Abhigya: AKELE HUM AKELE TUM part 10 updated

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Abhigya FF: AKELE HUM AKELE TUM
I'm starting with this new story,all I say it's about Abhigya, don't want to disclose more, I will give info of characters as they come in story, hope your Like,

An invisible thread connects those who are destined to meet, regardless of time, place or circumstances. The thread may stretch or tangled but will never break

Prologue

ABHI POV

Life is so in complete without you, or I must say ask is there life without you saying so she put her hand on tummy, lovingly talking at their unborn child, after suresh death, her only hope to leave was this baby, yes my best friend suresh died, n Pragya was his wife n my childhood friend, I still remember, that day when, Pragya came alone at my clinic, she wanted to surprise suresh with her pregnancy news,n I confirm that she was 6 weeks pregnant, but I cheated her, when even after 6years she didn't conceive, so I suggest them to under go some tests, I found that sperm count of suresh were not enough, n he didn't wanted to tell Pragya this, he knew how much she was longing for baby, n if he told her then she would never be ready to adopt child, or do IVF, so suresh requested me to help him out, I had no option then donating my sperms, Pragya was told she was having fibrosis n because of that she was not able to conceive n now it needs to operated n then everything was running smooth, until that day I called suresh n told him Pragya is pregnant , at that time I didn't knew she wanted to surprise him, I still regret that I told him, he in over excitement drive car roughly to reach home early n met with accident n Pragya still regret that she didn't even told him that soon he was going be father.
As days passed, I somehow convinced her, to stay with us ( me n my younger sister Aaliyah) as her only family was suresh, she herself was orphan n suresh parents died long back, his sister Rachana, was married last month in London, she did try to convince Pragya to come n settle there with them, but she refused saying that she wants to live here, it was almost week after Rachana left, I was very angry with her, Pragya was not taking care of herself n baby, most of time she spend in thinking about suresh n rest talking to baby. In all this she would missed meals, she was not gaining weight, getting weak day by day, when I talk to Aaliyah about her, she quickly suggest that we should bring her here with us, I literally had to emotional blackmail her to convince her to come n stay, I told her if she just for once thought me as her best friend, she has to come with me at my house, n she agreed but on one condition that she will do cooking, she loves cooking n singing, when we were in collage, she had won many singing competition , I many time asked her to make singing as her profession but she kept on saying that she sings when she is feels like n it's her hobby, she always wanted to be, writer by profession but all she wrote was about her life in her diary, she had this habit of writing diary every single day, suresh had shared with me that how he hated her this habit, when they were at their honeymoon she would write first n then gave time to him, it was like her soul, I wonder if she still writes,
My life was changed after she came here, she made sure I had my breakfast, lunch n dinner at proper time, I had stop drinking at home, I didn't wanted to drink in front of Pragya, she didn't like it, I just wanted her to be happy, that is why I brought here, she deserved to be happy, to be loved

