AbhiGya TS: Forever Second (Now Complete, Part 3 on Pg 7)

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Hi!

Umm, so this idea has been brewing in my mind off and on for a while. I posted a snapshot of it in one of the AbhiGya ATs a while back. Somehow, this scene would not leave me, so i ended up fleshing it out.

I am posting it here. This scene/self-thought happens after Abhi and Pragya return home after the kidnapping and Tanu hugs him. Pragya sees from the door and leaves. What goes through her mind then?

So many possibilities. The CVs took it one way. And i wanted to see something different. Hence, Forever Second.

This is the first time ever i am posting a tidbit without having figured out whether i will continue it and if so, in which direction. What the story is going to be. I would love to hear your input.

Thanks for reading,
Kat



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Forever Second


So this is what fallen angels looked like. Tortured, face twisted in guilt. Shaken. And eyes that hide.


Pragya turned away from the door, her hands clenched into fists at her side. Squaring her shoulders, she walked away. If only she could walk out the front door, keep walking, down the gravel-fronted driveway, through the main road, away. Far away. But she couldn't. Not when Dadi waited for her bahu. Not when Ma depended on her daughter.


Why was she upset anyway? She had told him she did not expect anything from him. And she knew Chudail didn't she? The witch wouldn't stop clinging and leeching him. And he was too blind to see her truth.


But ... was it too much to ask? Too much to hope that at least for her husband she didn't come second? Why was she always the second one? Everyone's second thought. The eternal second choice.


For once she wanted to come first in someone's life. Not just in any one's. In her husband's life. Live a normal, married life. A life every married woman is entitled to. One where the husband recognizes and respects the woman he married. One where the husband loves and cares for the woman he married. One where, when the husband puts the glittering red kumkum in the maang of his wife every morning, he does it because he wants to, because it reiterates their bond every single day of their lives.


Was it too much to ask then? Too much to expect from her bhagya? Well, then, she did not want this bhagya.


It was time to re-write her destiny.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing...loved it...I want to see strong and practical Pragya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kat, I am really looking forward for an alternative take off for post kidnapping AbhiGya. So, I will really look forward to where you take it.
Pragya recognizing the reality herself before being banged on her head with it would be so much more Pragya-like.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Short and Sweet!!!! It's about time Pragya wakes up to reality!!! Loved it!
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Originally posted by: nilmi

Amazing...loved it...I want to see strong and practical Pragya...




Thank you Nilmi.

Me too, me too! When are they going to bring her back in the show?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-

Kat, I am really looking forward for an alternative take off for post kidnapping AbhiGya. So, I will really look forward to where you take it.

Pragya recognizing the reality herself before being banged on her head with it would be so much more Pragya-like.



I know, right Tia? I totally get why Pragya proposed. I even get her having some expectations despite her statement to the contrary. But this wooly-headed, lost in the glory of love Pragya makes me want to smack her.

I don't know if i will take it forward. I need to tease out the idea that keeps playing hide and seek with me.
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Originally posted by: indi

Short and Sweet!!!! It's about time Pragya wakes up to reality!!! Loved it!



I agree completely. Wake up and smell the coffee beans woman! Thank you Indi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kdsubs



I know, right Tia? I totally get why Pragya proposed. I even get her having some expectations despite her statement to the contrary. But this wooly-headed, lost in the glory of love Pragya makes me want to smack her.

I don't know if i will take it forward. I need to tease out the idea that keeps playing hide and seek with me.


Exactly, what she needed now was a dignified silence and distance from him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yes yes yes it is time to re-write her destiny
too many games it has played with her
its time she takes things into her hand and makes them happen rather than waiting for them to happen

amazing piece of work kat!
i would to read more


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