Abhigya SS - Unbearable Pain COMPLETED PAGE 5 - Page 2

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Amazing. Hope similar outburst happens in show. Great that dadi gave him 24 hours time .

yeah if this happens in the show it will be great

This is just amazing simsim

wonderful and very sad chapter ...I love it... you did a very good job it's a beautiful writing... poor pragya is very devastated after the event...I looked forward to read the next chaptre...pls update soon

This was something BRILLIANT

Long but please read and comment!

Inside Aliya's room Tanu was walking around in anger frustrated at the turn out of events while Aliya sat on the bed thinking what she could do in order to kick Pragya out of the house. Both of their thoughts were interrupted by Abhi walking in who looked extremely tensed. Aliya got up and walked towards him asking what he was worried about.

"Daadi has given me 24 hours to prove myself but I really don't know what to do. I never leaked that MMS on the internet but then who did? And that too from my laptop..." Abhi said trying to sort something out.

Aliya and Tanu looked at each other worriedly before Tanu spoke.

"This is all happening because of that bhenji, because of her even Daadi is doubting you Abhi. I told you to kick her out but you didn't listen..." Tanu began to moan but Abhi interrupted her.

"Listen Tanu." He shouted "None of this is Pragya's fault so don't blame her. This is all because of whoever recorded the MMS. I just need to find out who it was and I will not spare that person who has wrecked mine and my family's life."

"Abhi you're shouting at me because of that bhenji. Why? What is she to you?" Tanu shouted back at him.

"Because she's my wife and I lo..." Abhi stopped in midsentence.

"And I what?" asked Tanu in anger but Abhi stormed out leaving both of them.

"Did you see that!" Tanu turned to Aliya. "This is all happening because of the stupid plan. That chashmish is still in this house."

"Oh shut up Tanu..." said Aliya. "We just need to make sure that Bhai doesn't get any proof of who leaked the MMS because then I don't know about that bhenji but we will surely be out of this house."

Tanu shut up and Aliya told her to keep an eye on Abhi making sure he won't find any proof.

"I'm sorry Bhai but I have to do this." Thought Aliya.

Back in Abhi's room, Abhi was pacing the room back and forth wondering what to do and thinking about what he had just said. Did he really love chashmish? He avoided the question and looked at Pragya laying on the bed. Daadi had gone in the kitchen to get juice for Pragya when she woke up. Abhi sat next to her and spoke to her.

"What shall I do now?" He asked her. "I know what I have done is wrong but trust me I would never even think about doing this to you. How do I prove myself? I don't know what to do..."

Daadi entered the room with the juice and told Abhi to get up so she could sit next to Pragya.

"Daadi" Abhi said. "I don't know what to do. How do I prove myself? I can't think of anything but please believe me I did not do anything."

"And why should I help you. Did you listen to Pragya when she needed someone's support and trust the most. Did you help her? No. Then why do you expect me to help you. Abhi life is not a game that you can expect to win in every time. You need to learn some responsibilities and think for yourself because I won't always be here to tell you what to do. There are other people in this world that you need to learn to love and trust and that is Pragya, your wife who did so much for you but you never once praised. I'm sorry but I can't do anything for you. Leave." Said Daadi.

Abhi got up hurt that she wasn't listening to her and walked out. Who could help him? He remembered Mithali who had confessed that she had planned all of this before blaming it on Pragya. Maybe she could tell him something? He walked to her room wondering what he could ask her for so that he would be able to prove himself. He knew Pragya would never force anyone to say anything so could there be a possibility she was behind this as well.

Abhi walked towards Mithali's room and was about to knock on the door when he heard her speaking to someone. He stopped and decided to listen; he didn't want to be nosy but Pragya's name made him stop.

"What?" Mithali said. "How am I meant to stop Abhi from getting any proof."

Abhi was shocked by this but carried on listening his mind full of questions. Who was she talking to?

"Ok fine I will keep an eye and watch out but you need to as well." Mithali cut the call and sat down frustrated. She had wanted Pragya out of the house but she hadn't left because of Daadi and now Aliya and Tanu had asked her to keep out for Abhi as well. She was becoming tired of this stupid plan which had failed terribly.

Abhi walked back to his room and into the washroom. Mithali had been the one behind this. Who had she been talking to on the phone. Could it be someone else from this house as well? But who? His mind was racing full of questions. He wanted to go to Mithali Bhabi and ask her but then he couldn't trust her to help him, after all she had blamed Pragya in front of the family. Now he realised how Pragya must have felt when he kept on reminding her about how many hours she had left and how she was wrong, characterless. He felt tears pricking the brims of his eyes before he burst out crying. He couldn't help them. He felt helpless, he wanted to rewind the past 2 days, he wanted to be back in his room a few days before when he was composing his songs. His Daadi didn't trust him, Tanu and Aliya had not shown any sign of help and Pragya was on the bed because of him. He had caused all of these problems and was unable to solve any of them. He wiped his tears, washed his face and walked out of the washroom surprised to find Pragya standing up. He looked around for Daadi but she had left.

"Probably in the kitchen or her own room." Abhi thought.

