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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara7iris

Amazing and interesting and very cute...l love it...and fab writing


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

Superbly written.Every emotion was so beautifully weaved that trust me even I have felt pragya's Unbearable pain.hats off .


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam78

Awesome updates. So abhi believe pragya about tanu and aliya making mms. Aliya is so self center, she even do not want tell abhi about mms, even abhi is in trouble because of it. She thinks she is helping abhi getting pragya out abhi's life. Dadi is so smart, the way she excuted her plan.
Thank you. Please continue soon.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was really good
I loved how the scenario played out
Great job
Love your writing
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The next morning Abhi woke up to see Pragya asleep in his arms peacefully. She was smiling in her sleep and was still hugging him tightly. Abhi chose to look at her for a long time still in that position and smiled at her. She looked as if she didn't have a single worry to be tensed about whereas he knew as soon as she would wake up she would have a frown and serious look. He wished he had never given the pain but at least on the bright side it wasn't like that anymore. After today was going to be a new beginning for both of them. They would be able to start afresh without any misunderstandings which reminded Abhi that he was going to need to look for some evidence as soon as possible. He noticed Pragya flinch in his arm as she opened her eyes and sat up. She rubbed her eyes before reaching for her glasses and put them on. She looked cute, Abhi thought before telling her to get up and get ready before him.

"No you go first." She said.

"Listen chashmish, hurry up and don't force me to come in the bath with you" Abhi winked at her and she blushed before hurrying in to the washroom while Abhi laughed at her naivety. After they were both ready Pragya told Abhi to come with her to the CCTV room to see if there was a video of anything that could help them to prove him innocent.

When they arrived in the room, Abhi quickly went to the computer which had got the clips saved of the last few days. He clicked through the folders when he finally came to a scene where Tanu was asking Akaash for his phone and looking at Daadi's reaction and laughing before everyone else rushed to her. So, she had been the one to send the video. Abhi saved the video before looking for something more. He then came to a clip of Mithali, Tanu and Aliya all celebrating that Pragya was going to kicked out and even the rest of the city was going to call her characterless before warning each other to make sure Abhi didn't get any proof. That was it! There was the proof which was going to prove Abhi innocent. He saved that video as well and hugged Pragya in happiness thanking her because he knew without her help he would not have been able to find this.

He was about to shut the computer when he realised there was still a recording of the night the MMS was made. He opened the clip to see Mithali scattering ball bearings on the step before hiding behind the pillar along with Aliya, althought you could only see her back Abhi and Pragya at once knew it was her. The body frame was too familiar for them to think of it being anyone else. The clip showed Pragya running up the stairs before slipping and screaming for help which made Abhi flinch at how badly she had fallen. He remembered when Tanu had fallen and how worried he had been for her and realised how Pragya must have felt watching eveeyone show concern for her but when she had been in a worse situation no one was there to help other than Suresh. Abhi saved that clip as well and waited for it to be copied on the CD.

Once the CD was made Pragya and him walked out glad that they had got the proof. On their way out they saw that it was 10 past 10 and they still had 50 minutes but Pragya knew that this time she was not going to wait any longer and both rushed downstairs and called everyone in the main hall.

Aliya along with the other two came out as well as Tayaji, Taiji and Akaash. Daadi too walked down the stairs and asked Abhi and Pragya as to why they had called them here and Abhi said that he had proof that would prove everyone here that the MMS was not leaked out by him. He watched Aliya's face turn pale as well as Tanu and Mithali. They exchanged worried looks before cursing each other. Aliya had warned them to keep an eye on Abhi then how did he find any proof? She bit her nail while Abhi continued. First, he turned to screen to the night Pragya fell from the stairs and how Mithali had kept the ball bearings. Aliya breathed a sigh of relief glad that her face could not be seen from where she had been standing while Tanu too felt relaxed. Mithali looked anywhere but Daadi who was extremely angry as well as the rest of the family. Before anyone could shout at her Abhi continued the video the next clip in which Tanu, Aliya and Mithali were shown celebrating at the success of their plan, talking about how Tanu had sent the MMS to daadi and leaked the video from Abhi's laptop. This time it was Aliya and Tanu's turn to worry.

