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Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Woww... the update was awesome...Maya gonna get punishment for all her deed...Abhi..Poor soul he is dreaming of being with pragya...but he dont know that pragya will go out of this world once her work is done..Pragya's dream was good...I liked rocky where did he go..?


Nice update waiting for more ..

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Posted: 5 years ago
#52

captivating update, well written

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Posted: 5 years ago
#53

Part 11


Fabulous and so Awesome Update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#54

Thank u very much friends


Saaya(Shadow) Part 12

Abhi-Maya wedding preparations were going on.

Abhi got a message from someone.

Abhi replied:Ok,I will come and meet you.

Abhi went to meet that person secretly.

That person is revealed to be Shivanya.

Shivanya:I came to know that you are getting married to Maya.That's why I messaged you that I want to meet you urgently.What is this Abhi?I told you everything about Maya.Still you are marrying her?Guess you did not believe what I told you about Maya and Veer.That's why you are in a hurry to marry Maya.But I have a duty towards Pragya.So I will not let this wedding take place.

Abhi:Shivanya...I trust you and I myself want this wedding to get cancelled.Trust me.

Shivanya was shocked:Are you serious?

Abhi:Yes.

Shivanya:Then why are you getting ready to marry Maya?

Abhi:It's a long story Shivanya.I think as pragya's best friend at least now you should know it.

Abhi told her everything right from the first meeting with Pragya's soul.

Shivanya was shocked.

Abhi:That day it's Pragya ,Nirmala and Rocky who saved you from Maya and Veer.

Shivanya's eyes were full of tears:Pragya ..Nirmala aunty...Rocky...

Abhi:Yes Shivanya.I am saying the truth.

Shivanya wept:I want to meet them Abhi.Please...

Abhi became emotional.

Abhi:Pragya...Nirmalaji...please come...

Suddenly 2 fire balls came which turned into Pragya and Nirmala.

Shivanya could not believe her eyes:Pragya...Nirmala aunty.

Pragya and Nirmala were in tears.

Shivanya hugged them tearfully.

Shivanya:Why did'nt you both come to meet me?

Pragya:We had come to see you.

Shivanya:But you both were invisible to me.Why?

Nirmala:We did not want to be a burden on you as ghosts.

Shivanya:How can you both be ghosts for me?You both are everything to me.Right?

They shed tears.

Pragya:I wanted you and my family to move on.That's why we did not appear before you all.

Shivanya:But i missed you all every moments and craved for your presence.Now my wish got fulfilled.Please don't be invisible to me anymore.

Pragya:Ok promise.

Pragya and Shivanya hugged each other cheerfully.

Rocky came running towards Shivanya.Rocky wagged his tail seeing her.

Shivanya hugged Rocky:Rocky...I missed you so much.

Shivanya stared at Pragya and Nirmala and said:All our happiness was snatched by Maya and Veer.Don't leave them simply.

Pragya:Never.We came here to seek justice.We will make sure that we will get it.

Nirmala:Maya and Veer will suffer in our hands.We will wipe out those 2 sinful creatures.

Abhi and Shivanya smiled.

Abhi and Maya sat on the mandap as the bride groom and bride.Maya was blushing.

She looked at Abhi.Abhi smiled at her.

Maya blushed.

Suddenly his face became scary.

Maya-Veer got scared.

The scary Abhi turned into Pragya.Maya-Veer got shocked.

Pragya laughed scaring them.

Pragya:Maya..you thought that the bride groom who was sitting near besides you was Abhi?No..actually it was I who sat near you in disguise of Abhi.Abhi will be your bride groom only in dreams.I told you that you will never be able to marry Abhi.

Maya was shocked.

Maya:Where is Abhi?Tell me Pragya.

Nirmala went near Maya:Don't worry Maya.Abhi is safe.

Maya looked at Nirmala and got scared.Because Nirmala looked scary.

Nirmala and Pragya laughed loudly.

Veer:Maya...I had seen this woman in this scary avtar before also.I told you.Later I thought that she was possessed by Pragya.