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PRAGYA POV

Life is so in complete without you, or I must say ask is there life without you, I put my hand on my tummy, n said to my unborn child, that how only he is my last hope in my life, saying so I just remembered that day when I alone went at abhi clinic for test, yes abhi is my childhood friend, I have known him from our kindergarten days, he used to come with his father n sister on every Sunday to our orphanage, uncle Mohan used to believe that one gets happiness if one shares happiness, from that day, we became best of friends, I was bright student, so uncle was one who gave me strength to stand on my feet, n me n abhi went in same school n collage, uncle was one who got me married to suresh, he thought suresh was perfect for me, I could not denied him, after all uncle was like my dad, at first I didn't like suresh much,he was this double battery type but abhi convinced me that he is good person, well it took me almost year to fell in love with him, but still there was some gap, he didn't understand me like abhi did, they both were best friends, they met in London when abhi went for higher studies, n in those 2years they became best of buddies.
That day, abhi told me I was 6weeks pregnant, I was on cloud 9, I just hugged him n told not to tell suresh as it's going to be surprise for him, after all we had waited for this news for almost 6 years, but after abhi told we should get some test done, it was found that I was having fibrosis, n because of that I'm not able to conceive, so I got operated for that, n later conceived but my happiness short lived, suresh died in car accident n I was not able to tell him that his dream was going to come true
After few days Rachana asked me to shift with her to London, but how can I, she just got married last month, n I don't wanted to have burden on her,
As days passed, i was skulking more n more to suresh or would talk to my baby, I called him, angle, but abhi was every angry with me, I could clearly see that on his face, I was not taking care of myself or angle, I was not gaining weight, abhi was very worried, he told me to come n stay with them ( him n Aaliyah) Aaliyah was like little naughty sister for me, one day she came n request me to stay with them, I refuse her also but what she said, made me go at that very second, she told, "abhi is getting worst day by day, first he only used to miss breakfast, n then he started coming late at night n missed dinner, but now from past few days or should I say from day suresh passed away he started drinking at home also, he is not able to take all this, there is something bothering him, if you come, at least he will listen to you, you know after mom n dad passed away you n abhi is only family I have, pls I begged you come with us" n I agreed but told her that don't tell abhi, that I'm coming n she agreed, next day abhi came at my house n shouted at me n said if I ever considered him as best friend I should come with him n I said ok, after he left, I was packing my things, I saw some reports in between cloths hidden in my cupboard, which says suresh sperm count is low n can never father child, then there were some other reports of IVF, I was confused at first , but then I thought to call abhi n ask him, as all reports were of his clinic but Again I thought if reports are of his clinic n he is not telling me, then maybe suresh never wanted me to know about all this n abhi supported him in this hiding secret,so I wanted respect that n didn't ask abhi, n I search online, n came to conclusion that maybe someone donated sperm, n this pregnancy happened, n if I'm not wrong that fibrosis operation was just lie, so they can Fertilise egg, oh god, they could have told me directly
Next day I went to abhi place to stay, n put condition that I will cook, I knew he loves my cooking, I used to write everything in my dairy daily but when I got those reports I burnt my dairy, n decided will never write dairy again, I didn't wanted it to remind me that angle was not suresh baby, but my love for angle grew as he grew inside me

If I get enough likes n comments,n show you'll interest, Then I will start with chapter 1 in next post
N will post on very Monday, you'll response makes motivating me,
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ResAKELE HUM AKELE TUM
Part 1

