Kumkum Bhagya FF: An Alternative story - CH12 Updated on Page 33 05/08 - Page 8

Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow! So many emotions it left me I don't even know how to describe how I felt! It was upsetting to see Pragya keep on getting hopes high only for them to be crashed again. Abhi is still confused and it is strong worse. So Pragya has gone to speak to Daadi, wonder what ends up happening. And PS I love your writing style, it is amazing! <3

I just love this story and your wriring style!

Originally posted by: MsTiara

I just love this story and your wriring style!

It's AMAZING! I LOVE IT!

Please update soon! 😳

Thank you so much! Im really happy you have enjoyed it! Xxx

Wow ..just wow ..I can not tell you how satisfying your updates always make me feel they are long and they are full of events and conversations and so well written ..I enjoyed reading them so much and thank you so so much for the translation ..I really have no problem with Hindi I can understand it..it is basic as you said ,,but at the same time adding the translation helped me to go through the story smoothly and I also copy pasted all the conversation and the translation in my PC to reread them gain and again I'm trying to learn Hindi and this will help me so much
Thank you so much for this update and I will wait so eagerly for the coming update

Omg you stopped it right there!! i was anxiously waiting to see how her revalation to dadi will play out and turns out it's a cliffhanger! wow, let me tell you that this story is engaging. every chapter is slowly building towards the long awaited climax and it's torn me in half; a part of me wants to see this dragged bcos i really like your portrayal of pragya, and the other part of me is absolutely excited to finally see abhi get a bitter taste of his own medicine (suffer abhi suffer!!!) in the end i just want pragya to be happy, not on her family's behalf, not because she's done the right thing as a daughter, sister, bahu or wife- just purely happy for herself.

Wow RiRi your story is just fabulous! I knew it was going to put me on an emotional roller coaster and it didn't disappoint! I like how we're hearing a little from each character so that we're getting a complete picture of what is happening.

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Wow ..just wow ..I can not tell you how satisfying your updates always make me feel they are long and they are full of events and conversations and so well written ..I enjoyed reading them so much and thank you so so much for the translation ..I really have no problem with Hindi I can understand it..it is basic as you said ,,but at the same time adding the translation helped me to go through the story smoothly and I also copy pasted all the conversation and the translation in my PC to reread them gain and again I'm trying to learn Hindi and this will help me so much
Thank you so much for this update and I will wait so eagerly for the coming update

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I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I wrote the English translation with you in mind actually.
I wanted to add them after and a line or two away from
The hindi, so that as you were reading you were able to have a crack at the hindi without seeing the English translation first :) sort of like a mini test. But I'm so happy the story is helping you learn to understand the language better. I have started to write the next chapter so as soon as it's done I'll post.

Thank you so much for your encouraging words and lovely comments :) cxx

Originally posted by: valschanya

Omg you stopped it right there!! i was anxiously waiting to see how her revalation to dadi will play out and turns out it's a cliffhanger! wow, let me tell you that this story is engaging. every chapter is slowly building towards the long awaited climax and it's torn me in half; a part of me wants to see this dragged bcos i really like your portrayal of pragya, and the other part of me is absolutely excited to finally see abhi get a bitter taste of his own medicine (suffer abhi suffer!!!) in the end i just want pragya to be happy, not on her family's behalf, not because she's done the right thing as a daughter, sister, bahu or wife- just purely happy for herself.

Aww thank you so much! Yes unfortunately I had to leave it as a cliff hanger as I really wanted to take the time and write dadi and Pragyas exchange. It's going to be an emotional one. I've written some of the chapter and I think you will enjoy it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting :-) xx

Originally posted by: putturani

Wow RiRi your story is just fabulous! I knew it was going to put me on an emotional roller coaster and it didn't disappoint! I like how we're hearing a little from each character so that we're getting a complete picture of what is happening.

How sad for Pragya that once again her hopes are dashed...but I'm hoping you're bringing her down so low to lift her even higher in the end. THIS is what the show Pragya should be like - strong, mature and dignified!

Well done!

Thank you!! we are definitely in agreement where Pragya is concerned. I don't want her to be the teary in love mess. I want her to take matters into her own hands. And unintentionally make him
Suffer!! Only then will Abhi realise he definitely could do worse than Pragya!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I will post the next update as soon as I've finished writing it :) xx

Thanks for upd riri
Pragya going to tell dadi oh no
I am so excited whats going to happen