Abhigya SS: I NEED YOU!! PART 3 UPDATED PAGE 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey everyone! I was watching old episodes and thought of the track in a different situation. It begins from when pragya and Abhi are dancing in alias sangeet.

Ok so this story will be that Abhi will find out purab and pragya truth, tries to make everything right, but something happens that makes him realize he loves his pragya. Can't tell you more, but do you think he will be forgiven? How will he realize his love? Please comment whether you like it or not so I can make it better for all of you. And I will update the first chapter in a few hours. Promise. Have a look at this teaser.

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There Abhi laid on his perfect mattress thinking about today's events that shocked him. Most of all he was surprised at himself!

I've become a monster!! What have I done? I ruined 4 lives just for the sake of my sister.
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Flashback starts

What is going on with me? Why didn't I feel like letting her go? The dance is over! After knowing what she did to purab? I can't have such feelings for her.

Abhi and pragya were dancing on stage during Alia's sangeet. Pragya was in utter shock as to why he didn't drop her this time. Well honestly he himself didn't know why. After she saved him from the accident fiasco, he rethinks about her intentions. Why would she save him if she wanted his property etc.
He decided to get to the bottom of this soon.

Sangeet was soon over but pragya hasn't come back to the room yet. I got up to look for her. While searching, I find her in the guest room talking to someone. I leaned in to listen.

"Purab! Are you out of your mind? How can you even think of this. If you really accept me as your sister please marry Alia. My bulbul has had enough of this drama. First you commit to Alia, fall in love with bulbul, then keep both of them unaware of each other? You have hurt so many people and please for gods sake stop it once and for all! I'll keep the phone.
She hung up on him immediately out of pure frustration. He cannot back out on marriage now!! She turns to go to her room when Abhi leaves quickly. He pretends to sleep when she comes in.

Flashback ends
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He was to find answers to everything tomorrow. He fell asleep thinking about his beautiful wife chashmish.

Next morning, Abhi woke up to the strong aroma of his cinnamon coffee. He looked around to see no sight of his Chashmish.
Where is pragya? He freshens up and goes downstairs to see the whole family in discussion, but still no sight of pragya.

Dadi where is pragya?

I sent her out for some work, she would be coming soon.
Ok.

He called purab to come over to talk to him about the truth and to cancel his and alias marriage. He gets a call turning his world upside down...

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Chapter 1A
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooh this is exciting!! Really looking forward to what happens next. Love how you have written Abhi's thoughts and feelings so far. What happened to Pragya? More soon please!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

Ooh this is exciting!! Really looking forward to what happens next. Love how you have written Abhi's thoughts and feelings so far. What happened to Pragya? More soon please!


Thank you so much! I will also make sure to add Pragyas share of feelings soon in the story. Just trying to finish up on the chapter and make it a bit long so that it ends correctly. Thanks again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting.
Waiting to know pragyas thoughts.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting teaser.
Waiting for Chapter 1 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tikit

Interesting.

Waiting to know pragyas thoughts.


Will definitely get to it! 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nive-

Interesting teaser.

Waiting for Chapter 1😊


Will keep you updated!! Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting teaser ❤️.. Will be waiting for the chapter...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys! I kinda updated pretty quick but most of the story will make more sense throughout part 1B and 2. This is part 1A. Ps. Pragyas feelings not added yet. And also sorry if this doesn't seem realistic but this was kind of a scene from a movie made long ago I forgot. So please enjoy and keep reading. Here is the teaser:

Teaser

~~~~~CHAPTER 1A~~~~~

He called purab to come over to talk to him about the truth and to cancel his and alias marriage. He gets a call turning his world upside down...
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Abhi ran out of house without even telling anyone what happened and by the time Purab was there, he was out. He was driving in a full rush of worry. He reached the police station. In that call he was informed that his wife is in jail.

Inspector, where is my wife? She is Pragya Mehra! Can I please meet her?

'Oh! So you are her husband! Rockstar Abhi! Your wife got into a drugs case!!

Please tell me where she is I need to meet her. Constables lead him to pragya.

That sight broke his heart! She was pleading along with four other girls for their innocence. She looked exhausted, pained, scared and hopeless. She soon saw me coming.

Suniye! Please trust me I didn't do anything wrong! Please trust me!! Please.
Chashmish...
Please help me! Get me out! Trust me I wouldn't do this!! She kept talking..
...I trust you!!
And... What? You really trust me?

She looked happy. I was glad to see her smile after torturing her all these days.

Don't worry chashmish! I will get you out! Don't be scared! I trust you! Just tell me what happened.

I went out to get medicines for dadi along with supplies for alias marriage when a group of guys near that area came and took me and these girls to some empty construction area and forcefully injected us with drugs and we ended up in the police station for having drugs. She was crying profusely.

He wanted to hug her tight and wipe her tears that moment but he couldn't. He took her hands gently and held them tight assuring her his trust and determination to get her out. He was burning with rage just imagining those bas***ds doing this to chashmish! He controlled himself and went out to discuss with the police about her bail.

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Here in MM, Purab reaches and asks for Abhi and everyone tells him how he suddenly ran out of the house and didn't tell anyone.

There Aakash comes out to the hall.

Dadi, bhai is not lifting the phone! I've tried so many times.

Akash don't worry nothing will happen let's try to contact him somehow. Purab suggested.

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Part 1B
Edited by sbsmartness4 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaydp59

Interesting teaser ❤️.. Will be waiting for the chapter...


Well then just now I uploaded chapter 1B so please read! Thank you!

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