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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm so happy that you'll are liking my story,
Next will b flashback on how suresh n Pragya got married n abhi did not attain marriage
Keep reading 😊
Edited by Maggie11 - 9 years ago
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Sorry no update this week busy with kids exams 😊
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It's ok dear...we will be waiting!!
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Part 6 AKELE HUM AKELE TUM

P: keeping secrets is dangerous, don't you ever try keeping it from me again,( didn't realised what she is talking n went with flow) you know once I tried keeping secret from you n ended up marrying suresh
( just then there was lighting, n with voice of that Pragya got scared n hugged abhi, he too hug her back, for moment they lost in each other, he was first to break hug)
A: let's go in, maybe it will rain
P: ya, let's go ( they went, Pragya in her room trying to sleep on arm chair as usual, lost in thoughts) how can I be so foolish to babble like that in front of him,?? he will definitely ask me farther in detail, how will I ever explain??,
Here abhi was thinking,"why she said she ended up marrying suresh out of some confusion, then why she married suresh, if she didn't love him, i want to know today itself"
N he goes to her room n sees her sleeping on chair n gets irritated n shouts
Abhi: what's wrong with you,!! how many times should I tell you that no sleeping on chair
P: but I find it comfortable here only, bed is very uncomfortable
A: I will show you how to sleep comfortably on bed, get up right now!!
P:(little annoyed, but agrees n sits on bed) fine, you go I will sleep
A: as if you will say n I will believe you,( puts pillow behind her back, lifts her legs to rest on other pillow, seeing her swollen legs he gets worried) my god, why didn't you tell me your feet are swollen, let me give you massage, you will feel better
P:(tries to cover her legs with blanket) it's ok, I'm fine, really it's not paining at all
A: pls don't lie to me ok, I know (starts massaging, thinks it's right time to ask her) so where were we??
P: means??
A: you said something about keeping secret from me
P:( I can't escape now, I should tell him) oh that, you know it was our 25 birthday n I wanted to surprise you by throwing stripties party with all your friends at your Lonavala bungalow n uncle n suresh helped with arrangements, n don't know why uncle thought that there is something between me n suresh, n rest you know (finishes in one breath, n waits for abhi's reaction)
A:( "she lied me about meeting suresh because she wanted to surprise me, I'm such an idiot "he felt ashamed, that how easily he misunderstood whole thing,but doesn't show on his face because he was happy at same time, as that means she loves him n only him n always him) it's ok, but better you don't keep any secrets from me, from now onwards ok (he looks straight into her eyes n goes near to her n spread his arm as if he is going to hug her, but instead he unhook her bra) n one more thing, always remember, while sleeping you should wear lose or even better no bra ( kisses her on forehead) n sleep on left side, good night n sleep tight (winks at her n leaves before she could even react)
She was out of words, totally blank didn't know how to react or what to think n went to sleep
Here abhi in his room, was sitting in balcony n lost in thoughts,
Flashback
Night before Pragya n Suresh's marriage
Abhi had drink for first time n way too much then his capacity n was still sitting at pub, just then he gets call from Pragya
P: ( very tense) where are you?? I'm waiting for you, at your house from last 2hrs, I want to tell you something
A:( not in his senses) what you want to talk now, tell me on phone itself, I can't come
P: I can't talk over phone, you have to come right now, I'm waiting
A: ( lied her) try to understand I can't come, I'm not in town
P: where are you then??
A: Pune
P: ( tears were formed in her eyes n was almost chocked) but tomorrow is my marriage n
A: (cuts in, as word marriage irritate him n shouts) how can you be so self-centred, you are only thinking about yourself, i told you once, I have work here, tell what you want to tell on phone itself
P: ( feels very bad,n hurts, she just wanted tell him that she loves him, n it doesn't matter if he doesn't love her back, but she can't marry suresh) I think it's not that important, let it be, when are you coming back?
A: ( in anger) never ( cuts call)
(Pragya feels angry n thinks if he doesn't care then she also will move on, n marry suresh, even if she knows every well that she can never love suresh, way she loved abhi, she decided to compromise with life, n will accept suresh as husband)
Abhi feels bad that he talk rudely to her, but what can he do??he was in lot of pain n could not handle this situation, he didn't had courage to face her or her marriage with someone else, so he lied, but he was feeling more guilty for behaving rude to her, so he decided that he will straight drive to Pragya n ask her to marry him, right away n he drives car very fast, n in all this he mets with accident, he was in hospital for 3days after that but he requested his sister n dad not to inform about this to Pragya ever, maybe somewhere both abhi's dad n sister knew that he loved Pragya so much that he got hurt n that's the reason behind his strange behaviour,n accident. Abhi after Pragya's marriage had kept distance not the only from Pragya but also from his family, he kept himself busy with his work all that time, whenever suresh ask him to join them he would come but within half an hour or so he would excuse himself by telling he has some work. As time passes, uncle felt very bad for both abhi n Pragya because as days, months n then years passed, he saw,that their feelings for each other clearly show that they are not happy in their respective life, here Pragya tried her best to be good, caring n loving wife but still there was something missing, though they were now emotionally n physically in relation but she was always worried about abhi n even abhi had slowly started involving in their life, specially after when suresh asked him if he could donate sperm as his count was low, abhi happily agreed,
Flashback ends
" life has given me second chance n I'm going to make most of it this time, I will love her so much that she will forget whatever happened in last 6 yrs, I will give her happiness she deserves n how can I forget about Angel, I will be best dad ever, I know she will be naughty n beautiful just like her mother"
He was thinking all this whole night, It was around 5am, when he finally went to bed,
After some time, aaliya was calling both abhi n Pragya for breakfast but only Pragya came, n aaliya told that she will call him n went to his room
"Bhai, wake up, it's already 9am, you will be late" she shouted in his ears n he very sweetly told her that he will come in 10 mins, she was surprised at this behaviour as she knew that he would get irritated by her voice but he replied nicely, this was totally opposite reaction n thinks that her Bhai must be in really good mood n leaves
At breakfast table Pragya was thinking about last night, " did he actually wink at me, unhook bra, there is something fishy" n suddenly abhi comes from behind n kisses her on cheeks,"good morning my girl" she was shocked n ask " Dr abhi, I need an explanation for this kind of behaviour, right now?," abhi as if nothing happened," why you are asking such silly questions, when you know the answers, you always know everything" n he smiles, just then aaliya comes from kitchen with breakfast, " did I miss anything, why you both are looking wired today, is anything wrong"
Pragya was trying hard not to blush," nothing is wrong with me, but it seems your Bhai has gone mad, totally mad" n fakes angry look at him," oh no, your madness has reached to last level, where patient thinks everyone around her is mad" n both abhi n aaliya laughs


