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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow mina. Loved this part too much. Pragya suppressing the urge of saying no to marriage and saying yes to dasi was so Pragya. Abhi- pragya scenes loved them a lot. Pragya in the mirror scene. I always love the mirror scene. And the dialogues. Abhi - Loved his confidence. Loved his confident in saying he doesn't love Tanu. And Pragya talking about that night. Oh loved that she opened that topic. Poor Abhi, he was trying very hard to prove he is innocent. Hope that second DNA report becomes true. Will look forward to next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Where do I want to start I dnt knw step by step getting more impressive.. part 3 abhi & pragya convo was exactly perfect by adding abt that night but I abhi is not totally unimaginable abt that night coz after that night next night also he had drunk in happy mood & point outed about previous night it was a frustration & bad mood.. Abhi - Nothing happened! I would know. You think a man's body could be used like that and he wouldn't know? That night -" it's clearly told that ya.. Waiting for next action of everyone & jealous of abhi..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Mina , unresed on page 14..
Just happened to read the post you made long time ago ...did u really tried eating rasmalai coated with chilli powder ?! 😆 ...why Mina, why ?! đŸ€Ł. Glad abhi didn't try anything weird like that later !! Or did u made any other attempts ?!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hayyee Minaji! So sorry I've not been keeping up with this story as well as I should have đŸ˜” BUT hayee Angad's entry. Dead. SUCH an impactful entry. And then right after that an intense Abhigya scene. Thank youuu <333 I was at the edge of my seat the entire time. And you KNOW how much I love intense scenes with marriage symbols. â˜ș
And then that sensitive conversation about Abhi not knowing what he could have done...they haven't brought up the "rape' word yet, I'm not sure if they suggested in the show also that what Tanu did to Abhi was without his consent, will you? Anyway the cautious and fearful notes in the conversation were done very well. I was mentally swivelling my head between Abhi's face and Pragya's.

Soo excited for the rest of this story!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unres Page 14😳
Edited by frenzyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazingly written as usual Mina👏
You're a great writer and I'm big fan😳
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
  1. Part 4 - to be added Feb 1/16
OMG it's today... You are going to post it at night according to canada.. I will be waiting.. 😃
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Res.. 😳

Unres! 😃
Loved it dear.
Pragya and abhi both are helpless,they do not want to marry an another person, but the situations lead them there.
I loved the part where abhi treated sindoor and mangalsutra, so nicely,do not wanting to harm the things which does matter and allowing himself to keep that memories with him... Plus abhigya conversation too. 😊
Abhi is damn sure that he did not do anything with tanu that night then why pragya is not believing her husband, her love and believing the reports??😕Poor abhi is trying to tell her.

As well as loved his efforts to stop angad and pragya's marriage.
Continue soon. Thanks for this chapter thou. 😊



You are exactly right, they're both helpless because of the situation! But maybe they won't stay helpless long, we'll have to see 😉 I'm glad you liked Abhi's strong moments in this chapter. As for Pragya, it is a tough position when you have to choose between what you want to believe and what seems to be fact with overwhelming evidence. Abhi is going to have to find some proof; in this case his words are not enough. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! Looking forward to your thoughts on the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: frenzyy

I am usually on time to unres but this took a while, all thanks to your hookup update!! Jus when I opened up to unres here, I saw the third chapter updated - I was pretty sure I was dreaming but when I realized I wasn't I went on to read that and kept my comment on hold temporarily! Guilty as charged! But as promised, unres before you updated the next chapter! So err, here it goes😳

Yayyy lucky me!!! I love these comments from you, they make me smile just like this -> 😃 And too cute that you thought you were dreaming the Hookupdate headline...😆


Totally totally loved the chapter!! Loved how pragya had a little "self" time, introspecting, analyzing and the events of the last few hours.. It was definitely overwhelming for her to keep track with everything that happened - first she was informed of a remarriage with "actual" rituals, soon to be followed by a divorce proceedings legally and also a prospective groom who appears out of nowhere on her doorstep and seems to be staying under her to-be-ex-husband's roof.. Whoa! That's a whole lot to process for her!! She is definitely facing a conflict with herself - as if parting ways from her husband and family wasn't hard enough now she again faces the dilemma of to do what is right and to do what her heart really wants.. Of course she choose the former and decided to give Angad a chance..

Ooof! What an excellent summary of everything Prags just experienced! And she has a crazy few days ahead of her too. And yes, you've understood her perfectly - she will always choose the former. She doesn't allow herself to value what her heart really wants...let's see if she learns to over the course of this story! I don't know yet myself 😆 😳

How very noble of the dadi and dasi's to accept tanu and her baby if only Pragya agreed for the remarriage.. Well it is their grandson's fault after all.. They were putting pragya in a tight spot and not exactly giving her a choice? Although the dadi's wanna secure pragya's future and all this is for her good and part of a plan - their bahu doesn't know any of this - she is kept in the dark - and her feelings are being played with here.. Telling pragya about the plan would be suicidal in itself too - because she is stubborn and is convinced tanu is really pregnant! So dadi's also don't really have a choice..

