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Part 12

Dadi: I was about to call you for breakfast
Abhi: no need dadi,
Dadi: why ?? what happened ?? Are you still angry on me??
Abhi: no dadi, actually you are right, fuggie is number one alcoholic n shameless girl
Dadi: ( shocked n thinks does theirs plan back fire) what happened ???
Abhi: nothing, you just tell Pari I will marry her, tomorrow itself
Dadi: why in so hurry??
Abhi: pls dadi don't ask any questions
Dadi: but
Abhi: ( cuts between) I have made up my mind n nothing can change it, just then Rohan comes
Rohan: (writes on note pad) you called me Abhi sir
Abhi: yes, tomorrow I'm getting married to my dadi's choice girl, she wants me to settle in life, so you are going to be with me whole while n help with arrangements
Rohan:( control her tears) ok sir, as you wish
Abhi keeps his hand on Rohan's shoulder n ask him to come to his room, as soon as they reached room he gave body crushing hug to Rohan,
Rohan pushes Abhi at looks at him in confusion
Abhi: ( acts as he is gay) Rohan,I love you, I only agreed for marriage to make dadi happy, but I love you Rohan, ( gives him kiss on her, cheek)
I always liked man, you are one n only, plus, you can't talk so you will not bad mouth about me if you didn't like my proposal, ( now gives soft kiss on lips) i love you
Rohan: ( writes on pad) sir, but I'm straight, but don't like all this
Abhi: oh please don't lie, I have noticed so many times that you were gazing on me, last night, you were fabulous, I can't forget, we actually made out on every possible place in this room, even on bean bag, I know you also enjoyed as much as I Did
Rohan:(couldn't control now n speaks) enough is enough, what kind of jerk you are??? You didn't realise it was me, it was always me, even last night
Abhi:(softly kisses her on lips to stop her talking farther) then why all this ( remove wig n glasses )
Pragya: ( hugs him, as tears start rolling from her eyes) I love you Abhi ( then pushes him n fake anger) first you started with drama, you were annoying me so much
Abhi: ( holding his ears) sorry fuggie (cups her face) I did all that because I wanted to make sure girl I hook up with n love of my life is same girl
Pragya: what if both girls were different n when you started loving me
Abhi: pls fuggie don't say that, I know I have this casanova imagine, but believe me I never cheated you, it was only for physical needs, girls always knew it was only hookup nothing more then that, Actually whenever I used to think about you after sometime I would start drinking n then sex, each n very time I had sex with other girls I only imagine you, I started falling for you from school days, when we were in Delhi, your little things you did for me, from making cinnamon coffee for me, you hearing my songs n then telling dadi were i missed beat, to you following me to school canteen, listening to my band rehearsal following me on FB, INSTAGRAM, Twitter with fake ids but I only realised when you went Mumbai, within a week I was feeling so restless, one of my friend told me if I missed you so much, I should move to Mumbai, so next month even I shifted to Mumbai, I told dadi i have more opportunity in Mumbai, later dadi also came here
Pragya: dadi knew, that I stay in Mumbai with maa, I once met her in Delhi, before she move to Mumbai, she knew I was in which college
Abhi:(shocked) dadi never mentioned about you, I'm really mad, all I needed to talk to dadi, actually I was shy to tell dadi that I missed you, I love you n I didn't knew if you also love me, when I discuss everything to aaliya, she suggested me to do drama n Tanu also supported
Pragya: Tanu also...she doesn't love you
Abhi: no, I told her about my feelings for you, she understood, you know she has changed in past few days, but out plan back fired, you are so stubborn, you won't talk to me
Pragya: ( laughs)actually I thought Tanu loves you so I was keeping distance from you, but how you know I'm Rohan
Abhi:( turn Pragya n show her mirror n gaves notorious smile) love bits baby, n from last night, I still remember little, you taking out your wig, glasses, my pants n T-shirt, I tore you shirt
Pragya:(blushes) stop it, tell me properly
Abhi: when I woke up I was shocked to see my room in that condition n then I went to balcony
saw someone running towards outhouse, i just returned to room n again looked properly at room n then it was clear n I thought, " oh so I was not dreaming, my fuggie was here n we made out, wow so it's for real, she loves me, otherwise she won't allow me, oh god, I love her"
You only complete me fuggie, every time you leave, you left behind some clue for me, this time, you gave me love bites, so do I
Only you can give me happiness ( kisses her)
Pragya: do you know Pari???
Abhi: don't know, but dadi bug me with this girl Pari, I will make sure when she comes tomorrow I will tell her everything n switch her with you n we will be happily married
Pragya: ( nervously) actually I'm Pari
Abhi: (shocked) Pragya, Pari, Rohan, mystery girl, alcoholic girl, how many of you??
Pragya ( laughs) dadi
Abhi:(cuts between n in anger questions) dadi, she is mastermind of all this
Pragya: yes
Abhi: (looks at Pragya very intensely) do as I say, dadi I will teach you how to play drama
Pragya: stop it, all I want is you not drama after drama
Abhi: one last time, for me please, it's final, I promise, but first, you have to promise, from now on you won't drink,
Pragya:(making faces) I promise I won't drink alone

