Abhigya ss part 3 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This ss is on current state.
It starts from when abhi shouted at pragya for betraying him.
Abhi:I can't beleive pragya u can do this.How can u do this? U didn't even feel ashamed before doing this.And he continoued his blah...blah..
Pragya was standing like a statue.Everyone stood silent.Pragya hopes that may be dadi stop him and tells him the truth but no one interfere.She just looked with teary eye.And went to her room.
In room,Pragya was on her peak of anger.First time in life she was this much angry.She started breaking things.Some of glass made things hurt her but she neglect her.
When she was breaking things she found drinks.She started drinking.She almost drinks 1.5.She breaks the bottle and hurts herself.
When they listen breaking voice they rushes to see her.But door was locked.Daadi asked her to open the door.She just simply replied I will not do sucide so please everyone leave.But actually she was hurting herself with minor cuts on her arms,foot.And was continuosly saying that Ab hua dard (Now u feel pain).
After sometime,abhi enters through balcony.And saw her.He rushes towards her.And shouted at her
Abhi :What have u done?pragya..
But pragya was unconcious.He just picked her.And lay her down on bed.And bandage her arms and foot.He just look with teary eyed.
He sprinkles water on her face.She gained counciessness and again started saying now u feel pain.Abhi was shocked that she drinks this much.
Pragya opens her eyes and sees him and says
Pragya:Do u know i am chracterless,shamless girl.Who always cheat her husband.She never do good deeds.She always cares for her happiness not others.
Abhi was listening to her with tearyeyes
Pragya continued :And u know one thing i always lies with my family.,friends,husband.Everyone,in this world.I am greedy,very greedy.Do u know i married to u for ur fame,money.Not for my mother.I always take care of ur family only for that u never leave me not for goodness that my mother has taught me.I am charcterless who always cheated her husband and spent night with others and then aborts childs.I always lies with other for myself not for preventing my husband from his enimies.
And when abhi was shocked.
Pragya:I comes in mogambo avatar just for property not for fulfilling daadi promise.why i am alive till now?I should have died na.W hen she said she will die abhi put his finger on her lips silencing her.
Abhi just hugged her.But she was not in a state because she drinks heavily and she has hurts herself and she talked too much.And she faints.Abhi becomes tensed.He sprinkles water on her face but there was no reaction.He just picked her and take her to hospital.
In hospital,Docter examines her and said that she drinks too much which effects her very much.While seeing her arms saying ,She is already very weak.And she loses this much blood.Now,i had given some injections.I hope she will be better till tommorow.And left.Abhi just sat beside her and thinks her sayings.He just feel ashamed of himself.Suddenly,he remembers the condition of his room.So he asked staff to take care of her.And he will be back in half an hour.
To be continued...
I hope u guys like it.This is my first attemtp.So please for give me for mistakes.😊



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Ayten22 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
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And suggest me the suitable title.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hy its awesome ...
Its good that pragya ran to her room ... She got drunk n physically harm herself
I liked how abhi showed concern towards her i hope abhi will now start to believe her 😭
Do continue soon yawr n for the title i will suggest THE DECISION TO TRUST
😛 ignore if u dont like
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manocat

Hy its awesome ...

Its good that pragya ran to her room ... She got drunk n physically harm herself
I liked how abhi showed concern towards her i hope abhi will now start to believe her 😭
Do continue soon yawr n for the title i will suggest THE DECISION TO TRUST
😛 ignore if u dont like

