Abhigya FF: Don't Leave Me Ever Chapter 4 updated- 17.11.15 (page 11) - Page 6

Originally posted by: .arima.

beautiful update
loved it
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Wow!! What an awesome chapter! Poor poor Pragya! She can't catch a break, I was hoping Abhi would come and bring her back into the house when she was asleep outside! Love how you've captured her turmoil. The scene with Bunty was so cute too! Can't wait for the next part well done buddy! Nicely done xx

Fabulous...👏

Originally posted by: x-Ri-Ri-x

Wow!! What an awesome chapter! Poor poor Pragya! She can't catch a break, I was hoping Abhi would come and bring her back into the house when she was asleep outside! Love how you've captured her turmoil. The scene with Bunty was so cute too! Can't wait for the next part well done buddy! Nicely done xx

Originally posted by: anushka12345

Fabulous...👏

Very beautifully penned...

Pragya's feelings her turmoil was nicely written.👍🏼

The end scene with Bunty was adorable...

Waiting for your next update.

UPDATE SOON...

it was a nice update.
thanks for pm

OMG Shiva!! Amazing updates!! Read both the chapters together!

CHAPTER 3: Spooky and Weird

The Mehra family were seated at the living room, all tired after organizing the party and its decorations. Aakash and Aaliya were seated away from the other's earshot, having a very serious conversation, a plan for Aakash to get his Rachna and his baby back.

Aakash couldn't take it anymore; Pummy was hell bound on getting him married to a millionaire's daughter, a shameless girl who didn't give a damn that he had already made another woman pregnant. She just wanted to get married to Abhi THE ROCKSTAR's family. But Aakash didn't want someone like that, he wanted his Rachu, who married him not knowing that he was Abhi The Rockstar's brother, who trusted in him and gave her everything to him, only to be cheated by him. Yes, it's true that he was blinded by money and fame, and influenced badly by his mother's constant nagging and dreams of living a leisure life, but now he had changed. His Babhi had taught him that money was not everything. He witnessed how money couldn't help his Rockstar Bhai when a crisis came but his Babhi did and that's how he realized that love was really unconditional and sacrificial; and his true love was Rachna who was ready to leave her family's love and support for him. He wanted to ask Pragya Babhi for help but knowing what was happening, he didn't.

Aaliya didn't have anything to scheme for now. She had let the lovebirds unite. She realized that she never loved Purab, it was just her zid and now that she was over it, she was ready to help anyone and everyone, and marry the guy her Dadi and Bhai selected. She thought she would need to scheme something up to kick Tanu out of Abhi and Pragya's life but now she too was lacking in action.

They were carefully talking of executing the plan when they heard a voice.

"Dadi, aapne apni laadli bahu ko kahi pe dekha?(Did you see your laadli bahu anywhere?)" Abhi asked, descending the grand stairs, trying to contain his concern of not even getting a glimpse of his wife since daybreak.

"Offo Abhi puththar, dho maheene keliye tum Pragya beta ki saath hi thi na? Ab thodi waqt hum buddom keliye bhi nikaalo! (Offo Abhi, you were with Pragya for two whole months right? Now, spend some time with us old people too!)" Tauji chuckled and the others laughed. Even though negligible, Abhi thought that the laughter were not as genuine as they seemed to be. Something's fishy.

"Of course Tauji, I want to spend time with you guys too. But, I haven't seen my wife since yesterday night aur mujhe toh dekhna chaahiya na ki woh yahape hai ya phir se kidnap ho gayi? (and I should check if she's here or has she been kidnapped again, right?)" Abhi joked, plopping on the couch beside Aaliya.

The atmosphere tensed up and Aaliya hissed.

"Chup kar Abhi, kaise baath kar rahi ho? Pragya beta kitchen main hai; Bunty ke saath. (Shut up Abhi, What kind of talk is this? Pragya beta is in the kitchen, with Bunty.)" Dasi scolded.

Abhi smiled sheepishly rushed to the kitchen.

"Bhai ki nokjokh kuch serious hota jaa raha hai. (Bhai's nokjokh is getting serious.)" Aakash muttered.