Daadi walked to Mithali first. "You are this families eldest bahu then why did you not think about our respect. You too are a woman then why did you let people accuse her of such things that you know are not true. What if Pragya did that to you? You would not like it then why did you do this to her? What did she ever do to you?" She asked in anger and shame.

"Because of her my husband is in jail..." Mithali shouted and was about to walk towards Pragya when a voice stopped her.

"Because of Pragya I am out of jail." They turned around to see Raj. He walked in surprising everyone. He explained how Pragya had given the police inspector the proof of him not having done anything, how she had made Neil help him.

"If anything, Pragya saved our kids future as well as my respect. I went to jail because of you not her. She may be the youngest bahu of this family but in kindness she is greater than you." Raj shouted at Mithali before dragging her out of the house. She begged him to not do this for their kids but he told her they could live without her before shutting the door on her face. When he came back in to the rest of the family he said he was only doing this to teach her a lesson and would only allow her back her once she would realise how sincere her mistake was.

Meanwhile, Daadi turned to Aliya and Tanu. "You know Aliya, I never thought I would say this but I am ashamed to call you my grand-daughter. You have not left anything for me to say other than the fact that you are selfish and heartless. How could you do this to Pragya?"

"Her sister stole my Purab away from me and I wanted reve..." Abhi's shout stopped her.

"Enough Aliya, enough. Why don't you understand that Purab does not love you, why do you want to ruin your life as well as mine. You made me ruin an innocent girls life who never knew anything about this. I am ashamed to call you my sister, in fact even the very sight of you makes me hate my self." He then turned to Tanu.

"And you" He shouted. "You know, I always thought you would be the right wife and bahu for my Daadi but I should have known better. A selfish and ignorant girl like you would never understand what love and sacrifice is. I am glad Daadi picked Pragya as my wife because she is the opposite of you, she knows what the true meaning of love is and she is the only girl that can look after my family no matter how hard the circumstances may be. You are self-obsessed and make me hate myself for rejecting a kind loving wife for a stuck up girl like you."

"No Abhi I..." Tanu tried to protest but Abhi just grabbed her wrist and pushed her out before slamming the door on them. When he came back in he saw Aliya going to her room.

A few moments later she came back with her suitcase and announced she was going back to Australia for some studies and would come back in a few months. No one stopped her and she left the next morning, hugging Daadi and Abhi goodbye. Abhi did not say anything because he knew she would need to learn that other people too had emotions and she could not play with them whenever she felt like it. Abhi went back to his room along with Pragya glad knowing he had a gem of a wife who would always support him no matter what.

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9 months later a new member arrived in the Mehra family, a little girl who Abhi and Pragya named Khushi after all the happiness she had brought into their life.

Daadi was happy that her grandson had a family he would take care of and love more than himself.

Purab and Bulbul got married and were glad that the problems in their life were over and Sarla accepted their marriage.

Mithali finally asked for forgiveness from Pragya about everything she had done and Abhi had allowed her back in the house.

Aliya stayed in Australia and kept in touch with Abhi and Daadi.

Tanu was never seen at their house again, the only recent knew of her was that she was dating an actor in Bollywood. Abhi couldn't care less because she was the last thing on his mind. He was kept busy with his beautiful wife and a rockstar chashmish daughter. Life just couldn't get better for them and they just hoped it would stay that way forever...



Hope you all liked it!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww adorbsss!! great work simi!! loved raj coming back that way too. and mithali got to stay in the end, aaliya moved on in life by stayigna way, even tanu to got her own ending. i like that. and of course abhi was awesome throughout, and i am happy for pragya. yay for little khushi at the end too! awesome simi, thanks!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

awww adorbsss!! great work simi!! loved raj coming back that way too. and mithali got to stay in the end, aaliya moved on in life by stayigna way, even tanu to got her own ending. i like that. and of course abhi was awesome throughout, and i am happy for pragya. yay for little khushi at the end too! awesome simi, thanks!!


I am glad you liked it Mina! Btw, loving all of your drabbles on abhigya! They are awesome!!

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