Pls do comment if you'll like, it's help me to write more
Happy reading
Part 7
Edited by Maggie11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the updates in one go. Awesome update
Loved it. Continue soon please.
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Originally posted by: hailly

Read all the updates in one go. Awesome update
Loved it. Continue soon please.


I'm glad you liked all updates,
on Friday will update my other story, second innings
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that is soo nice i love it
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Wonderful update! Abhi got it all wrong...Pragya lied cleverly. When will the truth be out? So Abhi decided to give them a chance?
Abhigya past is painful. Both were not happy with their respective and life and were hurting each other thinking that would lessen their wounds. But their love is so deep and intense that they are unhappy without the other.
Thanks for PM
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Part 7 AKELE HUM AKELE TUM

As weeks passed, abhi was getting too protective n close to Pragya but she always thought otherwise, she thinks all this closeness is because he knows that she knows he is father n doing all this for Angel, as at this stage (23 weeks) Angel can feel n hear things around her, n maybe that's reason he being around all the time, she was afraid to think anything like he loves her or feels for her in other sense
Here abhi was getting inpatient, as she was not reciprocating as he thought she would react, she was talking it all wrong, she was stubborn in not thinking about as more then friend thing
Next day it was aaliya's birthday n Purab had ask Pragya to help for keeping surprise party, she didn't repeat same mistake n this time Pragya informed abhi that she is with Purab whole day for planning party for aaliya n he proposed that he will also join, he knows Purab loves aaliya but he felt uncomfortable knowing Pragya will be with him whole day, it's not that he didn't trust them but he was concerned that she may stressed herself, as he knew she will go out of way with suggestions n help Purab, they had decided dressed code for party as black n only aaliya will be wearing different colour mostly red, abhi n Purab gave her hard time to decide dress for aaliya abhi liked long grown n Purab liked little short dress, finally Pragya suggested that she will wear dress n they should decide which will look good on aaliya as both had almost same complexion n height, both laughed for longest time, as she almost forgot that she is 6 months pregnant n how will same dress fit aaliya, she got very angry n went out from store, abhi ran after her but didn't find her,it was like she vanished in thin air, he got worried n came back to Purab n said she is missing, just then he received msg from her that," don't worry, Im on my way home, n one more very important thing, I hate you" n small curve smile formed on abhi face n told Purab nothing she is alright n going home, may be we tease her too much, after sometime abhi drop Purab at his place n then reached home, it was around 10pm, when abhi went to Pragya's room
A:(knocked door) can I come in
P: (fakes anger) no, you can not
A: I'm sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you, pls open
P: no, if you were sorry then you would have come straight home but you were busy laughing on me with Purab
A:( tries to stop smiling n remember how innocently she told that she will try dress for aaliya) I said na sorry, pls let me in
P: first tell me, why you want to come inside??
A: I want to say sorry thats why
P: but you already said sorry
A: ( gets irritated) are you opening the door, or should I break it
P: ok I'm opening ( n opens door)
A: (he was mesmerised by her look, as he entered, he was stunned to look at her, she was dressed magnificently n looking like goddess, black knee length gown was looking killer on her, walks close to her n bows n ask for her hand n stands n puts his hand around her waist n brings her closer, n whispers) you look one sexy mamma, ( puts his hand on her belly n talks to Angel) your mamma is looking hot today, I'm sorry for underestimating her, can you tell your mamma to forgive me n dance with me ( kisses her on belly)
P:(went with flow) but first tell daddy, this should not repeat again (agrees to dance, abhi was surprised that she called him daddy, n thought today he will propose her, n start dancing with her, ( clipping of video how they dance,
