Abhigya OS - Some questions are best left unanswered

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Diahh

@Diahh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Simmooo!! 👏

Love this whole situation from the beginning till the end! Abhi confused as to why she is in love with him. Yayyy! I always wanted to see him question that!

And then feeling suffocated with Tannu!! Yayyy yayyy yayyy!! 👏

The bleeding scene was the best! Nothing better to compare the two women! One runs away after being totally oblivious to his pain while the other goes out of her comfort zone to relieve his pain!

Some questions are better left unanswered!! NO!!! But the ending goes well with Abhi's character!

Good job Simi! Thank you for sharing it with us! 😃

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smala

@smala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Loved it Sim.

Beautiful story.

Thank you for the pm dear.

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vivkriti

@vivkriti

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Amazing Sim . Loved it. Abhi confusion between his feelings for pragya n commitment towards Tanu very well written also loved how you have perfectly included difference between Tanu n Pragya.

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1029168

Suspended

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Loved it simmi dear. Pls write more stories love

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Yes it is nice simy
Really some question never be answered
Like abhi thought abhi u have to make out thing and understand all
Simy thank for upd i think u can change this as ts
It will be nice

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Simmi, Loved reading this OS.. Why? Why?? Why? 😆

Abhi and these questions.. Only if Abhi found answers to some questions at least soon in the show.. 😆

It's amazing!! 😉

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Maruthi Ganesh

@MarGan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Amazing Sim👏...you have written the dilemma of abhi perfectly...

Loved the scene where Pragya says she loves and stops mid...The rest will be remembered by ABhi 😉...

Abhi needs to find the answers of these questions...They shouldn't be left unanswered...

That tanu leaving him scene should be happening in the show...

Thank you sim for the OS❤️...Write more of these...And thank you for the PM 🤗...

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Great OS Simi! Why haven't I discovered your writing before? :( But I am so glad to discover it now! I really liked your writing voice in this - simple but effective. I think you got the characters in character as well. Abhi teasing Pragya even in this situation is soo cute. Hope he answers the questions soon and in Pragya's favour though!!

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -mina-
Nice powerful scene Simmy. Loved Tanu running away and Pragya not finishing her explanation. As for Abhi, though, I just want to knock on his skull and inform him that no, these questions are not meant to be left unanswered.

Thanks for posting :)

Abhi's skull needs to be opened up for observation...no idea how he misses things which are mere second away from him ...I should pose this question to the CVs...

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

The OS had maturity in Abhi's character that we would love to see in the episodes..Till when is Abhi going to behave like a juvenile? i like the way you made Abhi compare Tanu with Pragya and his dilemma about his marriage promise to Tanu...well constructed.

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