Nirmala:I was not possessed by Pragya,because I myself is a soul.

Nirmala turned into her original look which she had when she was alive.

Veer-Maya were stunned to see Nirmala's modern look.

Nirmala:Do you know who I am?You have not seen me when I was alive.I am Pragya's aunt who lost life along with Pragya and Rocky because of both of you.

Maya-Veer were shocked and scared:You too a ghost?

Nirmala turned into her scary look again.

Pragya-Nirmala laughed loudly while Rocky appeared barking.Maya-Veer were shocked.

Vidyuth was too scared to react.

Veer:Panditji,please do something.

Vidyuth's lips shivered:Ya.

Suddenly Pragya became huge like a an elephant and took Vidyuth in her hand.

All were stunned.

Vidyuth:Pragya..please leave me.Promise...I won't do anything wrong.

Pragya smirked.She threw him out and he fell on the compound.He was injured.But still he managed to run out of that area.

Veer-Maya were scared.

Abhi came inside.

Veer-Maya were relieved to see Abhi.Maya ran towards Abhi and embraced him.

Maya:Abhi..Thank god..you are safe.I am so happy.

Abhi:Don't worry about my safety.I have not done anything wrong.So no ghost will harm me.

Maya:But I got scared Abhi.

Abhi:Yes,you have to be scared for yourself.After all you did unforgivable sins.So no ghost will spare you..especially Pragya as you did injustice to her...a big crime...

Maya looked at Abhi in disbelief:Abhi!

Suddenly Abhi pushed her.

Maya-Veer were shocked.

Veer:Abhi..what is this?

Maya:Veer..I think this Abhi is also fake.Our Abhi won't behave like this to me.

Veer:Ya..you are right Maya.This is one of those ghosts as Abhi.

Abhi:No,I am the real Abhi.

They were shocked.

Maya:Then why did you push me away Abhi?

Abhi:Because I know the truth.You are not the woman I loved.It was Pragya.But you killed Pragya brutally and cheated me by taking over her place in my life.

Maya-Veer were shocked.

Maya:What are you saying Abhi?Who poisoned you with lies against me?

Abhi:Don't pretend to be innocent.I myself saw with my eyes how you and Veer were plotting against Shivanya.

Veer and Maya were shocked.

Abhi:Shame on you Veer.Instead of guiding Maya and showing her right path you supported her getting involved in all her crimes.You betrayed your friend who trusted you blindly.You cheated me Veer.You broke my heart terribly.

Veer could'nt open his mouth.

Abhi:Because of you both 3 innocents lost their lives.Poor parents lost their only daughter.You both do not deserve any mercy. I want you both to be punished for all the forbidden sins.

Veer-Maya got tensed.

Veer:Abhi...please don't leave us to those ghosts.

Maya:Please Abhi..save us.

Abhi:No,you both have to be punished.

Maya:Please Abhi.I beg of you.I did it because of my love for you.

Abhi:Love?If you had loved me you would not have betrayed me.You just wanted me.That's it.I cannot forgive you both.

Veer:Ok.Then leave us to law.But don't leave us to those ghosts.

Abhi:If I leave you to the law,it's sure that you both will escape or it will take ages for you both to get punished.I want both of you to get punished soon.Otherwise you two will will do more crimes.

Veer-Maya became upset.

Suddenly Maya's wedding attire which she was wearing turned into white.Maya-Veer were shocked and scared.

They held each others hands and tried to run out.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#55

Again an awesome update..maya deserved that...abhi..revealed that he knows the truth..am scared what will maya and veer will do now..Pragya nd nirmala scared themm like helllll...and yeah shivanya's part was too good..

thanks for the pm and yeah do continue soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

Splendid Update. Veer And Maya Should Be Punished.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#57

incredible update, well written

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Posted: 5 years ago
#58

Thanks to each one of u 4 supporting me .

Special thanks to aswatiachu who gave me the confidence to write a horror SS.