https://instagram.com/p/BKHKqBNg7cQ/ hope you'll enjoy)
P: you know, you are mad, totally !!
A: (again comes closer) thats why you hate me
P: no, never,who told you that??
A: you did, you msg me
P: oh that, i was just annoyed so..
A: ( walks towards her again) so when you get annoyed with me, you hate me
P: yes
A: ( maintaining eye contact n intensity) n when you get happy with me, You like me
P: no, you idiot, I love you
A:( smiles) really, I didn't know that
P:( bites her lip) I mean as friends
A: ( puts his hand on her shoulder) Did I ask for explanation ??
P:( get nervous) no, but I thought you might think otherwise so...
A: ( comes so close, she started walking backwards as she was almost melted n it was getting impossible for her to resist him farther) so what's problem in that
P:( closes her eyes as if she gave up) you !! ( tear falls from her eyes)
A:( cups her face) me!
P:( all of sudden her reaction changes in anger, pushes him) yes you, it's all because of you
A: ( confused ) but, that day you n suresh, what I'm supposed to think??
P: when did your thinking became so narrow,
A: I'm sorry, I was so hurt at that time, you lied me just to meet suresh,
P: I was planning for your birthday party n you planned my marriage
A:( lost his cool n he also gets angry) me,?? You agreed for marriage,
P:what I'm supposed do?? ( starts crying) You didn't agree for marriage with me, gave ideas to uncle, that Im in love with suresh and ...
A: ( he doesn't let her complete n just pressed his lips on her to shut her up) so happy now..
P: (annoyed) so you kissed me to make me happy, that's it
A:( keeps his hands on her waist again) no I kissed you to shut you,
P: what??
A: you talk a lot, I said you sorry but you keep on babbling So I had to do something
P:(gets upset n thinks again she misunderstood him) ok, ( turns n starts walking to go down)
A:( come on abhi, you can do it) Pragya !!
P: what??
A: (gets nervous) wait I'm also coming
Both went down, it was dark
A: why it's dark already, it's still 11:45,
P: I also don't know
A: don't move from here,or you will hurt yourself or Angel, I will come in a minute
Just then lights turn on, n everyone shouts surprise, abhi turns n was shocked to see his hospital staff, n friends, n thinks,"why my friends n staff is here for aaliya's birthday surprise party"
Pragya (comes n gives side hug) happy birthday in advance
Abhi: 3 months in advance
Pragya: yes, actually I planned today evening only,
Abhi: but you were angry n then also you
P:( cuts in) so it was perfect timing, you will never suspect this surprise
A: ( gets emotional n hugs her dearly in front of everyone, though Pragya felt little uncomfortable but he did let her go only when Angel kicked her so hard that she almost shouted in pain) what happened?? Are you alright??
P: ( smiles) you almost squeezed me n Angel
Just then aaliya entered with Purab n all shouted "happy birthday "
Purab kneeled n make her wear diamond ring n proposed her in front of everyone, she was shocked, but after second she hugged him tight n said I love you too n he also said same, they cut that cake n kissed n celebration went on, here Pragya was lost in thoughts about abhi kissing her n was thinking was it dream or they really kissed, abhi comes n tap on her shoulder
A: thinking about kiss
P: yes
A: ( slide his hand around her waist n brings her closer) want to do it again
P: ( comes to reality) what ??
A: so where is my gift
P: it's on way, I mean you will get it on actual birthday
A: ok, so ...
P: so now I'm going to sleep
A: should I come to tug you in
P: ( remembers how he unhook her bra) no, I will manage
A: are you sure??
P: ( thinks, does he have any idea how I want him now, why can't he read my mind) ya im sure
A: ok, ( turns to go to aaliya)
P:( calls him) abhi,
A: yes
P: is it ok if I eat little ice cream cake today
A:(smiles at her innocence) yes but not big piece,
P: ok
A: what ok?? I don't trust you when it comes to ice cream, you go to your room, I will bring there only
P:( gets happy) ok, as you say n goes to her room, after sometime, aaliya comes to room with ice cream cake
Aaliya: here, take this, but Bhai have said only this much ok
P: ( gets sad, not because of size of piece which he send but because he didn't turn up) only this much, where is your kunjus Bhai, I'm not eating this (fakes anger)
Aaliya: Bhai is busy with his friends
Pragya: n what I am,??
Aaliya: try to understand Pragya, new friend, girl friend
