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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5

Pls pls, n she woke up from her dream," oh god, Pragya what were you thinking, don't you know if you wakeup Abhi then he will know you were with him last night n she went in the room to check if he is still in room, just then dadi came n knocked, Pragya run back to balcony n Abhi opened the door, dadi was shocked to see Abhi
Dadi: Abhi you
Abhi: then for whom you came to wakeup
Dadi: no I mean
Abhi: you were expecting someone else
Dadi: no, I was telling Abhi you are getting late, you were supposed to go to airport to receive aaliya, don't you remember??
Abhi: ( he looks at watch) oh no, dadi her must have landed by now
Dadi: ( avoid further questions) you must to to her place n surprise her
Abhi: ( hugs) dadi you are really sweet heart n takes coffee from her hand n goes towards balcony,It started raining, again Abhi saw someone, running from his garden then crossing gate n she sat in taxi, I'm thinking too much or fuggie was here today, or is she same, no no Abhi what the hell are you thinking n turns towards bedroom, n takes mobile to call aaliya, just then mobile screen flashes name BB, who is this BB but receives call, before he says hello, bulbul start yelling," this is not done, its second time in this week, that you went missing whole night, this time I'm going to take you to those alcohol addiction Center, you spoiling your life for that Ab..., he cuts between n says, "bulbul is that you" she cuts the as she also recognise his voice, oh god dose that mean yesterday also she was with him" Abhi was totally confused, " Am I seeing n hearing things, or its actually happening, I will b mad, if I keep on thinking like this, I think I should talk to aaliya about everything happening from past few days, may be she will help me understand, what is happening to me"
Pragya reached, Tanu met her at the entrance of their building, " God, you are alright,( hugs her) listen I have photo shoot, will late but I want you home at night"says that she left. Pragya was feeling restless n went to Bulbul's house
Pragya: hey,
Aaliya: hey, what's this
Pragya: nothing, just comfortable clothing, where is bulbul ???
Aaliya: she is in washroom, have breakfast with me
Pragya: no thanks, ( lays on swing in living room n she is dose off)
Bulbul: she looks so innocent when she is sleeping
Aaliya: what do you mean by that, she is innocent
Bulbul: no Didi, she is mad, mad about abh...
Just then door bell rings, it's Abhi
Aaliya: hey come in
Abhi:hey, hi bulbul
Aaliya: I was waiting for you at the airport but you didn't come
Abhi: sorry, I over slept today
Bulbul: seriously, I thought you are early riser
Abhi: it happens, but did you call me, sometime back
Bulbul: I didn't call anybody
Abhi: ok, I thought you did
Bulbul: did anyone called you, talking my name
Abhi: it's just, I don't know how my got exchange n some female was shouting n tell that she will admit her friend at alcohol addiction Center, her friend has not come home whole night
Bulbul: show your phone ( Abhi gives his phone n bulbul smartly exchange it with Pragya's phone) but it looks like your phone only, it's having your n dadi pic as wallpaper
Abhi: ( completely shocked) how is that possible, it was like, oh my god I'm really getting crazy
Bulbul:(chuckles) I think you are already crazy
Aaliya:(gives side hug to Abhi) pls don't irritate my poor baby, don't you see he is already so confused, lost, n I must say crazy
Abhi: I'm going I don't want to talk to you both (he turns n sees someone is sleeping on swing),who is she??
Bulbul: my best friend
Abhi: ok, i will see you'll at dinner
Aaliya: you come here only for dinner
Abhi: ok fine, I will there by 8 n goes home
After sometime Pragya woke up n ask bulbul for lemon water,
Bulbul:( gives lemon water) so again you were at Abhi place
Pragya: was just coincidence, dadi met me at temple n she invited for dinner ( tells her everything except sharing bed with him n what happened next) n then I was sleeping in balcony
Aaliya heard everything
Aaliya: how do you know Abhi??
Pragya: we were neighbors when I was in Delhi 7yrs back
Aaliya: do you love him
Bulbul:( in over excitement) yes she loves him to death
Aaliya: does he knows about your feelings???
Pragya: Di, it's nothing like that, bulbul is mad, He may not even remember me, I like him, but just as friend
Aaliya:ok, what are your plans for tonight
Pragya: nothing, will have dinner with Tanu
Aaliya: no, you will have dinner with us tonight n calls Tanu n says,"hi, Pragya is going stay here, with us tonight, if you want, join us" to that Tanu says," you'll carry on, I have plans for tonight " n ends the call,
Pragya: ok fine, I will go n fresh up n goes home
Same time at MM
Dadi was still searching Pragya, in whole house n then when she couldn't find her, she was scolding robin n radha for their negligence, just then Abhi arrived
Abhi: what's the problem dadi, why you are scolding them
Dadi: nothing just like that
Abhi: why do I think you are acting weird, since yesterday, are you hiding anything from me???
Dadi:(lost of words) no beta
Abhi: dadi, did that girl showed up
Dadi: which girl??
Abhi: you are really growing old, arre that girl, who was supposed to return my clothes
Dadi: ok that, no she didn't came
Abhi: ( curiously) are you sure, she was fuggie
Dadi: yes, but why are you asking??
Abhi: just like that, wanted to talk to her, hope she comes today.
Dadi: ok, I will ask her
Abhi: you have her contact number
Dadi: yes, but I won't give it to you, before you ask why?? She told me not to share number with anyone
Abhi:( surprised) when did she gave you number??
Dadi: she met me at temple yesterday, n was mad at you, when I told her, you were the one, who did accident
Abhi: ( fake anger) ok, you call her, n ask her to come right now, I want to see her angry face
Dadi: (chuckles) ok n calls her, n ask her to come right now

