Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29)

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#411

That was so intense..

Pragya should trust in abhi more..

Maybe her side of story is right..

But her words to abhi was wayyy wrong..

Poor abhi..

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sanya_p

@sanya_p

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#412

Tia,

Why you write so good... now I'm feeling bad for both of them.

When this girl will understand that she is in love with an artist, a genuine, care-free soul who doesn't know to adulterate his emotions.

Every time she hits him with her expectations. Why can't she sees that he is trying his best. He is also fighting alone, same way she also has to fight her problems out.

He always tries to calm her down, patiently discuss the issue till she doubts him or accuse him.

It was insulting.

Btw, I didn't really get why he asked for live-in? To keep her away from all these tensions?

I may be the only Abhi lover around, but I just like this Abhi, a very in-character, typical rockstar guy type.

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TeluguAmmayi

@TeluguAmmayi

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#413

Well, living in without marriage?
No wonder she felt used.

res

Edited by harisha_kb - 9 years ago

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anamika.viji

@anamika.viji

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#414

Res/unres :)

Liked pragyas jealous when she saw his dance with T ...I can so relate Pragya's feeling... I don't see any faults in her behavior... I can understand her insecurities..howlong she can avoid her mom abt her marriage..?! Can't find fault in her mom's act too..they want to fulfill her duty of settling her daughter..

2 months separation causes all problem & in a way fibd ing a solution to their problem :(

Though her words are hard which she said to abhi , it was truth also na!!abhi's suggestion of Live-in relationship!! Thts not right .& possible !! How will she explain tht her mom & he to his daadi..

I can understand his expectation to wait for some more time ...but with out any proper commitment how can she do tht ?!

He was right in getting angry at her for her words ..but he failed to realize her complications & expectations...or never fully listened her ...

Didn't like the way he left her abruptly & pushing her ...

If T didn't return , I will be happy..

Whatever reason that made their separation, she is not over him still..but want to know abhi's pov too..is he love her still !?

Waiting for the next chapter :)

Edited by anamika.vg - 9 years ago

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laughter512

@laughter512

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#415

Tia tia tia. ...I am a huge fan of your writing. I read your previous story rockstar in one go. And at present I am hooked to restless. I am reading it from day 1 and I really love it.

In fact today I checked your post for 4 times. I love how you are shaping the story. It's very realistic. Well I am not the type who encourages pre martial relationship like this but it is common nowadays.

Pragya character is realistic and her insecurities too and girls do have such insecurities in these relationship and I totally understand her stand and even in this chapter I find nothing wrong in her actions.

As far as your ability is concerned I know he is good and he truly loves his chasmish but he needs to commit. Because his actions can scare any girl out of her wits.

Lastly I have a request I want something from abhi's poverty because Pragya isn't as complex as abhi and even in soap we always get Pragya pov than abhi's. So I would love to know what abhi thinks about chasmish.

And tia I will be super pissed if after becoming a rockstar he doesn't remember Pragya or doesn't miss her.

Eagerly waiting for their present time encounter. Want to see how they will react meeting after break up. I request you to update it daily because I totally become restless without restless. I may not comment everday because I have exams to prepare for . but I read each chapter of yours and I truly like it. Bear with me for such a long post but I need to express myself.

Thank you

Shivani

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Mysterious7

@Mysterious7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#416

Awww, I feel for both Abhi and Pragya 😭...

I did not like one part one bit at all, you know exactly which part 😡 🤢 😭...

That was such a couple argument both Abhi and Pragya had, well they are a couple, but you know what I mean..

But her mentioning her insecurites about his celebrity industry and him arriving at 5 am and feeling like she is being used for bed from him I'm not surprised because of the way he mentions the live-in whilst she's talking to him about their marriage and future. What has he been doing untill 5 am?! But he wanted to talk to her about something too?! Maybe, his music career related?!...And her insecurites is justified considering from their last tiff they never cleared that fully and now another tiff. I know she doesn't be right with her words at times but he just goes one off on her, both need to sort out these...And after this chapter, is it the present?!...

Love the way you wrote the end part, Abhi and Pragya argument. It was sooo real and the end part was sooo intense and both Abhi and Pragya are in love with each other sooo immensely and love each other sooo immensely. It brought out very mixed emotions for me and I can feel for both of them 😭...

And the song is so appt with the situation and it suits both Abhi and Pragya. Is the song from both Abhi and Pragya point of views?! Right?!...

Edited by Mystery1 - 9 years ago

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ShaNchi

@ShaNchi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#417

Tiaaa..👏

I feel bad for both of them...😭

Both of their POV are convinced and true..

I like the way Pragya got jealous with Tanu, her insecurities make her to thought like that..

and Abhi he tried his best to bring Trust.. but he is not thinking in her POV..he haven't open up his mind like Pragya. He want his Chasmish all the times but the way he is showing that makes Pragya feel insecure..

Awesome update.. eagerly waiting for the next..😊

Edited by aakanchanadevi - 9 years ago

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Kirti

@Tisha_fan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#418

Hope all missunderstandings between them clear soon. Loved it❤️. Plz pm me when you update next part.

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nitarata

@nitarata

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#419

Nadia, that song suits both of them I thought..Some words for Pragya and some for Abhi..

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Badbuddy

@Badbuddy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#420

Loved this chapter a lot. Both Abhi and Pragya are fault today I think. Abhi shouldn"t have used the word live-line relationship and Pragya, she crossed the line, told Abhi he only used her for bed. Oh! poor Abhi felt too bad. But Pragya also felt bad seeing him sad. Is this their last meeting? Hope Tanu"s chapter is only upto this. Again thank you for this wonderful update.

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