ll Abhigya/TiSha AT #224-Hamari Kahani Ab Milan Par Khatam Hogi ll - Page 113

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

36.6k

Users

26

Likes

2.3k

Frequent Posters

Mysterious7 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -mina-

credit for this scene goes to dee for mentioning that pragz should've tied abhi to a chair and made him watch the video with her alone, and to donny for endorsing my idea of restraint too...you'll see ;)

FICLET: Where the heart is

"I only wish..." Abhi's gaze travelled back up, dwelling for a long moment on her lips but then finally meeting her eyes. "I only wish you had Fuggy's heart, too..."

Their eyes locked for a long moment, that old familiar habit they had never been able to break. As she looked into those portals of his soul, Pragya read...anguish. Loss. Defeat.

All at once, a flood of regret doused Pragya's exhilaration. She looked away from him, unable to hold his gaze as every doubt she had ever had about this mission surfaced in her mind. She hated to face what she had done to him.

Her eyes fell on her mobile, face down on the floor.

Like the first beam of sunshine after a rainstorm, hope and excitement swelled freshly in Pragya's heart.
...and since they were about to finally be free...


THE END


First of all thank you Mina for writing this. This was sooo freaking intense. I loved how you used physical intimacy combined with serious motive of Pragz. Since I am a very visual person, love how descriptive you write your fics. The above that I quoted were what I can imagine the Abhigya in the show do too especially the first three paragraphs 😳 😆...

What a cliff hanger. No plans of second version?! 😳...
Naina- thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Ahhh, Mina, that was SO GOOD! I love how he got lost in her 😳 And I loved where it ended. Because if all that happened before she showed proof, I can only imagine what happens after the video is over. 😉
Mysterious7 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Naina-


Aww, Nadzz. Super sad, but so so so cute at the same time. Like I'd want to but not want to see this scene!


I was inspired from another soap but non-ekta Indian soap, mostly happy happy soap 😆. I used to watch it briefly ages ago. It's ended. He supports her throughtout the ordeal and she survives and they get married, whether it's before or after operation I don't remember. Started their relation with fighting first. That scene is the only thing that I remember because it was too emotional and adorable at the same time...
Edited by Mysterious7 - 9 years ago
-Nive- thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
If Bulbul comes back alive, what kind of entry do you want her to have?
-Nive- thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Which two persons would you want Abhi and Pragya to say sorry to?
For me it's Puneet and Purvi.
-Nive- thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
So you are the reason for this drama, Daadi?
-Nive- thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Oye Fuggy, I can eat 50 Gulab Jamuns continuously.

So that's the reason you are sweet to me nowadays.
-Nive- thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Tanu, why do people call you third wheel? You don't look round to me.
Mysterious7 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nive_kb

Which two persons would you want Abhi and Pragya to say sorry to?

For me it's Puneet and Purvi.


Ditto and to each other for listening to others and hurting each other for the routes they choose. Communication and trust is the key. I want them to communicate, communicate, communicate, and trust, trust, trust then no other can cause conflicts between them not even Daadi...
Naina- thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Jaldi Jaldi finish karo AT ko! I'm OCD about this!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".