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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update . Loved it.
Continue soon.plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks you'll for lovely response, it really motivated me to write more
will soon update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi everyone
i am mrunalini
i am new to this form
i love reading fan-fictions here
and i am a big fan of kumkum bhagya(abhigya)😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 8

Tanu: if you are sleeping here, then where is Abhi???
Pragya:(hearing abhi's name, she woke up) there was no one when I came
Tanu: when you came ??
Pragya:(worried, she can't tell truth, Tanu may take it in different sense) I came around 5am, no one was there in my room, why was he in my room
Tanu: actually, I accidentally drop glassware box on him, so his shoulder was paining n he didn't wanted drive at night, n wanted to sleep here only, I thought you are anyway sleeping at bulbul place, n ask him to sleep
Pragya: ok, Just then Pragya phone rings, "hi, good morning, where are you??" Ask Aaliya
Pragya: I'm at home
Aaliya: did you forget, I asked you to go abhi's place, first thing in morning
Pragya: I know, I just woke up n give me 10 minutes, I will be there
Aaliya: hello, no need to come at my place, just get ready n go, I will join later, ok bye n call ends
Tanu: who's call
Pragya: it was aaliya, I'm going out with her
Tanu: ok, I will be late today also, you take care.
After that incident, Tanu's point of view changed towards Pragya, she was concerned about her n didn't talk rude to her, " yes, I will" said Pragya giving her side hug n both leaves
As Pragya reached, MM, she was really nervous to face dadi, she knew, dadi would definitely ask about her behaviour on that day, as she entered, dadi called her, from dining area
Dadi: hello beta
Pragya: (takes dadi blessing) Namastey
Dadi: how are you feeling today
Pragya: better
Dadi: come have breakfast with us
Pragya:(her eyes were still searching Abhi) no dadi I already had
Dadi: come on, you won't get fat
Pragya:(smiles) ok, here abhi's clothes n gives bag
Dadi:(ask robin to call Abhi) so tell me what happened to you to other day
Pragya:(nervous) nothing
Dadi: tell me, pls don't hide from me, I know you are not that kind of girl, I have seen you right from day you were born, I know you inside out so trust me I won't tell anyone
Pragya: (tears in her eyes n hugs dadi) actually, dadi you don't like Tanu, so I thought by doing this, you will like Tanu n hate me
Dadi:( laughs) arre mera beta, I can never hate you (kisses her on forehead), I don't like Tanu is true but I don't hate her as person, it's just I like you more, just then Abhi comes n tells dadi, he has some important meeting to attain n he is already late, he completely ignores Pragya n leaves
Pragya:( feels really sad, she didn't wanted to show that in front of dadi) dadi I will also take leave
Dadi: but promise me you won't drink again, n Pragya smiles leave without giving any promise to dadi
It was around 4pm, Pragya was drinking ( yes today she was drinking during day, she was really upset that Abhi completely ignored her, she thought even after seeing her there, right in front of him, he just walks off)
Door bell rang, Pragya went to open door, she was standing there right in front of Abhi, in misbelief, she was shocked or maybe thinking she is just day dreaming about him, how he be here at this hour, by the time she comes to her senses, he was already making himself comfortable n sitting on sofa, she turned n saw Abhi on sofa, she came near him, there was complete silence, n finally Abhi broke silence
Abhi: hi ( she still standing like statue)
Abhi: (waving his hand) hi
Pragya: ( embarrassed for way she was behaving from last 5 minutes n instantly tells) Tanu is not here
Abhi: fine I will wait here, till she comes back
Pragya: ok ( about to go to her room)
Abhi: you forget your clothes (Pragya actually checking herself n looks at Abhi in confusion)
Pragya: but
Abhi:(controls his laugh) take this (gives her bag, her clothes, she left when she was at his place)
Pragya:(takes quickly) thanks
Abhi: so you drink
Pragya: ( she wanted to avoid any conversation with him, as she was very nervous) coffee, you want coffee
Abhi: fine,
she goes to kitchen, after sometime she comes with cinnamon coffee n gives him
Abhi: (takes sip, n closed his eyes) wow, it's nice
Pragya:(blushes) you have it, I will be right back
It's been almost an hour she didn't came out from her room, Abhi was switching channels on TV,
Abhi: (called her) fuggie, but there was no answer, so he again called her
