Abhigya SS: I NEED YOU!! PART 3 UPDATED PAGE 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -mina-

Interesting update! So we got to see Pragya's side and her assumption that she is leaving his life, I like that. Abhi wants to fly in love, that's good! Hope he gets the chance...!


Thanks guys!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hellooo!!!!! Here is part 2! Hope you like it! Enjoy! Sorry for any mistakes!
Previous: Part 1B

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The whole time I was wondering about this new behaviour of his. One thing is still bothering me. What did I see in his eyes? Love? And soon when I realized it was evening I heard the voice I was waiting to hear.

"Eeyy Chashmish!"

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ABHI'S POV

Right when I was elated from my new realization, my so called gf had to ruin it! She is a chudail I tell you! A total witch! She has never thought of me, always ranting about her career! So selfish! She came into my room and started throwing herself all over me which did not fascinate me anymore, not even a bit! "Abhi!" She says..there she goes again!

"Abhi look at me!! I'm talking to you! Aren't you happy that the boring, useless, chashmish is in jail? I'm so happy! It's what she deserves! And also.."

She was interrupted by Abhi, "Tanu stop it! And don't you dare say anything against her!! She is my WIFE!! And who are you calling ugly and useless? That is all you! You're so selfish!! You only care about yourself! You know what Tanu? We are over! Don't ever try to have any contact with me ok? Is that clear? Now get the hell out of my house!"

Abhi what are you talking about? You know how that chashmish is right? She betrayed you!

No! She never betrayed me! You did! Now please leave before I lose it! Now!

Tanu leaves thinking he will get back to her..(like that's ever gonna happen lol)

Abhi after a while decided to go see his chashmish.

I walked into the police station to see pragya in deep thoughts but still she looked ethereal. I walked near to her and said..."Ey chashmish!" I got her attention.

You? When did you come?

Chashmish I came to tell you something that will make you very happy! Actually two good news!

What happened?

Firstly, you will get a bail next morning ok? I arranged everything with the lawyer and papers will be ready tomorrow morning. And secondly I broke up with Tanu!

WHAT?!

What you want to stay in jail forever?

No! I was talking about Tanu! So suddenly? You broke up? What happened?

You should be happy right? So what's the problem?

There's no problem.. I was just..surprised.

Oh I have another surprise for you then!

What is it? Tell me.

No I told you na its surprise? You will find out once you return home!

She fell silent.

After a few moments, Abhi says, oh hello? What are you thinking? Ok then chashmish for now I will go home but I will be back tomorrow to come get you ok? Don't worry and take rest. Bye!
~~~~~

Next Part:
Part 3
Edited by sbsmartness4 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Very interesting.
Loving the story can't wait to read what happens next.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Wow nice teaser! I always wanted Abhi to know the truth himself...
will read the next part and comment...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Lovely part 1 A and B. Abhigya feelings are beautifully portrayed. Finally Abhi realised the truth that Pragya is innocent and moreover he is in love with her.
But who abducted Pragya forcefully? Along with some other girls too...will read the next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Part 2: Finally Abhi got rid of the chudail. Lol that Tanu is so overconfident! I doubt whether she is behind that drug incident...
Loved Abhigya's conversation in the station. Haha Abhi is becoming romantic...
Waiting for the next part...Hope Pragya comes out in bail.

Do PM me next time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Nice Update👏
So Finally Abhi Brokeup Wid Miss Tanu.
Im waiting for daT Surprise! Abhi Proposing her??
Excited For da next Update!
Do update soon😊 And Thanks For da PM.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry have no time.
Will read soon once got time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Sorry have no time.

Will read soon once got time


No problem read anytime you want but do you still want me to pm you or?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Very sorry for the delay guys!! I hope you like this update! Sorry if too long. Here is Part 3.

Previous part:
Part 2

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Oh I have another surprise for you then!

What is it? Tell me.

No I told you na its surprise? You will find out once you return home!

She fell silent.

After a few moments, Abhi says, oh hello? What are you thinking? Ok then chashmish for now I will go home but I will be back tomorrow to come get you ok? Don't worry and take rest. Bye!
~~~~~

PRAGYA POV

"You will find out once you return home!"

His words reminded me once more that I have to go back to my mothers house soon. I don't know why but it hurt like thousands of needles pricking my heart!

She doesn't say anything so he takes his leave.

I can't help but think that he might not hate me anymore. I have never seen such immense care for me before. I kept thinking and thinking but soon gave up to the deep tired sleep taking over.

ABHI POV

How can you be so good chashmish? And I'm such a stupid that I didn't see how you really are..
He is talking to Pragya's photo.

I can't wait to tell you my feelings! I really hope you also love me and give me a chance to clear my mistakes. Please come soon!!!
He kisses her photo and holds it close to his heart smiling widely with his eyes closed.