He tried to avoid the eyes staring at him, he didn't want so the eyes full of pain and shattered dreams because he knew he was responsible for them.

"Was you crying?" She asked

Had she heard him? Abhi denied saying that something had gone in his eyes before walking out because he knew if he spoke to her again or heard her voice still full of sorrow he would probably start to cry again. The most important thing he needed was the comfort of his daadi but he couldn't go there either. Tanu was walking along and came up to Abhi. He decided to ask her for help but she walked past him rushing into Aliya's room.

"In a minute Abhi." She called before disappearing inside.

Abhi felt hurt and rejected. Inside his room was the girl he had hurt so much and yet she had still noticed that he had been crying and out here was the girl with whom he wanted to spend his entire life with and she had walked past him without showing the slightest interest or even noticing his tearful eyes. He walked back in his room and saw Pragya coming out of the washroom. It was dark outside and he thought that Daadi must have gone to sleep. He knew his time was running out and he still had nothing to prove himself. He noticed Pragya pick up a blanket and pillow clearly going outside to the balcony to sleep but Abhi stopped her.

"Your unwell so stay in here. Have you taken the medicine?" He asked.

"Yeah." Was all she said before she laid down on the sofa turning her face to the other side.

Abhi too lay down on the bed but could not get to sleep. He would have until 11'o clock the next morning to prove himself but he had nothing. He didn't want to think about the consequences if he didn't have anything tomorrow because even the thought of Daadi never speaking to him worried him. He knew he would not be able to live without her. He tossed and turned but was unable to sleep.

On the sofa Pragya couldn't forget the quiet whimpers she had heard coming from the washroom that evening. It was obvious that he had been crying but why? Daadi too wasn't speaking to him and he seemed upset. But why was she thinking about him, especially after he had leaked the MMS on the internet. Or did he? There was a quiet voice in the back of her head asking her whether she really thought Abhi could do this? Why not, he had ruined her life in every possible way and didn't trust her. But then she remembered his anger the day he thought the MMS had been leaked and how worried he had been about his career. No matter how hard Pragya thought about everything she was quite certain that Abhi could not do this. It was true that when she had first found out about the MMS being leaked she was shocked and didn't feel like living anymore but that was because she couldn't think straight what with everyone accusing her of being characterless. Even now as she lay she could listen to sniffs every now and then from Abhi's bed. He was still crying. She wanted to get up and talk to him but she wanted to think about who was behind this first.

She thought about all that had happened and finally she thought about who could do this. Why hadn't she realised before. Of course it had to be Tanu, Aliya and Mithali. She remembered the horrid grins on their faces earlier on the day when she walked into the house before running to the room crying. One moment she felt like getting up and telling Abhi but she knew he believed nothing but what he saw. She was going to have to get proof for him and make him realise the truth of the witch of a sister and of course that chudail. She knew she would be disappointed if Abhi truly had been behind the whole MMS fiasco but she was more than sure the witches had done this. She went to sleep making a note of going to CCTV room to check for any recordings and show Abhi the CD straight away - if she managed to get something...

Abhi was still tossing and turning unable to get to sleep. He was tired of thinking about how to prove himself but then his mind had wandered to the events of the night before when Pragya had said she wanted to show him something but he had been to sleepy to bother to listen to her. Maybe that night she had been trying to show him the proof but of course now he realised that he didn't need a proof to hear her, her eyes were enough for him to understand. He still could not believe how blind he had been to not have trusted her earlier. Another thing apart from that was who else was with Mithali for the plan. Unable to think of anything he finally shut his eyes but tears still rolled down his cheeks, he wiped them with the palm of his hand before turning over and falling asleep.

Throughout the night Abhi woke up to a loud scream. He jolted up to see Pragya sitting up on the sofa wiping sweat from her face with her dupatta. He got up and ran towards her, giving her water and sitting next to her.

"What happened?" He asked curious.

"Nothing, I just felt like I was falling down the stairs like I did the night..." She stopped midsentence. She knew there would be no point in telling Abhi because he wouldn't believe her.

"What!" He said worried. "When did you fall down the stairs? Which night?"

Pragya stayed silent but knowing that Abhi wasn't going to stop asking she finally she told him, explaining how she had fallen while coming back from the concert where she had handed the guitar.

"Listen Chashmish." Abhi finally spoke. He wanted to find out exactly what had happened that night. "Tell me exactly what happened."

"There is no point Abhi. You wont trust me without any proof." She said.

"Tell me anyway." Said Abhi.

Pragya continued explaining how Suresh had come to help her and when he took to the room the lights went off before he tripped over a toy car and fell on her. She explained that the noise of her in pain because her foot hurt after falling on the floor.

"Is your foot okay?" He asked worried in case anything serious had happened to her but he knew this was too late to show concern nevertheless he still looked at her foot which was now better but slightly bruised. He felt horrible that he had not been there to look after her when she was hurt and he still felt annoyed that the double battery had touched her but he cooled down knowing his intentions were not what he thought.

"Go to sleep now." He said to Pragya who was still quite pale. "But not on the sofa. You can come on the bed."