"Seriously, dhoosrom ko kaise lage, unko koyi pharak hi nahi padtha. (He doesn't give damn on how others feel about it.)" Aaliya added quietly so that only Aakash could here.

"Tum dhonom kya baath kar rahi ho? (What are you two talking about?)" Dadi asked.

"Bhai's this month's schedule, Dadi." Aaliya covered up.

Dadi nodded and went back to her deep thiking, creasing forming o her forehead.

"Mmm, Chaachi. Best Pakoda ever!!" Bunty declared savouring the delicious treat.

"Thank you mera Bachcha." Pragya said, absentmindedly keeping the atta and stuff in their places.

"Aap ek bite lo na? (You take a bite too na?)" he prompted, trying to keep in his worry.

"Hey Good-looking, what's cooking?" Abhi asked making his entry.

"Pakoda, Samosa and Choco-chip cookies!" Bunty squealed. Abhi again found something amiss. Bunty's normal girly squeals were much livelier than this

"Arey, tum sab kuch akele kha rahi ho? Bubbly aur baakhi gharwaalom ka kya? (Arey, you're having all of it by yourself? What about Bubbly and the rest of the family?)" Abhi asked, sitting on the counter-top.

"Pragya Chaachi ne un logon keliye serving plate mein rakh liya hai. Yaha clean karne ke baadh woh sabko dhenge, chai ke saath! (Pragya Chaachi has already kept the treats on serving plates for all of them. after cleaning up, she will serve it to all along with tea.)" Bunty stated, smartly but soberly.

"Aisa hai? (Is it so?) Then go and share your treats with Bubbly now." Abhi said, desperate to speak to Pragya about her change in behaviour, alone.

"Good IDEA Chaachu!" Bunty exclaimed and after picking his car and saying bye to his favourite Chaachi, he ran out with the plate of cookies, samosas and pakodas. Bunty slowed down when he reached the exit and glanced at his Chaachi sadly and slowly walked away.

Pragya tensed up when she perceived that he had purposefully got rid of Bunty to be alone with her.

Tum zyaada math socho Pragya. Yeh tumhaara saath akela time spend karne keliye nahi aayi hai, divorce paper key a Dadi ki thabayeth ke baare mein poochne aayi hogi. [Don't think much Pragya. He hasn't come to spend alone time with you. He might be here to talk about our divorce or about Dadi's heatlth.] she thought to herself bitterly. She could feel her grief coming back. Her throat was dry and it felt as if she had swallowed a stone. Her chest was tight and it hurt to breathe. But nevertheless she continued to do her chores, completely ignoring Abhi. She quickly cleared and cleaned the counters, picking on the onion peels and dal bits which got stuck in the corners.

Abhi was observing her all alone; he saw a pattern in her work, after doing a particular chore, she would look at the time and then wipe the particular place before moving on to another area. Abhi unconsciously smiled seeing this.

Pragya was making tea for the others when Abhi couldn't take the silence anymore and starting talking,

"Tum subah se kaam kar rahi hai na? (You are working since morning right?)"

"Haan, toh? (Yes, so?)" Pragya whispered more to herself.

"Bas kar ab. Mein Robin ko bulaathi hui. Woh aakar chai bana lengi. (Stop it now. I'll call Robin. He will make the tea)" he said, looking at the bubbles forming on the still water.

"No thanks, mujhe kaam karna achcha lagta hai. Dho mahine idle thi. (I like to work. I was idle for 2 months)" Pragya retorted, not facing him.

"Idle? You were taking care of me, running away from goons and eating wild fruits. In what way is that idle?" Abhi glared. He couldn't believe his wife. How could she take it so lightly? If he hadn't pushed her, she would've been dead by now! I mean, Abhi was huge, a hulk. That's why he was able to take the bullet without dying but Pragya's fragile body wouldn't have taken it. Aur vaise bhi, Abhi would've been too busy panicking to take care of her or get the bullet out and save her in time. A gruesome image of his Fuggy's corpse o his arm came to his mind. he felt his eyes moisten and fist tighten. He quickly drove away those thoughts and looked at Pragya to reply.