pls leave comments, if you'll like it
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Btsarmy thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Great. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plz make abhi meet pragya without alcohol...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6

Abhi: ( fake anger) ok, you call her, n ask her to come right now, I want to see her angry face
Dadi: (chuckles) ok n calls her, n ask her to come right now," dadi, Im really sorry for yesterday, can't come today, I'm not feeling well, but will sure come tomorrow, promise" says Pragya, " it's ok beta, you have to come tomorrow,take care" n cuts that call.
Abhi:( little upset) so she not coming, today
Dadi: actually she is not feeling well, so (Abhi cuts in between)
Abhi:(worried)but, what happened to her???
Dadi: she will come tomorrow, ask for yourself

In evening,around 6pm at bulbul place
Aaliya: (Thinks of some plan n looks at Pragya) you n bulbul don't come out from bedroom till I ask, ok
Bulbul: ( understands aaliya is upto some plan) but what about dinner
Aaliya: have it bedroom, but no coming in front of Abhi till I ask, ok
Pragya: but why Di??
Aaliya: want to know what's cooking in abhi's mind, n he will not talk if he sees both of you, ok
Pragya: Di really, no need of all this, there is nothing
Aaliya: don't fool me, I'm sure there is, n you don't worry about Tanu, I know he doesn't love her
Pragya: but...
Aaliya: shut up, n do what I say, tell me one thing have you ever cook anything for him
Pragya: ya, once cinnamon coffee, n yesterday's dinner at his place
Aaliya: when did you made coffee????
Pragya: when we were neighbors, that day dadi was not feeling well, so I made it special cinnamon coffee for him, I don't know if he liked it as I went home after that
Aaliya: does he knows that you made
Pragya: don't know, why you are asking that
Aaliya: he still drinks cinnamon coffee n today dinner you are going to cook, same menu as yesterday, come on start cooking

