Rabul ss : That's d only way I always wanted to live

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Rabul SS : that's d only way I always wanted to live
Character sketch :

Bulbul Khandelwal (BB ) : a fun loving girl who likes enjoying every moment of her life n a daughter of business tycoon Mr Yogeshwarnath Khandelwal but she hates her dad as he is not able to give her quality time n her mother had died when she was 5 as explained by her dad

Yogeshwarnath Khandelwal (YK) : Mumbai's successful buisnessman n is very punctual to his work. It loves her daughter a lot but not her childish behaviour
But always felt bad for not giving time to her daughter

Gangu tai : she is d maid of house of bulbul but played a very imp role in upbringing of BB life n now she has become imp part of Der family
N she is d only one whom BB is very close

Aatra (A) : best friend of BB

Purab Ahuja ( P) : a very simple boy n handsome 2 n loves to b himself only n always tried to keep his worries to himself only but is handicapped from leg n is on wheel chair but is very intelligent n talented boy n loves playing guitar
Doctor have said he wud not b able to walk properly only a miracle can help him

Samridh (S) : best friend of P n knows him very well n he is also very rich like Purab
N purab n his father works together n r business partner

Mrs Anju Ahuja : mother of Purab
She is sweet n very understanding n loves her son a lot n treats Sabrish like his 2 nd son

Rajan Ahuja : father of purab another business tycoon of mumbai n always wanted to get ahead in terms of buissness from everyone especially from YK as dey r d biggest competitors but can't do anything widout wid d help of S's father as he is his buidness partner

FIRT PART :
Continuing.. From d prologue

Like every morning Gangu tai is standing near d bed of BB wid a cup of cold coffee ( as BB likes only cold coffee) n trying to wake up BB .
Gangu tai : Babyji uth Jaiye Aaj Appke college ka dusra din h Kam se Kam aaj to chLe jaiye Mujhe pta h aap Kal b nhi gyi thi n Aatra baby k Saath Ghumne Chali gyi agr baba ko pta Chl gyA to vo Aapko Bahut daantege
Or dekhiye Yeh chai thandi ho rhi h
BB: ( trying to wake up from her fairytale dreams) : Offo.. Tai Isse chai nhi coffee Bolte h
GT: haan haan pta h caafee Kehte h Isse pr aap Uthiye to Sahi der jo jaayegi Varna n aatra baby b Aati hogi
BB: haan haan Uth rhi hun
Aap b Na tai bilkul Meri maa ban jaate ho uthate hue
( A 1 min silence gets created wen BB says dis )
BB : papa bataye the Ki Maa ne b mujhe Aise hi Uthaya Tha Jb Mera skul ka Pehla din thA
Chalo chhodiye in baaton ko aap Jaake Mera n aatra ka naashta Laga dijiye mein Aati hun
GT: (in low tone ) : Ji baby JI


BB n aatra does breakfast n goes for college .dey reaches Der college
After reaching cll pehle dey get surprised by seeing very different people around dem as most of Demeter involved in der own work only no one really bothered to see each other faces also dey were too much engrossed in der work

Den suddenly aatra sees a poster of something posted on d bulliten board n within a sec she was seen standing in crowd who also wanted to know to wat d poster was Abt ..
N BB was standing alone under a tree n it was a sunny day so she covered her face with her stall which she was wearing ,den suddenly she hears a beautuful voice from a room behind d tree she goes der in search of dat voice n reaches a place called PLAY ROOM she goes in
Der was only darkness a round but she was able to see d musical instruments around her n also dat voice den she realises she was able to hear d sound of d voice more clear n loud too so she traced d path of dat voice only

While going deep inside d inside d room she some sunlight coming from a opened window
N den she sees a guy playing guitar n was able to understand he was d mastermind behind dat great voice but in order to not to disturb him she stated listening to d voice from a corner d room n becoz of dis only she only able to see him from behind she was big able see her face

While she was totally engrossed in his voice suddenly a old vase falls down from d table becoz of d hand of d BB n after hearing d voice of dos broken vase d guy gets disturbs n in a cautious manner he says :

