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Simmi

@--simmi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Thank you so much guys! Glad you all liked it. Love you all! 😊

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-Nimmy-

@-Nimmy-

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

WELL WRITTEN SIM

LOOKING FORWARD TO SOME THING LIKE THAT IN THE SHOW

hpe the cvs read and take some ideas

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917659

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

What a beautiful OS! Totally loved it! 👏

I so hope something similar happens in the show...

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sarra

@sara7iris

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

sim it's awesome and also the ending ...I love it ...I will like to see abhi like that lost without pragya in this life ... you did well describe the situation and with a different emotion each part ...bravo ...I can't wait to read more story from you

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Thank you, Simsim!!!! Wonderful story ... wish it could really be Tanu who makes Abhi realize that he loves Pragya 😛!!!!

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wow a great OS, can you please send it to the writers of the show? I am sure I like your version much more than whats about to happen!!! Send it to them, the writers have lost it, I think they are facing a writers block, they cant seem to reach a point.

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DON't-ASK-IT

@Sara_DONT_ASK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

I read this OS of yours while waiting for my lecture to begin 😆 And it was totally worth it.

Love the whole idea and the feel of Abhi saving Pragya and realizing fuggy means something to him. This OS is the closest to what I'd like the kidnapping track to be on the show.

And that 'quit it tannu' like a punch in her face...👏

And Neil...if he is suppose to be the potential damad of Mehra family...he better not stoop too low. Because no matter how bad or evil Aaliyah is...she doesn't deserve a sick headed man...who is willing to be all dirty for revenge sake.

Good writeup Sim.

Edited by SaaraDON - 10 years ago