Abhigya OS - Missing

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Hi guys! A little story on the kidnapping track. I know Neil is not this evil well I can't imagine him but to make the story work I had to make him like he is presented. Sorry for the lame ending but hope you like it. I just had to pen something down!



"Well well well, look who we have here." Said Neil, throwing the cloth on her face to the side. "You know at first I thought I made a mistake by kidnapping you instead of Bulbul, but no. The engagement may have happened but there is no reason why the wedding will happen but until then I guess I can make us even."

"Shut up, don't say a word about Bulbul. The wedding will happen, I will make sure it happens." Said Pragya fuming in anger.

"That you will do when you are able to leave from here, and that won't be happening any time soon." Smirked Neil. "Now where was I, so first you humiliated me, then your husband the rockstar beat me up in public, you didn't let me lay a finger on him I fact you even saved him from the jail."

"Try whatever you want, you won't be able to do anything."

He laughed at Pragya. Pragya tried to get up but her legs were tied, only hands were free.

"Now where shall I start." Asked Neil.

He bent his face close to Pragyas and she moved it back.

"Leave me alone." She snapped gritting her teeth.

Neil touched her cheek and she returned it with a tight slap.

"How dare you touch me, stay aw.." She didn't finish.

Neil got hold of her hands and tied them behind her back.

"How dare you slap me, who do you think you are?" He shouted covering Pragyas mouth with tape.

She tried to struggle but it was useless.

"Now don't say a word otherwise you can imagine what I will do."

Pragya still tried to struggle and Neil pushed her to the floor hitting her head hard on the floor making her yelp in pain. Her glasses were knocked off of her face and smashed, the glass cut her sleeve.

"Now what did I say, listen to what I say otherwise..." Neil warned her.

Pragya lay on the floor helplessly.

"And don't even think anyone will save you, and even if abhi knows you are missing you are nothing to him, he doesn't love you he won't help you." Neil left.

Pragyas eyes watered at Neil's word, after all it was true, abhi didn't love her. She closed her eyes and let the tears drop hoping someone would find her soon.

----

Bulbul and Purab exchanged rings and hugged while everyone broke into an applause. They smiled and took blessing from their elders. Bulbul turned to hug Pragya but she was no where to be seen and Purab too noticed.

Abhi came over and asked him what the matter was to which he replied that Pragya was missing.

"Don't worry, she's probably up to another one of her games, let her be." He said carelessly.

"Purab I have a bad feeling. Where is Di?" Bulbul said worried.

"I'm telling you she must be here, I'll check our room." Said abhi and darted up the stairs while Purab and Bulbul looked downstairs.

Abhi entered the room. "Fuggy, fuggy, come on now enough games everyone is looking for you." He called

He saw a red dupatta on the floor behind the sofa. Not again.

"Fuggy, what are..." Abhi stopped realising she want there.

He checked in the washroom, balcony, behind the curtain, studio but she was no where.

He walked back downstairs where everyone was now panicking about he absence of Pragya.

"Bhai, I think we have to inform the police." Said Purab.

Tanu and Mithali exchanged worried looks while Aliya was too busy upset that the engagement had happened.

"Your right." Said abhi and left with Purab. Bulbul comforted the rest of the family.

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Neil walked back to Pragya and saw her laying on the floor.

"Get up," he shouted making her jump.

He bent down next to her and she looked up with fuming eyes.

"Still so much anger." He laughed at her state.

He moved her hair back from her neck making her flinch but he ignored her. He took off her dupatta and her eyes widened in horror. He threw it away and was about to pull her blouse when one of the men came to inform him that 3 women had come to meet him.

Neil walked out and Pragya was left laying on the floor. She didn't know what to do and struggled to get free.


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"What are you doing here?" Asked Neil.

"Listen Abhi has gone to inform the police about Pragya, what are we going to do?" Tanu exclaimed.

"Listen I have nothing to do with you so leave, the police won't catch me and even if they come here she will have been finished long ago." He snapped at them.

"Listen as long as we don't get caught I don't care what you do with her just do it quick." Aliya told him and the three of them left.

----

The police were on the look out for Pragya and had promised to inform abhi if they found any information but Abhi was not satisfied. He had made sure Purab returned home to comfort the families while he was driving God knew where.

All that was playing in his mind were the moments of Pragyas childish behaviour. The way she had been drinking tea on the roadside, hiding from him behind the sofa. All those little memories all of a sudden became such big moments for him, he had never thought this was how he was going to feel. It was extraordinary, totally different and words could not describe his emotions. Was it love?

Abhi came to an abrupt stop as he realised he had arrived at an old factory that must have been shut down ages ago. He got out and stared at the stars, remembering the night him and Pragya were catching the moon. He would do anything to have her beside him again.

He looked around and was about to get back in the car when he heard a loud scream come from within the factory. He turned and followed the noise.

----

Neil grabbed Pragya by her hair and pulled her back into the room.

"How dare you try to escape from here? Don't try to act smart with me." He shouted and pushed her to the floor again. Pragya whimpered in pain but he shouted at her to stay silent and not move.

Abhi got closer to the door and looked through from the side. There was a man shouting at someone but who he couldn't see. He strained his neck further to find the man turn around it was none other than the corporater. Abhis face turned from disgust to horror as he saw that the person laying on the floor was Pragya, his fuggy.