Purab ( as U 9 he is dat guy ) :kaun h ... Kaun h vahan ..
After hearing dis BB gets scared n tries to escape but was enable to do so as her fingers in B/w d glass of dat vase as left over pieces on d table gets attached to her fingers n she cries loudly in pain
Hearing d voice of BB he tries to reach her on his wheel chair
N with so much efforts wen he reaches der he sees a girl wid holding fingers of one hand but becoz if d stall dar was
wrapped around face of BB he was not able to see her face properly but was mesmerised by her beauty dat was visible to him especially her silky hairs
Den after realising she is in pain he gets out from his fantasy world tries to help her n takes out d glasses from her fingers while he was helping her BB was crying in so much pain dat she was closing her eyes so she was again not able to see his face but wen she realised dat d pain has decreased she opened her eyes but found nobody around her but after seeing no one in room she realises dat dat was d guy who helped her who was playing guitar .

To b continued ...
Guys tell me how's it
I will post d second part tommorrow 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesomeee 😊...plzz continue soon waiting for the next part..😳
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superb ss friend. keep cont...
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Looved it👏 do continue soon...I loved the deep thought of how bulbul got attracted by his voice only and how purab only saw her silky hear but could feel her beauty😳
the curiousity of meeting the man whose voice attracted her and seeing that girls face will be nice to read😊
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Amazing plot!
I'm hooked to the story...in love with the new characters and additional feels...😳
Continue soon dear...will be waiting 😊!
Edited by ritzee967 - 10 years ago
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Rabul SS : that's d only way I always wanted to live
Second part :

Bulbul gets out of d room with relief
But her eyes were searching only one person dat' Giutar guy '
Yeah dats d name she has given although it's a bit 2 long but she likes it as she wanted to name him with a different name .

Meanwhile Aatra comes to BB telling d news written on d board n dat was Abt d freshers party in d college . She also informs her dat in d end of d party among d freshers MR N MRS FRESHER will b announced .

BB : wow .. Yr tu to badi solid news Laayi h .

Aatra : Dekha mujhe pta tha Ki tu b Bahut Khush Hogi ye Sunke
Par Yr Ek problem h ..

BB (seeing her wid confused face) : Kya problem h Tujhe ab ..?

Aatra : yr Isme couple entry h n Tere paas to koi partner b nhi h ...!!

BB : Kyun bol to aise rhi h Jaise tere liye 3-4 Khade line m ..

Aatra (wid confidence ) : 3-4 to bhi Lekin Ek h Actaully lekin thoda Sharmila sa lga Mujhe but I will manage aakhir party m Jaane ki eklauti ticket h Meri ..

BB GIVES HER A ANGRY LUK ..
Aatra ( in order to tease her more ) : Ab mAine Itni der Sirf bulletin board pdne m Thodi lgai h ..

After hearing dis BB runs after aatra in d whole college campus n others were laughing at der chase
It was luking like a Tom n Jerry scene
Ye m nhi keh Rhi hun ye to Humare Samridh bhaiya ji Kehte h un Dono ko Dekh k Apne Doston s
N ye sunte hi aatra burns out in anger

Aatra : kyA .. Kya kaha tumne Hume Zara repeat mode par to Aana apne tv k ..
Samridh (S) : kya .. Kya tumne suna nhi mAine Kaha ki Tum Dono Dekh k aIse lag rha h Ki kisi n Tom n Jerry ka scene Laga diya ho KISI ne ..
All starts laughing standing near dem
Aatra : Haan haan Tumhe to aisa hi lgega Kyunki tumhaRe tv m to Cartoon Network k Alawa koi Aur channel Aati nhi .. Huh ..
S : Dekho Tum zyada mat bolo Varna thiK nhi Hoga smjhi Tum
Aatra : kyun Kya karloge Tum .. Btao haan btao ..
Meanwhile BB controls her n says request her to stop arguing to such people n take her away with her ..

She takes to her classrum n der lecture was going to start so she tells her to calm down as der is no need to increase her BP for such people
Dis line makes her laugh n she finally comes back to her senses ..
Meanwhile der professor enters d rum n all d students becomes quite .

