A Suitable Husband | in progress | a Pregnancy Track FF by mina - Page 17

Originally posted by: vlhs12993

Awesome update mina. I don't like dadi in the show now but in your story she is amazing.
Now abhi is having second thought about his innocence, hope he doesn't give up his doubt about tanu.
Can't wait for angya first date, btw nice name for them mina.

Hehe when I started writing this story I never dreamed that Daadi could turn the way she has on the show. I figured as an elder, she should have a sensible solution. I'm not saying the premise of this fic is super sensible...but it's more responsible than what we saw her do on the show, at least. Abhi won't give up on himself, no matter what happens. And hope you will like AngYa's date as much as their name! 😆 Thanks for the comment 😃

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Res.. Now on the way to school..

😳

Okay unres... Reached home.. 😛

First of all I liked how dadis are so co-operative with their children. They are doing their own plan to realise their love in martial life.😊

And here pragya is also thinking to give justice to tanu and her baby(which exits or don't, nobody knows)

.. poor abhi, watching his own soon-divorced-to-be-wife going with another person on a date.

And in this chapter also you shown that abhi is trying to prove himself innocent. He is drunk and now he will be go hard to handle.. 😕

And Also love the dress which pragya wore for the date.

And in next chapter their date. OMG! excited for their talks which are going to happen in next chapter. 😃

Yup, you caught a lot of important details! Abhi is not drunk though, so no worries on that. He hasn't even been drinking in this update...though he might be later 😲 😛 Glad you like the dress! Thanks for your lovely comment 😊

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Abhi controlling his anger ...pragyas decision of considering daadi's idea of marrying angad & move on ...daadi's confusion in choosing this way ...a lot of happenings in one chapter :)

Its good to see sulking abhi & its so good to see that he started thinking n looking for a solution ...

Waiting for pragyas date with angad :)

Nice dress selection Mina :)

hehe viji, glad you thought there was a lot going on, I worried the chapter would be boring. Thank you for the comments! Let me know what you think of the date when the next chapter is up 😃

Originally posted by: Diahh

Unres'ed page 18!😛

And yes! I did miss the prologue! 😆 UFF Swarni Daasi!!!! 😆 She just rocked your prologue Di!!!! Other two assuming her to be asleep and to know she is the mastermind!! Love love loveee!!! 👏

And Slytherin 100 points is for you! ❤️

Replied p19 😆

Hahhh yes Swarni Daasi is the secret weapon! 😃

Me and Slytherin?? I am so honoured!!! Don't think I'd ever sort there though 😳 😆

Originally posted by: Diahh

Part 4

Okayyy here are the things I loved in this part! 😃

Daadi concerned about her own plan.

Pragya seeking out Daadi's assurance

What Pragya wore!

Diii I have one question! Is Tannu really pregnant here or not! Coz I know your bet was that she wasn't so is it the same here?

I find the understanding Abhi has about Tannu interesting in this story. 😆 He knows what she is capable of!!

Looking forward to the next part! Love loads!! ❤️

Alright, I like your list!!

Now if I answer that won't it ruin the story for everybody? So I can't say anything. Though I really want to. 😆

More than anything Abhi knows what he's capable of...and although the incident with Pragya is an exception, he knows his own rule!

Love loads back!! ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: valschanya

Aww yisss mina!! i love where this is going <3 and can i dare say an internally conflicted abhi>>>>demonstratively jealous abhi??! i mean who doesn't wanna see the man stewing in jealousy every once in a while! but let's be real, when people act in haste they don't really put much (or any) thought into it so it's mostly just reaction towards a situation, while long-suffering inner struggles almost always involve self-recrimination.. which we all know is so deliciously angsty!!!! this reader right here is excited for the next chapter

ANYAAA!!! always excited to see you 😃 🤗

i agree with your equation. demonstrative jealousy is exciting and dramatic, but the feels are stronger when there's ongoing internal conflict that might even stop a reactive person from being...reactive. not sure exactly how the balance is going to work out for abhi in this story but will be interested in your thoughts for sure! thank you for reading and commenting ❤️

Originally posted by: chubbygirl

Mina nice update.
Abhi jealous seeing Pragya with Angad,Dassi and Dadi are the best.

hehe thank you! yes daadi and dasi are really trying to make things end happily here. glad you liked the update!

Originally posted by: Mystery1

"And you're sure he understands the situation? He knows his limits?"

This freaked me out 😕. Let me ask you Mina, does Angad know his limits?! 😆...

"This cannot happen, Daadi," he had said, his declaration firm and his tone deadly serious. "Pragya is my wife. I will tear Angad to pieces if he even thinks of marrying her."

This is all Abhi all over. Possessiveness over Pragya at it's peak 😳...

Once again I'll ask you why aren't you the CV?! 😭...

Your Abhi is so vocal, doesn't let ego come in the way and is maturer...

And the last paragraph. So Abhi in this is not believing the unnamed right?!...

Great update and your new update is scheduled for today?! 😉 😆...

Yes he knows his limits!! He's a good boy! Don't you trust Indu Daasi?

Haha so glad you and others liked the line. I thought after the fact that maybe Abhi wouldn't say something like that...but in my defense if he's talking to Daadi maybe he would just be that honest! Then again maybe not 😆

Aww thank you so much, please don't cry...every time you wonder why I'm not CV, remind yourself that if I were the show wouldn't have lasted so long, and then where would we be?? 😆 😳

It's not so much about Abhi believing the unnamed so much as Abhi believing in himself. Definitely on the show I don't think the unnamed has earned his trust and I would've liked to see him question the situation more, but even more than that I would have liked to see Abhi really trying to find out what happened, knowing that he didn't remember doing anything that night. So in this fic...yeah, Abhi believes in himself, and is maybe a little more cynical and less trusting than show Abhi on this matter 😃

New update should be up shortly, though I expect will be sleeping just then 😛. Thanks for the comment 😃

Originally posted by: Mystery1

And, Oops nice dress choice for Pragya 😛 😆...

Glad you liked it 😆

I would like to post the next chapter at the top of page 24 so please bear with me :)