Plz write your favourite character(Why you liked this character the most)

Favourite scene




Saaya(Shadow) Part 13

Abhi:Because of you both 3 innocents lost their lives.Poor parents lost their only daughter.Yu both do not deserve any mercy. I want you both to be punished for all the forbidden sins.

Veer-Maya got tensed.

Veer:Abhi...please don't leave us to those ghosts.

Maya:Please Abhi..save us.

Abhi:No,you both have to be punished.

Maya:Please Abhi.I beg of you.I did it because of my love for you.

Abhi:Love?If you had loved me you would not have betrayed me.You just wanted me.That's it.I cannot forgive you both.

Veer:Ok.Then leave us to law.But don't leave us to those ghosts.

Abhi:If I leave you to the law,it's sure that you both will escape or it will take ages for you both to get punished.I want both of you to get punished soon.Otherwise you two will will do more crimes.

Veer-Maya became upset.

Suddenly Maya's wedding attire which she was wearing turned into white.Maya-Veer were shocked and scared.

They held each others hands and tried to run out.

Suddenly there was storm and Maya got blown away in the storm.She was floating in the air and screaming.

Veer was scared and worried for Maya:Mayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Pragya and Nirmala were laughing loudly.

Maya pleaded:Pragya..please put me down.Please don't kill me.

Pragya:I also requested you not to kill me.But did you listen to me?

Maya cried.

Pragya:But I will fulfill your wish.I will put you down.

Pragya stared at Maya.Her eye balls turned red and started shining.

Suddenly Maya fell down with a thud.

Maya screamed out of pain:Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Pragya:See...like you requested me I put you down,but only for killing you..not to save you.

Maya could not bear the pain as her head was injured badly.Her injured head was bleeding severely.

Pragya:That day I suffered like you by bearing pain while burning in the fire.Now you also suffer and die.

Veer ran towards Maya crying:Maya...

Maya tried to get up moaning.

Slowly slowly Maya's vision became blurred and she closed her eyes forever.

Veer screamed:Mayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Veer stared at Pragya angrily:I will not spare you.

Pragya asked him in a sarcastic tone:Really?What can a normal human being like you can do?After all you are a pure evil.

Nirmala:The next is your turn.

Rocky ran towards him with his glittering green eyes scaring Veer.

Rocky bit Veer cruelly.

Veer moaned in pain:No..no....

Veer was bitten so cruelly by Rocky that he died.

Pragya and Nirmala sighed in relief.

Nirmala looked at Pragya emotionally:Pragya...it's time for us to leave.

Pragya wept:Maasi...

Nirmala:Our duty was to help you to take revenge which is completed successfully.Now we have to leave.

She hugged Pragya and cried.Pragya hugged Rocky and cried.

Abhi could not control his tears.

Rocky wagged his tail at Abhi.Nirmala waved her hand at Abhi tearfully.

Abhi:Nirmalaji....

Suddenly Nirmala and Rocky vanished.

Shivanya enters with Raghuveer and Sarla.Seeing the dead bodies of Maya and Veer ,Sarla and Raghuveer turned off their face with a disgusting feeling.Shivanya smirked.

Shivanya:They deserved it.

Pragya's eyes turned teary seeing Raghuveer and Sarla.

Sarla:Shivanya...you said that our Pragya is here.Where is she?

Raghuveer:We can't wait to see our Pragya.

Shivanya turned around and found Pragya standing there with wet eyes.

Shivanya:Pragya,please let yourself visible to your parents.They are dying to see you.

Abhi:Yes Pragya.

Slowly Pragya became visible to Sarla and Raghuveer.

They could not believe their eyes.

Sarla-Raghuveer:Pragya!

Pragya hugged them all of a sudden.They all wept.

Sarla:We missed you every second Pragya.

Raghuveer:We died every moment without seeing you.

Sarla:We are so happy that you are back.

Pragya looked at them painfully:I knew that you both will have the hopes to live with me if you see me.That's why I did not come to you.