Sorry guys for small updates, me spending most of time with my kids now days so...
Pls leave comments if you'll like it
Happy reading

Thanks for all your support, Enamoured is reached here all because of you'll,
Next will be last part of a this FF, after that will start new story FAN GIRL, hopefully from next week

Part 13

Abhi: one last time, for me please, it's final, I promise, but first, you have to promise, from now on you won't drink,
Pragya:(making faces) I promise I won't drink alone
Abhi: let's go, n you will not tell dadi I know everything ok, n tell dadi you are fad up of this drama n you won't continue n both went down to hall
Dadi quickly ask Rohan to come with her to bedroom
Dadi locks room from inside
Dadi: beta don't worry everything will be fine
Pragya: no dadi I'm fad up of this drama, I think I should leave
Dadi: if he wants to marry Pari then let him, he doesn't know you are Pari
Pragya: but he wants to marry Pari not Pragya, what if he won't accept me after marriage
Dadi: ya you are right n she calls Purab n bulbul to find solution, bulbul gets hyper n tells everything to aaliya (but not that Rohan is Pragya n they are hiding from Pragya from Abhi, their so called plan) n she calls Abhi
Aaliya: are you out of your mind, first you eat my brain that you love your fuggie n then you want to marry someone else
Abhi: nothing can change my decision not even fuggie
Aaliya:( what to do, I think he should marry Pari, Pragya are same so I will convince him after marriage) so you have decided, then what can we do, if you really want to marry Pari then go ahead I'm with you, but what about fuggie
Abhi: she doesn't love me,
Aaliya: she does, she herself confessed to me
Abhi: what's the use, she didn't tell me, n sitting in Delhi, I tried to talk to her, share my feelings with her but she is not interested
Aaliya: if she comes to you now n propose you then
Abhi: we will see then
Aaliya: ok, you meet me at my place @9pm
Abhi: ok n cuts call
Aaliya now calls Pragya, n tells everything but Pragya says," I won't come, if he moved on in life, then why should I come n confess"
Aaliya: but even if you won't go, he said will be marry Pari n that's you, so why this attitude
Pragya: who said I will marry him tomorrow, he doesn't want me in his life, so it doesn't matter if I'm Pari or Pragya, what if he doesn't accept me after marriage, I can't spoil my life
Aaliya: but where are you,
Pragya: I'm at my friends house, in Delhi, will reach Mumbai by 5
Aaliya: you are so impossible, so much is going on n you are in Delhi, both of you, just get lost, don't show your faces,
Pragya: (manage to control her laugh,) ok fine, I will come but you know my answer
Aaliya:ok, but be there by 9
Here at MM
Dadi was still tense, she again requested bulbul n Purab to talk to Pragya n make her understand, Pragya was sitting in outhouse, little confused,"why Abhi is doing all this, if we love each other, n want to marry then why all drama "
Just then Abhi calls Pragya
Abhi: hey love thinking about me
Pragya: how do you know that
Abhi: I have that effects on people
Pragya: Abhi, it feels bad, to fool everyone ( tell everything, what aaliya said n dadi too)
Abhi: you didn't feel bad, when all fooled me
Pragya: sorry, but don't mind, it's you, who started n you can not stress dadi at this age
Abhi: ok ok, listen in evening when you to come at bulbul place, you agree for marriage after faking some anger, n tell aaliya you will come by 8, n not 9 as you don't want to face me ok n msg me when you reach MM, I hope that will give dadi relief, ok love
Pragya: stop calling me love, it's too filmy
Abhi: i thought you don't like fuggie, so I called love
Pragya: who said that, I love when you call me fuggie ok chasmis
Abhi: chasmis!, I don't wear glasses now,
Pragya: ok sorry
Abhi: it's ok, I used to like it, but now i don't wear it so, it will sound weird,when you call me by that name, don't you think,
Pragya: so from now I will call you, Abhi: what???
Pragya: I will tell you tomorrow,
Abhi: but I want to tell you something today
Pragya: what??
Abhi: I want to spend tonight with you, I want to know you, after all we are going to marry tomorrow
Pragya: you have whole life to know me, but not tonight ok, (knock on door) bye, someone has come, talk to you later, mummm
She opens doors it was Purab n bulbul
Pragya: I know why you'll have come, but let me tell you I will not marry him
Purab: but Pragya, what if he knows that you are Pari, n doing this drama
Bulbul: yes, you never know, he has mastered in doing dramas,
Purab: maybe that's reason, he all of sudden, told dadi that he will marry girl of her choice
Pragya:(tense, how do these people know) are you sure
Purab: honestly, it's just my assumption,
Bulbul: but it could be possible, pls Pragya don't do this, give love chance,
Pragya: let me think, will meet you'll at 8
Bulbul: where
Pragya: aaliya called n ask to meet ( tells everything)
Purab: ok, but I think you aaliya n Abhi should meet
Bulbul: yes, but why 8, she ask to meet you at 9
Pragya: no, I won't able to face Abhi, so I will meet her before he comes ok
Bulbul n Purab leaves
It was around 7 when Pragya went to her house to meet Tanu first
Tanu: hi, after so long, where have you been, we only talk on phone n hugs her
Pragya: I was in Delhi, came today, as Abhi decided to marry Pari,
Tanu: what???
Pragya: yes, n he is going to marry her tomorrow
Tanu: wait I will call him right now, n tell him what he thinks of himself, how can he???
Pragya: well, actually I'm Pari, dadi calls me Pari since my childhood
Tanu: so what's problem, why you look sad, marry him
Pragya: but he thinks Pari is some other girl, which dadi choose for him
Tanu: arre tell him, that you are Pari n problem solve
Pragya: no, if he loves me then why will he marry Pari, he doesn't love me
Tanu: stop your stupidity, if you will not tell him, I will
Pragya:(oh god, now what) no, Tanu Don't tell him anything, im going to Aaliya, n then decide ok
Tanu: ok, but if you blackout then I definitely tell everyone that you are Pari
Pragya: please don't do that, I'm going to talk to aaliya ok, just then she receives call n runs to MM with Tanu n aaliya
All are gathered in dadi room, n she is unconscious laying on bed, Abhi is crying like small boy, n requesting her to open her eyes, Pragya entered room n shouted on Abhi,"I told you enough of drama, don't stress dadi, look what have you done" Abhi was standing frozen, she moved towards dadi n yelled, " dadi pls get up, all this is drama, I love Abhi n he loves me ( Abhi cuts between) yes dadi, I know everything, Pari, Rohan,Pragya, gollu all are same, my fuggie, all this is my mistake, I asked fuggie to do drama as I wanted to teach you lesson, you knew n you support fuggie n not me, pls dadi I will marry Pari, Pragya my fuggie tomorrow, pls dadi open your eyes, I'm sorry pls dadi pls, I'm really sorry " now abhigya together says sorry dadi, n they were crying holding dadi hands, suddenly they see dadi smiling at them n said," beta, remember I'm your dadi, I know you inside out, I heard you, actually I was coming to your room, to convince you for marriage with Pragya n saw you, when you were talking to Pragya on phone that you just want to teach me lesson n all this is your drama, I also did this (she holds both ears n tease them)
All were in shock, dadi was real dramebaz of them all,
Abhigya hugs her n apologies,"dadi, I will marry my fuggie tomorrow,"n Pragya says," yes dadi me too will marry him


This is second last part, let's see, if they actually get married, I know I Said this will be last, but still little confused about ending, I have 2 versions maybe will post both
One is happy ending n other is sad, do comment which you'll will like to read
Pls comment if you'll like it
Happy reading

Sure u can post both & will glad if u post the marriage part now.

Maybe I would like happy better but u should do both. It was a awesome update!