Neil again pulled Pragya by the arms but before he could do anything further Abhi charged in without thinking. He grabbed him by the collars.

"How dare you touch my wife?" Abhi shouted in rage but Neil just laughed.

"Wife, who's wife? And since when? As far as I know she is nothing but a burden on you. You don't accept her as your wife do you? You love... Who is it. Tanu? The supermodel."

Abhi kicked him in the stomach and grabbed a wooden stick.

"Say one more word and I will kill you." He shouted but his words had no effect on him.

"Look at her. She's worth nothing then stop wasting you time on me and leave her with me. After all because of her I was humiliated. In fact it's good your here. I can now take revenge from you as well, I tried to hard to get you killed in jail but because of her you got saved there as well. She's clever I have to say, made the mms of me and bailed you out but today I won't leave you."

Abhi dropped the stick as Neil revealed to him the truth. It had been Pragya who had saved him, then what about Tanu?

Neil saw this as a chance and punched Abhi but Abhi didn't stand without reacting. He hit him in the back and pushed him to the floor and grabbed a knife but just then the police came in with Purab.

Purab grabbed Abhis hand and the police dragged Neil out. Abhi pushed Purab away and bent down next to Pragya. She was still awake. Her eyes were red and her hair was messed up, her sleeves were torn, he dupatta was missing and she found it difficult to stand up. Abhi picked her up and took her to the car.

He sat in the back with her while Purba drove the car. She was so weak and delicate but still she asked him if he was okay.

"Leave me fuggy, think about yourself." He said

"What about me? No one loves me but everyone loves you. Your important." She stated.

"Who said no one loves you, your family, my daadi everyone does." Abhi said.

"And you?" She asked.

"I... I." Abhi stuttered.

"Leave it." She replied.

----

They were back in their room and the guests had left. Pragya's family had too gone back glad that she was back. Aliya had gone to her room not wanting to think about her failure. Bulbul had been engaged to Purab. What was she meant to do now? Tanu fumed and waited for Abhi but he was too busy with Pragya in his room. Abhi came downstairs to take juice for Pragya and told Tanu to go home.

"Stop avoiding me for that bhenji, have you spoken to her about our marriage." She asked.

"Quit it Tanu. I don't have time for this you know what she's been through, I can't. Go home we'll talk later." Abhi replied.

"Abhi you have changed. I don't know what your problem is but you don't love me anymore. Since that bhenji has come in your life you only care about her. You need to stop caring about her otherwise you will never be able to stay with me. You get that?" Tanu stormed out leaving Abhi thinking.

Did he really love his fuggy?

----

Abhi entered his room and saw that Pragya had already fallen asleep. Abhi made her lay on the bed and covered her with the duvet. The scratches were now less red and she looked more like his fuggy, his fuggy...

He lay down next to her, he didn't know what he wanted. Tanu had unknowingly made him realise that it was true he was going to find it hard to live without his fuggy. She had become part of his life and and taking it away just like that was going to impossible. Abhi lay down next to her forgetting about the border between them. He would see what had to be done when it came but he was going to enjoy the peace he had with fuggy. He turned to face her, held her hand and fell asleep.



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nitarata thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Simsim,
What you wrote sounds perfectly like an upcoming episode. Good job!! Looking forward to something like this.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-

Hey Simsim,

What you wrote sounds perfectly like an upcoming episode. Good job!! Looking forward to something like this.



Thank you! <3
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loved it simi!!! abhi realizing he's just to used to fuggy to be without her. not the dream, but a better start than what we'll probably get. loved the action sequences and all too. interesting use of aaliya in the background there! and you know i love neil but even i think you used him well in this story! he's supposed to be a crazy villain after all. thanks for the great read simi!! ^_^
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Originally posted by: -mina-

loved it simi!!! abhi realizing he's just to used to fuggy to be without her. not the dream, but a better start than what we'll probably get. loved the action sequences and all too. interesting use of aaliya in the background there! and you know i love neil but even i think you used him well in this story! he's supposed to be a crazy villain after all. thanks for the great read simi!! ^_^



Thank you Mina!! <3 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story simsim! Tia is right, I do see a future episode of KKB looking like this. I think all the characters (Tanu, Aliya, Abhigya, Neil) were used well and were very much in character, which is really hard to do, so well done! 👏 You also captured Pragya's insecurity very well. Would love if you continued it to show how Taaliyah get caught and Abhi starts loving Pragya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I only have one word for you absolutely brilliant 👏 Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Simmi!!!!! So nice I hope something like this will happen.. I loved the reaction he gave after knowing that Prague saved him.. So realistic.. I was so waiting to read from you... Very nice... 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice.All were in character and this could be shown in the show.
The BEST part was the ending . No sudden declaration of love which would be weird , just Abhi confused about what he feels and living in the moment.😛
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Awww Simi!! Lovely story!! 😃Hope we would get to see something like in this in the show with less torture to Pragya. I want to see Abhi being worried and remembering all her cute antics and missing her presence. And Thank you for bringing all that here in the story!! I also like how you stayed true to the characters in the show. Especially with Abhi, Pragya and Aaliyah. Lots of love to you Simi!! ❤️

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