It's was almost 8pm, n Abhi comes
Aaliya: hey come in
Abhi: hi
Aaliya: have sit, I will be right back
Abhi: where is bulbul??
Aaliya:(answering from kitchen) she is out with her friend, will b back by 9
Abhi: ok,(it's right time, I should talk to aaliya)
Aaliya: (comes with coffee) take coffee, will have dinner when bulbul comes
Abhi:(sips coffee n surprised) wow, after so long I had such amazing cinnamon coffee, u made??
Aaliya: why, I can't make cinnamon coffee ?
Abhi: u know, dadi also makes this kind of coffee, but fuggie, she made just like this
Aaliya: who is fuggie?? New girlfriend
Abhi: no, she was my neighbor when I was in Delhi, one day she made for me
Aaliya: so she must be really special to you, you remember taste even after so many years
Abhi: it's nothing like that, she was difficult to even talk, see just used nod her head, if I talk anything, she was in school at that time, in fact I met her few days back
Aaliya: wow, it's getting interesting, tell me more
Abhi:(not realising what aaliya is upto) well I was with Tanu at her place n tells her everything
Aaliya: so you didn't even recognise her, what kind of fool, are you???
Abhi: she used to be size balloon Bach than, n now size zero, how will I ??, that's was the reason I used to call her fuggie, her real name is Pragya
Aaliya:(laughs) really, how sweet
Abhi: there something more, actually something else I wanted to talk, I hallucinating things
Aaliya: ( shocked) what do mean by hallucinating???
Abhi: 3months back, I was at pub, trying to hookup ( tells rest n how now that is hunting him) I have a feeling, that girl is fuggie, that day, when fuggie was sleeping on my bed, I was feeling that same thing, that same alcoholic smell, way she was sleeping, it reminds me of that girl, but I seriously don't remember that girl's face
Aaliya: but, what makes you thing it's fuggie
Abhi: yesterday, I had dream, I was cuddling that her, at that point fuggie face started flashing in my mind, so I thought maybe, I'm really getting mad, I'm not able to concerted on my music also, pls help me understand
Aaliya:of course, I will help, but first have dinner
Abhi: ok, call bulbul also
Aaliya:(massage them, not to come till Abhi is gone, as it turned out to be complicated thing) ya sure, let me call her n ( pretends to call her) hello bulbul, are you joining us for dinner kya?? Ok then take care, ( looks at Abhi) she is will be having dinner out only
Abhi; ok then let's have dinner n they both had it, Abhi again gets confused," it's same taste, like yesterday but that was cooked by Pari, oh god why I want answers for all things"
Aaliya: what are you thinking now, it's yummy
Abhi:(couldn't hold his curiosity) who cooked today's dinner???
Aaliya: bulbul's friend, remember she was here this morning
Abhi: oh yes, I forgot her name, what was her name again
Aaliya:(avoiding his question, changes topic) stop behaving like CID, n finish your dinner

Pls leave comments if you'll like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plz make abhi n pragya meet yaar...
Btsarmy thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice yaar.
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm glad you'll like my update
Will update soon
N yes abhigya will meet in next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7