Enamoured Part 14
This is last part, thanks to all of you, who made this possible, this is second story I completed,


Pragya went to meet Abhi as she promised, but dadi didn't allowed n said," have patience, you are getting married tomorrow so you can't meet Abhi now, sorry beta you will have to leave," she got upset n was leaving just then received msg from Abhi, "don't come from front gate, come from balcony, dadi has locked me from outside, Waiting for you love"
She got huge smile on her face n went, she climbed to balcony, he gave her body crushing hug n kissed her
P: kya Abhi, you could have come from balcony to meet me at my place
A: dadi, she has gone insane, she comes very half hour n check on me, so I don't want her to get suspicious
P: ok, so what was so important that you wanted to meet now
A: nothing, I just wanted to be with you, see you, ( gets closer n whispers in her ears) feel you
P: ( puts her hands around his neck) really, but I thought you wanted to know me, n tell about yourself also
A: ( cuts in) truth is, everything will change from tomorrow, my life
P:(cuts in) hello, this should be my line, my life will change, I have to leave my parents house n come here, I will have to adjust, I...
A:( cuts in) what I I I ?? From tomorrow it's always "we" infact from now it's self, we will start best journey of our life ( kisses her)
P: we should celebrate
A: wine??
P: ok, but only one glass n we will share that one glass promise, we don't want to get in trouble, right??
A: ok, as you say, ( they shared one glass, then had one each glass, n then kept on having 1 more n more, till stock last)
Next day, When dadi entered room in early morning, she was shocked to see, room was total mess, their cloths were laying all over the place, Abhigya were only covered with blanket, dadi thought its hight of shamelessness, they can't wait for one more night, n she leaves without disturbing them, but calls on Pragya Mobile
D: good morning beta
P: ( seeing it's dadi call, gets up n tense) good morning dadi
D: when are you getting ready it's already 7am, driver will come in 10-15 mins max, to pick you up for pooja
P: what?? I mean why?? No no I mean, dadi no need, I will be there by myself in 20mins, ok dadi
D: ok, as you like it ( laughs, she is so scared, I was just joking)
Pragya kisses Abhi on forehead n goes n freshen up, gets ready n climbed down from balcony n enters from front gate
D: ( eyes wide open) what is this beta, you cants wear this for Pooja,(she was wearing abhi's track suite)
Go upstairs, to my room, I have just perfect dress for you,(laughs n ask
bulbul, who was arrived before her, goes with her to help her get ready)bulbul, you also go with her
Then dadi goes to abhi's room to wake him up,
D: nalayak, ( twist his ears) I told you not to meet her before marriage n you were sleeping n hugging n oh god, all this before marriage
A:( looks for Pragya n then covers himself properly) dadi, you only said that you are getting old, n want grandchild soon, so I was just practicing
D: shameless ( throws pillow) get ready,
A: ( pouts) did she left me
D: don't be drama queen, she left you to be with you forever, she is getting ready in my room
A: oh she is here only, ( goes to freshen up)
After some time, Tanu, aaliya n Purab came, n Abhi bulbul n dadi were waiting for Pragya to come down, n she came down wearing, off white dress with red dupatta, with golden work, hair falling down her shoulder, with minimum makeup, she was looking gorgeous, abhi eyes followed her while she was walking down the stairs,her leg slipped,n she fell from stairs, her head was bleeding, everybody ran to her, abhi took her in arms n rushed her to hospital, after almost 2hrs she gain conscious, n saw, abhi was holding her hand n waiting for her, as she tried to talk, he puts finger on her nose to pause, " we were going to marry today, n nothing can stop me from doing so," n calls pundit n others, takes her in his arms, (both lost in each other, they maintain eye contact whole time) takes pherras n they get married, later he went to doctor n asked if he can take her home, but doctor denied, saying she should have MRI as there can be internal bleeding n some other tests, abhi agreed n told whatever tests that want to do, do it now, after she gets discharge he will only see doctor (gynaecologist) when she conceive n both laughs
It was late night, Pragya wakes up n tries to get water herself, she didn't wanted to disturb abhi, n glass falls from her hand, waking up abhi