Pragya:( gets impatient n jealous) must be that stupid Tanu, I should have not invited her ( pushes aaliya n walks straight to abhi)
Pragya looks at abhi everywhere but she couldn't find him, nor Tanu, n she gets restless, after sometime time she here some noise from his room, ( baby you are so cute n adorable, I was single all this time only because you were not there, it feels like it was worth waiting this long, come baby kiss me) she starts crying so loudly that abhi comes in from balcony
A: what happened?? Why are you crying
P: as if you care, you only love this new friend of yours or I must say girl friend
A: there is nothing like that
P: where is that bitch ??
A: you can't call her like that, have some respect
P: respect my foot, ( pulls abhi's shirt) why abhi ?? Why you are doing this to me
A: what have I done,?? She is so cute n light weight
P: I'm also cute, but heavy because if you, I was light some months back
A: but Pragya there is no comparison, she is different
P: do hell with different n all, she can never love you, the way I do
A: (ignores what she says) you have not met her properly thats why you are saying so, once you meet her properly then you will know how much she loves me
P: cal her out, I want to meet now
A: are you sure??
P: I'm dam sure
A: ok, wait here I will get her from balcony
P:( what the fu#**, he is going to get her from balcony as if she if can't walk herself,) how much time, come fast
A: coming first close your eyes, she is feeling shy, so pls no cheating, close your eyes
P:( how can she be so special to him in so little time) fine, I have close my eyes come fast
A: open your Pragya we are here
P:( gets frozen,she doesn't have courage to face reality n abhi with someone else n tears starts falling from her eyes) no I don't want to meet her, or see her, do hell with her
A:( holds her by shoulder) come on Pragya open you eyes
P: leave me, I don't want to see her
A: why you showing so such attitude, have you gone mad, open eyes right now, (shouts) my cupcake, I love u, pls don't go
P: this is too much,you are calling her by nick name, I can't even hear all this nonsense now, but mark my words Dr Abhishek prem Mehra, she can never love you, the way I love you, ( just then she heard someone n opened eyes) you idiot, how can you make me look fool in front of her
A: she is cute n innocent just like you (kisses her on her forehead, about to say I love you too but she pushed him)
P: how can you do this to me, specially when I'm pregnant, how can you ( continues crying)
A: pls stop crying n listen to me first
P: I don't want to listen anything anymore, how could you do this, you always knew that I have feelings for you, then why all this?? You make fun of me like this, specially in front of her ( hugs her) you are playing with her emotions also (kisses her on forehead, she in return licks Pragya face [it was small puppy that they saw today evening at pet shop when they went for shopping] abhi thinks what to do now)
A:(holds his ear) I'm sorry to both of you ladies, promise I won't repeat this kind of prank, but one good thing (moves toward Pragya) happened today you confess that you love me
P: (blushes, realised he also loves her equally but tries to change topic as she sees aaliya n Purab piping from door) one more thing, now that you only brought cupcake home, we can keep her, wow it's my best day
A:(freak outs) no, no, no, she is here just for that little act, I hate pets, you can't keep her here, no, no
P:(pouts) but you were so comfortable with her in balcony, not at all afraid
A: who said I'm afraid of puppies, it's that I just don't like them,
P: but...
A:( cuts in) no farther discussion , she can't stay here with us,( puts his hand on her tummy) Angel may get her germs, it's not good for babies to be around pets ( she was again about to bust crying) but we will gift her on Angel's first birthday, deal, now pls smile pls
P: ( gets emotional n hugs him tightly, she forgets that aaliya n Purab are standing out) I love you, I really do (kisses on cheeks)
A: (cups her face) I love you too my girl n pulls her into hug again
Aaliya n Purab entered cheering for abhi , " finally, Bhai you did it "

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Part 8
Edited by Maggie11 - 8 years ago
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wow wow wow really superb update. finally abhigya propose each other lovely update😊😛😆

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