Pragya:(comes quickly) do you want anything
Abhi: no
Pragya: then why
Abhi: (holds her hand n insisted to sit) have sit, I'm getting bored, let's talk
Pragya: wait I will call Tanu (about to call her)
Abhi: I already called, she will be here in one hour
Pragya: ( doesn't wanted to make fool out of herself, she was drunk, not that much but enough, that she may get carried away with words). sorry, i can't give you company, I have to study n again goes to her room
It was around, 8pm when she came out, n saw Abhi still sitting n watching tv, she goes to kitchen n makes something to eat along with coffee n sits on dining table
Pragya: come, have something
Abhi: no thanks,
Just then Tanu arrives,
Abhi: let's go Tanu,
Tanu: but I just came, let me fresh up, then will leave
" he loves Tanu so much, he was waiting for her for 3hrs "thought Pragya n then looks down at food she made specially for Abhi
Both of them leaves, Pragya takes food, n sit on sofa at same spot Abhi was sitting, she makes her drink n sleeps there only after sometime
Next day, n day after that, there was same scene, he would come around 4pm wait for Tanu till she comes n again leaves, Pragya didn't even try to talk to him, n whenever he did,she would give excuses that I have to study or have some work n go to her room most of time, for Pragya, Abhi was her sister's boyfriend, she didn't wanted to create any problems between them.
Today was 4th day, Pragya didn't even wanted to wake up today as last night, she didn't sleep, she was feeling restless, jealous ( for the first time, she was jealous of Tanu) she had decided she will go at bulbul place by 3pm, so if he comes today, she would not face him, as day by day it was getting difficult to ignore him, she wanted to talk so many things, about her feelings,his feelings, their first encounter, why he still remember her, does he likes her, all questions made it impossible for her to sleep through night. Finally She woke up, because of continuous sound of doorbell, she was really irritated by that, goes to open door. On seeing Abhi, she shuts door on his face in complete anger, as soon as she closed door, she hears Abhi shouting in pain n she opens again, actually she didn't notice his leg was between door when she closed it but she ignores him.
Abhi:( shouts at her) what is wrong with you
Pragya: ( even in louder voice) everything (goes to her room n bangs door)
Abhi:(as usual sits on sofa, switch on tv) fine
Pragya:( comes out, taking tv remote) sound of TVs, is disturbing my sleep
Abhi: ( takes his mobile n start playing game) ok
Pragya:(annoyed) you can leave n Tanu is not here, she is gone for few days for ad shoot
Abhi: I know
Pragya: what?? Don't tell me you are going to wait here till she comes
Abhi: I'm not mad like you n she only asked me to keep watch on you because of your drinking problem
Pragya:( totally surprised) n you just came here, you could call n check
Abhi: ( making innocent face) I don't have your number
Pragya:( now speechless) ok, I will give you, but leave after that
Abhi:(acting) I can't, my leg is paining, I think its swollen, I can't move
Pragya: stop being dramatic, it's looks perfectly fine to me
Abhi: it's really painful
Pragya:(still ignoring) then suit yourself, n don't disturb me
Abhi:( still sitting shamelessly n ask pouting) do you have any ice pack
Pragya: (in no mood to talk) no, n there is no ice in fridge
Abhi: ( gets angry) you are purposely ignoring me
Pragya: so do you,( she meant for past 3days he had been ignoring her n then changes her tone) I mean, you are purposely annoying me


Pls leave comments if you'll like it
Happy reading


Edited by Maggie11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice one , Maggie :)
U stopped at the interesting moment !! Waiting for the next !!

Ty for the pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
OMG! Eagerly waiting for next chapter.
I loved ur story. And now waiting for next.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
that is great update i like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Well, sadly, that Prag is drinking ... When Abhi remember her ... 😕
Edited by olushka2924 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Omg cnt wait for another one yaar.. awesome done well perfect will equal ego of both.. I think upto they 2 get normal then tanu will turn to totally negative.. I think some of purpose 1st ignored pragya but he cnt b continued so started to look at her but now it's time for thr convo of everything...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
was a super-duper update..
eagerly waiting for abhigya real convo..

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