Pragya n bulbul tried to listen their conversations, but were not able to hear a single thing, as bedroom was far from hall n door was also closed.
Aaliya: tell me, what if you find out that both girls are same, i mean both are fuggie, then what will you do??
Abhi: I will ask her, what's wrong with her, why she has alcohol all the time
Aaliya: so unromantic
Abhi: what unromantic, I'm concerned about her, there is something she is hiding
Aaliya: it's love, Abhi
Abhi:I don't love her, I love Tanu, I only like fuggie as friend, n I feel guilty of getting intimate with her, that's why I'm (she cut in between n gets angry on him)
Aaliya: that's why, you still remember taste of her cinnamon coffee, Abhi don't fool yourself, you just had a passing affair with Tanu, there is nothing serious about your relationship, I bet, you didn't had any physical relation, look at you, person who would hook up with any girl, is now not even touching his girlfriend, wakeup n see yourself, the moment you thought that girl might be fuggie, you stop all your bad habits, change yourself completely, started thinking about her Day n night
Abhi: may be you are right, but still, I don't know what she thinks, she is like this mystery girl, always goes missing, when her mother died, I had gone to her place to meet her, but she was gone already, after 1year I came to know from dadi she is in Mumbai, n we shifted to Mumbai next month, I didn't try to find her, but always kept my eyes n ears open, if incase I get any information about her, that day when she was right in front of me, but I couldn't recognise her, she had changed so much in these 7years
Aaliya: Abhi, you told me that she was going to come to return your clothes, so did she came??
Abhi: no, dadi called her, but she is not feeling well so, she will come tomorrow
Aaliya: you idiot, you have her contact number n still waiting, are you seriously mad??? this is just too much
Abhi: but dadi won't share number with me, n as it is, she is coming tomorrow so I thought why
Aaliya: ( cuts in between) are you going to stay whole day home, waiting for her
Abhi: absolutely
Aaliya: ok then as you wish, let's go out now
Abhi: not now, I'm going home now, will meet you tomorrow, thanks, you solved problem but do you think both are same??!
Aaliya: shut up, bye, now don't eat my brain n he goes
Aaliya calls both girls out, n tells, it complicated, he actually has gone insane, Pragya, you pls go tomorrow at his place, first thing in morning ok
Pragya: but what all he told you today
Aaliya: Abhi is completely mad, that's it, I don't have better explanation then this
Pragya: what Di, anyways I'm going, I'm feeling very sleepy
In mean time Abhi runs in Tanu, at building entrance n she insisted him to come home n he goes with her
Abhi: so, now what, you wanted me to come here I came
Tanu: let's watch movie with popcorn n soft drinks
Abhi:ok
Tanu:( was bringing glassware to arrange on dinning table n suddenly, she slipped n whole box fall on abhi's shoulder) I'm so sorry, I don't mean to, actually I have never carry such heavy box, so pls forgive me (this time, Tanu actually didn't do it purposely)
Abhi: it's ok, give me ice pack, I will just apply, it will be fine
Tanu: ( gives him ice pack n painkillers table) take this you will feel better
Abhi: if you don't mind, can I sleep here only, it's late n dadi will not like, me driving this late
Tanu: (thinks, I should let him sleep in Pragya 's room as she is at Bulbul's place or he will think I'm hitting on him again) ya of course, you can sleep in that room ( points towards Pragya room)
Abhi: ok, let's call it night, will see movie next time
Tanu:ok as you wish(agrees as she herself was tried after long photo shoot n goes to her room)
Both were fast asleep, Pragya enters house, n sees all mass, she picks up glassware box, n put it in its place, just then, she hears some noise coming from her room, she is scared to death, but grabs wooden stick n enters room, she sees some shadow moving n thinks its robber, she hits him with stick 3-4 times, Abhi gets unconscious n falls on floor, n Pragya turn on lights, she is shocked to see Abhi, she goes to Tanu room, but she was in deep sleep, Pragya again goes to her room n make him sleep on bed n applies ice pack n some ointment on his forehead, he just opens his eyes n again close due to heaviness in head, almost whole night, she sits beside him, to check on him, he turns to other side of bed, but feels it uncomfortable n again turns back,it was almost 5am, finally Pragya was sleeping now, Abhi still uncomfortable due to pain, gets up n sees Pragya, who was sleeping in sitting position, n her head was leaning on wall for support, n ice pack in her hand, he gently lefts her n puts on bed, n kisses her on forehead n leaves. Later, around 8am, Tanu comes to Pragya's room n she is shocked to only Pragya
Tanu: Pragya wake up
Pragya: kya, let me sleep pls
Tanu: if you are sleeping here, then where is Abhi???

What you'll think will happen next, any kind of suggestion are welcome
Pls leave comments, if you'll like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Interesting chapter Maggie :)
Will he connect the dots ,?!

Waiting for the next chapter !! Ty for the pm !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG! He met her but in different way. I want them to talk more. hoping for best in next chapter.
Continue soon. Thanks for pm.

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