Hehe...just to be clear, the Daadi trio have no intention whatsoever of accepting Tanu and her baby. But yes, this plan they have is dangerous and manipulative...but they will do everything they can to preserve Pragya's heart and dignity, because they care deeply about her too, not just about their rascally grandson...!

She loves abhi and that's the truth although she is trying really hard to bury it and accept reality of leaving him.. Earlier for Sarla Ma's happiness she decided to marry Abhi and the history repeats itself now, for Daadi's happiness and to make her love(abhi) unite with his baby she is agreeing to her remarriage.. Certainly, she has gone crazy to do the same mistake twice.. As if the coincidence can't be any better both her to-be-ex and soon-to-be husband are from the celebrity world.. She needs a breather!

This is a good way to put it. Poor girl, no breather in the cards for her 😛

The conversation with abhi didn't really help her much, it took all of her to stay away from him, stay sane and not give in to their closeness.. She did take a difficult step to recount the incidents of that night jus so he will believe her and accept tanu..Things didn't actually go her way as he still refused to believe that the baby was his!

Well now, Abhi can't believe what he knows isn't true, right? But we'll have to see if maybe her words do have more of an effect on him that it initially seems. And thank you for pointing out how she fights and succeeds to stay sane among all the tensions in that conversation!

He he, love abhi tried to use all his methods to lure pragya to change her mind.. From the mangalsutra to sindoor that he never believes in, to the chemistry they share, the rockstar was trying every card of the play book jus so his stubborn wife would discard the idea of separation, agree that he is innocent and not the father of tannu's baby.. Jus when he was thinking he was getting through to her, lo, behold - he finally gets a picture of what really happened that night from his wife - and why his wife firmly believes tannu is right this time around,.. It's not that pragya refuses to believe him, its jus that she has strong reasons to believe abhi wasn't really in a state to be aware of what happened b/w him and tanu (having seen him first hand) and his memory did fall short given his not so sober state - defo putting tanu in the clear and our rockstar not so much.. To add cheesing on the cake is the pregnancy report and also one DNA report both confirming that Tanu isn't lying about the baby and Abhi is the father.. Whoa, our rockstar is really caught in the trap laid out by tannu and until the second DNA results are any different or comes out untampered, he doesn't really have much on his side, at least for the time being..

Hmmm...I don't know that it was luring per se. Think more desperate, less calculating. The situation is definitely starting to make him go out of his mind. Beautiful description of the realizations he has to deal with. True it seems he doesn't have much on his side, but one thing he does have - a brain. He may just start using it soon...if he can just get control of his feelings first!

With his family preparing Pragya to marry Angad and his wife wanting him to marry tanu for the baby - things are not exactly going in his favor. Our rockstar hasn't seen anything as yet - this is jus the tip of the iceberg he has bumped on and sure there is more to come in his way before he finally wins over his wife and family! Bring it on mina, loving every bit of this!😳

Heehee!!! So glad you're enjoying. Thank you for your awesome comments, I shall be eager to know your thoughts on the next update 😃 đŸ€—

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragz10

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Unres!

Minaaa! The chapters keep getting better and better! Where do I start? I loved brooding Abhi, resistant Pragya and most of all...they had a REAL conversation! 👏 This chapter kind of reminded me of the episode where Abhi and Pragya come back from the hospital after confirming that Tanu is pregnant. That was one of the rare episodes where they actually talk, without confessing their love, but sharing other raw feelings.

Hehe! I think I actually wrote this before that episode aired...will have to check dates 😳 But yes, definitely not enough such scenes on the show. But then if there were more, they'd probably solve their misunderstandings sooner, and then what would we watch...? 😆

I love that your Abhigya are different from the real ones, but then, are they really? Your Pragya is firm and knows how to talk back and not get swallowed down in his anger...but then just like the show, she has difficulties hiding her emotions and saying no to ideas she doesn't like (such as Daadi asking her to get married to Angad), thereby counting on destiny like always. Similarly, I liked Abhi for being adamant about Tanu lying, quickly denying that he loves her and also for repenting for the mistake he made in the past. Like the one in the show, Abhi is more proactive about his destiny than Pragya...if he doesn't like what is about to happen, he states it loud and clear! Basically, your Abhigya are stronger. 😊

Aww thank you so much for this astute analysis! Indeed, I do like to see them stronger and more mature, so that's how I write them...😳

Can't wait to see interactions between Angad and Pragya! Hmmm, what are Daasi and Daadi upto? How much of the plan that they've concocted does Angad know? So many questions!

Don't worry, I'm not big into suspense. You'll get answers to those questions soon. Thank you for reading and commenting! Really love reading your thoughts 😃

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