Pragya shed tears:I was not allowed to be back to earth only because I deserved justice.I got justice.Now I need to go back.

Sarla,Raghuveer,Shivanya and Abhi were shocked.

Abhi:What did you say Pragya?

Raghuveer:You are going back?

Pragya burst into tears:Yes.I have to go back.

All were crying.

Sarla:No..I won't allow you to go back.You will stay with us.

Raghuveer:We will get you married to Abhi.Please don't go back.

Pragya:You all are forgetting that I am dead.I am just a soul.Whether to stay back or not is not in my hands.Only God can do that miracle.I have to go.

Sarla and Raghuveer held her hand:Noooooooooo

Pragya took her hand off them and walked.

Shivanya:Pragya...

Pragya:Shivanya..you are mature.You should understand my condition.

Shivanya wept silently.

Pragya walked forward.Abhi held her hand.Pragya looked at him.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..
O Allah Waariyan
O Main To Haariyan
O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye..(Yaariyan)

Abhi wept:I beg of you.Don't go Pragya.

Pragya's heart pricked.

Pragya:My time is over Abhi.

Abhi:Who said like that?Nothing like that.

Pragya was in tears:Accept the reality Abhi.The biggest failure is death.No one can defeat death.

Abhi could not bear anymore and embraced her.Both were in tears.But in each others arms they forgot their pain of separation for a moment.

Pragya broke the embrace.Abhi held her hand again:Please Pragya...

Pragya took her hand off Abhi painfully and flew towards the sky.Pragya turns into a star and sits on the sky.

Sarla,Raghuveer,Abhi and Shivanya broke into tears.

Suddenly the star fell down on the ground with a thud.Hearing the sound everyone looked at that area with a shock.The star turned into Pragya.All were stunned.

They:Pragya!

Pragya got up from the ground and touched her body parts one by one...her hands..her face..he head..her hair...

She was surprised.

She looked at others emotionally with a smile:I...I...I have become a human being.

They were surprised:What?

Pragya:Yes.God has given me a life again.

They were so happy that they became emotional.Pragya hugged her parents and Shivanya.

Sarla:Thank God...

They all thanked God.

She looked at Abhi.

Abhi:God heard my prayer.Ever since I realized that you are the one I loved I prayed to God to turn you into a human being and wished for a miracle.

Pragya smiled tearfully.

Abhi:I want to go to the temple with you to thank God.

Pragya:Yes,I also want that.

Abhi-Pragya went to the temple and thanked God.

Abhi:Thank you so much God for giving me my Pragya.Thanks a lot for this miracle.

Pragya:God..please bless us with a happy life with no dangers like we faced till now.

They did aarti together.

Abhi-Pragya got married.

Shivanya introduced her fiance Karan to them:This is my life partner Karan.

Abhi-Pragya shook hands with him:Hi.

Karan:Nice to meet you both.Shivanya always talks about you guys.You guys are a fairy tale couple.All the best.

Abhi-Pragya smiled:Thank you.

Pragya:You both also make a lovely couple.Get married soon.

Karan-Shivanya blushed.

2 weeks later ....

Pragya wore a beautiful dress.Abhi came.He was mesmerized by her beauty.He went closer and made her wear accessories.

Abhi:Now you look more beautiful.

She blushed.

Pragya:Now let us leave for Shivanya's wedding.

Abhi:Yes.

They went for Shivanya-Karan's wedding.

Karan-Shivanya also got married.

They all lived happily.

The End



Friends....I know that it's an illogical ending as after death getting the life back is impossible.But everyone wants AbhiGya union,so I had to turn the ghost Pragya into a human being.Please don't mind it as it's a fantasy.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#59

It Was A Great Story So Don't Mind. I Liked The Ending. Prayga Became Human Again. Next Time Write A Story Where Abhigya Are Snakes. Naagin Style. 🐍

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Posted: 5 years ago
#60

Part 12


Superb Update


Veer and Maya should be punished

though I feel Maya should get serve punishment

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