Kumkum Bhagya FF: An Alternative story - CH12 Updated on Page 33 05/08 - Page 6

Hey!!! ANOTHER awesome update,... I loved it... I love how Abhi felt a need to spoon her yet again but couldn't because of that stupid barrier... I loved that Abhi liked a suit the same color as Pragya... I just love the fact that Abhi cares for her... in other words... I just love this story 😳 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP!!! I know you legit updated today and I even saw that you have the other half already updated so can you PRETTY please update NOW!!!! OMg... the anticipation is the worst 😡 but please update soon 😃 I know how it feels to want to perfect something nd to be fully satisfied with your writing but come on... perfect is sooo BORING... overthinking is bad... just upload it already ahhh ahahahaha 😛😆

Wow this is such an amazing update both for it's length and content I had such good time reading it I loved everything and I specially loved Abhi's and Pragya's moments so romantic and beautiful and heart wrenching you know like you Hindi is not my first language in fact I do not Know Hindi at all I'm just start to be able to understand a little by watching Hindi movies and serials Specially KKB some of the writers in the IF are my friends and they know that me and some other people do not understand Hindi so they usually give a translation to their lines but you know what because I loved your story so much I took my time trying to read The Hindi dialogue and I'm so excited to discover that I can actually read and understand the lines and I'm really happy that you wrote them in Hindi it made me feel proud of my self I'm learning and I'm getting better in picking up the language ,,so thank you so much for an additional treat for me

Originally posted by: putturani

You updated! And it was such a deliciously long chapter too! I'm loving the way you write - everything is so true to life. You pay attention to each and every thing that is happening so that it's like I'm actually getting a peek into their lives. It's so emotionally rich too. I'm loving that we're hearing from all the different characters. Makes me think they'll all be important in some way. Like Mina I'm also getting a sense of foreboding about Bulbul and Purab's wedding but let's see where you take us!

Thank you ! I'm really chuffed you liked it. I don't really plan it as I'm writing so I have a few ideas as to which way this will go. But I'm a hopeless romantic so you can bet it will be filled with Abhi Pragya moments :-) xxx

Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow! What an awesome update! The main thing I loved is Pragya trying to be strong and moving on whereas Abhi is falling deeper. I felt so bad for Pragya she loves him so much and he still hasn't realised his own feelings. Damn this Tanu is so horrid but what better is expected from her. Can't wait for the next update!

My favourite lines-
When she came into this house she was a strong willed, hopeful girl with dreams of a simple life and a loving husband. She would not accept that today stood a broken women. Yesterday a broken woman stood in her place, but today Pragya looked at a new version of herself. A version that was toughened from life's lessons, one that understood that not everything shiny in life was made from gold.

Thank you!! I feel in the show Pragya's studious strong side has been lost! I wanted to try and give that back to her in this. I'm really happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for your encouragement and for taking the time to comment xxx

Originally posted by: Asma-

Fabulous update

Thank you so much! Xx

Originally posted by: HARNIM

loving it!!⭐️

i am not getting words!!😭

i simply love it

and thanks for giving such long updates .👏

i love how pragya is realizing how she has changed!👍🏼

waiting for more

update soonish!

Thank you!! I'm really happy you enjoyed it xx

Originally posted by: vlhs12993

It was an amazing chapter dear 😃
I loved abhi- pragya conversation
Sarla ma has kept abhi in a pedestal. She will also be heart broken once she knows the truth.
Really want to see pragya wearing that saree in the show .
Every thing was perfect.
You gave an insight about every one's thought.
Great work dear 👏
Loved it and please update soon 😊

Thank you so much! Really glad you enjoyed it :)xx

Originally posted by: shivanimehta

Hey!!! ANOTHER awesome update,... I loved it... I love how Abhi felt a need to spoon her yet again but couldn't because of that stupid barrier... I loved that Abhi liked a suit the same color as Pragya... I just love the fact that Abhi cares for her... in other words... I just love this story😳PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP!!! I know you legit updated today and I even saw that you have the other half already updated so can you PRETTY please update NOW!!!! OMg... the anticipation is the worst😡but please update soon😃I know how it feels to want to perfect something nd to be fully satisfied with your writing but come on... perfect is sooo BORING... overthinking is bad... just upload it already ahhh ahahahaha😛😆

Thank you so much! Loving your enthusiasm too! I will try and egg it updated tonight. The chapter was so long I've had to write it in two different places. Once I've put it together I will get it posted. Thank you so much for your encouragement. Xx

Originally posted by: quirky_senorita

Awesome update...

Thank you! Xx

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Wow this is such an amazing update both for it's length and content I had such good time reading it I loved everything and I specially loved Abhi's and Pragya's moments so romantic and beautiful and heart wrenching you know like you Hindi is not my first language in fact I do not Know Hindi at all I'm just start to be able to understand a little by watching Hindi movies and serials Specially KKB some of the writers in the IF are my friends and they know that me and some other people do not understand Hindi so they usually give a translation to their lines but you know what because I loved your story so much I took my time trying to read The Hindi dialogue and I'm so excited to discover that I can actually read and understand the lines and I'm really happy that you wrote them in Hindi it made me feel proud of my self I'm learning and I'm getting better in picking up the language ,,so thank you so much for an additional treat for me

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Hi!

Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind comments. I have been asked by another to update this in English too, and I will endeavour to do so on the next update. I am an English speaker first, and Gujarati second and I have only been able to learn through watching hindi soaps and using the subtitles. The language in my story is very basic (purely because I don't think I could manage any more) but I think it's a beautiful language, and sometimes it's just more romantic and filmy said in hindi lol. But I'm
Really glad that you've enjoyed it and managed to understand it too, you have honestly made my day! I will continue to post updates. I'm fairly new to all of this having been a silent reader for some time I really hadn't expected the response I have had for this story.

I'm Not sure when it will finish , but I hope I do justice going further to the story.

Xxx