Next morning
Continued with abhi POV

Ring!!! His phone went off many times and finally he picks up.

"Yes? Mr lalwani?! OMG MR LALWANI?!"

I checked the time. I have to go to the police station in 30 min!! Chashmish!!

He gets ready quickly and goes to the police station without even having breakfast!!

Am I late?

No mr Mehra. Please sit.

They talk over the details and abhi signed the papers. They took pragya out and made her sign also. They didn't have any conversation in the station, but the car ride home was silent until abhi broke it.

Ey! What happened? You are not speaking?

Nothing.

What do you mean nothing? You haven't said anything since yesterday when I left the station?

Do you really trust me?
She straightforwardly asked me suddenly. I was hurt that she believes that I still don't trust her enough. But I deserve it.

What kind of question is that chashmish? Of course I trust you! Didn't I tell you the other day?

But you hate me right? Why did you do this for me? This is what you wanted right? For me to stay away from you? Then why?

I saw the pain in her eyes. Her eyes express to me how much she suffered. I feel terrible! Sometimes I wonder if I even deserve her a bit? No not at all but I need her. I will never let her go I thought.

Chashmish we will talk once we reach home ok? I will answer all your questions.

She didn't even listen to him she was lost in her own thoughts and so was he.

At MM
Abhigya room

Abhi tells pragya to go freshen up first while he talks to dadi and comes back.

Later...So chashmish you wanna see your surprise?

No I don't want any surprise.

Well you don't want it but I want to give it here it is.

He handed her a wrapped thing... Something like a card?

What is this?

Open and look for yourself.

When opened and read the content on the card, she was in tears and shock.

Aaliya? How do you...? What is this for? Why? How can...? She ran out of words.

It read.."Purab weds Bulbul" in bold letters.

Chashmish please listen to my words before you say anything ok?

Ok

First, I know about the truth, about Purab and bulbul and that you are not who I thought you were. I tortured you countless times for something you never did and I am ashamed of myself knowing that you both were scared to tell me the truth for bulbuls safety. If it weren't for alias assumptions, I wouldn't have done such a thing. I swear. I had become blind in my sisters love. I don't even deserve your forgiveness but please forgive me. If you can't then please at least try to. I'm sorry really sorry!!

Both were in tears..

Pragya was shocked to see this side of abhi!! He apologized to her? And how does he know the truth??

"Listen, I know what you did was wrong it's partly my fault also. I should've told you the truth and I let you be in this misunderstanding. You shouldn't say sorry to me."

"What are you made of? How can you so easily forgive me saying it's also your fault!? I tortured you day and night!! And..."

"That doesn't matter to me. It only matters to me that you know your mistake and regret it."

I couldn't help it. I immediately hugged her and she also reciprocated!

They broke the hug when they saw Dadi and Dasi at their door. Both were smiling.

"What's happening here huh? Abhi don't you know to close the door when you romance your wife? Eh?" Dasi teased as usual.

Pragya had her cheeks burning with color and she blushed more after what abhi did.

"Of course I know. But you know what Dasi? She is my legally wedded wife so I can romance her whenever and where-ever I want so it doesn't matter to me if anyone sees." He locked his fingers with hers tightly and held her hand while saying this.

"Ok then we won't disturb continue continue... Let's go sis" they went laughing.

"Um..I have some work in the kitchen..."
When pragya tries to leave abhi holds her hand and stops her.
"Can you please get me something to eat chashmish, I'm very hungry!!"

"Already? Didn't you eat anything?"

"No I was in a hurry to get you home..

"Oh. I'll be right back then"

Let's go abhi! I have to tell her my feelings today!

Pragya entered the room with food in a tray and couldn't find abhi when he suddenly blindfolds her. He takes her to the balcony and takes it off. Pragya was very surprised and happy to react anything. "What is all this?" She said while she looked at the big red heart in front of her.
"This is all for you chashmish, first can you change into this sari for me and come back? Then I will tell you everything." He gave her a red sari.

She came back. She was a bit silent but still she looked like an angel.

"Chashmish you look so hot!" He said in a trance.
Pragya couldn't help blushing.

"Um...I mean uh lets go?"
"Yea"

"Look chashmish, please don't take this the wrong way, but I have to tell you this right now. I LOVE YOU!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!! I know you might be thinking I am doing this out of guilt but that's not true. I truly love you and only you. I know you forgave me but I still I'm sorry for what I did. I realized the day you were in the police station. I cannot tell you how much I missed you that day! Will you accept me chashmish?" He now had a tensed face.

"I want divorce from you!" She said with no expression on her pale face.
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What do you think happens? Why she rejected him? How will abhi react? What is the reason?
Sorry again for the late update as I didn't get enough time to write cuz I was busy. Hope you liked it. I tried to make this update as long as possible as I don't know when I can update again. Please make sure to comment!! Thanks for reading!!

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