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Naina

@Naina-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Res!

Unres!

Minaaa! The chapters keep getting better and better! Where do I start? I loved brooding Abhi, resistant Pragya and most of all...they had a REAL conversation! 👏 This chapter kind of reminded me of the episode where Abhi and Pragya come back from the hospital after confirming that Tanu is pregnant. That was one of the rare episodes where they actually talk, without confessing their love, but sharing other raw feelings.

I love that your Abhigya are different from the real ones, but then, are they really? Your Pragya is firm and knows how to talk back and not get swallowed down in his anger...but then just like the show, she has difficulties hiding her emotions and saying no to ideas she doesn't like (such as Daadi asking her to get married to Angad), thereby counting on destiny like always. Similarly, I liked Abhi for being adamant about Tanu lying, quickly denying that he loves her and also for repenting for the mistake he made in the past. Like the one in the show, Abhi is more proactive about his destiny than Pragya...if he doesn't like what is about to happen, he states it loud and clear! Basically, your Abhigya are stronger. 😊

Can't wait to see interactions between Angad and Pragya! Hmmm, what are Daasi and Daadi upto? How much of the plan that they've concocted does Angad know? So many questions!

Edited by Pragz10 - 9 years ago

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Mysterious7

@Mysterious7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Res...

I'll probably be sleeping when you post 😭...

Edited by Mystery1 - 9 years ago

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Part 3 is now posted on the top of page 14, with a few notes in the post right after.

Thank you to Tisha, Frenzyy, Naina and Nads for res-ing before there was anything to res! 😆

Nads...sorry I didn't manage to post it while you were awake, time zone hazards 😛

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anamika.viji

@anamika.viji

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Res :)

Unres :)

Wow..Mina !! U brought that night happened on mms track !! One of the moments I hated ...here abhi didn't remember anything .but really I don't understand why he took the step to get intimate with her in soap..missed discussions becos I joined IF very late!!.here he felt badabt wht happened & wht he did to pragya... Good ..he started respecting kumkum & ms !! Did he really or just used them for his purpose?!

Glad he is still rejecting the the baby is not his...hope DNA result will be positive for him to free from T baby..glad they talked ...

Waiting for the next chapter

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Hey minu.
Just now got time to read this fiction
Loved the story like I always do in your story.
The explanation and the planning execution I liked it much.

Abhi's attending to change pragya action is such a nice.
I liked how abhi treated pragya's kumkum and managal sutra such loving.
Do continue soon

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Awesome update Mina. Loved it.
liked the conversation between Abhigya.
Continue soon plz.

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Mysterious7

@Mysterious7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Which Abhi and Pragya is this?! 😲...Why didn't I see this sort of attitude in the soap from both?!...Why aren't you the CV?! 😭...Do I need to say anything more?!...

Everything about this chapter was brilliant. Pragya doesn't really want to ago ahead with the plan, Abhi didn't stay quiet and was vocal about his feelings. This was too too good, the way the matter was handled and awww that night I'm so glad this was brought up between the two. Just amazeballs 👏. Eventhough in the soap I assume Abhi does remember because of what he said to her the next day before he tries being intimate number two with her 😆...

I am curious as to where this will lead to?!...

But one thing, does Daasi really wants Pragya and Angad married for temporary and not to fake it?!...Because initially I assumed it will be brought up, as in the marriage subject but it won't happen for real. So what's happening?! 😕...

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chubbygirl

@chubbygirl

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Mina thank you it's awesome.
I can see Pragya's feelings here and Abhi is worried that his wife is getting married.
The Manglasutra and kumkum part was the best.
Can imagine Abhi pinning Pragya near the closet☺️

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Harshawardhini

@vlhs12993

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

First of all thank you mina for writing about the mms night scene. I was furious when the cvs failed to acknowledge the scene in later episodes. here abhigya confrontation about that scene was amazingly done. I'm loving the way abhi trying to prove himself to pragya. its always vice-versa in the show.

waiting for angad-pragya scene. you have to give a couple name for them.