OK Tia let me first say that it's hilarious that you started with Pragya seeing two feet in the air because that's how I often used to come across my grandfather first thing in the morning. Imagining Abhi in the same state and thinking of him and my grandfather in the same thought is cracking me up!
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The whole shirtless-Abhi, dupatta-ed Pragya bit was hilarious! And the attraction is growing! 😳
"crammed up his music system with his own songs" - so self-absorbed and so Abhi!
I liked how you showed the class difference between Abhi and Pragya so well with the bathroom scene.
"Wondering what Abhishek actually does in the tub..." I think all of us can well imagine 😉 Now after teasing us with us with such a long bathroom scene I hope you will give us one of them in there together!
Don't give me such ideas please. No, I wasn't thinking of a bathroom scene but now...Pragya wondered very 'innocently' by the way.😛
I loved this line: The smell of his sweat and his mere presence at a foot's distance felt awkward in more ways than one. - 😳 Good imagination fodder!
I really like this Pragya of your who knows how to give it back to him. The entire kiss exchange was hilarious! But she is getting so affected by him. I hope she doesn't end up losing her head, heart and virginity to him, the poor thing. Well I would enjoy reading it,😆😉 just imagine it would be hard for her if he takes everything so lightly and has Tanu in the picture.
Yeah Tannu will show up at some point and of course Pragya will lose her virginity to him. Let's see what happens to her heart and brain. But please don't chorify ideas from my brain before I write them. You seemed to be getting there already.
Finally, I loved this: "The rockstar had actually become an interesting piece of study material for me"
It's so perfect for Professor Pragya to make Abhi the object of both her attraction and anthropological study. 😆
Now I am understanding why you don't read WIPs Tia, seriously can't wait to read more!
Rani, I am hating myself for starting this short story, which is growing longer with every update. I am not writing another non-one shot again for sure. The pressure I get myself into because I want to write more is such a headache for me.
But thank you so much for reading it in bits as well.🤗
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