A:(shouts) are you out of your mind, I'm here for you, then why you want to be over smart n try this stunts
P: sorry, but I didn't wanted to disturb you
A:( sits next to her n cups her face) im always here for you, pls take care of yourself first, I'm nothing without you, I love you( kisses her on her wound)
P: love you too
A: ( tries to be naughty) it's good na, we didn't wait for today, n enjoyed our first night yesterday
P: ( blushing) technically, we did it after 12, so date will be same, n holds his hand
A: now you rest, I'm here only, n if you want something,( she signals him to sleep on same bed) just pinch me n sleeps on same bed with cuddling her
Next day nurse came n told abhi that Dr Gupta is calling you, n he went,
Dr Gupta: abhi I need your blood sample too
Abhi: my??? But why ?? I'm alright
Dr Gupta: I want for 2reasons, first Pragya is pregnant
Abhi:( cuts in) oh my god, she will so happy to hear it, I'm going to be father n what's second
Dr Gupta: when I found out that she is pregnant, we did all routine tests for pregnancy which includes HIV, n she is positive, so I need your simple also
Abhi: how can that be possible, pls do the tests again, n does that mean my baby
Dr Gupta:( cuts in)we have already cross check, n it's not necessary that unborn child will also get but I need to check you also,
Abhi : ok, but I request you pls don't tell any one about pregnancy, not even Pragya pls doctor
Dr Gupta: don't worry, I won't tell but we will have to start with medication, this will protect unborn baby from getting aids n make sure she don't even miss single dose ok take care
Abhi with heavy heart went back to Pragya
Abhi: how are you feeling now
P: much better, nurse told we can go by afternoon
A: ( hugs) I love u fuggie, Yes, we will go, u just take proper medicines ok
P: ok
Month passed, abhi didn't go for any meeting or sign any new contract, even his reports were positive,he was totally broken from inside, he felt helpless n at same time, he tried his best to get best doctor for treatment, he had puts all medicines in vitamins bottles so Pragya could not find out n he personally give her n made sure she has it, he was every excited about baby but was scared it to reveal it to Pragya he had feared that Pragya may ask to abort child saying if baby also get affected but never showed it to his fuggie, in her presence he would try to be as true to himself as he can, but from last 2 days Pragya was bugging him a lot saying that they should see doctor, she has missed her periods, but abhi denied, he was scared, what if she knows, n he can't face her after that, he started thinking that only because of him, she also got HIV, he cursed himself for hookups with those Unknown women, may from that only he got n because him, Pragya was affected n now may be his baby, this thought would come again n again to him, finally next day Pragya shouted at him n they had argument
P: abhi, this is too much, why you don't want to come to doctor, n nor you are letting me go n check, it can be
A:( cuts in, n shouts on top of his voice) if I said we are not going means not going, no farther discussion
P: (hugs him from behind) ok, but why?? I could be, I mean I may be pregnant, as we never use any precaution
A: ( kisses her, may be I should tell her, anyways she will know later) ok fine, but we will not tell anybody that we are going ok, not even dadi
P: ok,( jumps on bed) promise
A:( puts his hand on her tummy) stop it, you may harm baby
P: you are behaving like I'm already pregnant
A:nothing like that, come lets go n they leaves
He msg, doctor that they are coming n only tell her about pregnancy n nothing else,
As they were driving to hospital, Pragya asked him if he loves kids,
A: ya I would love to have kids with you, but I want baby girl first, then boy
P: that's not fair, all I want is healthy baby boy or girl, I just want to love them my whole life
The words,I just want to love them for whole life," made abhi realise that this happiness is not going last forever, "what would happen to our baby, as we both are HIV positive,n we don't have that much time, 5-8 years were not enough, what will be baby's future, who will look after him, even dadi is getting old, others will get busy with their life, who will be with my baby, if we can not be with him, we don't have right to bring him to this world" abhi came to sense when Pragya shouted for third time," break abhi, press break abhi" it was too late, abhi lost control n their car crushed into truck coming from opposite side, both abhi n Pragya were severely injured n were declared dead on reaching hospital.

