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Posted: 10 years ago
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Laughter 512,

If this is your first go at writing you then write very well yourself!!

And thank you for reading my work, I glad you enjoy reading them and thank you so much for such a big compliment, really means a lot to me.

Please do write more, I would love to read more from you :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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laughter512 woah! if thats your first well wow! its very good! nice continuation!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice aarfa n laugher 512 love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Hey guys you can call me shivani
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was really good Aafrah and Shivani👍🏼. Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --simmi--

Love it! Your first works are amazing!

thank you simmi...i am a very big fan of yours,😊 read many of your stories which were soo awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Aafrah ...awww awww thank u so much 😳 you have no idea how much that means to me..ur like my most favourite writer .i read all of your FFs and saved then as pdf format 😆 so that i never lose them..we never spoke cox i thought u like being little taught to get kind 🤣 but i m noticing u now in AT n i saw u posted your intro .u have such a awesome personality and then u wrote for me 😭 your fangurl loves u ❤️

and the FF oh hell yeah its awesome wrote it ..cant wait to read more from you..the happy FF ur writing another drop dead fav one of mine ..do update soon pelezz 😳

@laughter512 .. thats your first attempt 😳 '' agar suruwaad aise hai toh anjaam kya hoga '' my poor translation is '' if the beginning is this good how good is the end result gonna be '' totally loved it love..you have no idea how much i want Pragya to tell him all about the guitar ,coat,karwa chaut incident. you did it beautifully ..loved it loved it ..totally lived it 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: laughter512

I want to continue the cliff hanger that aafrah has left. ...

Abhi turned towards Pragya.He could see her resolve breaking. He knew this would effect her.

You are right your tanu can never cheat. She could never cheat anyone. She is an epitome of goodness. But I am the heartless devil who could break anyone's heart

She never cheated you when she stole the proof from my cell and bailed you from the jail but I cheated you when I gave a wrong statement to protect you from the goons of corporate

I was faking a karva chauth for you and she kept a fast by eating pizza.

She didn't cheat you when she broke the strings of the guitar and I cheated you when I ran like a mad person to rush.

And most importantly I can do anything for money, stoop to any low but tanu, no, no your tanu she won't stoop to that low to get pregnant from someone else and claim it is someone else's baby so that she can enjoy his property, create fake dna reports and even go to the extent of defaming him

Abhi was silently listening to all these, his mental state was in a mess that he couldn't register her last statement. He caught her and asked, "What? Is it true what are you saying.
Pragya came out of her trance . She understood that she went overboard and now she can't fake it any longer she tried to get away from Abhi but Abhi pulled her closer. What are you saying is that true? Pragya gave up she could no longer continue it. She hugged Abhi and started crying .

She started saying I might sorry that I made you got through this much. I went away from you even after knowing you loved me just for the sake of your child which never existed. ...


Pls:this is my first attempt at writing hope you like it. And aafrah I am fan of your writing. I read all your fictions and believe me if in future you want to turn into a writer. I will be the first one to buy your books

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ I NEED this scene on the show - please!
Someone ought to hold a village at random, and make this scene their demand on releasing prisoners. If this whole track leads to this with Abhi finally knowing everything Pragz has done for him - I can die happy.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Can I play? 😳 Is it too late?

Too bad. I'm playing 😆

Continuing where laughter512 left off...

Abhi fell to his knees in front of Pragya which only made her gasp in shock. He tried to fold his hands before her, pleading - but Pragya wasn't having it.

"Stop," she cried clasping his hands with hers; trying to pull him back up on to his feet. "Don't-"

Still on his knees, he grabbed her roughly - wrapping his hands around her waist. He buried his face against her body. "I'm sorry," he apologized, his pain both visible and unmistakable in his voice.

At first, Pragya didn't know how to react. She just stood there motionless. She couldn't tell if she was shaking or if he was. Or maybe they both were.

She finally found her voice and ran a hand gently through his hair hoping it would soothe and comfort him, "you didn't know."

Abhi stiffened against her and then pulled away altogether, slowly rising to his feet. He looked her over with an expression that Pragya couldn't quite place. "Why didn't you tell me?"

His gaze was so intense that it made her look to her feet as she spoke, unable to meet his eyes. "I don't have proof."

His silence made her look up at him worriedly. Something foreign flickered behind his eyes. The onslaught of expressions that flitted across Abhi's face startled her. It happened so quickly and so suddenly, that she was completely caught off guard, when without warning - he advanced on her.

He grabbed her; both hands grabbing her shoulders, eyes blazing with a frustration she couldn't comprehend.

"Why would I need proof?" his question sounded more like a demand.

Pragya averted her gaze, "I didn't think you would believe me."

His grip tightened on her shoulders, which made her look up at him again - his gaze holding her captive; it stunned her into silence and froze her in place.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: wickedlyunique

<font face="Calibri"><font size="3">Can I play? 😳Is it too late? </font></font>


<font face="Calibri"><font size="3">Too bad. I'm playing 😆</font></font>


<font size="3"><font face="Calibri">Continuing where </font>laughter512 left off...</font>


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<font size="3">Abhi fell to his knees in front of Pragya which only made her gasp in shock. He tried to fold his hands before her, pleading - but Pragya wasn't having it.</font>


<font size="3">"Stop," she cried clasping his hands with hers; trying to pull him back up on to his feet. "Don't-"</font>


<font size="3">Still on his knees, he grabbed her roughly - wrapping his hands around her waist. He buried his face against her body. "I'm sorry," he apologized, his pain both visible and unmistakable in his voice. </font>


<font size="3">At first, Pragya didn't know how to react. She just stood there motionless. She couldn't tell if she was shaking or if he was. Or maybe they both were.</font>


<font size="3">She finally found her voice and ran a hand gently through his hair hoping it would soothe and comfort him, "you didn't know."</font>


<font size="3">Abhi stiffened against her and then pulled away altogether, slowly rising to his feet. He looked her over with an expression that Pragya couldn't quite place. "Why didn't you tell me?"</font>


<font size="3">His gaze was so intense that it made her look to her feet as she spoke, unable to meet his eyes. "I don't have proof."</font>


<font size="3">His silence made her look up a

worriedly.
<font face="Calibri">Something foreign flickered behind his eyes. The onslaught of expressions that flitted across Abhi's face startled her. It happened so quickly and so suddenly, that she was completely caught off guard, when without warning - he advanced on her.</font></font>


<font face="Calibri"><font size="3">He grabbed her; both hands grabbing her shoulders, eyes blazing with a frustration she couldn't comprehend.</font></font>


<font face="Calibri"><font size="3">"Why would I nee?" his question sounded more like a demand.</font></font>


<font face="Calibri"><font size="3">Pragya averted her gaze, "I didn't think you would believe me."</font></font>


<font face="Calibri"><font size="3">His grip tightened on her shoulders, which made her look up at him again - his gaze holding her captive; it stunned her into silence and froze her in place.</font></font>


<font size="3" face="Calibri"></font>





wow superb lovely i will cont it
wo

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