AbhiGya TS: Forever Second (Now Complete, Part 3 on Pg 7) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: valschanya

i swear i can picture pragya walking away from the circus that is mehra mansion with the CSI: miami soundtrack playing in the background ala detective horatio.

im so glad she's finally taking a stand, and im inexplicably giddy at the idea of pragya growing a backbone! your move, abhi.



First of all, i love your writing. So i am especially thrilled to see you here.

🤣 The CSI: Miami soundtrack?? Horatio aint my fav, but i totally get what you meant.

Abhi's move. Yes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: putturani

You are the queen of angst Kat! I wonder why I haven't commented on this before. Really excited to see where you take our characters, especially Pragya.



Thank you Rani. This will be a short fiction. So, let's see how i manage to flesh things out.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Forever Second - Part Two


She had moved out of their room. In bits and pieces. Surprisingly, it hadn't taken very long. Or perhaps it wasn't so surprising after all. For when in these nine months had his room ever been hers anyway?


First, she slept in a guest room, the one furthest from his room. Next, she moved her clothes. And then her books. Last of all she moved her Ganeshji - for he would notice that first.


It had been equally easy to avoid him. She sent his precious morning coffee via Robin. She avoided eating her meals with him - not too hard with his haphazard schedule. And she adroitly moved away every time she sensed his presence nearing her.


The only difficulty had been keeping up a pretense in front of Daadi. She had managed though. She would never hurt the woman, not as long as it was in her power.


And best of all, she had started working again. Her network had never been that strong. But the ever-reliable Suresh had a thriving network of contacts. And as always, he came through. An assistant professor in her dream university. A tenured job. She was set for life.


It had been like a breath of fresh air. Walking into class after nine long months. Seeing the rows upon rows of students. Teaching, debating, even grading papers.


And all the while she had felt his eyes on her. Following her. Questioning her. Eyes that demanded answers. And so she wasn't surprised when one day on her way back home, his car stopped by her and he opened the door.


He didn't say a word as she got in. And neither did she. His hands were white on the steering wheel, his lips a thin straight line.


So, it was time for a showdown.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW Kat. I'm quite excited about this story. I wonder which AT it was (I can't believe I missed it!) Anyway, I'm already eager to read your take on AbhiGya's return home after the kidnapping and I hope this story ends-up being more than an OS! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ooh I like!
Honestly though I can't connect to this martyr part of Pragya in the show at all- it's surprising that she didn't distance herself before this. And allowing herself to be treated such by both abhi and tanu - especially after purab truth came out

Anyway glad to see it happening here :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great update
Can't wait read their confrontation
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved it
The part 2was really short
I can't wait for the new update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Uff that last line slayed me! Time for a showdown indeed! Love that Pragya is getting back on her feet, I really miss the college prof part of Pragya on the show now. But how willfully blind should dadi be to not notice that she's moved into the guest room??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kat ? such small update when the story is so amazing and interesting is a torture and I know that you are busy most of the time so hoping for a quick update is a dream ..what can I say except that we are gonna wait for your update and we know it worth the wait


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update. Please update soon.

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