After Pragya came abhi started drinking coffee specially made for him by Pragya, she insisted if he has to stays awake till late night, he should rather have coffe n not hard drinks,
Abhi was sitting out in balcony n with cup of coffee, n thinking about Pragya, how they met n how destiny part them away
Flashback
"Dad I want something really special for my 5th birthday, pls pls dad pls "
He said to dad making puppy face, n he agreed, He had worlds best dad, after his mom passed away while giving birth to his little sister aaliya,it's been 3years, dad gave them love of both mom n dad, he never made them realise that they don't have mom,
Next day,on his birthday, they went where his mom used to work, mount marry orphanage, it was near to their house, hardly 10 minutes walk, his mom was there as manager, but she never work for money, she was doing it, because she loves those kids,his dad also used to company her on weekends or whenever he had free time, a big smile came on his face when He saw, garden, which was decorated with balloons n ribbons, n dad shouted "surprise"
He ran to him n gave him big hug, they played lots of game with those children, now it was time to cut the cake, when He was going towards cake his eyes fell on girl, who was sitting on swing alone, she was very different from other kids, maybe she was new here, her eyes were big n so beautiful n look so innocent, He went to her
Abhi: who are you?? N why are you crying??
Pragya: I'm Pragya, you know I came here yesterday, my aunty left me at station n when that uncle (points towards his dad) found me, n bring me here
A: that uncle is my dad,
P: you are lucky to have such wonderful dad
A: yes, today is my 5th birthday n dad bring my here, this is my gift, I love this place, it reminds me of my mom
P: happy birthday,but I don't know when is my birthday
A: no worries, from today your birthday is same as my birthday ok n He took her to his dad,
"dad, look I made new friend, she is Pragya n today is her birthday also can we cut the cake together pls" He told him excitedly to his surprise his dad agreed without any question, from that day they were best of friends, He went every weekend with his dad, n would spend whole day with Pragya, they didn't made any new friend, it was always him n her, she was very bright in studies so his dad put her in abhi's school, n then it was time, they got separated, He loved science n she loves English literature, they had to go in different fields but they were lucky, they studied from different universities but had same campus, still they were always together, his dad many times ask Pragya to stay with them but she said she is comfortable in hostel, she would come on weekends n would share room with aaliya n cook wonderful meals,
Everybody in their respective collage, many friends would tease them, that they were more then friends, but Pragya would tell, " there is thin line between friends n having affair, which they would never cross,"n her that confidence, that they can never be nothing more than being friends with him, it never gave him courage to express his feeling,"
Flashback ends
He finished his last sip, he wondered that if, he showed courage just for once, his life would have been different, but how could he, even when his dad ask him if he loves Pragya, abhi denied,saying they are just friends, thinking if she don't want to think beyond being friends then how can he, if he says yes to his dad then dad will ask her, n abhi knew she will never say no to his dad, abhi didn't wanted to be in relation because of some obligation, he wanted that if she loves him, she herself will tell n express.
Here Pragya in her room, thinking she can't stay here for ever, one day she has to leave, how will she manage, what kind of job she can do to support angle, maybe she should start writing books or should take some part time job that she can do it from home, her thought were disturb by knock on door
P: abhi you, so late
A: I was going to kitchen, n saw lights were on, so came to see, is everything ok
P: ya everything is fine, I was just wondering, I should take some job, I get bored whole day,
A: all you must do is rest,
P: I hate sitting ideal at home
A: no if n buts, once baby comes, you will automatically will get busy
P: angle, I name baby angle
A: wow, beautiful name just like you
P:( maybe it's right time, I should ask him) I wanted to ask you something??
A: what ??
P: what is IVF??
A: why??
P: just tell me pls
A: it's is a process by which an egg is fertilised by spermoutside the body n The process involves monitoring and stimulating a woman's ovulatory process, removing an ovum or ova (egg or eggs) from the woman's ovaries and letting sperm fertilise them in a liquid in a laboratory n implant in woman's body
P: ok, it is done using from others sperm, I mean from any sperm donor n it is safe, I mean for baby, does any
A:( cuts in n nervously ask) but why you want to know??
P: ( looks straight into his eyes) first I thought I should not ask but I can't stop thinking about it, I found some file of your clinic at my home in suresh cupboard, which had reports about IVF n some other reports
A:( what should I do now, should I tell her, no never) maybe by mistake, suresh must have taken someone file by mistake
P:( he still doesn't want to talk about it) ya that can be possible
A: ( sorry Pragya, I had to lie) it's too late now, I think you should sleep ok good night n goes
Month passed, she was around 15 weeks, her baby bump was showing, Pragya was watching herself in mirror, gazing at her bump, just then aaliya enters
Aaliya: so how are you feeling today, Bhai told me that, you were away till late night, is everything ok
P: ya, but how did he came to know, he didn't came,
A: Bhai, came when you were sitting on arm chair holding angle, is he started kicking
P: no, but I feel like butterfly flying in my tummy
A: really( puts hand on her tummy) I don't feel it
P: you will, maybe next month
A: come let's have breakfast, Bhai is already down waiting for us
P: ok let's go
At breakfast table, abhi was continuously looking at Pragya
P: what?? Why are you staring at me
A: you have still not finished milk, you didn't had yesterday night also, I saw you put it in washbasin
P: first of all, stop spying on me like that, I can take care of myself n angle n second of all I hate milk, I feeling like vomiting special at night ok
A: that's it ( gets up n takes glass n stand next to her) have it or I'm putting this whole glass on your head
P:( stands immediately ) ouch ( holds her tummy in pain)
A: oh god, you are such a drama queen, this all you do when I ask you to drink milk
Aaliya: stop it Bhai, she is really in pain
A: really, ( he puts his had in on tummy) it seems fine to me, n this is going to happen if she starts behaving like 5yr old, she should understand I'm doing all this for her n not for me,
P:( looks at him lovingly) ok I will have it, n both of you stop arguing n drinks
Abhi: that like my girl
Aaliya: wow, your girl
Both abhi n Pragya look at each other
Abhi( try's hard not to blush but clearly shows on his face) shut up, don't you getting late for your collage
Pragya:( after some many days I hear him saying that's my girl n smiles) ya aren't you getting late for clinic ( looks at abhi)
Abhi: Pragya you also come with me today, remember today is your ultra sound n have to done blood test also n all three leaves
As they drop aaliya to collage n as they reach at At clinic, abhi does ultra sound n tear formed in corner of his eyes, today he get to know it's girl, n thinks it should be just like Pragya
P: ( notice that n calls him just to annoy) hello, are you there, DR abhi Mehra, pls tell
A: oh yes, everything is just perfect
P: it's girl or boy
A: sorry it's against law, I can't tell you
P: ok, but if I guess correct you will take me out for ice cream today
A: no, we can go out for dinner but no ice cream for you, you already have cold
P: ok, so it's ( thinks for while) BOY
A: no, you lose, but still I will take you for dinner
P: ( naughtily ) caught you, it's girl, I knew it, it's girl
A: not fair, you trick me
P: ( over excited) everything is fair in love n war ( suddenly her face drops n gets sad)
A: ( cups her face) suresh will be so happy, he once told me that he would love to have girl child
P:( try to control her tears) I know that, I was so selfish that for my surprise I didn't tell him, that I was pregnant
A:( how can I tell you, he already knew that) pls Pragya don't curse yourself for that, ok ( hugs her)
P: is doing angle fine, when will I feel her in my arms
A: it will take some more time, just take proper care of yourself n she will be fine
P: thanks abhi, without you, what will I do, thanks for being there for me, promise I will do as you say, I do those boring yoga n drink milk ok
A: ( kisses on forehead) you know, you will be best mom
P: really, you think so, I can manage
A: yes 100%, n even if not, I'm there for you always ok n Pragya leaves to go home
Late in evening, she was waiting for abhi, but he didn't came, it was almost 10, Pragya calls abhi, just then he came
P: why are you so late
A: had an emergency operation, sorry to keep you waiting, let's go for dinner
P: no, you must be tired, I will quickly make something,we will have dinner at home, you go n freshen up
A: ok, n aaliya
P: she called n said she is having dinner out with his friends
A: friend or boy friend, she is having lunch n dinner out quite often nowadays
P:( from kitchen) stop being historical, she is grown up now ok
After sometime abhi comes for dinner
A: wow, what you made?? It smells delicious
P: masala khichdi, I know you like it
A: like it, aare I love it, thanks you made my day
P: ok, what were you telling about aaliya
A: seriously, is she with friends or boy friend??
P: what difference does it makes, she is grown up, she knows what right n what's wrong
A: she should know were to draw line,
P: she knows, but what wrong in having someone who is more then a friend
A: ( gets impulsive) really Pragya, you are telling that
P: what wrong in me telling this
A: ( rises tone) you yourself never think anything beyond friends, and
P: ( cuts in) we are talking about aaliya n not me
A:all I was saying is everybody is not sorted in life like you, your never just for moment thought that there can be someone, more then just friends ( realised what he said) I don't want aaliya to get hurt, do she has boyfriend n don't lie, I know she tells you everything
P: it's between me n her, I can't share with you n end of discussion ok
A: ok, so want to go out for ice cream
P: no let it be, let's call it night, will go some other day
A: are you sure, look I'm sorry if I hurt you, I didn't mean to say
P:( cuts in) pls didn't say sorry, it's ok, I know you are worried for her, but trust me there is nothing like that, she is with her friends n I will make sure, next time she inform both of us ok
A: ok , goodnight n both goes to their room, n standing out in balcony in their respective rooms