I'm ending this story here
I know many of you will not be happy or agree with this kind of ending, sorry if I disappointed you'll but I want to tell you'll, here abhi didn't purposely did accident, it was their destiny, he felt helpless but never thought of suicide,
Pls comment, about your views n tell what else according you'll should have ending
Happy reading

Woah Maggie. This is totally different. Yes, there are other FF that killed Abhigya in the end. But HIV??? Hmmm...quite shocking. But yeah, that could be possible given the lifestyle of a Rockstar. Random hook-ups...anyways, good that its ending. Tq Maggie.

Loved it! It was pretty sad but I like it

Originally posted by: hutanbandar

Woah Maggie. This is totally different. Yes, there are other FF that killed Abhigya in the end. But HIV??? Hmmm...quite shocking. But yeah, that could be possible given the lifestyle of a Rockstar. Random hook-ups...anyways, good that its ending. Tq Maggie.

*then suddenly I was thinking of Mina's :The Hook-Up...when is it going to be updated? Hmmm...*

Really I haven't read any Abhigya story in which they die, but yes, his lifestyle was such, that this kind of could happen,
Thanks for your opinion,

Originally posted by: sbsmartness4

Loved it! It was pretty sad but I like it

I'm glad you loved it,
I know it's sad ending, but all love stories can't have happy ending