feel you everywhere.The last one month changed my life completely.I have fallen in love with you.

When she replied...:Your love is my biggest jewel.I am on cloud nine now.I am the most luckiest person in this world.

When he wrote to her to reveal her name she replied that she will reveal it on time.

One day his best friend Veer's sister Maya called him to a juice shop.They ordered juice.Abhi was sipping juice.

Abhi:What do you want to say Maya?

Maya moved closer to his ears whispering:The biggest secret!

Abhi:Maya!

Maya said in a romantic tone:The time has come to reveal my identity Abhi.

Abhi:Means?

Maya blushed:You asked me to reveal my name through letters.My name is Maya.

Abhi was surprised:It means..it's you who wrote letters to me?

Maya blushd:Yes.

Abhi:Oh my God!Why I could'nt recognize you?Why did'nt you talk to me directly instead of writing letters?

Maya:I was scared of rejection.

Abhi:Through your words in letters I realized how beautiful your heart is.You have become my soul Maya.

The blushing Maya embraced him happily when he felt that he got his Angel.

Present...

Abhi's eyes were full of tears.

Abhi:I thought that was the most beautiful moment of my life.I was wrong?Maya lied to me ?The woman I loved is Pragya and not Maya?Am I betrayed?Why why and why?

Abhi was frustrated.

Abhi:If Pragya was the letter girl why did she hide it from all these days?She could have revealed it to me.Then why?I want to know the truth from Maya.

Pragya went to Shivanya's house.She saw Shivanya drinking fruit juice there.

Shivanya could not see her as Pragya was invisible.Pragya's eyes became teary.

Pragya:I want to hug you now Shivanya.But I can't.

Pragya wiped her tears.

Pragya:I can't be weak.I have to search what I want.

Pragya went to Shivanya's room and searched for some albums.She opened an album and removed a photograph from it.

Pragya smirked.

Abhi went to Maya's room.Maya was not there.

Abhi:I have to wait for Maya.

Pragya watched it.Her eye balls turned yellowish.

Pragya:You need to know at least a bit of truth now Abhi.

In her hand there was the photograph which she took from Shivanya's house.

Pragya blew air at the photograph.The photograph flew and fell before Abhi.Abhi took that photograph and looked at it.He was shocked to see it.

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Part 5

Abhi saved Maya from Pragya. Their ice cream date was romantic. But sad that Pragya spoilt their date by putting ants on Maya's ice cream. It seems that both Pragya & Maya are obsessed with Abhi. Pragya put the fire before Maya to burn her. Abhi telling Pragya that if Maya gets burnt then even he will jump shows his intense love for Maya.

Part 6

Tanu is also in love with Abhi & finds a competitor in Maya & Pragya. Tanu called Father Rosario to help Abhi, Veer, & Maya out of her selfish motives. Maya was violent towards Tanu but her possessiveness for Abhi is justified as she is his fiancee. Pragya had gone to the extent of manipulating Father Rosario to chant fake prayers. Is Pragya a negative vamp as Abhi told her that she is an evil ghost? It seems that for now, Abhi has a soft corner towards Pragya as he was hesitant to drive Pragya through recitement.

Part 7

Maya lying to Abhi about her sending those letters to him shows her obsession. Shivanya tale to Abhi about Pragya is emotional. Abhi weeping for Pragya shows that he felt bad for her. If Abhi and Pragya part, are you planning to introduce a new character in Maya's life?