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Edited by Maggie11 - 9 years ago
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do continue dear it's like both secretly loved them but not confessed abt it.. Looking interesting yar.. Pls 1st just complete ur previous 2ff & start doing this yar.. u never miss Suresh rite anyhow u just add him not for major but imp role..
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Originally posted by: SaraPriya

do continue dear it's like both secretly loved them but not confessed abt it.. Looking interesting yar.. Pls 1st just complete ur previous 2ff & start doing this yar.. u never miss Suresh rite anyhow u just add him not for major but imp role..



Ya about other 2FF, love by chance only last part is there to post n agar tum saath Ho, 2-3 parts are left
By next week both FF will finish
N in this FF, both abhi n Pragya may have feelings secretly, but do they themselves know is big question
N yes suresh is my fav character, hope someday I write FF with suresh n Pragya in lead n abhi with grey character 😊
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Woah Maggie. Abhi as sperm donor...woot, woot. So, technically Pragya's child is Abhi's child...hmmm...interesting. go on. Am waiting.
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Originally posted by: hutanbandar

Woah Maggie. Abhi as sperm donor...woot, woot. So, technically Pragya's child is Abhi's child...hmmm...interesting. go on. Am waiting.


Abhi is gynaecologist, n yes he donate sperm as suresh wanted to kept it secret, involvement of any other person would create problem, n most of all abhi was his best friend n he could trust him blindly
Glad you like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u maggie for making suresh pragya jodi love u 😳
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I have updated part 1 on pg 1
Happy reading
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hey maggie
nice start
i liked aaliya alot she is sweet😊
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Originally posted by: mrunalinip

hey maggie

nice start
i liked aaliya alot she is sweet😊


Ya me too I like her, in this story she plays Cupid role

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