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-jaya-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hello Nive that was lovely cute os... I haven't thought they will be married until u mentioned at the last... I thoroughly enjoyed it.. 👏 ⭐️ ❤️

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-Nive-

@-Nive-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: jaydp59
Hello Nive that was lovely cute os... I haven't thought they will be married until u mentioned at the last... I thoroughly enjoyed it.. 👏 ⭐️ ❤️

Thank you JD!!

End should be happy and surprising na?! 😉😆

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-Nive-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ganganavya
Amazing loved it

Thank you 😊

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Naina

@Naina-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

NIVU! That was a beautiful AU!!

First of all, I loved how "she" didn't need a name. It wasn't important to identify who she was; he just wanted to share what she was to him. I found that pretty romantic 😳

Very interesting what qualities you chose about her. Mostly very unlike Pragya! She loves music because its less emotionally invested than films. Pragya not wanting to be too emotional is so new to read about!! And she's lazy about dressing up! This Pragz seems so carefree, balanced, at peace with her life and herself. LOVE IT!

She drinks, flirts, dances, travels...again, this Pragz needs to be introduced to show Pragz!! Please and thank you!

Nivs, you know I love when people describe wardrobe in detail, right? I LOVEE the saree description. I'm already in KKB heaven right now. Cute how he had underdressed assuming she would too loll!

LAST PARAGRAPH WAS THE BEST! His possessiveness and her affirmation to his claim was just ❤️

I absolutely positively loved it. Every paragraph. Every sentence. Thank you for sharing Nivs- your writing makes me so happy!!

Edited by Naina- - 9 years ago

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berrysweet

@berrysweet

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This is beautifully written . Fabulous!
but can you tell me wats an AU?😛

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-Nive-

@-Nive-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: berrysweet
This is beautifully written . Fabulous!
but can you tell me wats an AU?😛

Thank you 😊

AU means alternate universe. Used to write something that is not happening/wouldn't happen in the show but we can imagine it to happen.. like an answer to 'what if' questions.. what if she was like this? What if he was like this? What if they were in a different situation?

Hope I was able to explain you 😊

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-Nive-

@-Nive-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Naina, Thank you for reading and making highlights out of the story. 🤗

It's actually a part of one of that 'close to my heart' story series. I am glad you loved this. 😊

P.S. I was thinking just about you when I wrote about her wardrobe. I mean you have already told that you love it when people describe wardrobe.

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

something different and interesting loved it

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Badbuddy

@Badbuddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Loved it. It's beautiful. SHE is different. She loves music but don't want to watch film? She loves to flirt, aww.. loves to dance in every occasion. Doesn't want to wear jewellery being lazy. She is so carefree, so lively. And HE loves her. But wore saree and jewellery that day. I thought they were not married and she was going to propose him that day, so wore saree that day.
But they were already married.
Anyway, loved it. It's unique but lovely.

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-Nive-

@-Nive-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha
something different and interesting loved it

Thank you 😊

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