"Aapki problem kya hai? Aapko argue karna hai toh aapki girlfriend ke paas jaao aur mujhe meri kaam karne dho. Please. (what is your problem? If you want to argue, go to your girlfriend and let me do my work!)" Pragya growled, failing to keep in her anger and grief.

"Fuggy, tumhei kya hua? Tum aise kyun baath kar rahi hai? (Fuggy, what happened? Why are you talking like this?)" Abhi was shocked beyond belief. His Fuggy was the calm type, the one who isn't caught off-guard or tensed in a problematic situation, the one who thinks quick and come up with the simplest and easiest solution to anything and everything. That Fuggy was getting angry for no reason. Abhi couldn't believe it was real; Fuggy being, well, Tanu-ish'.

"Mera naam Pragya hai, Fuggy nahi! (My name is Pragya, not Fuggy!)" she exclaimed, taking deep breaths to calm herself. She felt her nails dig into her fisted palm. She concentrated on unfolding it while the tea got ready.

"Itni si baath hai? Okay Baba, mein teri nickname badhal dethi hui. (That's it?Okay Baba, I will change your nickname then.)How about Kishmish? I mean bachpan main tum pumpkin ke tharah moti thi par ab kishmish jaisi sookhi hai, mera mathlab tha patli. (I mean, you were fat like pumpkin when you were a kid but now, you are dry like kishmish, I mean slim.)" Abhi laughed at his own joke while Pragya gave him a if-looks-could-kill glare.

She quickly transferred the tea into the cups and hurried out with it. Abhi (paagal) took the tray of snacks and followed her.

"Hey Bhagvan, yeh mein kya dekh rahi hui? Abhi snacks serve kar raha hai? (Oh God, what I am seeing? Abhi's serving snacks?)" Dadi said dramatically making everyone but Abhi and Pragya laugh. Pragya held her poker face while Abhi looked annoyed.

"Dekho Dadi, Chachu ki mazaak udna Chaachi ko achcha nahi laga. (Look Dadi, Chaachi didn't like Chaachu being teased.)" Bubbly stated causing more laughter, hesitant ones.

"Chup kar Bubbly. Bholne se pehle socha kar! (Shut up Bubbly. Think before you speak!)" Aaliya said, irritated at her niece. She had noticed pretty dense awkwardness between Bhai and Babhi since morning, she didn't want her Babhi to feel uncomfortable due to some careless comments.

"Dadi, aapko aur kuch chaahiye? (Dadi, do you want anything else?)" Pragya asked. Abhi found this extremely weird; Pragya was acting like some waitress now.

"Nahi puththar, aise kyun pooch rahi ho? (no child, why are you asking like that?)" Dadi asked. She too was surprised. First of all, Pragya had woke up at 5 AM and started doing chores, cleaning, cooking, decoration etc and now it's 5 PM. She had been working non-stop for 12 straight hours and hasn't eaten anything, at least not in front of her and now she want more work, weird!

"Exactly Babhi. Aap subah se kitne kaam kar rahi hui? Dadi ya koyi member ko kuch chaahiye toh woh Bahadur Kaka ya Robin se poochongi nahi toh kudh kar dhoongi. Aap kamre main jaayiye, thode dher aaram karo phir party keliye tyaar hokar neeche aana. Aaj keliye aapko, no more kaam and that's an order. (From morning, how much work are you doing? If Dadi or any member want anything, they will ask Bahadur Kaka or Robin or else they will get it themselves. You go to your room and rest for some time. And come down after getting ready for the party. For today you will do no more work and that's an order.)" Aaliya exclaimed, pointing her finger at the stairs.

Pragya was about to protest but got intimidated by Aaliya's 10000$$$$ worth glare and went upstairs.

Abhi watched all this silently. Something was definitely wrong with his Fuggy but what?

The family sat idly for some time. Dadi was visibly restless, she was fidgeting and her mind was somewhere else. Same was the condition of the Dasis, Aaliya and Aakash, but they atleast tried to hide it. Abhi observed them all, Aaliya and Aakash was looking at each other tensed that means their concern is the same. Both the Dasis were doing the same but Abhi knew that their concern is same as his Dadi. The duffer thought and thought but he couldn't find anything that could be the reason for their restlessness. Taiji and Mithali was talking away about the jewellery cost and stuff. Bunty and Bubbly had gone to their room.

