~Illusions: A Pragya OS by -mina-~

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Mina

@-mina-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

It's never too late 😲

Profound thanks to all who commented it and liked and read! I'm not always able to reply but I deeply appreciate every bit of feedback and it means a lot when readers take the time to let me know they read and what their thoughts were. Thanks :)

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-Nimmy-

@-Nimmy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

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Diii!!! This was heart-wrenching!!

Haaye I just want to go and hug pragsy and tell her its going to be alright.

Uff.. di!! can't get this out of my mind!

I am just thinking of how normal pragyas life would have been if abhi didn't make that one mistake.

This. this. This!

Her fantasies were never about him. They were about her real husband, the one she'd always dreamed of and now surely would never have.

Haaye di this line was so powerful. It slayed me.

She would look away then, blushing, because even though this was her dream husband, he didn't often say things like that.

And this moment of coming out of the fantasy and facing the reality. Realizing she has nothing she wished for even though her wishes were so small. Poor pragya. Makes me feel so bad for her.😭

And so, that night of her first karwa chauth, her real one with her false husband, her fantasy ended.

And she was alone on the balcony, her skin chilled and her pulse leaping.

And no one would tell her she was beautiful that night.

And no one would invite her to bed.

And the banner uff.. gorgeous!

loved it di!!!😳

Edited by HARNIM - 10 years ago

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Maruthi Ganesh

@MarGan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Beautiful OS minakka...👏
Loved it to the core...
Pragya's feelings after his hate words are depicted perfectly...

"Even in her fantasies, she couldn't imagine a man who would praise her looks just like that."---She forgot i'm there and i would praise her looks just like that...But jokes apart,she is wrong to say that no one will praise her looks...she maynot have a lot of people but there are atleast a few to praise her...like Purab,akash,lalwani,andy,Abhi's classical music friend etc...😊

Poor girl ,even in fantasies ,she is not thinking more ,even atleast kisses ...
The sweet fantasy ended with a dark reality...she is not going to be invited to bed,won't be praised and not even asked to come into the room 🥺...
Great job Minakka...thank you for sharing with me...❤️🤗

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Diahh

@Diahh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

UFF! Minamma now I am all tears! 😕

Seriously no matter how much I love my OTP, reading stories like this makes me wonder whether Abhi would ever be able to make it up to Pragya.

Pragya's dream of her husband. It's nothing big just what every girl wants. But to know that she would never have it in reality and to know in reality most likely her husband is with his girlfriend ATM living her dream. And other thing, Pragya not being able to imagine her husband calling her beautiful even in her dreams. 🥺 It's all so so so heartbreaking!!

Minamma love this story! You always do magic with your stories but this one will always be one of my favourite. Whole thing is so beautiful and so heartfelt that you can actually feel Pragya's pain. Great job Di! Lots of love!