A Suitable Husband | in progress | a Pregnancy Track FF by mina - Page 14

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Wow mina. Loved this part too much. Pragya suppressing the urge of saying no to marriage and saying yes to dasi was so Pragya. Abhi- pragya scenes loved them a lot. Pragya in the mirror scene. I always love the mirror scene. And the dialogues. Abhi - Loved his confidence. Loved his confident in saying he doesn't love Tanu. And Pragya talking about that night. Oh loved that she opened that topic. Poor Abhi, he was trying very hard to prove he is innocent. Hope that second DNA report becomes true. Will look forward to next chapter.

Thank you so much! I am really happy you felt that Pragya's answer to daasi was so Pragya! And yes, Abhi has a lot of confidence. Hopefully that helps him prove his innocence eventually. Thank you for the wonderful comment ❤️

Originally posted by: SaraPriya

Where do I want to start I dnt knw step by step getting more impressive.. part 3 abhi & pragya convo was exactly perfect by adding abt that night but I abhi is not totally unimaginable abt that night coz after that night next night also he had drunk in happy mood & point outed about previous night it was a frustration & bad mood.. Abhi - Nothing happened! I would know. You think a man's body could be used like that and he wouldn't know? That night -" it's clearly told that ya.. Waiting for next action of everyone & jealous of abhi..

Aww Sara thank you so much for your detailed comment! You're right, on the show Abhi did know what happened that night. Just in this story, he doesn't. Hope you will like the next chapters, we will see jealous Abhi but not right away 😳

Originally posted by: Shafoo

that is nice update

Thank you! ⭐️

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Hey Mina , unresed on page 14..

Just happened to read the post you made long time ago ...did u really tried eating rasmalai coated with chilli powder ?! 😆 ...why Mina, why ?! 🤣. Glad abhi didn't try anything weird like that later !! Or did u made any other attempts ?!

Lord how did you find that!! Yes I did try it! Because I had to test my scientific knowledge - I felt sure the dairy would counteract the spice! It didn't really, I was wrong and my throat paid the price 😆 But Abhi did do that on the show, he fed Pragya mirchi-wala cham cham and then had to eat it too. And that was the only such experiment I ever did! It's not a good combination, could lead to upset stomach too 😲 😆

Originally posted by: putturani

Hayyee Minaji! So sorry I've not been keeping up with this story as well as I should have 😵 BUT hayee Angad's entry. Dead. SUCH an impactful entry. And then right after that an intense Abhigya scene. Thank youuu <333 I was at the edge of my seat the entire time. And you KNOW how much I love intense scenes with marriage symbols. ☺️

And then that sensitive conversation about Abhi not knowing what he could have done...they haven't brought up the "rape' word yet, I'm not sure if they suggested in the show also that what Tanu did to Abhi was without his consent, will you? Anyway the cautious and fearful notes in the conversation were done very well. I was mentally swivelling my head between Abhi's face and Pragya's.

Soo excited for the rest of this story!

Never be sorry grasshopper!! There are no shoulds in fic-reading or friendship 😉 😳

LOL impactful entry. How did I do that?? I didn't mean to 😆

Glad you liked the intense scene. Hope I did justice to the marriage symbols.

I don't think the show ever explored the consent dynamic for the supposed TaBhi conception, but I may be forgetting. I am not so sure whether I will or not...thinking on it for now.

I like imagining your mental swivel, glad the conversation was that compelling 😃. Thank you for coming out to comment here!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Unres Page 14😳

replied p16 😃

Originally posted by: Nora9497

Amazingly written as usual Mina👏

You're a great writer and I'm big fan😳

Waiting eagerly

Thank you Nora!! I'm a fan of you, because you're always so awesome and encouraging to me. Glad you're liking this story 😃

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

1. Part 4 - to be added Feb 1/16

OMG it's today... You are going to post it at night according to canada.. I will be waiting.. 😃

Update soon.

Sorry to keep you up late!! Hope it will be tonight...if not before midnight my time, it'll still be Feb 1 somewhere in Canada...? 😆 Thanks for waiting 😳

Originally posted by: Diahh

OMG RES!

Unres!!

Yayyy!🥳 You are finally writing this!! So so so glad and happy to see this! And did I read correct you are going to update this thrice a week!! Wow!!! Can't wait!!

⭐️Part 1!!!⭐️

Love love love!! 👏

Di so much fun!!😆 Sulky Abhi! Daadi - Daasi team! Pragya - Daadi ignoring Abhi!! 🤪👍🏼

The below is what i found to be Mina'ishly-awesome-phrases!! 😉

Mysteries of her dangerous mind! ---> Nice!!😆

Was this his life or an Ekta Kapoor serial? ------> Very very nice!!🤣

Loads of loveee Minamma!❤️ Off to read the arrival of the hero!!

diyu I hope you didn't miss the prologue...? 😆

haha glad you enjoyed sulky abhi!! and yes those are pretty mina-ish phrases, glad you noticed them 😃 so thrilled you found this story, looking forward to your thoughts going forward! ❤️ you back diyu! 🤗

Originally posted by: Diahh

OMG RES Part 2!

Unres!!

Yayyy Abhi toh party shuru hui hai!!! 😆 😆

Hayeee Angad!!! ☺️

Jealous Abhi!!! Flustered Pragya!! Yayyy yayyy yayyy!!! 100 points to Slytherin!!!! ❤️

Part 3 here I come! 😎

Wait who is in Slytherin in this scenario...? 😆

Glad you're having such a blast diyuuu ⭐️