"That's it!" Aaliya exclaimed and walked away towards the kitchen.

"Ise kya hua? (what happened to her?)" Abhi asked Aakash.

"Nothing Bhai. She's just concerned." Aakash replied hesitantly. He and Aaliya had got an update on what was going on between the couple from Purab and Bulbul and they were pretty pissed that Abhi was oblivious about such a drastic change in Pragya's behaviour and outlook on life.

"About what?" Abhi pushed. He desperately wanted to know what was happening in his house. Who knows? Maybe Pragya was concerned about it too.

"Nothing important. Leave that, how's your wound?" Aakash countered, changing the subject.

Abhi shrugged and sat back on his seat. He understood that Aakash didn't wish to speak to him on it. The suddenly he caught sight of Tauji. He was reading the newspaper, but his eyes darted towards the first floor, towards their room from time to time, like he expected Pragya to come down any moment. He observed the other members and saw a similar pattern, even Mithali Babhi and Taiji looked over to the room from time to time. Bahadur Kaka, who had come to clear up the table, was also doing the same. Abhi was going to Dadi when he saw his niece and nephew peaking out of their room and looking over to their room. He smacked his head mentally. Of course!! Fuggy's the reason for their concern. He decided to go upstairs and gave her lecture for frightening his family with her spooky silence then thought,

Why are they waiting for her to come down? Aaliya asked to rest right?

Then he saw Aaliya coming with a tray of food, glaring at particularly nothing. She went upstairs with it and suddenly all the others followed. Abhi was confused but followed behind Aakash.

Aaliya stopped before the room and signalled the others to wait. She opened the door. Pragya was not in the room but all saw her silhouette at the balcony before Aaliya closed the door behind. For the next few minutes, all listened silently to the whispers coming from the room then Aaliya emerged from it, rubbing her head and glaring at the ground.

"Babhi ne kaha ki woh aaraam karna chaahthi hui aur koyi unhei disturb nahi kare. Aap bhi nahi Dadi. (Babhi said she wanted to rest and no one disturb her. Not even you, Dadi.)" Aaliya said, gritting her teeth.

"Bunty, jab aap kitchen main thei, Chaachi ne kuch kaaya tha kya? (Bunty, when you're I the kitchen, did Chaachi eat anything??)" Aakash asked, looking really tensed.

"No, not even water." Bunty replied sadly.

"Robin said the same." Aaliya stated emotionlessly.

"Yaha ho kya raha hai? Pragya kuch nahi kaaya abtak? (what is happening here? Pragya haven't eaten anything yet?)" Abhi growled when he perceived the reason for everyone's restlessness. He felt extremely angry, more at himself than at others. Pragya would take care of him every day at any time and he didn't even care to check!

"Kaana chod, kaam ke alaava woh aaj kuch nahi ki hai. Teek se baath tak nahi ki. Par tumhei kyun farak padega Abhi? Tum toh subah se tumaare studio main thei, gaana banaa rahe thei. Tumhari Bheevi teek samay par teri khaana studio main pahunchaaya, teri favourite sabziya banaaya, sab kiya. Par tumhei yeh nahi patha ki woh kya kar rahi ho? 9 saal ke bachche pareshaan thei uskeliye par tumhei kuch nahi patha! Sharam aane chaahiye tumhei apne aap par! (Leave the food, she haven't done anything but work today. She haven't even talked properly. But why would you care, Abhi? You were busy composing songs from the morning. You wife sent you your food in time, made your favourite veggies, did everything. But you don't know what she have been doing? The nine year olds here are worried for her but you don't know anything! You should be ashamed of yourself!)" Dasi scolded.

"Dasi, Bhai ko nahi patha tha. Ab patha hai. (Bhai didn't know, now he do.) He will take care of it now." Aaliya stated, boring holes through his brain. Abhi understood that was not a statement, but was an order.

"Exactly." Abhi said and made his way into his room, their room.

To be continued...

Should I continue?

aliyah is nice to pragya now

Originally posted by: KIHminnie123

aliyah is nice to pragya now

what happened to pragya?

she hasn't proposed she she is upset

loved this chapter

do cont

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