Kumkum Bhagya FF: An Alternative story - CH12 Updated on Page 33 05/08 - Page 2

Originally posted by: MsTiara

This was sooo good... I truly LOVED reading it! 👏

Great thoughts and very well written.

Please update soon!

Thank you so much for taking the Time to read and comment. Xx

Woah... so beautifully written. Continue soon 👏😃

Originally posted by: Chirikula

Woah... so beautifully written. Continue soon👏😃

Thank you so much for your kind comments. I will post the next part later todayx

Hey!!!! OMG ... I love this story... POST soon! Looking forward to it 😛😃

All I will say for now is that this is fab! Will comment in detail later cause this was too good! <3

EDIT-

Okay so now what I loved about this-

This line stands out so much -
She felt like a thousands knives were plunging through her body and heart.
It is so emotional and meaningful, a perfect description of what Pragya was going through and what it feels like to love someone unconditionally and not have the same response from them.

And this-
As he did so he turned his head towards the door and saw Pragya stood staring. Her expression was emotionless and her gaze was glassy. Deep in his heart, he felt a bolt of guilt. His gaze caught hers, but Abhi noticed that she wasn't looking at him, but rather through him. Those beautiful eyes looked so sad and in pain, his breath hitched in his throat.
I can't even pick out something particular from this, it was all too good, the way you described his guilt and Pragyas loss of hope.

This made me hate Aliya so much-
At this stage though even Aliyah had learnt to appreciate the silver linings in life, it meant she had the luxury of playing with pragyas feelings even more.
How horrible to do something like this, to play with someone feelings simply because you can. Lovely way of describing it tho.

The part where Pragya began to cry after going to her room made me feel so sad and teary. This is one part-
Pragya sat with her back to the wall and knees pulled up. There in the silence of the place that had become her prison and sanctuary, She could not help the sadness that overwhelmed her. She willed herself not to cry, to be strong and understand abhi was never hers to cry over. But sometimes your heart just won't obey what your brain wants.

And this-
but she had given him everything she had. She had pulled him out of the clutches of death only to realise that it would never be her arms he would seek comfort in.
How must it feel for one to love one so much and know that they will never feel the same, it is horrible to even think about.

The end was too cute-
Abhi found himself letting go and falling into the most blissful night of sleep he had had In ages...
Abhi can only find peace in Pragyas arms, if only he realised that Tanu is far from it.

All in all thanks for posting such a fabulous story, you should certainly be working with KKB CVs because this story shows you capability of creating such meaningful and emotional scenes! Brilliant writing! <3

Are u a new upd.
So nice post, anyways nice and awsome post
Pls post in english yaar

Edited comment on PG 2, awesome work! <3

Originally posted by: simsim25

Edited comment on PG 2, awesome work! <3

Hi

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm absolutely made up you've taken the time to write a detailed comment back. I'm
Really happy you enjoyed the story. I hope you'll continue to do so as I update it!

Xxx

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Are u a new upd.
So nice post, anyways nice and awsome post
Pls post in english yaar

Hi!

Thank you for your comment! I will try and put an English translation next to the hindi on the next part. Thank you for reading I'm
Glad you enjoyed it xx

This is so beautiful!