D professor Mishra starts his lecture he was teaching history to d students
Wen der is only 20 minutes left for d class to end a foil Hits BB from back wen sees back to LUK for d person who has thrown d foil she see all were engrossed in der studies so she ignores dis
But den again a foil hits her but dis time she gets angry n she also hits d foil in d back to hit d person who have thrown d foil but she didn't knew d person so she blindly throws d foil den again a foil comes from behind hits on her head n dis starts a fight b/w d students but it was not at all noticed by d professor as he was sleeping while sitting on his bench
Den all d students starts hitting each other with whatever comes in der hand so wen BB widout seeing d pen she throws d pen in d back in order to hit d other students
But suddenly a thing hits her eyes n she immediately puts her hand on her eyes in order to protect her eyes from again getting hurt but wen pen gets worse she starts crying n Aatra consoles her n tells her to stop crying den a guy comes from behind her n puts his hand on her shoulder n tells her to go to d medical rum as it will create infection if she gets late
But wen d guy puts his hand on her shoulder she realises d feel of d same touch she felt on her hand in d play rum wen dat 'guitar guy ' takes out d glasses from her hand n wen she gets cleared Abt dis she opens her eyes in order to thanks him but see no one standing near her den she luks back but ol were sitting at der places n only she was able to some girls only n some boys as she was sitting on d first bench but she has a feeling dat he was not one of dem he must b sitting in last as instructed by d Mishra sir to sit at der places in order to create silence in d class n yes he has also woke up from his sleep but as he stands to start d lecture again d bell rings up n students goes out of d rum along with d professor .
But Aatra n BB goes to d medical rum n d nurse asks BB To get rest in d medical rum as she has dropped eye drops in her eyes n as advised by d nurse she rest on d rum n Aatra goes to attend d next lecture as requested by BB as she doesn't want both of dem to miss d class .

While BB was resting in d rum guy comes n leaves a letter near her bed but again was not able to see her face as she lying on d bed wid her face turned on d other side .
When BB wokes up she reads d letter in which it was written :
' I know whatever happened to u was not right but as U were new to dis college n r especially girls det behaved wid.u like dis as dey were it trying to rag U but u don't need to feel alone as I was also got ragged by des students but not like dis as I know how to handle des .
But u shud b brave aa its also a new phase of your life so b strong
N I hope u will get fine '
BYE

BY reading dis letter she felt relieved as she thinks dat der is someone in d college who is not like all .
Mostly d words written in d letter were more similar to d words written in letters of her mother left for her n so she decides to take out her mothers pen which was given by her father n her father always says dat her mother had collected different pens for her every new step in her life dat is she had collected pens for d first days of play school , School n college
So she also has a pen for d first day of college but wen she searches for d pen in her bag she doesn't find it
She again searches for it even in d rum also but she doesn't find dem
She gets tensed n tries to recollect where it cud b

On d other hand purab finds out dat pen in d rum while leaving for d lunch time but he wonders whose own it could b n who wud buy dis type of pen which wud b covered with blue wool cover actaully it was covered by BB's mother so her daughters pen wud LUK different from like her daughter is different from others

Purab decides to deposit d pen to s
D lost property authority of d college as it seems 2 b imp for someone dats wat he thought .

BB comes out of d medical rum in search of d pen n started searching it here n der but was not able find it anywhere she was mummering here n der to her herself dat kaha GAYA Yr tu plZ god ji dhundwaado isse Waise b aaj Bahut Kuchh Bura hi chuka h Din m mere SAath plZ plz help me vo Meri Maa Ki 2nd last Nishani thi n Aapko to pta h m Apni Maa Ki koi b Nishani nhi khoti tu ye kyun Chhin rHe ho mujhse

Suddenly dis mummering of BB gets into d ears of purab who was going to deposit d pen but again she was standing wid her back side but he decided to return her pen n in order to return her pen he goes to her n was standing on his wheel chair
exactly behind her wid a distance of 1 feet only .

To b continued ..
How was it ..
Do inform me



Edited by Flamable - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful priya...loved it...will wait for another part...❤️
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Wow Priya this was fab...
I'm loving this collage environment...Tom and jerry show...Mr.Mishra sleeping 😆, then ragging..bulbul and her impulsiveness to give back at people 😉and finally my cutie sober Purab giving her the first letter...😳
This suspense factor..aah is soo interesting..they haven't even seen each other but can still feel the magical touch and are becoming the helping hand ...the hidden pure love is oozing out...❤️

Will be eagerly waiting for next part...😳

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