FF: ENAMOURED last part 14 updated p13

FF : Enamoured 4/4/16

Characters:

Abhishek mehera (Abhi): 27 rockstar, only child of Mr prem mehera n leaves with his dadi, his parents died when he was 10, his loves Tanu.

Pragya Metha: 21 studying college n loves Abhi secretly, younger step sister of Tanu, her mom n dad died when she was 14 n tanu's mom takes her responsibility ( it's then Tanu's mom came to know about her husband affair but she thought what was Pragya' s fault in all this n she accepts Pragya as her own daughter)

Tanu Metha: 26 struggling model, self-centred. her mom died few months back (it was natural death) but she blames Pragya for that, n hates her.

Purab: 21studying with Pragya n her best friend loves bulbul n leaves in hostel, he is orphan, adopted by Mr Sunil Khanna ( after divorce he didn't wanted to marry again, but wanted heir n someone to live for)

Bulbul Arora: 21 studying with Pragya aaliya younger sister n loves Purab.

Aaliya Arora: 29 fashion designer n abhi's best friend n their neighbour leaves with bulbul, their parents leaves in Delhi.


Teaser

"I love you Abhi ,"saying that she slides her hand near his thighs, n moves closer towards his lips, "stop it Tanu," he said, making it clear that he is in no mood for any pleasure." What's your problem we are in love, it's ok if we get physical" saying, she again tried to get close but Abhi holds her hands n tells her "pls Tanu, no physical thing ok, we are dating, n that does mean we cross our limits, I don't like all this before marriage, You are getting my point, right??"
"Stop acting like some bahanji who would do only on her first night," she was angry (she thinks, he just sleeps with me once, then I will make sure, I get so much publicity n limelight) "it's getting late, I will take a leave,"said Abhi without looking at her, but Tanu insisted to have wine. "so many times I have told you I don't drink" saying, this he stormed out from Tanu's apartment n he started driving, it was raining heavily n wipers of his car moving even faster, suddenly his car hit something. He stopped n prayed that it should not be any living thing, to his horrors, it was indeed a girl, in her early 20s
He hurried her to his car, n drivers to his home
he shouts for robin, when he reached.
"Help me take her to guest bedroom",saying that both took her upstairs n slowly put her on bed
"Should I call doctor,"asked Robin
"No need, I will take care, you go n bring limewater ok n make it fast," Abhi looks at he,
She smelled alcohol, may be she was drunk heavily n forced to have hard drink.Then he noticed she was all soaked up due to rain, he calls, Radha (Servent) gives his pair of night wear to change her.




Would you'll like to know what happens next???
I Will post 1 chapter, if I get enough feedback, which will motivate me to write further
Everything is welcomed your like or dislike or suggestions
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i love how the characters are set up

Whoo ho a new story. I will surly love this.

very different relationship of the characters...would love to read...continue soon...

Thanks to all for liking it
Will post 1part soon

Enamoured

Part 1

"Bottoms up", saying that she finished her drink in one gulp.
Bulbul: here she go again, Purab, should we talk to Tanu about her, she is getting worst day by day
Purab: no, tanu will just add problem to Pragya's life, ever since aunty passed away, Tanu behaviour is changed towards her, she thinks Pragya is responsible for aunty' death. I think
It's Better, if you talk to aaliya, Pragya feels aaliya as her elder sister, she will listen to her
Bulbul: but she is out of town n come back in 5days
Pragya: I think we should meet tomorrow also, it's getting late, I'm going
Bulbul: wait Pragya, it's your house, we will leave ok bye take care n bulbul n Purab leaves
Pragya taking her mobile in her hands, talks to herself, I have loved you beyond myself, but I think it's not enough, I know it's one sided but it's pure n she doze off
Next day morning Tanu knock at Pragya's room door, n yelled,"cleanup, today it's my turn, my friends are coming over, they would probably sleep here, so manage yourself to sleep else were, I'm leaving, by the time I come back, I should not see you here, got it"
Pragya was still sleepy, but just heard my turn, my friends, manage yourself.
daily same scenario n only exchange of words between to sisters after their mom, passed away. Pragya would soak herself in alcohol, almost every night. Pragya gets n freshen up then goes to college, after reaching there, she straight goes to principle office, she request mr Patil, to allow her to finish her graduation through correspondent. Mr Patil agrees as she was brilliant student, n he somewhere knew, that Pragya was going through to much stress lately Pragya thanks him, n leaves from there n goes to beach.
She spends whole day there, thinking what all happened in last few months.
At same time, in late evening at Tanu's house
Bell rings, Tanu adjusted her essentials, n opens the door, "hey Abhi, come in" n she shows him couch to sit, "wait I will be right back"
She goes in, n spears mouth freshener n again adjust her essentials, brings water for Abhi.
" no thanks, nice house, specially those carnations flowers, I love them" he said looking at beautifully arranged flowers( by Pragya)
" thanks for compliment, come will show you whole house " n she holds Abhi hand, shows him all rooms, except Pragya's
"Wow Tanu, you have maintained your house so well, I'm impressed " said Abhi. Tanu smile halfheartedly n suggest to watch some movie
Both sat on couch, started watching movie
Abhi was bit uncomfortable, as Tanu would purposely touch him n then make some excuse.
Tanu kept on giving hints but Abhi was not getting it or he was not interested in all this. Suddenly Tanu holds abhi's hand ,"love you Abhi" saying that she slides her hand near his thighs, n moves closer towards his lips, "stop it Tanu," finally he said it, making it clear that he is in no mood for any pleasure." Tanu could not control now, "What's your problem, we are in love, it's ok if we get physical" saying, she again tried to get close but Abhi holds her hands n tells her "pls Tanu, no physical thing ok, I know, we are dating, but that doesn't mean we cross our limits, I don't like all this before marriage, You are getting my point, right??"
"Stop acting like some bahanji who would do only on her first night," she was angry (she thinks, if he sleeps with me just once, then I will make sure, I get so much publicity n limelight) "it's getting late, I will take a leave,"said Abhi without looking at her, but Tanu insisted to have wine. "so many times I have told you, I don't drink" saying, this he stormed out from Tanu's apartment n he started driving, it was raining heavily n wipers of his car moving even faster, suddenly his car hit something. He stopped n prayed that it should not be any living thing, to his horrors, it was indeed a girl, in her early 20s
He hurried her to his car, n drivers her to his home, he shouts for robin, when he reached.
"Help me take her to guest bedroom",saying that both took her upstairs n slowly put her on bed
"Should I call doctor,"asked Robin
"No need, I will take care, you go n bring limewater ok n make it fast," Abhi looks at her,
She smelled alcohol, may be she was drunk heavily n forced to have hard drink.Then he noticed she was all soaked up due to rain, he calls, Radha (Servent) gives his pair of night wear ask Radha to change her clothes.


Pls leave comments if you'll like it
Happy reading

Its so sad to see the stress pragya is going through and tanu's behavior towards pragya is not good at all ...loved this abhi who doesn't want to cross his limit before marriage its very nice ...continue soon

tanu is so rood to pragya

Thus is great.

Hi dear, read the treaser and first part and it's really amazing. Thanks for pm me dear. Please continue soon.