Thank you so much .I really like ur suggestiion.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was great, I can't wait to read what happens next. Please PM me when you update. I liked how Abhi is affected by what she says. I hope Abhi doesn't break that trust and belief with Pragya.
Edited by deepa1121 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that is amazing part 1 plzz continued soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
Abhi reaches home.And quickly clean his room so that no one knows about it.Then he picks pragya night dress(which she wears nowadays).He was going back to hospital when she heard some sounds.Sounds were coming from daadi"s room.He saw purab,racho and akash there.And he listened there talks.He was stepping inside when pragya came in his mind.So he left to hospital.
In morning,pragya getting counciessness.She was feeling yery pain in her body.When she tried to get up.Abhi imediately helps her(as he was entering into the room).He calls docter.Docter checks her and ask abhi to come to his cabin.
In docters cabin
dr;Abhi just take care of her.She is not well.She is very weak.Please stay her away from stress.Abhi this mental stress may lead her to brain tumour.
Abhi becomes tensed.He asked docter to take her to home.Docter allows him.Meanwhile,abhi takes pragya to home.
After parking car,he lifts pragya and enters into the mansion.(in whole scene pragya remains silent).As he enters everyone rushes towards them.As al were wainting for them.But he ignores eyeryone and left to his room.Tanu was fuming in anger.
To be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Please contact soon
And pm me if you do
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was great!! I hope Pragya doesn't get brain tumor!!! Please PM me when you update!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3
Abhi takes pragya to room and lay her down.Then he sits with her and take her hand in his hands.And asks her to speak.But she was expressionless.He requests her to speak.(pragya kuch to bolo ,please pragya tumhara ye chup rehna mujje mar de ga).
Pragya remains silent.
Abhi:pragya mai janta hu mai ne tumhe bohat takleef di hai.Pragya mai tumhara guahgar hu.Pragya mai tum se pyar karne ka dawa to karta hu magar aisa pyar jahan mai ne tum par yakeen nahi kiya.Iss leye mujhe ye kehne ka koi haq nahi hai ke mai tumhe deserve karta hu.pragya...
Pragya:Ap jante he ke jab meri tarun se shaddi ho rahi thi to uss ne yeh keh kar ke mai khobsurat nahi houn shadi tor di.Mai ne uss din bhi khud ko sambhal kar rakha.jo dard tha sara apne dil me daba liya.Mujhe aisa lagta tha ke mujhe suresh se pyar hai lekin uss ne bhi mera dil tor diya.Uss waqt bhi mai khamoosh rahi.Ap se shadi hui to laga ke ab sub kuch theek ho jaye ga magar ...khair.Ap ka wo torture apni behan ke leye tha.Mujhe nahi maloom kab muje ap se pyar ho gya.Mai ne kabhi kisi bhi cheez ke leye shakait nahi ki.Phir tanu ka masla.Agar wo ap ka bacha hota to mai kabhi bhi ye sab kuch na karti anpni kismat samajh kR ap ki shaadi karwa dete.Lekin jis din mujhe maloom hua ke wo bacha ap ka nahi hai tou mera accident ho gya aur phir mogambo ka drama.Lekin mujhe lagta tha ke ap kam az kam mere character par kabhi shuk nahi kare ge lekin mai hamesha ki tarha ghalat thi.Mujhe asli khushi ka matlab bhool gaya hai balke khushi kiya hoti hai wo bhool gaya.(in whole scene was looking at her with guilty eyes)
Everybody was listening to them outside the door.
Abhi started to cry loudly and hug her said meray paas koi alfaz nahi hai pragya kuch kehne ke leye.Pragya...mai tum se pyar karta hu mai such mai karta hu lekin...sari ghalti meri hai mai tumharey qabil hi nhi hu
Pragya:just broke the hug and looked at him
Abhi;Kuch mut kehna Har bar tum meri ghalti pe mujhe maaf kar deti hu na lekin aj tum aisa nahi karo gi
He lifts pragya and opens door.Everyone looking here and there and he asks everybody to come downstairs.And started shouting tanu...
He helps pragya to sit on sofa..
Abhi:slaps tanu hard and calls police and media
After sometime media and police comes asks police to arrest tanu and her boyfriend and explains tanu crime to media.Police was taking her when he said
Abhi:ruko ye dekh kar jao he takes sindoor and mangulsitar and put kumkum on her forehead and around her neck.Then kiss her on her forehead.And said ye meri biwi thi he aur rahe gi.And then said take her away.
Then he kneeled down infront of pragya and propose her.
The end.
It depends on u guys whether u won't pragya to accept or not.
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