A Suitable Husband | in progress | a Pregnancy Track FF by mina - Page 16

Originally posted by: Pragz10

Res!!! 😃

Unres!

Aww, I LOVE the plan! I'm glad that Daadi and Daasi have a plan where its a win-win situation for Pragya either way. So either she realizes Abhi's for her OR she gets a great guy in Angad! LOVE it!! Finally its about her and her happiness! And already love Angad 😳 The fact that he's willing to get married to her if she starts liking him shows how different he is from Abhi-that he's mature, he doesn't have an ego, and that he's ready to listen...three things our hero has kind of lacked in 😆 But obviously, I'm shipping Abhigya and totally rooting for our guy.

Hehe! Well I am all about Pragya's happiness, so I try to design things in her favour as much as I can 😆 I'm pleased to know Angad has made such a good impression already. The three differences you've pointed out are totally on point, definitely defining characteristics for Angad. But if Abhi has lacked them on the show...he might not necessarily lack them here...so let's see! 😃

This line:

"This cannot happen, Daadi," he had said, his declaration firm and his tone deadly serious. "Pragya is my wife. I will tear Angad to pieces if he even thinks of marrying her."

SO Abhi. I loved everything about this line. The denial, the possessiveness and the bluntness of what he feels about the whole situation. I wish Abhi on the show would be more vocal like this. Because its his confusion and quietness on the show that gets to me sometimes 😕

Same. A more vocal Abhi has long been on my wishlist for the show. I kind of don't get how he isn't more vocal given his larger than life personality...thus I can only write him in a way that makes sense to me 😆

And loved this as well:

"A sinking feeling of despair made him toss down his drumsticks. He dropped his head in his hands. If even he could no longer believe himself innocent, what hope was there for getting out of this mess?"

I feel like this is what basically happened in the show as well, but again, our hero isn't vocal about his OWN feelings in the show. He's just vocal when it comes to saying things he may not mean, leading to us seeing only his ego. I'm sure there is a more human side to him and I wish the CVs would show that, like you've shown in your writings!

Hahhh. I wish I could believe something like this happened on the show! Show Abhi is opaque to me. Great point about him saying things he doesn't mean - our reactive hero. I agree there's a more human side to him, and that's the potential that keeps me interested in writing about him and pairing him with Pragya 😳

Needless to say, I loved the update! Can't wait for tomorrowww! (Its tomorrow right?)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, glad you enjoyed this update! Next chapter should be up in a few hours 😊

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Wow minu omg omg such a awesome 👏
Oh my gosh.
Loved the idea indu daasi made to abhi prove himself innocent and pragya to be positive.
This is what I want.
Yeah this is good that dadi being so strict and good responsible forwarding the situation better and making the relationship take new turn.
I loved the way you showing without them hurt and broken.
Cute and lovely pragya accepting the truth of reality and planning ahead.
Oof angad and pragya date.
Well minu superb.

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update Mina loved it.
Poor Abhi hope he finds out about Tanu' s real face soon. Dadi's inner conflict were beautifullly described. Looking forward to Pragya and Angad's conversation next.
Continue soon please.

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Loved dadi-dasis convo.. Dadi's confusion, fear, uncertainty of the situation was evident.. She needed solid confirmation that Angad understood the situation. Even though she wants both her grandson to take some stand and prove himself innocent while believing tanu isn't pregnant with Abhi's child - she does wanna do good by Pragya too.. In fact she wanna see Pragya happy that's her goal - loved dadi for this.. If indeed their plan goes south and fast, Angad will marry Pragya wholeheartedly too.. In the end she has safeguarded Pragya's happiness in turn fulfilling a promise she made to Sarla Ma to always keep her daughter happy.. Although through her plan she dearly wishes things would go their way and Abhi and Pragya would realize each others worth and be happy! Way to go Dadi trio! So they have set their plan in motion too with the planned date - the trio Dadis' indeed do a great job at matchmaking😉

Dadi-Pragya convo where dadi makes pragya understand that ultimately dadi wanna pragya's happiness and that's the reason she is requesting Pragya to give this marriage a chance.. Love the bonding pragya-dadi shares.. Both love each other unconditionally jus like a mother-daughter.. As much as Pragya's mother is important for her, dadi is no less.. Pragya gave in for dadi's happiness as always.. Before she was thrown into another whirlpool of emotions when dadi revealed her surprise date plan with Angad.. It is difficult for Dadi to do all this, if only her stubborn grandson comes out of his brooding mode and uses his brain to solve all this!

Loved possessive abhi! Abhi of course is very possessive of Pragya and made it loud and clear to Dadi that Pragya was his wife and the repercussions Angad will face if he so much as even think to marry Pragya! Well done rockstar.. Only Dadi was way better in her response and gave him an ultimatum to prove himself innocent least Tanu carry out her threats or Pragya marries Angad! So Rockstar has to work quick to get back things in order! He learning about the incidents of that night after Pragya's revelation is not working in his favor either, for he is having second thoughts on his innocence... It's time he get his act together and use his smartness to come clean - hope he does that soon enough else the "date" may not take much time to turn into "shaadi" that he so desperately wanna stop..

Looking forward for Angad-Pragya date.. Is rockstar gonna gate-crash or is he so involved in his thoughts that he is gonna brood in silence?