Pragya got up knowing there would be no point in protesting and laid on the bed closing her eyes. She was glad that Abhi was showing concern for her and she felt guilty that when he had been crying she hadn't said anything. She felt the pillow on the bed which was a little damp because of his tears. Abhi's hand was caressing her hair encouraging her to sleep. She opened her eyes to see him staring at her - for the first time ever she saw nothing but sadness in his eyes, which were still quite red.

"What happened?" He asked her worried she needed something.

"Why were you crying?" She asked still looking at him.

He turned his head away but was still stroking her hair.

"No." he said. "I wasn't, why would I cry?"

Pragya got up and made him look at her.

"Don't lie. Please tell me, what happened?" She asked.

Abhi was still silent for a few moments before her burst out crying and hid his face on her lap like a little baby. This time Praya caressed his hair asking him to calm down and tell her. Abhis voice was still muffled but he turned his head up looking at her but still laying in her lap.

"I am sorry Chashmish. I know what I have done to you up until now is unforgivable but I am sorry and regret what I ever did to you. I am aware that you probably don't believe me and think I leaked that MMS on the internet but trust me I didn't. Even Daadi doesn't believe me and she has given me 24 hours to prove myself. This evening I heard Mithali bhabi talking to someone on the phone and she is behind the MMS drama. I don't know who the other person is but I need to find out." Said Abhi.

"I know who it is." Pragya said. She knew that since Mithali Bhabi had done this then she could say without doubt that Aliya and Tanu too knew about it

"Who?" Abhi said jumping up in curiosity.

Pragya didn't say anything for a long time. She was debating in her head whether to tell him or not. She knew how badly his heart would break if he found out about it but then if she told him slowly and patiently then maybe he would understand. After all it would be better if he found out somehow else.

"Tanu and Aliya." Said Pragya finally.

Abhi was shocked beyond his wits. His sister and Tanu had done this? Those who he trusted the most? He didn't know how to react. He knew Pragya could not be lying because since the MMS drama had started he too felt that Aliya and Tanu had behaved happily around him when he had been worried about Daadi's health. He then realised that if they were the ones behind this then one of them must have sent the video to Daadi as well. He sat silently staring at Pragya who was waiting for a reaction from him.

After a long moment of silence Abhi hugged Pragya.

"I am sorry Chashmish." He said, he wasn't crying anymore because even if he wanted to he couldn't, his eyes were dry and sore. Pragya was surprised by this reaction and hugged him back.

"You know, now I needed someone's help the most and even Daadi ignored me. The next person who I felt would help me were Tanu and Aliya but even they were too busy to notice me. You, chashmish, was the last person who I expected even the slightest trust and help from but you were the only one who helped me. When you needed me the most I wasn't there for you and when I did you were. I don't know how I can ever pay you back but please if possible give me one more chance. I don't know how I will be able to cope without you by my side." Abhi said still hugging her tightly.

"Abhi.. I..." Pragya didn't finish because Abhi got there before her.

"Love you." He finished. "At least I got them words before you even though you fulfilled the act before me but I promise I will not let you cry again as long as I live."

They hugged each other for a long time before Abhi told Pragya to sleep because she needed rest, after all they both had a big day tomorrow, first of all they had to prove Abhi's innocence - no doubt he would be able to do that with Pragya on his side and also finish off his so called relation with Tanu and of course ask Aliya why she had stooped so low and wrecked his brother's life along with Pragya's.

They both lay down thinking about this and finally fell asleep while Abhi still had his arms wrapped around Pragya hugging her as if to protect her from the slighted danger and Pragya held on to his shirt tightly never wanting to let go again.

Daadi watched this from the ajar door. Finally they had realised about their feeling for each other. She knew her Abhi would never do something so bad and had wanted to make him realise what it felt like when no one hwas there to help him. She had forced herself to not comfort him when he was crying and was happy that both were sleeping peacefully. She just hoped that by tomorrow they would have the proof even though she knew she didn't need any to believe them. She walked away to her room smiling that they had both overcome these misunderstandings and were ready for a new beginning.

Wow what a powerful fic! I loved loved loved the connection between them and you really portrayed each one's "unbearable pain" so well. I loved the last scene in the bedroom where they're both being so vulnerable and upset and finally they reveal their vulnerabilities to each other.

This is really good it's nice how dadi used the situation to Abhi and Pragya together smart lady

Finally he believes Pragya about time it's good now they will work together to find the proof

Such an amazing story thank you for posting it

Awesome updates. So abhi believe pragya about tanu and aliya making mms. Aliya is so self center, she even do not want tell abhi about mms, even abhi is in trouble because of it. She thinks she is helping abhi getting pragya out abhi's life. Dadi is so smart, the way she excuted her plan.
Thank you. Please continue soon.

Amazing and interesting and very cute...l love it...and fab writing

Originally posted by: -mina-

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i know i owe you some unresing but still 😆

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oh simi simi simi!! AWESOME!!! so powerful and moving and amazing and i love it! your stuff keeps getting better and better 👏


loved pragya breaking down and saying all of that...and now abhi's 24 hours begins! hah! hope he has many more problems than pragya did!

thank you so much for starting this story, i can see it's gonna be great!! <333